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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome one Sushy!
Really nice one...loved reading it!
Update soon..:))
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey sweetheart superb update waiting for next part and thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update dear
do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome work dear..........................loved the flashback and conversation.................
do continue soon...............
thanks for the pm 😃😃😃
sorry for not commenting for the last updates .........
actually was busy...................
but they were awesome too..................
loved them 👏👏👏
Edited by surbhi123 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome...!!!
waiting to see sajan..aamne-samne..!!!
cont soon...
thanx for d pm..
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Posted: 15 years ago
grt part sush...!!
lued d flashbak mode...!!
it was so gud...!!
n also d convo b/w karan sonia n all...!!
luved it...!!
do updt soon...!!

luv ya
radhika
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Posted: 15 years ago

hi everyone

is baar utna bada nahi likh payi but kuch toh likhi😃.aur finni ab tohkhush naa ki maine abhi update kar diya😉

bahut log bahut kuch soch rahe ho ab apne dimaag ko aaram do aur update padho😆

aur mujhe batana mat bhulna ki kaisa laga😳



part 9


Benji-"are ek baat batah ye Sarah aur Sonia bhi sana ke tarah khubsoorat hai. "


Karan-"bahut......ek minute kyun?"

Benji-"kyun matlab?"

Karah-"achank ye sawaal kyun?"


Uday-"woh ....woh toh isne isliye pucha....."

Benji-"........taki hum bhi line mar sake ....akhir hum shadi wale ghar mein jaa rahe hai"


Samrat to himself while writing in the diary-yeh dono kabhi nahi sudharenge


Karan smile-"haan haan kyun nahi bas ek problem hai"

Benji and uday-"kya?"


Karan-"agar Sonia di ke saath flirt karne ki koshish karoge....toh arnav se pito ge"


uday-"ab yeh sala arnav kaun hai?"


Karan-"Sonia di ka husband"


Uday aur benji ki bole toh band baji

Benji(slowly)-"aur sarah"


Karan-"tohh.......collectively mujhse aur arnav dono se pitoge...kyunki hum dono apni saali ke liye bahut protective hai.......samjhe"


Everyone starts laughing even samrat half smiles


diya-"ab bahut batein ho gayi hai "

nupur-"haan ab sona chahiye"

karan-"haan hume kal subah subah uthna bhi hai"

Uday-"subah are raat toh aise hi niklne wali hai hum soyenge kab uthenge kab.....mujhse nahi hoga"


Adhiraj-"koi baat nahi tum sote rehna hum tumhe yahan chod kar nainital chale jayenge"

Uday-"nahinnnnnn main akele is dibe mein......main main uth jaaonga"

Kathgodam Railway Station



Benji-"chalo ab hum nainital aakhir pahunch hi gaye "

Girls-"haan ab thoda aram milega"


Karan smiling-"itni jaldi nahi dost abhi toh sirf train journey khatam hui hai.ab car journey shuru hogi"


Most of them-"oh no !!!!!man"


karan and mayank-"yes man"


nupur to mayank-"tumhe patah tha toh pehle kyun nahi bataya,khamkha main khush ho gayi"

mayank laughs


benji-"itne bhor ko hum jaa rahe hai kahi bhoot vooth toh nahi nikle ga naa"


uday now scared-"Bhoot!!!!!are neend naa puri hone ki vajah se meri aise hi halat tight hai aura b tune ..........aisi baatein kyun ki"


diya in low-"hey bhagwaan yeh dono phir shuru ho gaye"

suhani-"uday kuch nahi hoga agar hum jaldi nikle toh "


uday-"toh chalo naa.......hum yahan kiska wait kar rahe hai"

karan-"tumhari bakwaas khatam hone ka"

uday(with stupid smile)-"oh!!! Sorry!!! Haan ab chalo"



in car after sometime


diya-"wow yeh jagah kitni sundar hai."

Nupur-"aisa lag raha hai jaise mann puri tarah se shant ho gaya hai"

Mayank -"hoga hi hum humesha Mumbai ki bhid bhad mein itne busy hote hai,aur har tarike ke musibaton se ghire rehte hai isliye ashant ho jaa te hai"


Suhani-"haa itna peaceful area hai naa......thanks karan tumhari wajah se itne acche jagah aane ka mauka mila"


Karan-"the pleasure is all mine"



Samrat to himself-sahi keh reh hai sab

kuch toh baat hai is seher main ki mere dil mein jo dard tha woh ab halka ho raha hai.jaise ki koi us par malham laga raha ho

ek apnapan sa kyun mehsoos ho raha hai mujhe......


scene shifts to

Mall road


A girl standing near the railing and watching the lake in thoughts


Girl(let say girl 1)-nainital main mera yeh ek aur favourite place hai.yahan subah subah mann ko thoda sukun milta hai .................par yaha zyaada der ruke to sukun udd bhi jayega(smiles )kyun ??


Woh is liye kyunki mall road humare nainital ki aan baan aur shaan hai.


Two girl come out of nowhere


Girl2-"are tu yahan hai humne tujhe kaha kaha nahi dhunda"

Girl3-"are jiji hume maloom hai apko yahan se naina lake ko ghurte rehna accha lagta hai par bata toh deti,aur haan aapke kehne se pehle hi maine bhaiya ji se aloo tikki pack karne keh diya hai...apko bahut pasand hai naa"


Girl 1 smiles-"thank you"

Girl 2-"ab mandir chale"

Girl 1-"haan chalo"


Girl 1 in thoughts as she proceed to the temple-patah nahi aaj dil mein ek ajeeb si hulchal ho rahi hai.....ab kyu ho rahi hai yeh mere bhi samajh nahi aa raha .

Edited by sushups - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!
i think I know whats going on now!!!!!!
Sana is gunjan but she lost her memory and so the family found her and accepted her as a family member and thats why samrat and gunjan Oops girl 1 feel some kind of apnapan when samrat entered Nanitaal!!!!!!
Wow plz update soooon
Mira
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: miiroxxsweet

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!

i think I know whats going on now!!!!!!
Sana is gunjan but she lost her memory and so the family found her and accepted her as a family member and thats why samrat and gunjan Oops girl 1 feel some kind of apnapan when samrat entered Nanitaal!!!!!!
Wow plz update soooon
Mira


maine kaha naa phil hal dimaag aaram do .😆
thanks for reading it and like my story so much
sorry for not replying before

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sushups


maine kaha naa phil hal dimaag aaram do .😆
thanks for reading it and like my story so much
sorry for not replying before

It's ok that you didn't reply before I meant i can understand that you must be having some work.
😊Sorry for making so many asumptions actually when ever I read something that has a suspense to it I atomatically start to put the pieces together!!!😆

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