SAJAN FF-TUM BIN JIYA JAAYE NA-chp11 updt pg 83,84 - Page 42

Oh wow!!👏👏...let me say that again….WOW!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Meens you always do this me😲😲…every single time I read your ff I am left completely speechless…its just not the story but the way you describe each and every emotion that gets to me…its like I can feel what they might be feeling at that moment….

Let me start with "taare he baarati" song…all I have to say about that is when the CVs show SG getting married they better show it the way you have written it because my god it was beautiful!!⭐️...now I cant wait for the epilogue girl😉😆….

And I really really loved the SG date…..I know I am repeating myself but seriously after this champoo track I wish the CVs would show us a SG date like this….filled with love, nok-jhok, romance, passion and the beauty that defines our SG….

I am prolly going to start sending the CVs the link to your ff (if you don't mind me doing it sweety)…😆…

In front of this beautiful chapter my vm does not stand a chance sweety….I always tell you this and I really mean it that your words always touch my heart….its not just the ff, its the way you describe emotions and reactions of a character that says a lot about the kind of heart you have….makes me so glad I got to become friends with you sis….love ya🤗🤗…..muah, muah!!

Mindblowing update again.You always keep us happy with your updates.Please update soon .Hope Sajan fall in love soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

hey meena first of all superb ,awesome and fantastic updates i loved all 3 parts yar 👏 i loved the way you put all spot for their whole date i mean you described it as we r really on a picnic and watching and feeling the same way 👏 gosh this is the best quality of yours you describe each and every parts so well and for that standing ovation 👏 by the way i loved their dhaba scene it was romantic , full of masti , heartwreching everything in it and i loved last part you know it was very santy kinda but loved it to the core

and gina superb vm yar hamesha vm se rulati hai 😭 but superb work hon as always loved it to the core our sajan's best moments in it keep it up dear

over all superb update with superb vm you both rock hon love u for that god bless you both keep rocking as we r always with you 😃

awesomeeeeeee

Meens first a lots of thanks, hugs 🤗and kiss and off course a dozen of black forest cakes ... to keep you drooling till the next update .........

@ Ginzs I am with you 'when CVs would show SG getting married they better show the "taare he baarati" song in the way meens have written..... with exactly those expressions and sentiments...

Meens with that picture clicking ones it reminded me of monaya's gr8 magzs photo shoot...

Loved the way you have drawing a parallel thoughts btn SaJan on one simple painting ...awesome dear that comparison and describing how with pure simplicity and freshness she fills his life .... Exactly with the same depth as she had done few mins back .... hats off to you meens on this...

Next the road side dhaba --- excellent with romance, full of masti, and santy..😭😭

I like the way you get the unknown fears of theirs to forefront at the right time and where in spite of these fears they want to live the present moment and cherish it forever .... 👏👏

wow can't help but gush about your writing skills . you're simply amazing

OMG it was so beautifully written

meena so sorry honey for forgetting your gift to me you r such a darling yar 🤗 🤗 hey you justify song so well i mean tumne toh sajan ki sadi hi karadi 😳 😍 ok seriously speaking i loved the way you put lines and described it with gun's feelings for sam and her marriage you know one girl's dream marriage and you narrated it so well yar i was visualizing while reading and i am overwhelmed with your dedication to me love u 🤗 🤗

another fablous update dear

awesomeee ud and VM
loved it
continue soon
n thanx 4 the pm