SAJAN FF-TUM BIN JIYA JAAYE NA-chp11 updt pg 83,84

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jyotika

@-Jyotika-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#331

awesomeeeeeeee updt...
it ws mindblowinggggg..
luved it to d core..
d last part ws hilarious..!! 🤣 🤣
luved d sajan scenes to d core... 😳
pllzzzzzzz do cont soon..

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mariam

@Mariam_mjht

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Posted: 15 years ago

#332

the updates were really really really niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....
greattttttttttttttttt work...and loved dia and gunjan,s ideas especially the sweetttttttttttt talk b/w gunjan and uday...and the dance was really funny...thanks for the pm

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sonu

@MagicLantern

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Posted: 15 years ago

#333

Gosh you're an amazing writer. loved all the sajan moments .with every new chapter you keep getting better & better.

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Rabia Shahid

@strings123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#334

i can only say

EXCELLENT!

LOVED it!

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Rabia Shahid

@strings123

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#335

I'm loving ur ff every nxt update.

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#336

Meens 🤗

Totally a wholesome part
just like our Hindi movies - romance, fun, comedy, emotion - oww hon u managed it all in 1 go with such ease 👏👏👏

ahh so love the fact u have managed to give me a scene i ve so always wanted 😆

a scene where Gunji tries to seduce Sam 😉
😆
ahh wish we have 1 in the show too hon will be priceless esp to see MoNaya act it out they will burn the screen 4 sure

also love how u have kept omayur & benia so simple & adorable here too loved mayu's joke abt he shd be crying 😆😆

aww Sam is so wicked & naughty here too the way he made Gunji do all the kisssing & later was liek did i say i was angry is so him - chance pe dance marooing laoafer 😆😆 aww meens why dont we have such scenes in the show 😕

cont soon hon u rock 👏

Edited by aahana86 - 15 years ago

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Pooja

@kweetrockstar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#337

wow Meens
hats off
itna lamba likh kaise leti ho
u seriously rock
thanks for the pm
the parts were awesome

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ramramramram

@ramramramram

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Posted: 15 years ago

#338

Seriously Meens the update was just WOW and 😳 and 🤣.

Okay loved the romance you showed of SG, it was so sweeeeeeeeeeeet of Sam to bring Gunjan ankltets and when he was removing the tied shows with so much care was just AWWWWWW.

Then comes Gunjan's seducing scene 🤣 🤣 or should i say Aahan and Gina's dream scene,

Seriously love how yo kept Gunjan's essence with the seduction and her flirting and sweatin was just hilarious 😆 😆 😆 😆, felt like sayin our bholi bhali Gunjan 🤣.

Loved the terrace scene, was just blushing at that one ☺️ ☺️ ☺️,

Then the last one was just 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣,

Could just imagine them doing tat dance 🤣 🤣,

And the song beedi jale le 🤣 🤣

Don't worry about putting to much detail, love that thing about your FF as it is soo easy to imagine as if the video is playing write infront of you. Love your long updates 😊,

Continue soon