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SAJAN FF TUM BIN JIYA JAAYE NA – Chap 7 – Part B

Gunjan and Dia rush along with neetha to a room at the corner end of the hall where just when they were entering they see some helpers loading plates of delicacies and dodo is sitting with a face bubbling with excitement and popping eyes which were literally trying to gobble all d delicacies right in front of him

Gunjan winking at dia "uday bhaiyya….aap finally aa gaye….kitne der se hum log aapko dhoond rahe the pata hai…chaliye jaldi se yeh mitayian kahake batayi ki sab thek bane hai ki nahi…….kis se shuru Karen…..gajar ka halwa…..ras malai……

Neetha "arey gunjan…yeh kya kar rahi ho…pahle inhe morena ka special halwa khilao….woh hi aaj ka star sweet dish hai"

Gunjan "par….neetha….usme toh ek dikkat hai na (with an innocent face)"

Neetha"kya"

Gunjan "that's not supposed to had in empty stomach right…..u can eat only after dinner or else unless u have exercised well in which case the body can digest it"

Neetha" oh haan…sorry uday ji aap woh nahi kha sakte….inspite of it being the best dish"

Uday now almost heartbroken…"gunjan…neetha don't worry…mai daily exercise karta hun.,….i can deffo manage it…lao idhar lao"

Gunjan "nahi bhaiya…aisa waisa exercise nahi…iske liye special exercises like cycling ya push ups ya sar ke bal kade hoke aise wale exercise karne padte hai😆

Uday now smiling broadly "ok yeh to mere baayen haath ka khel hai…sar ke bal toh mai roj khada hota hun…thats nothing"

Neetha provoking uday"gunjan inki baat mat sun…yeh jhoot bol rahe hain…inke chehre se saaf dikyai de raha ..tu believe mat kar"

Uday"hello ms….mai jhoot nahi bol raha hun….yeh dekho abhi karke dikhata hun" n uday imme gets on d floor n with d help of his hands rests his whole body upside down…

neetha n gunjan wink at each other n each goes quickly n grabs a shoe from each feet while uday is all lost in blabbering "dekha gunjan….ahhh…maine kaha thana….mai kar sakta hun"

Gunjan giggling "sorry uday bahiyya humne aap pe doubt kiya …ab aap sari mitaiyan kha sakte hai…bye"

Uday "right girls……kahamaka mujhe….aiyaaaannnnn….mar gaye….joote ….gunjan….oh ms…..joote….biting his nails…aaj toh mai gaya…ek toh sam se maar khani pdegi n upar se koi sweets bhi nahi khane denge woh….ahem…koi baat nahi abhi yeh wali kha leta hun

While Uday is busy stuffing the sweets in his big mouth Gunji n girls r thinking where to hide the shoes.

Just then gunji thinks aloud "y not apply the same trick as d boys…kyun na hum bhi jhoot waise hi chupaye jaise ladkon ne kiya

Dia n Neeta "matlab"

Gunjan calls chotu the helping hand and ask him to bring two small strip of thin thread of jute

Neetha n dia r perplexed but soon gunji clarifies their confused thots by taking d strips of thin jute rope and tying each of them with a shoe bundled on the back side of her leg….just above d anklet place n positions it such that it extends up to just below her calf muscle…see guys isn't it smart

Dia n neetha r impressed but still they wonder "gunjan doll will u be able to manage it…I mean wont it be uncomfortable….or wont it come off"

Gunjan"nahi diya relax….bas kuch der ki hi to baat hai…n more over I have tied it a little tightly so the shoes wont come off from the place behind my legs where they tied to" n winks in their direction😉

Just then sam n benji burst into d room having come in search of uday

Uday"hi Sammy…benji…ye sweets kao kitne ache bane hai"

Samrat "joote safe to hai na"

Uday"sam joote ladkiyon ke paas safe hai"

Benji "acha ladkiyon ke paas….kyaaaaaaa….uday kya bakwas kar raha hai tu"

Uday realizing the slip he had made without ne other option confesses his folly

Samrat is angered by this but benji calms him "chill dude….hum pata laga lenge…don't worry yahi kahi chupaya hoga….cmon lets get to work"

Samrat though in a bad mood, knows chahsmish well enuf by now. He knows she wud not have kept it somewhere easy for them to find….so he decides to follow her and as he's doing so, he corners her in a empty store room pulling her inside by force n keeping a hand on her mouth as she's about to scream

Samrat "shhh chashmish…its me samrat…shaant ho jao…waise chillan kya tumhari hereditary habit hai😆😆….badi behen toh badi behen choti behen zuban allah"

Gunjan having recovered from one fright her heart beat still doesn't relax infact it seems to be accelerating further thanks to samrat's proximity

Gunjan in a shaky voice"very funny…tum kaam daranewala karoge to chillaoon nahi toh pyar karun kya"

Samrat now having pinned her to the wall and enjoying the beauty of her beautiful face in d dim glow of a lone bulb in the crowded store room says wickedly "idea bura nahi hai chashmish…banda kidmat me haazir hai"😳 n bows in front of her cutely

Gunjan unable to stay angry smiles off gives a light slap more like a pat on his cheek lovingly

Samrat "haye ek aur baar maro na"

Gunjan indulges him n repeats the gesture even more lovingly

Samrat "ek aur baar"😆

Gunjan now mock angrily "samrat"

Samrat knowing he has irritated her now "chamsish"

Gunjan "samrat…tumne mujhe kis liye roka is tarah…pata hai mujhe kitna sara kaam hai n saying so she escapes from the wall of his arms by going under it n just as she was about to run away, sam pulls her hand from behind with an unexpected force that was more to stop her from escaping and when her back dashes against his chest, a current passes through them. But slowly sam recovers and feels something hard just below Chashmish's calf muscle but the current that's had him in shackles is too strong for him to concentrate on anything else.

Samrat slowly goes near gunjan's ear n whispers "Chashmish do u know aaj tum kitni beautiful lag rahi ho. Mere aankhen jab jab tumhe dekti hai toh meri dhadkano ki raftar dugni ho jaati hai aur jab tum aankhon se dur chali jaati ho tumhari ek nazar ki aas me yeh dhadkanen tham jaati hai aur phir jab tumhara dedar hot hai tabhi dhadkanon me phir se jaan aati hai….."

For Gunjan , samrat's word r like beguiling her inner soul while the breathe of his on her ears sends sizzles down her entire body. She cannot move herself even if she wished to and she so wanted to coz carrying the shoes with her, had already filled her with nervous energy to stay on alert and on top of Samrat's enthralling nearness and words were adding fuel to the tension but altogether in a different plateau

Samrat in a tender and enchanted tone continues "chashmishhhhh…I have got a beautiful present for this beautiful goddess…agar bande ko ijazat ho toh aapki kidmat me woh tofa pesh karna chahunga" ends in a husky tone😍

Gunjan wonders if there could something more captivating than samrat's words which were a like blast of cool water on her dry soul. Unable to even mumur a word she nods her head.

Samrat smiles both at her shyness and her inability to speak which made him feel good

Samrat slowly turns her around and lifts her and gently places her on a slab adjoining the window. Now they were face to face and samrat slowly brings his face closer as if he cannot help himself by whats drawing the srtings of his heart towards this beautiful angel and her beauty coerces him to pay a tribute in the most basic form known to human kind. Before his mind can change his heart's craving he quickly deposits a brief but a quick kiss on her cheeks. For him it was more of tribute he was paying for her beauty which can leave one gasping for breathe with just one look at it, a gratitude expressed on behalf of his eyes which lifts his spirit up everyt itme he gets see her beautiful face

Gunjan is thrilled with samrat's unexpected kiss. It ended as soon as it started and she looks up to find samrat staring at her as if she's the eighth wonder in the world and imme a deep red blush starts spreading over her cheeks, lowering her eyes she says in a mild tone "samrat"😳

Samrat comes out of his utopian world and smiles adorably at the blushing princess in front of him.

Samrat slowly goes down on his knees. Gunjan is shocked at the same time excited beyond belief at what is going to be his gift especially for which he had to go on his knees

Samrat takes out a nice round jewel box from his pocket and Gunjan's breathe locks in her throat. But the moment he opens the box her hopes r dashed and a new fear takes over looking at his gift and within few seconds she becomes restless


To be continued

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SAJAN FF TUM BIN JIYA JAAYE NA ' Chap 7 ' Part C

Samrat slowly takes out the silver anklets that are shining in the dim light of this room and slowly he takes chahsmish's one leg on his thigh''

Gunajn panics literally and tries to move from her place but because of her awkward position at the moment where one leg is balancing on samrat;s thigh, she cant move without losing her balance and falling first so she does the next best

Gunjan mildly screams to shock samrat and stop him" Samraaattt'yeh kya kar rahe ho tume'..mere pair chodo aur mujhe neeche utarne do and struggles in vain coz samrat' grip is way too tight

Samrat is shocked by her reaction😲. He wonders why is she panicking so much after all am just about to put this anklet on her legs but he doesn't give up"chahsmish relax'.mai kuch nahi kar raha hun bas yeh anklet pahna raha hun"

Gunjan now scared beyond words mumbles "sam rat'sam'woh rahne do'mai mai pehen lonngi'do idhar

Samrat cuts her off "nahi chashmish'yeh sirf mai hi tumhe pahnaonga" and before she could protest further he takes out one anklet and with great car slowly puts it around her her leg all the while gunjan is hyper ventilating scared when she's going to get caught. Then samrat moves onto the other leg and puts the anklet but is unable to fasten it as the hook is closely sealed so taking sum more time than the first one he bridges the gap and just as he is fastening the hook, a white something seems to be gaping just a few inches above. The golden pattern on the white looked familiar to him and imme realization dawns on him and Gunjan sees the exact moment he has realized the truth and tries to snatch her leg back

But samrat stops her movement by tightening his grip on her legs "not so fast my princess"😍

The words though uttered without any second thought by samrat creates an scintillating effect in gunjan's heart n she's momentarily lost of which samrat takes advantage.

Samrat slowly raises his hands a little careful not to touch her leg but catches hold of the thread that's holding her secret in place and with great care not to embarrass her by his touch he slowly unties the thread and phat falls first one shoe to the ground and then the next

And now Samrat properly takes both her legs on his thigh and says "tch tch'.u do me great injustice chashsmish'..much as it was a very clever idea but these beautiful legs deserve a beautiful partner for them sweetheart and now they have it. Now whenever u walk around with these, each beat of sound that these anklets generate will directly connect to my heart and remind me of ur beautiful memory and will give me a feeling of your closeness that's next best to your actual physical presence and will also remind u of me every time u hear their sounds echoing ur footsteps. Saying so he kisses her feat as a token of worshiping the whiter than milk and smoother than silk feet of hers and slowly releases her legs and gets up all the while enjoying the very pinkinsh chahsmish standing in front of him

Samrat "so sweetheart run now before u can tempt me any further" and says this with a wicked smile.

Gunjan is dumbstruck by whatever transpired in the last few minutes. She knows she can't fight with him over the shoes when h has bestowed such sensitivity while taking them away from her legs and if that was not enough his words and soft as a petal kiss creates a woozy feeling in her heart

Gunjan imme gets off from the slab and runs to the door and just before exiting the door, turns around and gives him a shy but 100watt powerful charming smile to an already smiling samrat

Gunjan is still smiling silly when dia bumps into her literally

Dia "doll watch where u r going. Waise tum itna has kyun rahi ho. Mayank ne paise de diye kya"

Gunjan just then realizes fully that instead of thinking ways to get back the shoes she's lost in her world and she is tensed wat to tell dia coz she cant tell her the truth. So she adjusts saying "woh dia'.woh joote main 'who aa rahi thi'woh rassi'who joote gir gaye aur samrat ne use delkh liya and before I could realize usne woh joote le liye

Dia disappointed "oh gunjan'yeh to bahut bura hua'.well'.dont worry we will think of sumthing else coz I aint leaving mayank jeejaji today"

Gunjan imme has a plan in mind to get the shoes back

Gunjan and dia approach Samrat and Benji who were sitting almost in secluded corner so that no one can spot them guarding a suitcase which they claimed was having mayanks' thing and aunty's stuff but the girls were too smart for them The way samrat was literally dragging the suitcase wherever he was going confirmed wat the same contained

Samrat places the shoes in a small carry bag type suitcase and tells everyone he's carrying some items of Mayank and shilpa aunty which may be required by them during the course of marriage. Just then when they were sitting in a corner to escape from mayank's tez talwar saliyan, he spots chahsmish n dia approaching him sweetly with a plate full of sweets and come and sit next to them before he can blink an eye

Dia "oh benji, how's my cupcake doing'.misshing me" says cutely. Benji gulps at the sweetness personified form in front of him and before he could open his mouth he finds a jalebi being stuffed in his mouth and his eyes pop out as his throat is about to choke due to this overflowing love of dia

Dia" oh benji tum kitne ptle ho gaye ho'tum pana khayal hi nahi rakte'..agar mai nahi khilati toh u never eat properly and wipes the juice of jalebi flowing out with her handkerchief just like a loving partner would do

SAJAN

Gunjan" Samrat'..tumne toh aaj mere saath thoda bhi time nahi bitaya'..mere sat thodi der baito na'.arey mai bhi kitni stupid hun, tumhare liye sweet layi aur dena hi bhool gayi

Samrat though knows the girls are upto something is unable to do anything but gape at chashmish's sweeter than sweet face and words. It's as if his thot process has taken leave of him the moment it heard chahsmish's voice

Gunjan continuing to rattle non stop in a sweet voice to distract him n says "arey yeh kya tumne toh kuch liya bhi nahi'.lo aaj mai apne haaton se aaj tumhe khilaongi '. a sweet roshagulla for my shweeter samrat"

Before Samrat could protest, a rasgulla is being stuffed n all that comes out sounding unclear from his stuffed mouth is "sosheeesh"

While samrat is busy trying to eat the rasgulla and stuff it inside, a hand snakes from the side and tries to slowly drag the suitcase away from samrat's side and before the hand cud succeed another hand catches it and stops the progress.

Samrat"not so fast chashmish"

Gunjan is red faced at having been caught red handed while trying to sneak and push the suitcase slowly to neetha who was standing a little behind them

Dia and Gunjan imme stand up once their plan is foiled and both are equally red faced now that their attempt at sweet talking the guys is out in the open

Benji and Samrat slowly go around the girls in a circle and benji says"samrat'.woh hum aapke hain kaun me salman ek superb dialogue bolta hai na'.mujhe bas usiki yaad aa rahi hai

Samrat and Benji come and stand on either of Gunji and dia respectively. Samrat "mujhe bhi benji"

Benji giving dia an intense bone melting look"woh kya tha'..jab khoosoorat ladkiyon ki chori pakdi jaati hai

Samrat giving chashmish a full on wicked smile n a wink "toh woh aur bhi khoobsoorat lagti hain"

Both Gunjan and Dia blushing heavily run away from the place leaving both the guys standing with a grin on their face and doing a small hi-fi gleefully

Gunjan and Dia, now r more than ever determined to somehow steal the shoes back from the boys. They know as long as Benji and Samrat are together it's next to impossible. So they decide the first plan of action is to separate them

In accordance to that we see the following happening. A teenage girl is running towards benji while Sammy is talking to some one on the phone who wants the direction to the Bhushan's house and is not ready to allow him to keep the phone down.

Girl to benji "kya aapka naam benji hai?"

Benji a little warily "haan"

Girl "udhar ek didi seedi se neeche gir gayi hain aur unke paon me chot aayi hain aur woh dard me aapka naam chilla rahi thi'..pls unhe jaake sambhal leejiye, woh peeche wale kamre me humne unhe bed pe leta diya hai"

Benji now tensed" unka naam kya hai"

Girl "woh kya tha'haan dia"

That's it benji doesn't wait a second more and rushes off in the direction the girl pointed earlier

On seeing this Neetha asks the guy to disconnect the call to Samrat and the same girl who was not noticed by Samrat earlier tells him that Benji asked him to come to the room in first floor next to the dining hall as he had to go there to pick up a basket of flowers as per shilpy aunty's request

Samrat is a little bewildered but still goes towards the room pointed by the girl. Samrat enters a dark room and is wondering what the hell is happening and just then someone enters the room mumbling

"god is room ki light kisne off kar di, andere me woh tokri kahaan nazar aayegi and saying so she accidentally bumps into a hard wall and is shocked and shrieks "kaun hai"

Samrat "chashmish '.mai samrat " (yep it was gunjan)

Gunjan "samrat tum yahan kya kar rahe ho'..and just then goes and switches on a small bulb giving the room a light romantic dimness

Gunjan now moves purposefully towards samrat, but cold sweat is breaking out on her face, who has somehow managed to stand next to a window and samrat knows he has walked into a trap

Gunjan slowly goes very close to him says in a tension filled voice sounding more like a squeak "kya hua samrat'tum mujhe dekh ke khush nahi ho'..making a small pouting face"

Samrat "nahi chashhhhmish (as he's finding it tough to breathe thanks to her breathe taking beauty)'aisi koiiiiii baat nahi hai'.tum yahan"

Gunjan slowly fingers his cheek delicately and her fingers r shivering mercilessly giving away her so easily n its so funny to watch for samrat as she's trying her hand at seduction but failing miserably coz more than samrat she was blushing to the roots but she knew she had to play mean if need be as today she and the girls will have to win'. after all everything is fair in love n war

Gunjan "mai'.mai yahan ek phoolon ki tokri lene aayi thi magar yahan aake dekha ki sari garden ki bahar yahan chupi hui hai"again gulping her breathe'.god didn't they say it right seduction can never come out right it its conspired n not inspired😆..'..but still she is trying it in her utmost husky tone but still not d best coz she knew she was pathetic at these things but wat she didn't know was her pathetic attempts were preparing samrat for a heart attack'god knew wat her fine act would do to him then

Samrat's breathe locks in his throat. He's mesmerized by her beauty and bemused by hear attempts which show her in a cute manner, her voice is literally pulling each string of his heart into a a tense position while her cute-trying-to- come-on-hithterto act was boggling his mind non stop. He knew his thot process was ever so quickly evading him. Leaving the suitcase he has in his hand he catches hold of chashmish's hands and slowly starts kissing her fingers

God Gunjan wanted to kill herself for believing she cud do this all cool n calm. Firstly the act was being turned on her. Secondly she hand to stay alert and thirdly she had to be careful coz neetha was waiting just outside the room'.in fact close to the window that was open now and gunjan was supposed to throw the suitcase out of it as soon as she got the moment. She had told the girls she will try to distract samrat with non stop babbling but now she was not sure who was more distracted.

Samrat's kiss on her fingers was sending sizzles down her body n muddling it but sum inner consciousness keeps her still alert. She snatches her hand and slowly goes closer and first kisses in forehead affectionately. Samrat closes his eyes as heaven's gate was opened for him and just to keep him as he was gunjan slowly kisses his eyes. She knew she was doing all this out of compulsion for her love for this wonderful human being, owner of her precious heart and not for d suitcase or thxe bet. The trap that she had set for him was now on her totally.

Just then neetha appears next to the window and catches gunjan's eyes. She's unable to see samrat who was standing with his back to the wall and signals gunjan to give the suitcase. Gunjan knows she has to do this and just as she picks up the suitcase and extends her hand to the window, a hand sneaks out n stops her.

Samrat still takes few seconds to open his eyes and when he does his eyes meet a very cherry reddish chahsmish who is not sure if she is embarrassed by having been caught again or by her bold miserable attempts at seduction. His pressure on her hand is increasing and he does nto break his eye contact with hers which r in a sweet turmoil not knowing wat to do and he hears the girls soft whisper outside calling for gunjan's attention and then he let goes off her hand abruptly allowing it do wat it had been trying to.

Gunjan is mortified at her pathetic attempts of trying to seduce him at which she's not good at all and also at being caught balatntly yet again and she wished the ground would open up and swallow her. God cant' she even manage stealing small baggage from a guy without being so stupid and Samrat's fingers pressure on her hand were increasing while his intense glare which for once did not communicate wat was going on in his mind and all of the sudden the pressure stops and her hand was free

Samrat has some sort of a calm smile on his face and gunjan knew he was allowing her to win willingly and more so coz his eyes just gave a sideways glance to neetha but not seeing her really and then it dawns on her. Samrat was not only allowing her to win but he also didn't want her to be embarrassed by neetha knowing wat was happening bet them and then without another glance or a word samrat walks off from there and Gujan is left standing there feeling so proud of the guy she has fallen in love with and her heart soars like a the spirit of a free bird which is so proud of its ability to fly in the open sky freely

Gunjan slowly picks up the suitcase and moves towards the exit and hands it over to Neetha and walks in a trance with a heart felt smile still pasted on her face. Neetha tries to wave her hand but gunjan seems to be lost to the world and walks on freely without any thot or consciousness but just an immense feeling of satisfaction


to be continued


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SAJAN FF TUM BIN JIYA JAAYE NA ' Chap 7 ' Part D

Benia

Dia seeing benji rushing in, through the window shouts "oh my god'..kitna pain ho raha hai'.somebody do something'mere legs me itna dard ho raha hai"

Benji rushes to her side "sweetheart kya hua 'tum theek toh hona" in a tensed voice

Dia lovingly hugs benji"oh benhi'tum kahan chale gaye'.mere legs me itna dard ho raha hai'.my god y did i have to wear such big heels and slip like this"

Benji slowly untangling himself from her arms goes and inspects her legs "dia hua kya sweetheart'.n d moment he touches her legs dia shrieks "ouch"

Benji "sorry sweetheart 'n is perplexed'.magar tumhare pair me toh zara bhi swelling nahi hai na hai koi kharoch nazar aa rahi hai"

Dia quickly says "main idhar pain me tadap rahi hun aur tumhe examination aur symptoms ki padi hai'.how mean"

Benji imme feeling bad "sorry sweetheart mera woh matlab nahi tha'.its just that I was thanking god no serious harm seems to have happened and goes and hugs her tightly

Dia "its ok love'as long as u r here no pain matter n dia's eyes shimmer at the genuine care n concern benji has bestowed on her fake ailing stance and feels imme guilty for having chosen a mean trick and to compensate for her follies she goes and gives a sweet kiss on his cheek

Benji surprised by dia's sudden shower of love asks "yeh kis liye doll"

Dia hugging him again "this is for just being the real beautiful you'.. I love u so much benji"

Benji responds to the hug n says "me too sweetheart"

Just the dia sees neetha signaling from the window with a thumbs up sign and shows her the bag

Benji realizes dia has become still and he untangles himself from the hug worried and looks at her and follows her direction of sight to see neetha moving away with a suitcase that looked just like theirs and he turns back to find a mortified dia but he cannot put her in discomfort

Benji "oh toh yeh sab Meri Diva ka plan tha'.must say u r damn smart for me doll'..i can never match up to u'but I better run now to samrat before he kills me for being tricked by u"😆

Benji gets up and dia feels even worse when Benji didn't even show an ounce of anger. His love for her seems more important to him than any menial bet. And just as he's about to exit he turns back knowing dia would be feeling bad and to cheer her up he says "khud ut jaogi ya meri bahon me travel karna pasand karogi'..let me know banda hamesha haazir hai kidmat me'.winks at her 😉at which dia's face breaks into a smile and benji is utterly satisfied and he gives her a flying kiss and leaves the room

Gunjan and Dia hand over the shoes to Mayank, each of them putting it on his each leg themselves, without even demanding any money from him. The boys act has made them feel so proud of them.

Mayank "arey yeh kya '.meri sweet saaliyon ne paise maange se pehle hi mujhe joote de diye. For which both gunjan and dia smile and they in turn look at Samrat and Benji who r standing behind mayank passing an adoring glance to each of them. While Benji returns Dia's glance affectionately Samrat shys and steals his eyes. Gunjan is hurt at that and thinks he's angry with her whereas Samrat was stealing his mind away from temptation personified.

Gunjan "nahi jeeju hame koi paise nahi chahiye bus meri di ko hamesh khush rakhana , wahi mera shagun hoga"

Dia hugging gunjan from side "yes mayank the only gift we want from both of you is that you both stay happily forever"

Nupur's eyer sparkle with brimming tears while mayank is equally touched by their wish, while now it's the boys (Sammy n Benji) hearts that is soaring at selfless love of these beautiful girls being expressed so beautifully and both sport a beaming smile

Mayank trying to lighten the atmoshere "acha bachu tum log abhi toh mana karoge phir zindagi bhar galiyan doge ki humare jeeju bade kanjoos hai, shagun ke paise bhi nahi diye'.maaf kardo mujhe madam'.maine nahi sunna hai tum sab ki bakwas life bhar and saying so he takes out a packet with the shagun money and hands it to Gunji . When Gunjan refuses Mayank admonishes her "chup chap legi yah zabardasti karna padega chutki'..tumhara jeeju bahut gussewala hain'..bekar me uske gusse ka shikar mat bano

Both gunjan and nupur are pleasantly surprised when he addresses Gunjan as Chutki. To them it showed how much he had taken nupur's family completely in his wing as his own

Nupur nods at Gunji n signals her to accept it. Gunjan takes it n with light sheen in her eyes she quickly hugs her jeeju lovingly

And just as they are about to move away Mayank to Dia "oh Ms Saali no. 2 , paise toh le liye, ab toh ek hug banta hai"

Dia smiles brightly and hugs him saying" thanks a lot Jeejaji cheekily"

Mayank and Nupur with all the love in their heart and in presence of the agni lord solemnize their vows. Anybody looking at them could clearly tell they are a match made in heaven. The way their eyes reflected the intensity of commitment while understanding and implementing the mantras, it was clear for one to see this Jodi has bonded for much beyond the lifetime of living beings

They slowly move to the next ceremony where the guy and the girl are supposed to find out the ring hidden in bowl of milk.

Gunjan" Di is baar chuk mat jaan warna zindagi bhar pati dev ki seva karti rahogi"

Benji "mayank ye mauka gaya toh biwi ki haan me haan milana saans ke barabar zaroori ho jaayega

Mayank "benji mai yeh mauka jeet bhi gaya toh tab b mujhe isse koi bahca nahi sakta

Uday "mayank u r so smart'.tum kis jaal me phas rahe ho uska tumhe poora kahayal hai'very good I like it'.tum bilkul theek kahate ho, tum nupur ko 100% samajte aur jaante ho isliye hamesha savdhani baratte ho"

Nupur "kya kaha uday bhaiya'.mayank yeh kya kah rahe hain'.tumne aisa kaha mere bare'.mai nahi chodungi tumhe"

Mayank sweating lightly "arey nupur sweetheart meri itni himmat ki mai aapke tareef me itna kuch kah sakun'.yeh toh bas apne uday mharaj ki samajh hai and to uday in hushed tone he says "abhe marwayega kya 'shaadi ke din divorce bhi karwayega kya" n stamps his foot if the words had just in case not made sense to him

While uday is shouting benji closes his mouth and mayur resume the game and in the end surprisingly mayank wins it

Now as the ceremonies were slowly getting over people were moving for dinner. Gunjan notices all of a sudden samrat is nowhere to be seen and when she asks benji if samat had had had dinner n he nods in negative and tells her that he wanted some fresh air and has gone to the terrace


to be continued

Edited by meens1981 - 15 years ago
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SAJAN FF TUM BIN JIYA JAAYE NA ' Chap 7 ' Part E

Gunjan takes a plate filled with dinner and goes towards the terrace and finds samrat staring at the sky aimlessly...'no on second thots he was staring at the moon intensely. Gunjan makes a light noise to announce her arrival. Samrat briefly looks at her and wonders how just looking at the her face in the moon can conjure her up in reality and slowly turns around to look at the moon back which gunjan presumes to be his narazgi

Gunjan goes and places the plate on the wall of slab and goes and stands in front of samrat and asks sweetly "naraz ho mujse'.baat nahi karoge"😲

Samrat who had no idea why Chashmish shud think him to be angry with her cant let go of this chance pe dance opportunity and decides he should have some fun and turns his face off mock angrily😡

Gunjan "tumne khana nahi khaya , mai tumahre liye dinner layi hun'pl kha lo na" Samrat just ignores it while keeping a stern face with difficulty and shrugs it off, as if saying he's not interested.

Gunjan now is really feeling bad for having hurt him so much and tries one more time"mere haat se bhi nahi khaoge"

Samrat's heart does a flip at this and he all but nods his head in eager agreement but right at the last minute he controls himself to enjoy this chance some more.

Samrat still shows strong indifference without uttering anything

Gunjan makes a final attempt "kaan pakadke sorry maangu to bhi maaf nahi karoge" holds her ears with her hands and makes a pouting face

Samrat now has hit the master mind idea "ek sharth pe"

Gunjan eager to accept anything "kya bolo na"

Samrat sporting a broad smile "agar tum pyar se mujhe manaogi toh"

Gunjan a little confused "pyar se manaogi '.matlab kya hai samrat" n asks him pleadingly "saaf saaf batao na"

Samrat "well well don't tell me the chashmish who was being all inventive few hours back just to get a pair of shoes is now running out of imagination"

Gunjan realizing wat he was hinting at imme turns all pink and hesitates "par samrat"

Samrat "no par war Chashmish'tab to tumne itna socha nahi"

Gunjan finally understands that this was payback time and especially since samrat had been so sweet to her then relents and goes slowly and very softly gives a affable sweet kiss on one of his cheeks

Samrat's heart already starts flying while gunjan's heartbeat is catching up with his

Samrat "chahsmish yeh to starter tha'.where's my main course" with a cute little anxious expression on his face

Gunjan melts at his expression and repeating the gesture goes forward and kisses adoringly his other cheek

Now samrat was turning greedy😆 "Awww now we finally come to the dessert" with a wicked gleam in his eyes😉

Gunjan admonishes him with a stern look saying enough but samrat does not give up

Samrat "soch lo chashmish dessert milega tabhi mai khana khaonga"

Gunjan knows its pure blackmail but what choice had she left herself having started it herself. So goes slowly towards him third time in a row with the intention of giving him a brief kiss but the moment her lips touch his, both are lost in maelstrom of sensation of thousand flowers blooming in their hearts. Samrat envelops her in a tight hug and gets completely enchanted with this beautiful witch who was making him go crazy every second he was in her company. He doesn't know what's creating this magical enthralling and scintillating feeling inside him'...is it the gentle caress of the breeze combined with the cool freshness of the moon or was it touch of this lovely lady in his arms who's heart was beating as fast ashis . Either ways he for one was surely not complaining and he tightens the hug, mentally thanking whichever stars shining in the sky today had granted him this boon of bliss even if it was for few minutes, of togetherness with this gentle soul, whose inside- out beauty was dimming the effect of moon.

Gunjan slowly comes back to earth and shyly moves away from the kiss and untangles herself and adjusts the hair behind her ears for not having anything else to get over this audible silence

Samrat coming out of his trance slowly breathes the words in her ears "ab asli kahan kha le chashmish"

Gunjan nods without looking up but a shy smile is spreading all over her face. She brings the plate forward and hands it samrat at which Samrat nods his head in negative and when she asks with her eyes "now what" a little confused.

Samrat replies " Chashmish if u rem u promised to feed me with ur hands"

Gunjan smiles sweetly and starts feeding him happily content in this moment, in the company of this single soul, which the crowd of even thousand people below can never ever bring to her . Samrat also in turn feeds her and makes her eat from the same plate. They happily chatter away about the evening's success and sometimes just silently talk much more with their eyes. If one would have noticed the moon's shine seemed to have increased for the past few minutes as if even it cant resist the simplicity and innocent bonding of these, lost to the world, lovebirds

As gunjan finally wipes off the small food particles on samrat's mouth with a tissue and placed the plate on the slab n asks him "samrat tumne mujhe sach me maaf kar diya na'..u c i didn't mean to do it"

Samrat cheekily "kis baat ke liye chashmish"

Gunjan squirming now"wohi 'woh shaam ko jo hua"

Samrat putting her out of discomfort "mai kab tumse gussa tha chahsmish'.kya maine tumse kaha tha ki mai tumse gussa hun"

Gunjan" par samrat'..abhithodi der pehle'tum'...mujse 'woh khana..'inkaar'"

Samrat "well chashmish tumhara brain over imaginative hai toh mai kya kar sakta hum'mai to tumse gussa hi nahi tha"😆

Gunjan is stumbled by the truth hitting her"iska matlab'maine bekaar hi'.tumne mujse yuhi'.yaane ki tumne mujhe bewakoof'..samrat how mean'tum kitne kharab ho" saying that she starts beating his chest mildly

Samrat amused by her attempts at getting angry easily arrests her hands "ab itna marogi toh sach much me gussa hona padega'.phir koi dessert kaam nahi aayega"

Gunjan not being able to stay mad at him even for fun breaks into a sweet smile at which Samrat happily embraces her in a hug which is returned whole heartedly by Gunjan

After half an hour as they step down and move to the hall, Neeta calls him "janaab aap hi ka intezaar tha'.the stage is all yours '.if u rem the deal u made in case u lost

Samrat had forgotten all about this bet between him and chashmish and now looks upto Chashmish for help at which chahsmish just gives him a wicked smile😈 of her own saying with her eyes "it was payback time"

Benji comes angrily propelled forward by Dia saying "oh cmon benji be a sport"

Benji gives dia a fake smile and approaches samrat with some stuff in his hand and gives samrat a cold look while handing it over and not just him all the four boys are burning him with their looks

Samrat takes it and eyes chahsmish one last time as if seeking an escape from this but all she does is props a hand on dia's shoulder and gives him a sweet smile with a wink n mouths silently "go for it my sweet bafoon"

Samrat looks at the wrap around ghagra and the matching dupatta and knowing he has no way out of it now accepts the situation and with a grumble dons the garb just like the other boys were doing so sulkingly and with highly reluctant steps all march towards the dance floor

Dia shouts"music please"

A soft music starts playing but the boys r still not readyto perform whats expected of them. They knew even before starting everyone was having fun at their cost and laughing their hearts out🤣

Neetha "cmon guys we don't have all night . hame bidhai ke liye der ho rahi hai"

Just then some guy shouts from the background "come on giuys'mere sher'.jaon maidan me aag laga do"

All move away to reveal a highly grinning mayank whose grin is met by the sore stares of sam, benji, uday n all boys. Just to give them a bitter sweet tatse of their teasing mayank hoots "we want samrat, we want benji, we want uday n slowly as loud as the music the whole hall echoes with the same shouts

Uday is the first who sportingly comes forward and grabs a guy in the gang and holds his hand in his hand like ball dancing and moved towards one direction with their joined hands literally facing 180 degrees pointedly in that direction . His partner is taken in by surprise and is literally being dragged on the floor. Inspired by them samrat and benji reluctantly come forward in same position and start just the lyrics goes

"kuch na kaho, kuch bhi na kaho, kya kahna hai''kya sunna hai

Benji twirls samrat'now they were getting slowly comfortable in-spite of the crowd rolling away in peals of laughter🤣

Samrat brings benji in a eye to eye contact movement "mujko pata hai'tumko pata hai'.samay ka yeh pal

Benji moves aways from samrat's arms and samrat in turns brings him in an wrapping up move "thamsa gaya'.aur is pal me'.koi nahi hai'bas ek mai hun bas ek tum ho"

Just as they were getting intense the song changes "zubaan pe laga" Its as if the grials planned this for long😆

Mayank hoots form below "hay hay"

Zuban pe laaga laaga re namak ishq ka haye tere ishq ka'.

Uday holds his dupatta in a shy pose with his mouth and does cute little girly steps

Benji and Sammy take theirhands close to their chest imitating a slicing/piercing action "balam se maanga managa re balam se maanga maanga re namak isha ka tere ishq ka tere ishq ka"

And finally as the last song starts.."bheedi jalail''jiagar me piya'..jigar ma badi aag"

By now all the guys r in form doing crazy unbelievable cranky steps, rolling on the floor, flying kites, twirling their dupatas, doing funny jatka matkas with one nother

Benji jumps down from d floor and grabs dia n gunjan while uday drags mayak n nups on the floor and all of them get into the groove n dance merrily to the song and dance mindlessly celebrating and relieving the tensions of the hectic day and just going in full flow

After 45 min of fulltose entertainment finally time for bidaai comes

Nups being a typical girl is crying and Gunjan is unable to believe that her di is going to go away from her. All her fears of the inevitable sepeartion crowd her and make way for tears and she hugs nups tightly and says "di mai kaise rah paongi tumhare bina'.ab kaun mera khayal rakhega '.ab kis ke saath mai baten karungi and keeps crying non stop which makes nups cry even more harder😭

Nups "chutki tujhe kya lagta hai'mai tere bina rah paongi'..aur mai Mumbai hi tho janewali hun'tut oh aise baat kar rahi jaise mai America jaa rahi hun" but gunjan is still not convinced and continues crying hard😭

Mayank slowly prises gunjy softly out of nups arms and makes her look up and slowly wipes her tears and says very seriously "gunjan urf meri pyaari salli chutki'.duniya ki tum pehli insaan hogi jo door baagti hui problem ka peecha nahi chodna chahti'.have u ever thot about the advantages of getting ur di married'..u don't have to listen to her 24/7 chatter😆, u wont be scolded any more for small mistakes'.n most of all u have transferred ur biggest trouble over to me'.shud I not be the one to be crying🤣

Nupur punches him mock angrily knowing he was lightening the mood and gunjan's face also breaks into a sweet smile at her jeeju's words

But as a parting shot mayank tells her "waise gunji I don't mind taking u also home after all u have 50% rights of wat ur sis will have in my home'.saali aadhi gharwali right???

This time its gunjan who while wiping her tears pokes him in his hand playfully and Mayank hugs her telling "don't worry chutki, she 's only physically going to get away from u but mentally now u have 2 people who r going to be there for u forever... okie'and pulling her cheeks affectionately says "now give ur beautiful smile" and gunjan smiles sweetly

Slowly the entire baraat is going back grandly with the dulhan. Benji, Uday, Shilpa Aunty all hug gunjan in turn and when it comes to Samrat, he and gunjan share a quick eye lock and in a comforting hug samrat soothes her n says "don't worry chashmish everything be all right. Mayank and Nupur will be very happy with each other and they will take care of you as well aur nupur ki fikar tum chod do. We are all there for her now"

Samrat breaks the gug when gunjan nods her head happily at his words and says "pick me up on Friday at 7 am'yaane ki aaj se do din baad.

To samrat's bewildered expression Gunjan says "mera shaher nahi dekna kya tumhe😊"

Samrat's happiness knows no bounds,n is flying high at the thot that inspite of winning the bet she wants to keep up her bargain. He gives her a quick hug again and says as a parting shot "can't wait for it chahsmish"

To be continued

Edited by meens1981 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Loved it loved it loved it 👏🤗😍 you finally made me smile not smile laugh I just loved the boys dance I was really 🤣 thankyou and keep updating like this eagrly waiting for next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome,mindblowing
loved it to the core
really loved the sajan moments
actually the whole update was just wow
keep up the good job
the boys dance was really funny
what should i say just cant get over your update
fabulous
alright maybe dont have words to describe it
plz continue soon 😊
Edited by ammykhan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely ff.. do continue and thnks for da pm
sorry for da late reply
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb, mindblowing awesome update................will be waiting for more sajan moments, continue soon and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
me also cant wait yaarrrrr.....

SAJAN scenes very beautyful really loved it.................
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome too godd mindblowing .. superb loved it simply... fab

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