SAJAN FF-TUM BIN JIYA JAAYE NA-chp11 updt pg 83,84 - Page 32

Originally posted by: Shafoo

i really like the part 6 c and d also 6e promo

hey thanks a lot for ur nice comments😊

Originally posted by: baby_doll_2305

Oh God Meeenssssss!!! I loveeeddd it!!! Plzzzz do continue asap!!! Can't w8888!!!! Love,

Babydoll!!!!

hey thanks babydoll...hope u enjoy the next part as well😊

Originally posted by: gina87

Superb update meens!!👏👏

You know what I love about you ff'it's the way you have showed all the relationships, not just Sajan'.because of the that, your ff always touches my heart every single time I read it'.

In this update, I love the way you made all of them into a family and showed the bond they shared'.

The part I loved the most was when benji tells Samrat about going back in a week thing the way Sam reacts to it'gosh he is one awesome character'.

@ precap ' girl are you trying to kill me???😲😲😆...omg the precap is so awesome that now I am dying to read the next update!!

ginzieeeee sweety🤗...thanks so much dear...am so glad u liked it a lot....u r sooooo sweet sis.....i love reading ur long comments telling me wat touched u d most .....just like how we connect😉....yeah even i flt samrat's relief when i wrote than dialogue with benji...awww i know i love showing chem betw diff characters.....i always want all to interact nicely with each other....welll i have tried sum more in the next part.....hope u like it sweety n i will wait for ur comments coz that will surely tell me if i succeeded or not.......waise thanks to u my chaps keep getting elonagted😕....neetha d balst from d pat keeps getting pushed to next chap....god i doubt if will be able to write d jungle pcinic scene....my yahan story khatam karne ki try kar rahi hun aur tum ho ki use badaye ja rahi ho....all in alll both of us r gonna get lost in d process🤣

Originally posted by: cuteangelgirl95

awesome ud

loved it

and loved the promo

contineu soon

n thanx 4 the pm

hey thanks a lot for ur sweet comments dear😊

Originally posted by: MoNaYaRoX

Great Update!!
awesome promo
cant wait to read the next part!!
plzz continue soon
THANKS for the PM!!!

hey thanks so much for ur lovely comments dear😳

Originally posted by: cutekins

mind blowing update yaar

keep it up

nice promo

thanks a lot dear😊

Originally posted by: charmee_sammy

awesome updt..

mindblowing...

promo..hayyyyyyyyyyy loved d promo..

plz do cont soon..

thanx for d pm..

hey charmee....thanks a ton for ur sweet comments...😊

Originally posted by: DEVED1284

auesom

please update it soon

also add me to ur pm list

hey thanks a lot...sure will pm u my next update shortly😊

OMGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!Meens Di !!!! Oh !!!! I sooo wanna read this FF !!!!!!!!!! its been only few days since Ive met you, but youve just stole my heart !! I lovee youuuu Meens Di !! and I just LOVEEE your writing style, its sooo sooo fabulous !!! I soo cant wait to read this !! I hope I ll be able to read this FF in my hols !!

Hello Dear Friends,

First thanks for all ur lovely comments . They really make me feel so goooddd. thanks a ton for the same.

I know u r all tired of my sorry but i still have to ask it as i am delaying the part that i promised for last fri or sat....sorry was held up in lot of things. Hence could not update. I have written this update super fast and much to my dislike its a very long one. I know i cant help being descriptive specifically when it comes to sumthing close to my heart. I request you all to patiently read thru this. Hope I have done teeny weeny bit justice to the promo and am sorry i have to push sajan outing to next chap as this wedding chap has gone really long, but i have tried to cover lot of sajan in this and also nice fun filled marriage masti. Hope u all like it. Will eagerly wait for all ur frank comments n feeback....thanks so much for liking wat i write. Waise this portion is higly inspired by the movie HAHK😉😆....I have tried to be imaginative with ideas,....n u all not supposed to laugh...its called creatiity u see😆....n ROFLing at this is only my right😆😆

Love,

Meens

SAJAN FF TUM BIN JIYA JAAYE NA – Chap 7 – Part A

Neetha along with Gunjan and Dia are huddled in a corner and secretly whispering

Neetha "guys target ka pata chal gaya hai"

Dia" Kahan hai who neetha"

Neetha "kisi prani ke upar target ko chupaya gaya hai aur us prani ka naam uday hai"

Dia and Gunjan confused n synchronously "wat"

Neetha giggling "haan yaar…mai abhi abhi jiju aur unke friend ki baaten sunke aayi hun. Unke ek aur friend nejhoote chupane ke liye apne jhooton ke updar pahen rakha hai

Gunjan "hmm smart move …..magar hum ladkiyan haar mannewalon me se nahi hain"

Samrat is seen searching for chashmish. He keeps touching his pocket to see if the gift is still there. He was just going to have to find a right time to gift it

Just then Shilpa aunty calls the boys "guys tum logon ne joton ka intezaam kar dia haina? ya phir mayu ko apne wallet se aaj alvidha kahna padega

Samrat "fikar not aunty, we have it all under control, aaj mayank ki saliyon ko haar manni hi padegi

A girl from behind interrupts him"itna confidence Samrat…tch tch…..its not gud for ur health"

Samrat is mesmerized in her beauty that he didn't even bother replying her. He was gaping at the heavenly face from such close quarters and d sight was not helping his heartbeat in any which way. Benji nudges him. Aunty n Mayank wonder whats wrong with Samrat

Samrat recovering not so quickly looks here n there for a moment n then bringing his senses n voice under control….yes coz the rib ticking feeling inside had him wonder if next his voice is going to come out squeaky n embarrass him sum more😆

Samrat"oh really cha…I mean gunjan……waise aaj tak suna tha ki village ki girls innocent hoti hain magar itna bhi nahi ki unhe impossible aur possible ka farak na pata chale

Gunjan now angered by his barb and walks away from there😡

Samrat follows her and the boys follow him slowly

Samrat"kyun Ms Mayank ki Morena wali Sali …itni aasani se haar man liya….not bad city wale ladkiyon se tume log kisi baat me toh smart ho….kab apni haar manna hai itna toh pata hai tum village girls ko"

Gunjan turns around angrily n didn't expect samrat to be literally so close to her but that still doesn't stop her from venting her anger out

Gunjan pointing a finger on his nose angrily hollers "Excuse me, morena koi village nahi hai, it's a small town aur waise bhi galatfaimy hame nahi tumhe hui Mr. big city bafoon"

Samrat shocked at her retaliation goes close to chahsmish having his forhead touch hers almost and snorts angrily "chashmish hhh…tumne mujhe bafoon bulaya "

Gunjan angrily replies "haan big city buffoon"😆 n releases her pent up anger by exhaling noisily

Samrat moving back from her a little 😳"haye chahsmish…ek aur baar bulao na……bafoon…..kitna januable lagta hai tumhare mooh se sunke.....pls bulao na"

Gunjan was unprepared for this seductive change of tune n starts mumbling

Gunjan "sam…samrat"

Samrat "ahan….bafoon bulao na….pls bafoon kitna sweet hai samrat kitna boring hai….pleez pleez bulao na ek aur baar mujhe…bafoon"

Gunjan totally confused😕 by samrat's proximity gibbers "bafoon….woh I mean …samrat kya kar rahe ho….yeh kya mazak hai….mujhe jaane do …kitna kaam pada hai"

Samrat coming even more closer "roka toh tumne hai chahsmish apne aap ko….n I cant thank u enuf for that…coz is beautiful chere ko aaj ki raat mai apne aakhon se dur nahi karna chahta"

Both have a magical eye lock ….every emotion inside them collides in-spite of there being no physical contact between them

Benji clearing his throat breaks the reverie for SAJAN

Samrat was more smarter this time "toh Ms Morena Part 2……jaake apni saheliyon se kahdo …..aaj unhe ek bhi paisa naseeb nahi hone wala hai"

Gunjan "really…waise ek small advice ….pls wake up n face reality…I can challenge u, aaj tum ladkon ki naak ko katne se koi nahi bacha sakta

Samrat "really …soch lo chashmish…bet lagake haar gayi toh mai jo bolunga manna padega"

Gunjan "kya"

Samrat aware of d boys behind him lowers down his voice n says "agar haar gayi toh ek din pura mere sath spend karna padega…..mujhe is beautiful ladki ka beautiful vill…I mean town is beautiful aankhon ke zariye dikhana padega…bolo mazoor hai"😉

Gunjan blushes😳 n shyly nods her acquiesce as his words were creating an exhilarating feeling, at the thot of being able to spend a whole day with just him,

Gunjan "agar tum haar gaye toh…….(we cant hear it as she's whispering it in a real low voice but the all the girls standing at a distance are discussing something amongst themselves and giggling

Samrat is shocked at her request. He's about to deny but he sees the mischievous gleam in her eyes which were daring him full on and gulping a little he nods equally in lighter tone…"ok"

Gunjan smiling more impishly now "ek baar apne doston se bhi pooch lo, aakhir unhe bhi toh manna padega. Ofcourse mayank jeejy is exempted

Samrat quickly briefs d boys….d boys r shocked. Samrat smartly does not tell them about his bargain of the challenge. He makes it sound more like the girls have dared them to accept their challenge and if they lose they wont get d money and if the boys lose they have to do wat d girls have asked them

Benji, Dodo n all the boys r angry that d girls have challenged but their demand seemed to have irked them even more

Benji "samrat…yeh kaisa behuda mazak hai…aur woh hare toh kya"

Samrat"guys hum in girls ki tarah weak nahi hai, waise hi haarne ke baad unki rondhu faces dekke hi hum log khush ho jaayenge…wat say guys….if we back off then hum ladkon ko unhe challenge karne ka koi haq nahi hai…waise bhi jeet humari honi hai, toh y not accept their bet"

All guys reluctantly agree to the deal

Samrat approaching gunjan who's swamped by dia n other girls says"hame manzoor hai. Toh girls apne kerchief handy rak lo coz aaj tume logon ke har ek aansoon ka wahi ek sahara hai"

Gunjan" oh hum dar gaye samrat" and winking at other girls n samrat in turn says "girls get ready for sum full time entertainment before the night is over"….going close to samrat "see u around bafoon"

Samrat smiles at her cheeky reply n grin which she passes him as she walks away with the other girls n keeps looking back at him as she is moving away

Bui" arey ladkiyon yeh kaisa shaddi ka ghar hai ….na koi naach gana …na koi band baaja….chalo chalo….sab jake thoda rang jamake aaj ki sham ko rangeen banado..."

Girls get in full swing

Gunjan approaching nupur with her hands behind her starts singing

"Chhalka chhalka re kalsi ka paaniChhalka chhalka re, o aankh na maani) Maiya boli jaana nahin, bhaiya voh bhi maana nahin. Baabul bole bas ek din kal ka chhalka Gudda bole jaana nahin, guddi bole jaana nahin Sakhi bole bas ek din kal ka chhalka (Chhalka chhalka re kalsi ka paani Chhalka chhalka re, o aankh na maani

Al l the girls surround boys n start stinging

O ladke deewaane, kahan se aaya tu Dulhan ko le jaane kahan se aaya tu

Samrat passing a wicked gleam towards mayank goes to nupur n sings " Chal pyaar karegi"

Nups sportingly "Haan ji haan ji,

Sam keeping a hand on her shoulder" Mere saath chalegi,

Nups looks at mayank n then at samrat n slipping moving shoulder out of his arms says" Na ji na ji,

Sam "Arre tu haan kar ya na kar teri marzi soniye, Hum tujhko uthaakar le jaayenge, Doli mein bithaakar le jaayenge " lifts nupur playfully all the while mayank tries to burn with his stare

Nups hits him in d chest n makes him put her down n sings cheekily "Hum ghar mein kahin chhup jaayenge, Sang tere nahin hum aayenge "

Shilpa aunty looking at mayu's expression goes n pulls his cheeks which doesn't do him any good so to lighten his mood sings

"raja ki aayegi barat, rnageeli hogi raat, magan mai nachoongi "

Samrat , benji n uday have some fun with mayank

Sam going towards mayank "haal kaisa hai janab ka

Benji "kya khayal hai aapka

Samrat "tum toh machal gaye ho ho ho"

Dodo "yuhi phisal gaye ha ha ha

Mayank's feathers r now totally ruffled so to diffuse the mood Samrat sings towards nupur,"mehendi lagake rakhna , doli sajake rakna, lene tujhe oh gori aaye hai tere sajna n pushes mayank towards nupur"

Nups a little shyly " sehara sajake rakna, chera chupake rakna, yeh dil ki baat apni dil me chupake rakna"

Gunji n dia "kab se aayen hain tere dulhe raja ab der na kar jadli aaja"

Mayank pulling nups in his arms n lost in her eyes "tere ghar aaya mai aaya tujko lene , dil ke badle me dil ka nazrana dene, meri har dhadkan kya bole hey sun sun sun

Dia pulling mayank's cheeks affectionately n hitting a tumka against him playfully "sajan ji ghar aaye , sajan ji ghar aaye

Gunjan Dashing against nupur's arms playfully "dulhan kyun sharmaye , sajan ji ghar aaye"

Just then bui comes and taking nupur in a warm hug sings "chanda meri chanda, tujhe kaise mai yeh samjaon mujhe lagti hai tu kitni pyari re,

Slowly takes her and mayank and makes them sit in the mandap n continues

"khusiyan jitni hai Hai Sab Dhoondh Ke Laoon Teri Doli Ke Sang Kar Do Sari Re" nupur wipes the tears flowing out of bui eyes and bui inturn wipes the tears just lingering at the surface in nups' eyes (I know I know it sounds too much but the bui in my story is a lovable one 😆)

Benji and Sam pulling bui down and doing a nazar utar fying action for bui "Tu Jo Aayee Sajhke Mehndi Rajke Chal Bajke Oh Soniye Dil Kit No Ka Khaye Dhajke Oh Soniye" doing a playful tumka n bui is about to hit them playfully when they both escape from d place

Uday continues "Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve, Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Samrat now approaching gunjan "Tere Maathe Jhumar Damke, Tere Kannno Baali Chamke Hai Re" and twilrs her around in his arms "Maahi Ve"

Benji going towards dia "Tere Haatho Kangana Khanke Tere Pairo Payal Chance Hai Re (n pulls her into his arms and their bodies collide from head to toe )Maahi Ve

Both Sam n Benji continue while d blushing girls escape from their arms and move towards a neutral ground "Naino Se Bole Rabba Rabba, Mann Mein Dole Rabba Rabba, Amrut Ghole Rabba Rabba, Tu Soniye"

Just then dia' s eyes catches a glimpse of d shoes uday is wearing n signals gunjan n gunjan looks at that and looks at mayank in d mandap and she realizes time is running out

Benji catches Gunjan's n Dia's glance towards mayank n realizes they r thinking about the shoes

Benji goes to gunjan n sings "dulhe ki salyon o. hare dupate waliyon," ( lightly lifting her dupata n leaving it) "joote de do paise le lo

Dia angrily interrupts him "dulahn ke devar tum diklao a yun tevar" Goes to samrat n pulls him by his sherwani "dulhan ke devar tum diklao nay un tevar, paise de do joote le lo…paise de do joote le lo"

Just then neetha signals dia and gunjan with a wink and both of them abruptly leave the place leaving the boys confused. And shilpa aunty just then calls the guys on d stage who leave d place a lil baffled and both know sumthing is wrong

To be continued