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Posted: 15 years ago

#881

Nice...
Liked it..
Update the next part soon...
Its okay if you was tired...
It was short, cause you was tired,
But do more longer next time if you are not tired...

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#882

Originally posted by: arunabehere

Well not first to comment 😭😭😭

I loved it ,Mayank ko guru samrat ki wajah se kitna sunane milge ye to main nahi janti par nupur bhadak gayi to ho gaya

And samrat ko bhi kuch kuch ho hi raha hai

wow

Loved it a lot

thanks for the PM

well no prob

u commnted its a lot for me

thnx a lot yr

ab dekho agay kia hota hai

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Posted: 15 years ago

#883

Gr888 part...
You are alwaaays gr8888
Cont soon

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#884

Originally posted by: Sajan_Mayur-luv
Nice...
Liked it..
Update the next part soon...
Its okay if you was tired...
It was short, cause you was tired,
But do more longer next time if you are not tired...

thnx a lot for undersanding

actually i havnt slept last nyt

well willtry to give long part nxt tym

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#885

Originally posted by: SaJan_Sana4ever
Gr888 part...
You are alwaaays gr8888
Cont soon

thnxxxxx a lot

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#886

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

rocking update.........

mazza aaa gaya pad kar.......

chota tha par something is better than nothing......

the update was so cute.......

i could imagine the scenes actually happening........

mayank's attempt was so sweet.......

loved nupur's anger...........

and the eyelock was so romantic........

guru samrat rocks......

sajan were sweet too.......

idea of mayank flirting with other girls sounds exciting........

can't wait to read more.......

update soon......

luv

mahima

thnx a lot yr

ai to aur bhi update karna chati thi but buhat thk gaye hu

tere comment pad k laga k kuch better likha hai

warna aj ka updte mjhe to bkwaas laga

well kal tooo bara dena padega na

to koi bt nhe kal me bara hi lihkuge

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#887

Originally posted by: kulsumd
akhir intizaar k baad tumhara update mil gaya...

Update vz short n superb...

Ohh mayur ki ek saath duty phir b guru samrat ke plan k mutabik ye nehle pe dehla tha so bechare mayank ko na chahte hue b ignore karna padraha tha...

Aur nupur ka temper 2 ful speed pe hai pata nahi bechare mayank ka kya hoga...

Samrat vz lukng at gunjan n den mayank noticed k aag yahaan par bhi lgai hai...g8

Aag har taraf lagi hui hai ab dekhtein hai aag bujhane k liye firebrigade koun bulate hai..? 😉 😆 😆

Luv
*kulsum*

thnx a lot for valuing my updte

comment pad k lagrha hai k better hai warna i thot k bekaaar hai

well fire brigade ko bhulane ki kia zarurat hai jani😆

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neetu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#888

wow............what an update......
but yaar thoda bada update de do na.........please.........
and what did u say mayank flirting with other girls?
hahaha.....it will be very fun to read.........

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#889

Originally posted by: mayurg2010
wow............what an update......
but yaar thoda bada update de do na.........please.........
and what did u say mayank flirting with other girls?
hahaha.....it will be very fun to read.........

thnx yr

nxt updte bara hoga

waise wait there is lot mre fun ahead

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#890

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

thnx a lot yr

ai to aur bhi update karna chati thi but buhat thk gaye hu

tere comment pad k laga k kuch better likha hai

warna aj ka updte mjhe to bkwaas laga

well kal tooo bara dena padega na

to koi bt nhe kal me bara hi lihkuge