~~~do dil ek jaan MN ff~~ part 17 page 136

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#871

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

wow....... its the best promise anybody has ever made to me.......

par friday kyun nahi??

anyhting important on saturday morning kya???

well the reason is so stupid tht

after long hectic eeek esp friday i hve a tuff scheduele so i becum sooooooo tired so i just spend it in slllllllleeeeeeeeeeeping

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 15 years ago

#872

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

well the reason is so stupid tht

after long hectic eeek esp friday i hve a tuff scheduele so i becum sooooooo tired so i just spend it in slllllllleeeeeeeeeeeping

its not at all a stupid reason......

it happens......

so in how much time are u updating???

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#873

well i have strted writing may be 3o to 45 min

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#874

Originally posted by: kulsumd
ok dear..
Wil b waitng.

just 30 min more

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 15 years ago

#875

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

just 30 min more

waiting for it

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#876

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

waiting for it

bus 15 min more

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#877

part 17

mayank was following orders of guru samrat

but his badluck was with him

u knw why

he has been assigned to do duty with nupur

and according to him it wuld be o tuff

but humare guru samrat ka to kuch aur hi maaanna hai

s: wow! dude y to nehle pe dehla hua

m: kia wow ab to ignore karna aur bhi mushkil hoga

s: are dude saamne rehke ignore karo ge to zyada feeel hoga use phir to humara plan aur bhi zyada succesful hoga

m: shayad but pta nhe kyu mjhe ajjjeb si feeelings arhe hai

s: are main hon na dont worry aur ha cignore karna plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

m: ok dude(confusingly)

thn mayank left

on other hand sajan were also doing duty together

mayur

nupur was hell angry but she wanted to knew the reason why is he ignoring her

so she tried again and again but mayank kept himself busy in sum work so tht he dont have to face her

but his fortune was not with him

as dr keerti told them to bandage

so they have to work together

n: ab dkhti hu ye ab kaise mjhe ignore maaarta hai

m:(im mind) ab kia karu yr god save me

thn they strt bandaging

during it their hands were touched and there was a small eye lock but thn they cum back to senses

but this tym again mayank went away

and it brought nupur into disastrous anger actually jealousy

m:(in mind) sorrry nupur me kia karu majbue hu but ek baaar tum meri hojao phir kabhi tmhe tung nhe karuga its a promise

sajan

samrat and gunjan were doing their duty

gunjan went to take file when suddenly file dropped from her hand

her hair started flying in air

samrat get lost in her

s: wowwwwwwww kia beauty hai

mayank came to him as it was a lunch break

m: uncle mu band karo ye meri behen hai

s:(not realizing mayanks presence) but hai bari mast yr sooooo cool

m:kia

s: ( came back to senses) kuch nhe wo me ata hu nups ne bulaya hai

he left

m: too aag yaha bhi lagi hai(while folding his arms)

sooooooo frndzzzzzzz har jaga aaaaaaag lagi hai pyar ki

to kahi takraaaaar ki

kal mileygi ap ko angry nupur

and mayank flirting qwith other girls

ans ha

sajan bhi mileyge

lost in each others arm

frndz sorrry for short update

but m too tired

willlllll give u nxt part sooooon

mayb tommorow

with long part

till thn comment

luv sehr

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 15 years ago

#878

rocking update.........

mazza aaa gaya pad kar.......

chota tha par something is better than nothing......

the update was so cute.......

i could imagine the scenes actually happening........

mayank's attempt was so sweet.......

loved nupur's anger...........

and the eyelock was so romantic........

guru samrat rocks......

sajan were sweet too.......

idea of mayank flirting with other girls sounds exciting........

can't wait to read more.......

update soon......

luv

mahima

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago

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kulsumd

@kulsumd

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Posted: 15 years ago

#879

akhir intizaar k baad tumhara update mil gaya...

Update vz short n superb...

Ohh mayur ki ek saath duty phir b guru samrat ke plan k mutabik ye nehle pe dehla tha so bechare mayank ko na chahte hue b ignore karna padraha tha...

Aur nupur ka temper 2 ful speed pe hai pata nahi bechare mayank ka kya hoga...

Samrat vz lukng at gunjan n den mayank noticed k aag yahaan par bhi lgai hai...g8

Aag har taraf lagi hui hai ab dekhtein hai aag bujhane k liye firebrigade koun bulate hai..? 😉 😆 😆

Luv
*kulsum*

Edited by kulsumd - 15 years ago