MayUr/AR FF:Undefined Relationships..Upd:pg-135 - Page 58

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Posted: 15 years ago
wow
nice update
cont soon
n tnx fr pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey lovely update kiran.
loved the armaan riddhima scene & hisconcern for her.
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice update
But after long tim n that too it was short
Liked Mayu's caring nature for Nups
Armaan jus loves Ridz a lot n i love him for that
Update soon n that tooo Big one
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy dear,
nice part
thanks for PM.
continue soon


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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Kiran 🤗

Stupid.. donkey..monkey..idiot.. .goof .. n ..... uff.. i soo ahte u man for updating soo soon ...itne kitne examz the tere...
😡😆.... mujhe bata deti, i wud hav helped you........ 🤣

N bbz, THANK YOU SOOOOOOO MUCH for dedicating to ME.......
🤗🥳...luv u soo much! muuahzz.. ☺️




It was a Really AR Special with MayUr topping for a change...... 😆😆

I luvd AR scenes sooo much .. wow ! itne dino baad itna acha part.. u made my day yaar ...😳
bt yeah, did u forget to post a long part after such a hiatus ??? ......😡😆😆..kuch yaad aaya abhi ?......😉😆😆

N gosh, poor nupur is still making plans to mend broken hearts wen dey have already found their way together now.. ...
😆..wonder wat ll be nupur's reaction wen she ll come to know abt it... 😆😆😆..n poor mayank ki toh koi value hi nae rahi .. 🤣..poor soul......😆

Cnt soon ..thanx 4 d pm(was really glad to see it after sooooooo LONG 😃) ...


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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey kiran
long time no update
aur achanak se aaj dekha
But it was a short one
ok Shikayato ki pustak band
IT was nice but what nupur thought
Mayank's concern was too nce
AR too beautiful
now update soon next time please
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow
this part was so cute
i loved it a lot
waiting for the next part
update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part..!!
really amazing..
cont soon
Edited by rads14 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey ppl....
I m bak!!!Yup!!----an early update...but a lil short one.
It always is one u c....😉😆
Actually, I am in a hurry but really wanted to update so.....
before I start, I knw I need to put in a lot of MayUr to keep Nupur alive in our writings but as per the story track right now, I am afraid MayUr aren't really having a good time together....but no worries cuz love will find a way..soon....😳
Part-16:
She had been thinking over it night long. She was spared only a few hours to sleep but woke up when her alarm rang at 8:00am. She woke up from bed half asleep and got ready. Having done her final packings, she thought over the idea of not telling Mayank about it again!!!She came out of her thoughts when Ridhimma called her from behind...
R:"Nupur?" Nupur turned around:"Haan Di..." R:"Ummm...saari packing hogayi?" N:"Haan Di....saari hogayi..." Ridhimma looked away reluctantly. Last night, Nupur had told her about her thought of going to Shimla and speak to Samrat. Afterall, he being Pari's father had to accept her first before Shashi Bhushan or Samrat's parents accepted the girl. Samrat always blamed Pari for Gunjan's death and what worried Ridhimma was that in those five years they never heard much about Samrat. He seemed to be lost in his own world. From what they had heard, it was said that Samrat was no longer in Shimla but Shimla was his hometown and that was the only place from where Nupur could get to know where he was!!!!
Nupur clearly saw the sign of trouble and anxiety on Ridhimma's face. This had been visible since last night since Nupur had told Ridhimma about her idea. She placed a hand on Ridhimma's shoulder and said with a comforting smile:"Kya hoa Di?Tum meri itni fikar kyun kar rahi ho?"
R:"Nupur...tu akeli kaise...??pata nahi mera dil nahi maanta. Aur phir ye bhi toh ho sakta hai na k Samrat wahan na ho?"
N:"Aur ye bhi toh ho sakta hai na k Samrat waheen ho?"
R:"Nupur...par..."
N:"Please Di...is waqt mujhe mat roko....mujhe Gunjan k liye kuch karna hai Di...please..."
Ridhimma had to stop at Gunjan's name. Gunjan had always been her weak point. A moment later, Ridhimma said slowly:"ok" but her neither her expressions nor her heart was supporting her words. She tried out another excuse.
R:"Tune Mayank ko bataya?"
This time she thought it worked. Nupur looked at her for a moment and then looked away and giving a sigh said:"Nahi..."
R:"Kyun Nupur?"
N:"Pata nahi Di...main bhi yahi soch rahi hoon k usse bataon ya nahi.."
Ridhimma convinced Nupur to tell Mayank about it and she finally decided that she would go meet him at his place before heading towards the station. She left from home to meet Mayank and say a "bye".....
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At Mayank's place-----
The doorbell rang impatiently two times before the door was opened. Nupur wasn't satisfied to find the face in front of her. It was a lady, who Nupur understood from her attire was a maid. A little enquiry told her that Mayank was not at home...he had gone for a walk. The maid offered Nupur to come inside the house and wait for him to come back and Nupur did so. She waited for him for around half an hour but then realized she was getting late for the station and couldnot wait anymore. She looked for the maid to leave a message for Mayank but didn't get her inside. Reluctantly, she decided to leave!!!!
As she hurried outside and opened her car door, she looked back to give a final glance to the house in a hope to get a sight of him....but no...he wasn't there and she couldn't wait.....She whispered to herself:"Sorry Mayank..." and left. How she wished to meet him and tell him all about it!!!
But seems destiny was playing with the two...a perfect game of seperation....call it timing or coincidence or whatever...as soon as Nupur drove out from one side, Mayank's car entered from the other. For some strange reason, as soon as Mayank stopped his car, he felt something...or someone...had just left. Something has happened that shouldn't have!!!He couldn't understand his feeling but then he knew something had gone wrong.
Moments later, Mayank parked his car and went inside the house. The maid looked at him and said:"Saab...aap aagaye?Arey par wo madam kahan gayi?"
Mayank gave her a questioning look:"Madam?Kaun madam?"
Maid:"Pata nahi saab...aap k baare mein poocha toh main ne kaha aap baher gaye hain..aap ka intezaar bhi kar rahi thi wo yahaan par phir kahan gayi pata nahi...."
Mayank understood in a moment or two it was Nupur...who else could it be?! Without wasting the next second, he headed for Nupur's house...
Part ends..
Waiting for comments...
Kiran =)
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Posted: 15 years ago

wow

glad that you are back
upadte was too short
next time lamba chahiye
nupur's decision was great
let's hope mayur get to talk
continue soon
luv
mahima
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago

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