MayUr/AR FF:Undefined Relationships..Upd:pg-135 - Page 56

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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update kiran.
all of them are so happy thinking abt their life.
but last part was a little sad.
hey it was a short one , give a big update next time.
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice prt cont soon n plz pm me on ur nxt update
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Posted: 15 years ago
update was too nice
song was awesome
but i am worried for the lil angle Pari
nupur will keep her promise for sure
and i just want her to win
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey kiran 🤗


Woaaah, such a relief to see all four back to life agn... U r sooo right dat dere r moments in our life wen we say. "I love life " and dat life cant be more perfect den this..!

Aww...poor gunjan had to go through soo much ... I wish all gets well ahead ... Nupur n Ridz really need to be strong and make it all possible and m sure dey will do dat ... after all, now they hav dere loved one to support dem , isnt ? Wnt they tell Armaan n Mayank abt it?....😕

Well, hoping for the best ... Btw, was it me or the part was really small and dat too after such a longg wait! Cnt soon... thanx 4 d pm..

Love
Vini
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update...!!!
loved it..😊
song selection was nice..
nupur's part with gunjan was sad..
cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
this part is so rocking yaar
the song was perfect
and both past and present were great
i really love this ff
continue soon
luv
mahima
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Posted: 15 years ago
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*edit*
hey kiran..sorry for the late edit..i was just a lil too struck up, and genuinely forgot too, sorry my bad!..
the song chosen was really beautiful..i love it!..
they all listened to the song thinking of their loved ones..life had just gotten happy for them..aww..hope it never changes..
nupur got a letter about pari's custody..n she remembered what gunjan had told her..hopefully pari will unite both the families..
thnx 4 d pm
Edited by aish_punk - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Update was too short

But liked it
Actually Gun faced a lotttttttt
Hop evrthg gets well soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi dr,
loved ur FF.
U express all imotions wonderfully.
Pls add me to ur PM list..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey all...

Long absence na?sry ppl..was havn xams...bt with all ur best wishes I hv cleared my pprz....hvn a month of vacations nw so guess nw updates will b a lil mre regular...😉

Another little reason 4 ds absence's as we all knw--Nupur's death...Hats off to Rati Pandey for giving us Nupur n 4 making up ds irreplacable pair MayUr..🤗

This part is especially dedicated to Vini<coolvini4u>---cuz as she says it "KaSh special"😆
Part-15:
Nupur had taken an off from office that day. She informed the receptionist about it. When Mayank was told about this, he was quite a little concerned. Nupur, on the other side, was now seriously thinking over what next?How could she do anything to reunite the broken bonds?After hours of silent contemplation, she finally got a solution and the first person she thought of contacting was Ridhimma. She hurriedly went to her room and picked up her phone and was about to dial Ridhimma's number when she received a call and it was Mayank.
N:"Hello?"
Mayank gave a sigh of relief when he heard Nupur's voice, it ensured she was fine. Meanwhile Nupur was way too much impatient to wait for those few seconds and she asked again:"Hello?"
M:"Umm...hello..Nupur!!Tum theek toh ho na?"
Nupur understood the concern in his voice:"Haan Mayank!!Kyun?"
M:"Nahi wo...aaj tum aayi nahi thi toh..."
Nupur could have explained him all in detail but she wanted to speak to Ridz about it first and so she hurriedly said:"Mayank...main tumhein sab bata doongi....lekin abhi nahi please!!Abhi main thodi jaldi main hoon...main tumse baad mein baat karti hoon..bye"
Before Mayank could question her for anything, she had already kept the phone and the line was dead!!
Mayank said to himself:"I hope sab theek ho...main...main kal subah khud usse jaa k miloonga.."
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Ridhimma had had a hectic day at hospital. She was extremely tired and she headed over to her room to relax for a while or two before she left for home. Armaan who had not been able to speak to her all day went to see her in her room. He saw through the glass door his shona in her dreamland. Yup!!Ridz was asleep!! He went inside without knocking and walked towards her. Once close to her...he felt he was so close to the most prettiest woman in the world!!Gosh!!She was beautiful. The little lock of hair on her face troubled her a little and he moved towards her to move it off and just in time when she felt some feeling touched her face, she woke up. She was so close to him. He smiled lovingly at her and she returned it back. She rubbed her eyes just like any baby does after waking up. She was his Ridhimma....he stared at her and moments later, Ridhimma looked at him and said:"Kia hoa?Tum...aise kia dekh rahe ho?"
Armaan settled beside her and said:"Ek chote se bache ko dekh raha hoon...."
R:"Mera mazaak uda rahe ho?"
A:"No basket!!Serious!!Sach Ridhimma...tum aaj bhi aisi hi ho"
Ridz asked amusingly:"Kaisi?"
Armaan loved her even more at this..
A:"Bilkul waisi jisse koi bhi itni aasaani se pyaar kar sakta hai.."
At this Ridhimma looked away and he loved staring at her when she acted this way. He noticed the red colour on her face and she looked too cute that way but to make her look cuter, he got up from his sofa bent on his knees and moved closer to her and said:"Its so easy to fall in love with you.."
Ridhimma's heart skipped a beat. It always did when Armaan was so close to her. The butterflies in her stomach....she knew her feelings were visible on her face...she could make it out because she knew Armaan was constantly looking at her. She got up from the sofa to hide her feelings but Armaan held her hand...got up right after her...pulled her very close to him by her waist and just looked at her while she tried her best not to meet his gaze...he had killing looks..each time he looked at her...she didn't understand what went wrong with her..
R:"Armaan...please chodo naa.."
A:"Oye hoye...aise kaise?pehle aapko zara dekh toh lein..."
Ridhimma said no more and Armaan moved the hairlock from her face and gently kissed her forehead:"I love you Ridhimma.."
At this she looked at him and the two would have kept on staring at each other but then Ridz's cell phone rung..While Ridhimma seperated from Armaan to get her phone, all Armaan thought to himself was :"Damn!!Why do cell phones exist?"
She picked it up..it was Nupur..
R:"Hello?"
N:"Di...Di...tum jaldi se ghar aajao.."
R:"Nupur..tu theek toh hai na?"
N:"Haan di...main theek hoon...tum bas jaldi se aajao.."
R:"Theek hai...main abhi aati hoon.."
Armaan had been listening to Ridhimma's voice and asked in a concerned tone:"Ridhimma...sab theek hai na?"
Ridhimma gave an ensuring look and said:"Haan..sab theek hai...bas mujhe abhi jaana hoga.."
She was about to leave when Armaan called her from behind and said:"Ridhimma..."he moved towards her and said:"agar kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho toh please mujhe batana"
Ridhimma loved this guy standing in front of her..with him around she knew she never had to worry about herself for Armaan was always there to think about her...maybe even more than she could think of herself. She placed her hand on his face cupping it and said:"Tumhein nahi bataongi toh kisse bataongi?!"
She said a "bye" and left...
Part ends...
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Kiran=)

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