Mayur FF - It had to be you-Ch 14 (Last prt)-Pg 67 - Page 43

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Posted: 15 years ago
oh gosh! appu.......finally they said it...oh gosh! it is just a dreamy update i loved it i loved it i loved it........
uff! let me gather my thoughts first , i m soooooooo lost now !!!!!!!!
😍

i will edit my comment!!!!!

edit.....

Okk ,from the morning, she thought he forgot everything he said & he called her Nupsi.....that was so adorable.....& then i loved the way he being her doctor gets her a off from her work!!!!! 😆

& that traffic &rain.....uff! that was so fantabulas........i m speechless.......it was s beautiful just to imagine them dancing in the rain.........near the sea.........
😍😍😍

& finally the confession........one of the most beautiful confession i hv read in FFs .....ah! nupur was saying food & wine is good.....😆.....Oh! this has to be the best date ever where they dance in the rain & confess their love too!!!!!!!!..😍😍😍
oh! i sooo loved this update appu!!!!!!!!!!!!! u wrote it like a dream!!!!!!!! thank u sooo much for this one!!!!!!!!!🤗



Edited by Mou. - 15 years ago
Senny thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Aparaijita,
I absolutely lovedddddddd the update. I am so glad M didn't forget anything man and he remebered each and everything. I loveeeeeeee how you describe each and every emotion with so much intricacy. It makes the whole story much more closer to our hearts. I loveeeeeee the dancing in the rain. It brought tears of joy in my eyes, the way you wrote, i felt that really someone's dream came true.
I loveddddddddddddddd it honey, keep it up and God bless.
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Posted: 15 years ago
*sigh*
*sigh*
*sigh*😍

will comment later!! 🤣
399703 thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
res
i have read it but will comment later
getting late to go somewhere lol
bye
tc
EDITED
Apuuuuuu 🤗
It had been long since you updated but this update made it for the gap :)
Honestly it was simply adorable update!
Absolute loved it!
Keep updating!
Love loads
x x
Edited by Ansh_Arti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
apppppuu

u finally remembered that u had to update a ff

im soo happu finally remembered

i ve been waiting waiting ages for it😆😉


any way abt the update

first of all im so happy

mayank remembered each and everything

he told her nupsi👏😳

and good he got a break'

i love that minister

shayad uske bhaasan se bhad wan bhi rone laga 🤣

aur baarish ho gayi

arre wah the dance in the rain

specially at marine drive is heaven re

aaaaaand then bay view restaurant

good going mayank

finally they confessed

and nups said i love you😍😳

the update was super fantastic

loved it very much

dont forget to update soon

love pebbzziii
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Posted: 15 years ago
What was this? 😍 I'm totally lost in my dreamland right now. Hayee they finally confessed!! Super romantic update!! Man I love these two so much. I was waiting for u to update since ages..! OMGG I'm just loving it!

Please continue soon. I'm getting impatient already hehe!

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Posted: 15 years ago
Yippee.!!! Mayur confession..!!
Awesome ...Totally Marvellous....
Loved it to the core..
Pls continue soon....
Pls pm...!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awww that was such a beautiful confession..........just loved it.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh wow Appu
i fell in love with the part
it was just so amazing
cooooooooooool
thanks for the pm
n do cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey Appu 🤗
that was an awesome romantic and super sweet update 😃
I was so lost in the magical land inhibited by Mayank and Nupur..
Man u r just awesome at romance :)
I loved Mayank so much here :) he he..and Nupur too :)
just perfect..loved the rain dance :D
ufff I could imagine that totally 😍

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