Mayur FF - It had to be you-Ch 14 (Last prt)-Pg 67

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#441

awwww the sweetest

and the best

update EVER!!!
I love the simple confession

and the beach scene was amazing

kamal ki thi!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#442

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Supriya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#443

oustanding appu.👏..
Mayur finally confessed.. party tym...🥳
luvd d update 2 d core...
pls update soon...🤗
-supriya

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palak

@pluks

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Posted: 15 years ago

#444

finally confessed!! awesome dear :) loved that rain part so so so much... it was so sweet of mayank to make nupur dance!!!!!
i so loved the update.. thanks!

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Rabi

@rose.mn

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Posted: 15 years ago

#445

Hey Appu what an amazing update by God..........
Simply loved the way u wrote it, Mayank and Nupur's so simple and sweet confession, the way Mayank feel her as blessing in his life. How much i adore, it will less for you. Mayank and Nupur enjoying their first rain, that was mesmerising.

Simply amazing update
Loved it
But yaarr plzzzzz cont soon.................. please na..........

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Rabia

@.Rabia.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#446

awesome
totally loved it
loved morning talk
and rain was awesome
and confession was just wonderful
loved it
do cont soon

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Shivangi Singh

@shivangi278

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Posted: 15 years ago

#447

hey appu 🤗
awesome part,
i am spellbound......this part was truly beautiful,😍
awwwwwwwww mayu is choo sweet,
finally they confessed.......😍
mayur and their first rain .....WOW....
loooooooooved this part,
plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon....

Edited by shivangi278 - 15 years ago

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

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Posted: 15 years ago

#448

Hey aparajita,

It was an awesome update..
lovely n unique confession..! (luv u 4 dat..😆)

M luving the way Mayur story is progressing...
mayank is soooo nice n adorable ... simply makes Nupur's dreamz turn into reality ..dats like "Wow" 😳

plz cnt soon.. ! thanx 4 d pm..
n sorry 4 commenting late coz i was damn busy...😔

luv
vini

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Lipsa

@-Lipsa-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#449

Whew!! finished re3ading this FF!! OMG!! you write fantastically !! Plz add e to your PM list :)

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Aparajita

@aparajita.s

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Posted: 15 years ago

#450

Hiii guys!! 🤗

Thank u all sooo much for such lovely comments...They really mean a lot!

I hv a lil something to say before I move on to the next chapter, kinda like a bhashan 😆 Actually, I had thot of this chap the moment I posted the previous one, but somehow, I kept hesitating to pen it down.😕

I still dunno if I hv done justice to it or not or whether I have been able to keep it real or not... But anyway, here it is...:) I hope u all like it...

Also, it's getting a lil tough to think of new chaps for this FF, so i might end dis soon... Maybe not for another 2-3 chaps, but i cant guarantee after that...😳 Just thot of letting u guys noe, coz u all have been really amazing readers...:)

Ok, bhashan over!!🤣

Next chapter coming right up!

Love

Appu 😊