Dil Hi Dil Mein ... RA ff ...part 26..25/11 - Page 3

Part 6

Armaan comes out of the airport with the Naazneen and Muskaan following him.

They all get in the car... Armaan on the driver's seat... And the two girls behind...

Armaan fixes the back-view mirror properly.... Takes a look of Muskaan.... And starts the car....

Armaan: aapne apna naam nahi bataya..

Muskaan: jee.. Muskaan..

Armaan: Muskaan... ok... I am good friends with the Maliks.. specially their son.... (smiles)

Muskaan(smiling) :ok...

Armaan: but aap uski fiance... (thinking).

Muskaan gets a little concious.

Armaan: Muskaan.. U are coming from where?

Muskaan: London...

Armaan: London? (thinking).... acha to aap uski London wali girlfriend hai...!

Muskaan (shocked): girlfriend??

Armaan: sorry... Fiance... par usne mujhe bataya hi nahi... jab tak gf thi tab tak to batata tha sab....

Naazneen was shocked... wondering Muskaan ne kya kaha hoga Armaan se.. She didnt know about that.. Remember... She wsnt around.

Muskaan notices a bottle of water on the deck in front. She was thirsty.

Muskaan: may i have that water please?

Armaan: yeah please.. ( passes her the bottle)

Armaan: waise kabse hai?

Muskaan: jee?

Armaan: aap uski fiance kabse hai?

Muskaan: umm.. About 3 months.. (still drinking)

She looks at Naazneen for help.... But she just then turns to look outside...

Armaan: 3 months? Tab to aap apne ex husband ke saath thi na...

Muskaan spills out the water in her mouth... And starts coughing lightly..

Armaan: kya hua?

Muskaan: ex husband??

Armaan: haan.. Dnt worry Zaheer has told me everything about u..

Muskaan: Zaheer??

Armaan: jee.. Aur kaun... Aap Zaheer ki hi gf hai na? Mr Rahim ka beta?

Muskaan: jee... Haan...( the name had slipped out of her mind)

Armaan: mujhe laga aap naam bhul gaye... apne hi fiance ka..

He stares at her through the mirror...... and Muskaan starts coughing again.

Armaan: r u alr8?

Muskaan: yeah... m fine..

Muskaan again looks at Naazneen but eyes were still roaming out.

Armaan: waise... Fir hua kya unka.. Aapke ex ka...

Muskaan doesnt understand what to say. She stays quiet.

Armaan: hmmm... I understand.. Divorces are bad.. Aur wo bhi 3rd ho to.....

Muskaan: what?!

Armaan: relax relax.. I can understand..

Muskaan is feeling very uneasy now by all those statements.

She is still coughing a little'.bcoz of that water'..

Armaan: why r u getting so uncomfortable?

Muskaan: jee.. Woh...

Armaan: ok i know... chalti gadi me paani sambhalkar pina chahiye..

Muskaan : yeah...

Muskaan felt stuck. She looked at Naazneen again... But use to outside view me kuch zyada hi interest tha..... Actually she was just trying to hide her grins from Muskaan...

Armaan : aapke bachche nhi aye?

Muskaan : JEE?bachche???

Armaan: haan... Aapke wo teen bachche the na? Saath nhi aye?

Muskaan(very irritated now) : jee nahi.. Ghar par hi hai...

Muskaan couldnt take him anymore now...: ghar aur kitni dur hai?

Armaan: itni jaldi kya hai... Ab to bohot lamba rasta hai.. (smiled at her through the mirror)

Armaan(starting again) : aap dono mile kaise the?

Muskaan puts her head on one side in exhaustion... she was tired of answering him..

Muskaan: dekhiye me thak gayi ab.. May i rest for a while?

Armaan: umm.. ya sure...

Muskaan rests her head back and closes her eyes...

Armaan and Naazneen exchange a glance... grinning and staring at Muskaan... While poor Muskaan takes a nap.

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Armaan: lijiye mam... Agaya apka ghar...

Muskaan slowly opens her eyes and looks outside the car window... There was a beautiful bungalow on her right... The name plate outside had Maliks' name carved in it...

She gave a sigh of relief... As Armaan drove inside...

They got out and Armaan helped them with the luggage... Muskaan: thank you so much... U helped us in time...

Armaan: pleasure is all mine...

Muskaan bent down to pick up her bags but Armaan grabbed it first...

Muskaan: its ok i will...

Armaan (cuts in btwn) : leave it 2 me... Warna Zaheer kya kahega... Waise bhi kitna time hua usse mile... Chaliye aaj use congrats bhi kar deta hu engagement k liye.... ( saying this he just walks inside...)

Muskaan gets all tensed.... Thinking kya musibat le li sar par...

this is it for part 6 friends...

comments are eagerly awaited....

luv,

sana

i couldnt stop laughing....................oh my muski and armaan wah....................his grilling was so funny....................hey dear update the title too whenever u post the next part...................so that it would be convenient.....................cont soon dear..............and whos opposite to naaz, aman and zaheer????????????????

Naazneen: mummaaa... (she excitedly runs upto her mom and hugs her tightly) ... I missed u soooo much...

Farhat: maine bhi beta... (they seperate as she touches her daughter's face..) kaisi hai meri bachi.?

Naazneen: thik hu mumma.. (turns to Saba and hugs her too) ... Saba chachi.. Missed u all so much..

Saba kisses her forehead.. : missed u 2..

Farhat turns around and notices Muskaan...

Farhat: Naaz... Yeh...

Naazneen: ha mom... Ye Muskaan hai... Muski yaha aa na...

Muskaan moves to them smiling…

Farhat looks at her with affection..... she touches her face and lightly kisses her forehead... Her eyes get num... Muskaan weakly smiles back...

Farhat: kitne arse baad dekh rahi hu tujhe.. itni si se itniiii badi ho gyi….(shows by gesture of hand)…Kaisi hai beta? Aur Imran.. Feroz bhaijaan...

Muskaan: jee.. Sab thik hai..

Farhat introduces Muskaan to Saba too… Muskaan greets her formally..

Farhat: Tum log thak gaye hoge... Fresh hojao..

Armaan comes up now...: are.. Itni jaldi kaise... Farhat chachi me aase bohot naraz hu... Apne mujhse itni bari baat chupayi... Farhat..: kaunsi baat?

Armaan: yehi k yeh.. ( pointing at Muskaan) ... Yeh apki... (stops and smiles at Muskaan)

Muskaan suddenly realizes what he was to say... She had totally forgotten about him!

Muskaan(abruptly in tension) : aap... Aap gaye nahi abhi tak... Armaan: mein? Mein kaha ja rha hu... Me to Zaheer se milke jaunga...

Muskaan: dekhiye aap plz filhaal yaha se chale jaiye... (she holds his hand and starts pushing him outside..) me apko fir kabhi unse mila dungi...

Par Armaan bhi to kam nahi... Jerks off her hand...: are aise kaise... Yaha aya hu to mil kar hi jaunga...

Muskaan starts pushing him again...: kaha na maine.. Jaiye aap...

She is putting all her strenght to push him outside but he is resisting... Bacho ki tarah they are pushing each other.. he holds a table for support and starts shouting in a high voice...: Zaheer... Zaheer... Kaha hai tu.. Jaldi aa.. Ye dekh kya ho raha hai mere saath...

Naazneen who was watching all the drama quietly hides behind her mom and starts laughing.

Farhat: ye sab kya ho raha hai? Muskaan beta.. Yeh... Armaan(still holding the table): kya zulm hai.. Ghar aye mehmaan se aise behave karte hai... Zaheer....

Saba: are kyu itna cheekh raha hai... Zaheer to...

Armaan( cuts her in btwn): nahi aaj koi beech me nahi bolega... Zaheer...

Naazneen(still laughing) : ab bas bhi kijiye bhai... Muski stop it!

Muskaan gets shocked and leaves Armaan... : bhai??

Armaan too starts laughing now... Kabse control kar raha tha...pet pakad pakd ke has raha hai…..

Muskaan: Naaz... Ye sab...

Naazneen (gets a little stable now) : Muski... Tu bhi na...

Muskaan: ye tumhare bhai hai... Zaheer???

Naazneen: nahi... Zaheer bhai nahi... Ye Armaan bhai hai.. Saba chachi ke bete... Maine tumhe bataya tha na.. Hamare neighbors…. Jo bohot close hai... Yahi to hai wo...

Muskaan: kya... Matlab tu janti thi... aur tune mujhe...

Naazneen: to mein aur kya karti... I tried so much to tell you... Par tu mujhe kuch bolne hi nahi de rahi thi...

Muskaan gets embarresed.

Armaan: aur mujhe bhi kaha bolne diya.... Ye bhi nahi ki mein aapki hi ko to receive karne aya hu.... (he looks at Muskaan.... then goes to Naazneen) ... N finally.... how is my little sis..

Naazneen (hugs him): fine bhai.. Aur ab to bohot achi... Kya landing hui hai India me...

Farhat: par hua kya.. Koi bataega bhi...

Muskaan gets silent. She stares at Armaan... Naazneen... And everyone else.... And makes a puppy face..... She was feeling so bad.

Armaan: zyada kuch nahi chachi... Bas ye mujhe janti nahi thi na... To yaha tak ane k liye lift mangne lagi... thoda sa jhut bolkar.. Kaha ki yeh...

Muskaan stares at him.

Armaan: ki yeh Zaheer ki... friend hai.. Jabki i know ki ye to Zaheer se kabhi mili hi nahi.. To bas maine aur Naaz ne inhe thoda... sataya...

Muskaan gets astonished... Ab Armaan itna bhi bura nahi tha... He knows he shudnt say the fiance thing in front of elders like that...it will embarrass Muskaan so much...

Armaan: bas Zaheer Delhi me na hokar agar aaj yaha hota na... to maza ajata..

They both start laughing again.

Saba: Armaan... bas beta..

Farhat: acha ab bohot hua ye sab... Tum dono thak gaye hoge... Jake fresh hojao... Naazneen... Muskaan ko room dikha do...

Naazneen: jee... ( goes to Muskaan) chale...

Muskaan was very angry on her. She doesnt say anything just starts walking behind Naazneen.

Armaan: mom i will leave for office now... Kaafi late ho gaya.

He turns to leave when his eyes meet Muskaan's.... She was climbing up the stairs... He smiles at her... She just stares at him... doesnt understand what to say....she was quite irritated... so she just turns back... and goes up to her room.

Armaan thinks for a while.... then he too climbs up the stairs.... and goes to where he saw Muskaan going.

That is it for this part... Guys please comment...

love,

Sana

very fast yaar......awesome part ...armaan kitne sawal karta hai......... update was amazing ........luv aarti...

Originally posted by: spvd

i couldnt stop laughing....................oh my muski and armaan wah....................his grilling was so funny....................hey dear update the title too whenever u post the next part...................so that it would be convenient.....................cont soon dear..............and whos opposite to naaz, aman and zaheer????????????????

thank dear....yes c I updated the title also now...M glad ur liking the parts....aur opposite to naaz aur aman ka to maine bhi abhi tak kuch theek se decide nahi ki.......but.....zaheer....ahem ahem.......u will c soon....

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Hey dear....u didnt edit from my fav portion....or did u actually edit anything? Sorry...I didnt feel like that....anyways....mujhe to bahuuuuuuuuut maza aya.....pata hai...maine to tab ye parts kahi baat padhe the....abhi thoda bz rehti hu to ek hi fic baar baar nahi padh pati....hehe....but I soooooooo love this fic Sana. W8ing for the other parts n of course the ones I havnt read yet....continue soon dear!!

hey thanks dear.... i didnt know you people liked it that much....😊 😃 😃....... yes I hardly edited...just some spelling mistakes i guess....I will try my best to update it regularly now.....

PART 8:

Armaan comes up following Muskaan. He sees she is just about to enter her room.

Armaan : excuse me.....

Muskaan turns to him.

Armaan : umm.....Muskaan....i....i...am.......sorry.......

Muskaan is surprised.

Armaan (very innocently) : me to bas.....mazak kar raha tha.....

Muskaan smiles at him...... : its ok....actually meri hi galati thi.....mujhe aisa nahi kehna chahiye tha....but.... i was so scared ki shaam ho rahi hai....aur Naaz ko yaha ka address bhi thik se pata nahi tha.....

Armaan : oh.... to phir thik hai....so..... friends?

Muskaan looks up at him.

He extends his hand....... : Armaan...(smiles)

Muskaan is still staring at him....thinking....

Armaan : aap to aise dekh aur soch rahi hai......jaise pata nahi me kitna bura hu....ok baba me abse aapko kabhi nahi sataunga......(smiles cutely)

Muskaan smiles back at him......and takes his hand..... : bure to...nahi hai......par agar aap aise hi satate rahe..... to dar to lagega na....

Armaan laughs ........: nahi nahi ab aise nahi sataunga.... koi naya way dekhta hu.....anyways ab aap rest kijiye....even i am getting late for office....we will meet at dinner....

Muskaan : ok....

Armaan : bye… and take care…….

Muskaan : bye....

Armaan leaves from there as Muskaan watches him....with a smile on her face....

She turns to enter her room when she sees Naazneen standing at the door smiling at her. She was watching their entire scene.

Naazneen : ab Armaan bhai ko mafi mil gayi to mujhe bhi mil jaegi na.....

Muskaan doesnt say anything...... just walks inside the room.

Naazneen follows her : Muski.....sorry.....

Muskaan : chup kar tu.... jab sab pata tha to bol nahi sakti thi.....what he must be thinking of me.....how bad..... ( she folds her hands and stands there showing anger on her face..)

Naazneen comes up and hugs her sideways.....: sorry na Muski..... bas sata rahi thi thoda......aur wo Armaan bhai hai.....wo kuch nahi sochenge... hes very sweet...

Muskaan doesnt respond.

Naazneen : Muski sorry na.....(she hugs her very tightly) ....... sorry sorry sorry.....( shes tightening her grip) .......sorry sorry sorry......

Muskaan : Naaz kya kar rahi hai.....Naaz leave me..... ( finally breaks down in a smile) ok baba its ok....ab chod....

Naazneen lets her go.... : thank you......waise thik kaha tha Armaan bhai ne......(lies down on the bed) .....agar tab Zaheer bhai hote waha....to aapki to band bajti....(laughs)

Muskaan : thank God he wasnt there...... waise wo hai kaha.?

Naazneen : muma ne kaha tha Delhi gaye hai....kuch business ke liye hi.... ek do din me ajaenge.....

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Down in the kitchen........ Saba and Farhat were preparing dinner.....

Farhat : Saba.... zara ye halwa chakh to.....sab thik hai.?

Saba tastes it.... : bohot acha hai.....ye gajar ka halwa to Naazneen aur Armaan dono ko pasand hai na....

Farhat : hmm ... aur Muskaan ko bhi......choti thi to mujhse hamesha kehti thi banane ke liye.... ab to.....pata nahi use.....( she gets into deep thinking)

Saba : kya sochne lag gayi.....

Farhat : ..... Muskaan ke bare me..... aaj itne arse baad use dekha..... 10 saal ki thi jab Feroz bhaijaan London shift ho gaye.... kabhi kabhi aate the milne.....par fir Ayesha bhabhi ki khabar agayi.... uske baad to.....(her eyes get num)..... bohot ache the wo....mere liye to badi behen jaise hi....

Saba keeps a hand on her shoulder.

Farhat : itni si umar me bohot saha hai Muskaan ne..... sabse dur rehkar sab kuch akeli hi sehti rahi.....

Farhat : ab to bas yahi chahti hu ki..... Muskaan hamesha ke liye yahi reh jaye......

Saba : chahte to hum sab yahi hai.... bas dono bache ha karde..... tune Zaheer se baat ki?

Farhat : nahi abhi nahi.... socha pehle dono ek baar mil to le..... itne saalo me sirf phone par hi baat karte rahe....wo bhi sirf business ke liye....

Saba : ye bhi thik hai.... tu kahe to hum Armaan se pehle baat karle.... wo kuch madad kar sake...

Farhat : are nahi.... use bata diya to Zaheer tak baat pohoch ne me kitna waqt lagega.....

Saba : ha ye bhi hai....chalo fir pehle Zaheer ajaye... fir dekhte hai.....

Farhat : ha....yahi thik rahega....Muskaan bhi yaha sabke saath ghul mil jaye...

They both give each other a reassuring smile convinced of their decision and get back to preparing dinner.

Part ends.

Waiting for your sweet comments,

Love,

Sana.

Awesome part Sana.. Yeh toh soon sooner soonest se b zyada fast update tha..i mean itne jalde likhte kaise ho yaar..mujhe toh padne mein he itna time lag gaya..hehe..
See Ya..

Originally posted by: afreenaamna

Awesome part Sana.. Yeh toh soon sooner soonest se b zyada fast update tha..i mean itne jalde likhte kaise ho yaar..mujhe toh padne mein he itna time lag gaya..hehe..
See Ya..