FF-humari dosti humara pyaar NEW part 54 pg32

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hello evry1...im kinda new to I-F...well i am mostly a silent reader...lol...😊...and i have read sooo many ffs here and i jus love them...😊...
well i write a lil too...but on a different forum (apnicommunity)...i write some ffs there...and well i thought to post it here aswell...
im not as good as you all here...but i do hope you all like this fanfic...😳

its called humari dosti aur humara pyaar...its one of the fanfics i post on the other forum...and the first Fanfic i am posting on India-Forums...😊...well its an AR and RM fanfic...but its mostly an AR fanfic...i will post the character sketch and concept now...and then you all can decide if i shud post the first part or not...😊

so let me post now...:)


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Character Sketch -

ARMAAN (KSG) - sab ke dill ka armaan...the hot and happening dude of elliott...even though he is new to London and new to the school he becomes fairly popular in his first few weeks especially among the girls...he is handsome and very smart...sometimes he is childish and immature...but there is a side of him which is very mature and sophisticated...during his stay in elliott he becomes very good friends with rahul, atul, muskaan and riddhima...

RIDDHIMA (Any riddhima you prefer...Shilpa, Suku or Jenni) - sweet and simple girl of elliott...evry1s friend...and well respected by others...well some...she traditional yet modern...respects her parents and elders and her friends...she supports her friend all the tym but that is only if she now that they are right...she is a total peace keeper...but she will argue for her friends or family if she knows that they are right...she is the total sunshine if elliott...she is very intelligent, calm and fun to be with'and is very good friends with rahul, atul, muskaan and armaan...

RAHUL (Mayank Anand)
- cool and calm...the two words to describe his personality...he is very attractive...and a very very good friend who will support them no matter what...he is very hard working and is well known in elliott...and is fairly popular jus lyk armaan...especially among girls...all the girls love him...but he is jus waiting for the right girl...he is fun to be with and a cool and calm dude...and is very good friends wiv armaan, atul, riddhima and muskaan...

MUSKAAN (Drushti Dhami)
- the bubbly and cute muskaan...brings a muskaan on evry1s face...though being new to elliott she has made many friends when she arrived...she is very sweet and calm,well sometimes...at times she can be very loud...she will support her friends and family no matter what...even if means to get into a argument or fight with them...she is calm yet load, quiet yet talkative and sweet but sometimes kinda angry...she is very good friend wiv riddhima, atul, armaan and rahul...

ATUL (Pankit Thakkar) - rude, insensitive, cruel...those are the words which we should NEVER use to describe him!!!!!!...he is absolutely sweet and caring. Funny and cute...he wud never hurt any1...and even if he did...he probably didn't know and will apologise straight away...friends wiv evry1...and very intelligent...though he may say stupid things...he is very supportive to his friends...and very protective about his friends...especially the girls...he will sometimes gets angry when he knows that something is wrong...he is the sweetest guy in Elliott School and evry1 loves him (as a friend)...


Concept -

NOTE - This may change as the story progresses...lol

This story is set in London...where a group of 4 friends: armaan, riddhima, rahul and muskaan...all four are very good friends...almost similar to each other but different in there own way...all four go to a school called elliott...where there friendship will be tested...but will it be a good thing...or bad???


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well thats the character sketch and concept...😊

now you can decide if i shud continue to post or not...😊


please comment on if you like it...😊...your comments mean alot to me...😳

love megs xxx



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FF index - links to all the parts i have posted...

Part 1
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=27410897&#27410897
Part 2 & 3
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=27430681&#27430681
Part 4
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=27485354&#27485354
Part 5
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=27532153&#27532153
Part 6
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=27551223&#27551223
Part 7
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=27663899&#27663899
Part 8
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=27719011&#27719011
Part 9 & 10 & 11
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=27768320&#27768320
Part 12 & 13 &14
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=27925867&#27925867
Part 15
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=28100647&#28100647
Part 16
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=28307309&#28307309
Part 17 & 18
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=28452552&#28452552
Part 19
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=28478317&#28478317
Part 20
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=28645915&#28645915
Part 21
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=28903177&#28903177
IMPORTANT MESSAGE
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=29055609&#29055609
Part 22 & 23

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=29067017&#29067017
Part 24, 25 & 26
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=29239514&#29239514
Part 27
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=29423848&#29423848
Part 28 & 29
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=29622390&#29622390
IMPORTANT MESSAGE
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=29836676&#29836676
Part 30
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=35247977&#35247977
Part 31 & 32
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=35645364&#35645364
Part 33, 34 & 35
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=40076580&#40076580
Part 36 & 37
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=40482022&#40482022

Part 38 & 39
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=45161140&#45161140
Part 40

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=45198636&#45198636
Part 41

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=45232018&#45232018
Part 42 & 43

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=45330662&#45330662
Part 44

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=45417867&#45417867
Part 45
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=45431595&#45431595
Part 46
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=45482113&#45482113
Part 47
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=45518738&#45518738
Part 48
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=45685762&#45685762
IMPORTANT NOTICE
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1331476&PID=45726103&#45726103
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Part 51
Part 52
Part 53


PART 54


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LOVE THE CONCEPT
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great introšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘.would love to read more.do continue soon.............
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sadiq21, sasya, scorpio95, sanjana25, naureen_aly, shilpanian4lyf
thank you very much for liking it....šŸ˜ƒšŸ¤—
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@ sadiq21 - thank you 😊 im reli glad you lyk it...😊...i think i will post the first part now...so will pm you once i have posted it 😊

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sasya - thank you...😊...im happy you lyked the intro...will continue very soon...😊
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Humari Dosti aur Humara Pyaar

Part 1

A plane flying by is shown...LONDON....busy busy London...many people go in and out of London....for business...for school trips....for holidays...for family...(at Heathrow Airport) ...and for one of these reasons this girl is also leaving London...
A mobile phone rang...and a girl was shown in a que,,,,wearing black jeans and a white top...wiv black boots...she attended the phone call...
Girl: hello...
Her green eyes were shown...
Girl: yes mom.../...yes I am at the airport.../....yes I have my tickets and passport...im in the que to get my boarding pass.../...mom mom mom mom mom.../...don't worry...I know what to do...I will be fine.../...ok.../...and call u when I land.../...and will wait till u come and collect me.../...ok....bye...
She put the phone down...
Girl: mom bhi na...always taking tension...
(only her back is shown...not face)....She gave her ticket at the ticket counter to get her boarding pass...
Girl: thank you...
She got her boarding pass and was jus checking when her flight was and what gate it was at... but then her name was called by someone...
Person: hey...riddhima!!!!
The girl had turned around and a beautiful smile came across there face...
Riddhima: guys!!...u made it!!!!!!!!!!!!....
She hugged her friends sarah, max, ananya and payal
Sarah: obviously riddhima...u cant leave wiv out saying bye...
Riddhima smiled...
Max: so u got ur boarding pass???
Riddhima: yep...
Payal: how did u get here...
Riddhima: I got on the cab...
Ananya: what!!!...wheres rahul???...i thought he was gna drop u off...
Riddhima smiled: he wnt come...
Ananya: huh???
Riddhima: he can never say goodbye...
Ananya: but ur onli goin for a few weeks...ur gna be back for college
Riddhima: I know...but rahul...he cant say goodbye even if I were goin for 2 days...
They all laughed
Riddhima: but I have spken to him...and he helped me pack....so he sed goodbye to me yesterday...
Payal: riddhima...u cud have told us we wud have dropped u off...
Riddhima: oh well...its ok...u guys can collect me instead...(she sed smiling)
Payal: lyk duh...jus tell me wen ur coming bk...
Riddhima: ya I will call...cos the dates may changes...
Sarah: ok u got evryfin rite...
Riddhima: yep...
Sarah: u excited for india...
Riddhima: ya...sorta...it will be lots of fun...its my bros wedding...gna enjoy...
Jus then an announcement came...
Announcement: everybody boarding flight number BA174...plz proceed to GATE 24 for security check...
Riddhima: guys...its tym for me to go...I will see ya all wen I come back...at elliott
Ananya: well some...
Riddhima: huh?
Ananya: I got accepted at Wallington Sixth Form....im not goin elliott
Riddhima: what!!!....but anu...u sed urself that u will never leave Elliott...cos of all the memories u have cos of the past 5 years we have spent there...
Ananya: I know...but dad shifting houses and it's the closest to my house...
Riddhima: awww...anu....i will miss u yaar...
And she hugged her...
Ananya: mee too....but we can still meet up...rite...
Riddhima: yh...(she sed smiling)
And announcement went off agen...
Riddhima: thats my call....i have to go now...bye evry1...
And hugged evry1...
Max: take care...
Riddhima: you too....bye...
Evry1: bye...
And she started to walk...to her gate...turning back to wave goodbye...

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hope u all like the first part...sry about the slow beginning... :/ ...so sry if you get bored... :/

emm i will post the net part soon...depending on how many ppl lyk this fanfic lol....😊

however i hope you all like the first part....please comment...😊

love megs xxx


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loved the first part megs
and it was so not boring
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@ sadiq21 - thanks yaar....im glad u liked it...😊...and happy you didnt find it boring lol...😊😳
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Part 2

Riddhima had reached the gate for her security check…she had a while till she had to board the flight so she decided to sit down…but unfortunately there not many seats left at the gate…she spotted one and made her way there…but not knowing she accidently bumped into some1…
Riddhima: I'm sorry…
She turned around and stopped…she saw a pair of mystic grey eyes looking at her...and turned bk and started to move…it looked like he was in a rush…his voice spoke out to her…
Voice: its ok…I'm sorry…
And he quickly left walking the other direction…riddhima looked a bit confused…
Riddhima: weird…
And she sat down at a seat and got her book out…and started to read…when jus then her phone rang…
Riddhima: (to herself) its probably mom…(she answered her phone) hello….(a smile came onto her face)…RAHUL!!!!!!!!!!!!....
she screamed in the gate…making evry1 look at her…she sat down looking embarrassed…
Riddhima: Rahul…/….how are you….all good rite???.../...yeah I'm at the gate…/…I'm fine…/….yeah all ready to go india…/….i wish u cud come yaar…/…yes I understand…/…no, I came by cab…/….Rahul chill, I'm fine……anyway Anu, Payal, Max and Sarah came to see me off unlike you…./….I know, I know u cant say bye…but yaar I am only going for a few weeks, it not like I am going forever, u know I would never leave you…and Payal said that she will collect me when I come back…/….ok ok fine…u can collect me…happy?…/….anyway Anu was asking about you, did you know she is not coming sixth form with us, she is going Wallington instead…/…I know yaar I'm gonna miss her too, but we can meet her…/….yeah…
While she was talking to Rahul…and announcement came…
Announcement: all passengers boarding flight number BA174….plz come and board the fight…
Riddhima heard and sighed…
Riddhima: Rahul….I have to go now…time for me to board the flight…./….yes I have everything…./….u too take care of urself…and aunty…/….yes I will say hi to mom from you…/…I will miss you too…dnt be sad…ok.../….yes I will call you when I land…./…take care of yourself while I'm gone…and eat food ok…/….I can tell when I come back if u haven't ate our not ok…./….(she laughed)…ok I need to go now…time for me to board the flight…I will speak to you later…/….bye…/….love you too…bye…
Riddhima put the phone down…and went to the que …as she did, she felt a bit upset…maybe it was because she will miss her friends…especially rahul…she was lost in her own thoughts until at the air hostess asked her for her boarding pass…
Air hostess: mam….
She was still daydreaming…and she spoke out to her again…
Air hostess: mam…
she jerked out of her thoughts…
Riddhima: yes…
Air hostess: ur boarding pass and passport please…
Riddhima: em…yes…here you go…
Air hostess: thank you mam…u may go inside…
And she gave back he passport and boarding pass…
Riddhima: thank you
And she started to walk inside the plane…
Riddhima: (to herself while looking for her seat)…18K..18K…
And she found her seat…
Riddhima: found it…
And she put her book on her seat and lifted her bag to out in the compartment…but she couldn't reach…
Riddhima: (to herself) now what shud I do…
She looked down the plane and noticed many people wanted to get pass her but couldn't…she tried agen to put her bag up…but failed…
Riddhima: (to herself) maybe I should get some help…gr8 idea riddhima…why didn't you think out it before…stupid…
A voice behind her spoke to her…
Voice: would you like some help…
Riddhima looked confused…she had heard the sound of that voice before…she was trying to recognise it…

Part 3

She looked down the plane and noticed many people wanted to get pass her but couldn't…she tried again to put her bag up…but failed…
Riddhima: (to herself) maybe I should get some help…gr8 idea Riddhima…why didn't you think out it before…stupid…
A voice behind her spoke to her…
Voice: would you like some help…
Riddhima looked confused…she had heard the sound of that voice before…she was trying to recognise it…she turned back and saw those grey eyes agen…she looked at him….while he smiled…he spoke again to her…
Voice: may I help…
And he took that bag out from her hands and put it up in the baggage compartment…
Riddhima: thanks…
He smiled at her and walked passed her…Riddhima sat down and soon evry1 was all sat in there seats…riddhima was reli happy that she had her own seat and that nobody was goin to sit next to her …plane took off…Riddhima was looking out the window of the lovely scenery on london…she smiled…
Riddhima: goodbye London…hello india…

1 hour into the flight…Riddhima had jus finished watching a show on the TV…and she had put on the radio and started to read her book…an air hostess was walking by serving everybody breakfast…
Airhostess: mam….would you like anything…
Riddhima: emm…yes plz…may I have a hot chocolate with biscuits plz…
Airhostess: of course mam…
The airhostess made her the hot chocolate and gave it to her…
Riddhima: thank you…
Riddhima had her breakfast…and continued with her book…after an hour she got up and walked around the plane as she became tired of sitting…after her lil walk she sat back down in her seat and begam to read her book again…after a while she got up again and went to go to the washroom….but it was occupied…she waited calmly outside…along with other 2 ladies…she waited calmly…and air hostess wanted to walk by…so she moved out of the way….she quickly went back to her seat and got her iPod and make up bag…she went back to her seat and started to listen to her music…as she waited for the washroom to be vacant…but then somebody came walking by…the other 2 lady had moved slightly…but there was not enough room to move….but Riddhima didn't hear as she had her music on…she jus stood there quietly….until he came in front of her…they were only inches away from each other…he looked at her…Riddhima looked up and saw those mystic grey eyes again…they both jus stood there looking at each other for a while…he spoke to her…
Voice: sry….can I walk pass plz
Riddhima looked at him…
Riddhima: yh sure….sry…
She slightly moved…giving him room to move…he smiled at her…so did she…and he left looking back at riddhima…and riddhima jus stood there looking confused…
Riddhima: why does he always come in front of me???...oh well…
She waited outside patiently …until the washroom was vacant…

Riddhima returned back to her seat….and sat down…and began to read her book agen….she had 7 hours for the flight left…so she decided that she will read and then sleep for abit…or watch a movies…jus then sum1 spoke out to her…
Voice: excuse me…is any1 sitting here???
Riddhima looked up and saw those mesmerising eyes agen…(in her mind) 'him…agen…how many tyms???'
Riddhima: huh???
Voice: there is a problem in my seat…so I asked to switch seats…is any1 sitting here???
Riddhima: emm…no…nobody is sitting here…
Voice: so may i??...(he smiled)
Riddhima: ya sure…
Voice: thanks…
He sat down…and smiled….
Voice: by the way…hi….im Armaan…
I looked at him and smiled…
Riddhima: hi….riddhima…

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i posted 2 parts 2day cos i may not be coming online for a few days....and i havent thought of a fixed dat for when i post lol....šŸ˜›

hope u lyk the parts....😊...and plz plz plzzzz comment....cos i reli want to know what you think of this....as ur comments and support reli mean alot to me...😳

thank you for reading 😊

love megs x


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