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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hello friends...

First of all a very Happy Valentine's Day to all of u.

Secondly, I know I have been unusually late in posting an update. So I know that I deserve all the dhamkis and gaaliyans. But the principal of this dept knew exactly what was wrong with me and so very kindly, she chose to forgive me. (It means u Mana). Thanks a lot Mana.

And so here goes the fifth part of The Beginning of an End.



PART - 5:

"Aap humari baat samajh kyun nahi rahe? Hum aapke saath nahi aa sakte. Apni kathinaiyon ko aapke sar nahi daal sakti. Aap chale jaiye yahan se."

"Tum pagal ho gayi ho? Mai tumhe yahan se le jaane aaya hun, tumhara pralaap sunne nahi."

"Aap samajhte kyun nahi? Hum badi mushkil se aapse milne aa paaye hain. Shayad aajke baad hum mil hi na paaye..."

He placed his fingers on her lips. He dreaded the very thought of it, how could he bear to hear it. She stared at him for some time and then clutched his hand tightly and started weeping. He cupped her face in his palms and slowly wiped away her tears with his thumb. "Sshhh... aansu pocho aur meri baat dhyan se suno. Hume koi alg nahi kar sakta."

She cut him in between. "Aap nahi samajh rahe. Raka ko hum par shak ho gaya hai. Agar usne kisi ko bata diya toh..."

"Arey, meri sherni Raka se darti hai?" he teased her to lighten her mood. "Raka ko jo karna hai kar lene do. Mai tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga." He promised.

"Aur agar aapko kuch ho gaya toh?" he saw traces of fear in her eyes.

"Tum ho na mere saath... mujhe kuch nahi ho sakta." He replied and then holding her wrist pulled her up from behind the bushes where they were hiding. He had become careless and paid the price for it.

An arrow came flying and hit him on his left shoulder. He bit his lips to stop himself from crying out in pain. Controlling himself he tried to pull it out, but one more arrow hit him in the lower portion of the stomach. He lost his balance and fell down with blood rolling down from his wounds and making his already dusty robe stained with blood. In a second she was by his side. "Aap ko kya hua... aap thik toh hain na." she pulled the arrow from his stomach and then stretched her hand out to pull the other one.

A shadow fell on their faces and before any of them could react, she was pulled up and found herself staring into the thick set, red eyes of......

"RAKA..." she was stunned. So he had been following her.

"Aapko kya laga... aap kuch bhi Karen hume pata nahi chalega? Aap humari amanat hai... aur aapko apni sahi jagah pe hona chahiye. Aur hum aapko wahan tak pahuncha kar rahenge." His voice was rough and threatening.

She left herself free and waited for a time to attack him. But before she could do anything, a sword flashed and her face was splashed in blood...

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The person awoke with a start completely covered in perspiration and terror visible on face. "What was this...???" The night didn't turn out to be peaceful any more.

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Prithvi woke to the soulful renditions of Suprabhatam... a piece composed by Pandit Mukharjee himself. He had always heard it with music, but today it was a female voice which woke him up. The voice was soft and low and before Prithvi got down from the bed, he knew who the singer could be.

Very gently he pulled open the door and went out into the corridor. The voice was coming from the room next to his. He hesitated outside the door, debating with himself whether to open the door or not. However, the voice was too over powering and it pushed aside all his hesitation. He gently pushed the door and looked inside.

She was standing in front of a shelf clad in a sky blue coloured skirt and white sleeveless top. Her waist length hair was wet and was therefore left open. She was waving aarati in front of a small statue of Nataraj ' the dancing Shiva. As he watched in silence... she finished the aarati, bowed her head in front of the idol and turned back.

He smiled at her startled look. "Good Morning Nandini..."

"Good Morning! Did I disturb you? I'm so sorry." She said.

"You call this mellifluous voice as disturbing? I would be gladly disturbed out of my sleep if I get to hear this voice every morning........ uhh I mean this song every morning."

She smiled at his hesitation suddenly feeling shy all of a sudden. And seeing her blush at his compliment, for no reason at all he felt elated. "Would you like to have a look around? It's a beautiful sight early in the morning."

"Sure...!!!" she jumped up at the prospect. She loved early morning strolls.

"Great... Give me 15 minutes... I'll freshen up and join you."

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True to his words... Prithvi met her in the corridor within 15 minutes. Taking care not to disturb the sleeping house as it was just 5:30 in the morning, they went out of the palace and out of the gate.

"So now that you are in Udaipur... how do you propose to spend these holidays?"

"Udaipur is known as the City of the Lakes... isn't it? So you tell me what is there for me to see?"

"Lots of places. Lake Pichola, Fateh Sagar Lake, Jaisamand, Udai Sagar and Swaroop Sagar are some of the most beautiful lakes in the state. Also there are many palaces which have now been converted into luxury palaces. Like the Lake Palace... u see it covers an entire island in the Pichola Lake.. There is Jug Niwas or the Lake palace Hotel, Lake Palace, Jug Mandir, a museum known as Bharatiya Lok Kala Mandal... then there is a memorial of Maharana Pratap atop Moti Magri or Pearl Hill... then there is the Monsoon Palace known as the Sajjan Garh Palace, Sukhadia Circle, Jagdish temple and Bohra Ganesh ji temple. Then there is Saheliyon ki Bari, Udaipur Solar observatory, Gulab bagh and Zoo, dudh talai which is a rocky and fountain garden, Neheru garden, Bagore ki haveli which was built in the 18th century, Ahar Museum, Shilpgram which is a crafts village, Neemach Mata temple and Our Lady of Fatima Cathedral."

"Gosh... you were talking like a tourist guide Prithvi." She said after he finished.

"You seem to have forgotten that I'm a resident of Udaipur." He smiled at her surprised look.

"No, I haven't." she countered " But to keep everything in mind like a tourist guide is certainly surprising."

He laughed at this and asked. "Interested in sight seeing? I'll prove to be a good guide."

"You will make the best guide." She returned mischeviously and both of them started laughing.

"When can we start with the sightseeing?" she asked after a while.

"Whenever you want. How about after breakfast?"

"Sure."

After strolling for half an hour, they retraced their steps towards the palace.


Edited by guglu088 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
Hello All...

So finally... here is the fifth part of the fic. I know it is a short part and I wanted to incorporate a few more incidents but then, it wouldn't have been possible to post it today and I didn't want to delay it further considering that I was already so late.

You all are free to criticize because there was nothing interesting in this part expect of course the first talk of Nandini and Prithvi. I had planned a longer update where Prithvi would clear his behavior of the previous evening, but couldn't do it. And I'm very sorry for that.

Lastly... dont beat me up for this guys... but you wont be getting any more updates till March. And I have a reason this time... I'll be away for an interview and hence cannot continue till March. Hope you will understand my problem.

No more of my ramblings. Its time for your comments. And silent users please press the like button.

Love
Guglu
Edited by guglu088 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
Hi guglu

pehle to yogi ke liye ek ques, usse kahan se tumhgari updates meri udates se badhi lagti hain, she always say na ki guglu jaise update karti hai vese kiya karo, so next time se mein vohi karne wali hun, phir yogi ko kehna ki wo mujhe kuch na bole 😉 😆 😆

Now, coming on the big big UD (in yogi's language), it was beautiful, wonderful,awesome, fantastic...........aur yaad nahin aa rahe, khud likh lena yaar

loved the morning scene, it was beautiful
the way u have described udaypur was awesome, just feeling to visit the place
Totally brilliant

sorry for being so late

UD soon
Luv Preet

Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84

Hi Guglu !! 😃

Wonderful Update dear !! 👏 👏
Par yeh kya?? 😲 Sab log mujhe kind and sweet samajhte hai aur tumne toh mujhe galiya aur dhamki dene waalo ka PRINCIPAL bana diya !! 😆 😆 😆
Kya yaar !! Mera itna GUARDED Secret tumne out kar diya !! 😛
Khair ! par tumne mujhe understanding bhi kaha !😛
Aur tumhe thanks kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi !😊 I'm ur friend na?? so I HAVE to understand ! 😊
Update par aate hai...
Ab tum kahogi ki Update par hi aana tha toh itni Ram kahani maine kyun sunayi???
Kya karu? mujhe comment bada banana tha...Ab UD itnaaaaaaaaaaa bada hai ki mujhe meri kahani ussmein add karni padi !
Don't worry dear...Update bilkul bhi chota nahi hai....😛
Yeh kya UD tha???😡 Or was it a Promo !???😆 😆
Par....sheah yaar ! U called me understanding na??? 😆 😆
UD ( oops !😉) was wonderful ! 👏 👏
first bit was scary...though i'm guessing now, but will leave it to you to clear out everything 😛
warna main kya??? teer maarne ki aadat lag gayi hai mujhe!😆 though 95% nishaane par baithte hai!
Prithvi woke up with Nandini's beautiful voice and both went on a stroll...😊
He was acting like a perfect guide !😊
Guglu U made me Nostalgic yaar !!
I myself is Rajasthani...and I love Udaipur a lotttttt !!
And I could recount all my visits to those places....😊
All the best for interview....!!
But remember aane ke baad looooooooooong aur frequent UDs deke u hav to make up!
Aur agar interview mein koi tedhe sawaal pooche aur tu museebat mein pad jaaye...
TOH .....
Honth ghuma, seeti baja....
Seeti bajake bol....guglu...
ALL Izzzzzz WELLLLLLL.....!!! 😆 😆 😆
luvvvvvvvvvvvv,
mana 😆
Edited by Revolutionbreez - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85

first tujhe mein socha kuch bolu short part ke liye but then understand u and ur situation, so no prblm for this time but from the next time u'll post long update.

now come to the update,
it's superb upedate.
first came to the dream. it's too good. the way describe the dream,it's wonderful. loved the conversation between two person who were in the dream ,but who is raka, humm suspense but ek baat toh hain he is villian...kisne uss lerke ko mara.
uff har pyaar karne wale ke piche ek nehi bahut dusman reheta hain,
par iye dream kisne dekha, tune toh iss baar bola nehi prithvi ka naam but i guess it's prithvi, par usne soya kiase aache se...
phir kisne dekha hoga iye dream, nandini toh nehi,par oh....
lekin agar oh dream dekhi hain toh doosre din normal behave kaise kia...
sochna parega iss baat ko dhayn se,
but tune suspense acche se create kia.loved it.
wow, morning mein prithvi ne neend se utha nandini ke gaane se.wow.loved it.......
sahi kaha prithvi ne koi itni acche gane se neend se uthaya toh usse distrub nehi kehete , hay,😳
so,prithvi ne nandini ko ghuma ne le jane ke baad kaha good.
prithvi bahut Punctual hain .
loved the way prithvi described uday pur and nandini ka reaction sahi tha...tourist guide, mein bhi iye soch rehithi...
total update was just brilliant.
continue soon and make long update next time.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
very nice update.very interesting & mysterious.i thnk nandini might have seen tht dream.lets see wht the truth is.wll be waiting for ur next update & all the best for your interview dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely part....!!!
who saw that dream?? nandini or prithvi???....
so they r going for the sightseeing...hmm..interesting....
awesome part....waiting for the next part....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
sorry for late comments not came on IF
Comments for Part-4
Superb update!!!
like nandini pullilng veer's leg
also the description of prithvi's family in point of view of nandu is very good like all

Prithvi can't specify about his behaviour to nandini cuase of vedehi but like that they talked n laughed friendly this time.

Comments Part 5
Like it very much dressing sense of nandini i like sky blue colour
and it must be nandini now to see that dream
like prithvi wakeup with nandini's suprabhatam
and waiting for site seeing n guide 😉😳
Edited by shruja - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
HIII GUGLU HOW R U
WOW WOW SUPERB
MINDBLOWING
FANTASTIC
I LOVED IT
U EXPLAINED IT VERY WELL
DO CONT SOON

LOVE
DEEPA

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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
heyy it ws really very nice

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