The Beginning of an End. RT-MC FF/Ud on PG 16 - Page 10

oh my gudness.....wat a story....hi dear im ur new reader..sooo awesome n marvellous really amazing......very nice....like the story alot.....plzzzzz do continue it....

Originally posted by: preet09

Hi guglu Hi Preet...

pehle to yogi ke liye ek ques, usse kahan se tumhgari updates meri udates se badhi lagti hain, she always say na ki guglu jaise update karti hai vese kiya karo, so next time se mein vohi karne wali hun, phir yogi ko kehna ki wo mujhe kuch na bole 😉 😆 😆 Oye chup kar... yogi mere RN fics ki update ki length ki baat karti hai... aur agar RTMC fic se matlab hai to mai next update karne wali hun uske length ke barabar apne updates dena...😆

Now, coming on the big big UD (in yogi's language), aur chidhana abhi baaki hai... thik hai ab se update taiyar na ho to mai update karungi hi nahi...😉it was beautiful, wonderful,awesome, fantastic...........aur yaad nahin aa rahe, khud likh lena yaar Wah wah... mai khud hi story likhun aur mai khud hi comment karun...

loved the morning scene, it was beautiful Thanks...
the way u have described udaypur was awesome, just feeling to visit the place Same here... chal milke ghumne chalte hain... aur Mana ko guide ke taur pe le lenge.. what say MAna...😉 😆 😆 😉
Totally brilliant Thanks...

sorry for being so late Its okay...

UD soon Wahi likh rahi hun... yaani ki next update...
Luv Preet

Luv u too
Guglu...

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Hi Guglu !! 😃 Hi Mana

Wonderful Update dear !! 👏 👏 Thanks...

Par yeh kya?? 😲 Sab log mujhe kind and sweet samajhte hai aur tumne toh mujhe galiya aur dhamki dene waalo ka PRINCIPAL bana diya !! 😆 😆 😆 Ab sachai kabhi na kabhi to saamne aa hi jaati hai..

Kya yaar !! Mera itna GUARDED Secret tumne out kar diya !! 😛

Khair ! par tumne mujhe understanding bhi kaha !😛 Ab mai kya karun... jo ho wahi kaha...

Aur tumhe thanks kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi !😊 I'm ur friend na?? so I HAVE to understand ! 😊 Thanks for that...

Update par aate hai... Okk waiting...

Ab tum kahogi ki Update par hi aana tha toh itni Ram kahani maine kyun sunayi???

Kya karu? mujhe comment bada banana tha...Ab UD itnaaaaaaaaaaa bada hai ki mujhe meri kahani ussmein add karni padi ! Arey yaar... aur kitna taang khinchegi... Yaar chida mat... mujhe pata hai ki ye update chota tha...

Don't worry dear...Update bilkul bhi chota nahi hai....😛

Yeh kya UD tha???😡 Or was it a Promo !???😆 😆

Par....sheah yaar ! U called me understanding na??? 😆 😆 Ab ki baar kiya hai na bada sa update... yaar ab to maaf kar...

UD ( oops !😉) was wonderful ! 👏 👏 Huh... Thanks...

first bit was scary...though i'm guessing now, but will leave it to you to clear out everything 😛

warna main kya??? teer maarne ki aadat lag gayi hai mujhe!😆 though 95% nishaane par baithte hai! Sure maar na teer... maine kab mana kiya hai...😆😆😆

Prithvi woke up with Nandini's beautiful voice and both went on a stroll...😊

He was acting like a perfect guide !😊 Wasn't he... maine socha yahi ek kaam baki reh gaya tha usse karwana so wo bhi karwa liya jaye...😉

Guglu U made me Nostalgic yaar !!

I myself is Rajasthani...and I love Udaipur a lotttttt !!

And I could recount all my visits to those places....😊 Really...!!! That was really an information for me... I am really happy... I got a guide u see...😉

All the best for interview....!!

But remember aane ke baad looooooooooong aur frequent UDs deke u hav to make up! Thanks... the interview went well...

Aur agar interview mein koi tedhe sawaal pooche aur tu museebat mein pad jaaye...

TOH .....

Honth ghuma, seeti baja....

Seeti bajake bol....guglu...

ALL Izzzzzz WELLLLLLL.....!!! 😆 😆 😆 Very Funny...😆😆😆

luvvvvvvvvvvvv,

mana 😆

Luv u too
Guglu

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

first tujhe mein socha kuch bolu short part ke liye but then understand u and ur situation, so no prblm for this time but from the next time u'll post long update.Sure...pakka... thanks for understanding my situation Rakhi...

now come to the update,

it's superb upedate. thanks...

first came to the dream. it's too good. the way describe the dream,it's wonderful. loved the conversation between two person who were in the dream Thanks
,but who is raka, humm suspense but ek baat toh hain he is villian...kisne uss lerke ko mara.Raka ke villian hone me koi shak hi nahi hai...😆

uff har pyaar karne wale ke piche ek nehi bahut dusman reheta hain,Ye baat tune pate ki ki hai...

par iye dream kisne dekha, tune toh iss baar bola nehi prithvi ka naam but i guess it's prithvi, par usne soya kiase aache se... Aage aage dekh dhire dhire sab reveal ho jayega...

phir kisne dekha hoga iye dream, nandini toh nehi,par oh....

lekin agar oh dream dekhi hain toh doosre din normal behave kaise kia... Stay tuned to TBOAE to know more...😉

sochna parega iss baat ko dhayn se, soch soch... maine kab mana kiya hai...😆

but tune suspense acche se create kia.loved it. Thanks...

wow, morning mein prithvi ne neend se utha nandini ke gaane se.wow.loved it....... hehehe thanks...

sahi kaha prithvi ne koi itni acche gane se neend se uthaya toh usse distrub nehi kehete , hay,😳 hahaha... chal tu bhi isse razi hai to thik hai...

so,prithvi ne nandini ko ghuma ne le jane ke baad kaha good.

prithvi bahut Punctual hain .

loved the way prithvi described uday pur and nandini ka reaction sahi tha...tourist guide, mein bhi iye soch rehithi... sach kahun to mai bhi yahi soch rahi thi...

total update was just brilliant.

continue soon and make long update next time. Pakka wada... next update ke length se judge kar lena...

Originally posted by: khushi909

awesome part yaar

Originally posted by: divinity005

very nice update.very interesting & mysterious.i thnk nandini might have seen tht dream.lets see wht the truth is.wll be waiting for ur next update & all the best for your interview dear

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

lovely part....!!!
who saw that dream?? nandini or prithvi???....
so they r going for the sightseeing...hmm..interesting....
awesome part....waiting for the next part....

Originally posted by: shruja

sorry for late comments not came on IF Its okay Shruja... no problem...😊

Comments for Part-4
Superb update!!! Thanks dear...
like nandini pullilng veer's leg
also the description of prithvi's family in point of view of nandu is very good like all Thanks a lot again....

Prithvi can't specify about his behaviour to nandini cuase of vedehi but like that they talked n laughed friendly this time. Yes...the awkwardness is slowly decreasing...

Comments Part 5

Like it very much dressing sense of nandini i like sky blue colour Really... Even I like sky blue...

and it must be nandini now to see that dream Lets see...

like prithvi wakeup with nandini's suprabhatam Couldn't resist it ... suprabhatam u see...😉😆

and waiting for site seeing n guide 😉😳 Guide is more interesting than the sites... right...😉

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

HIII GUGLU HOW R U
WOW WOW SUPERB
MINDBLOWING
FANTASTIC
I LOVED IT
U EXPLAINED IT VERY WELL
DO CONT SOON

LOVE
DEEPA

Originally posted by: ashfanofrt

heyy it ws really very nice