The Beginning of an End. RT-MC FF/Ud on PG 16

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Hello friends,

Lately I have been reading many RT-MC fics and it seems that the mania has caught up with me as well. 😆Though I tried hard but couldn't resist and finally had to give in to the temptation. And so here I'm presenting THE BEGINNING OF AN END! for all RT-MC fans.

But as because I'm new to this particular group so I don't know who all the members who would care to read this fic. Also since I cannot disclose all my cards right now, it will take a few updates before you all are acquainted with all the characters. Also the length of the updates will also not be consistent. I apologize in advance for all these tortures that I will put you through.😆

Without much ado, I will now start the fic and begin with the character sketch and keep it updating with the entry of new characters.

DISCLAIMER: All the characters in this story are fictitious and bear no resemblance to any person be it leaving or dead. The events are also a figment of my imagination...😆😆😆



CHARACTER SKETCH:

Prithviraj Singh: (Played by Rajat Tokas) Son of

Suryapratap Singh and Sukanya Devi: Who belong to the erstwhile princely state of Mewar.

Vaidehi Singh: She is the youngest child of the family and is two years junior to Prithvi.

Surendra Singh: He is the grand father of Prithvi, the kin of former king of Mewar and is the eldest member of the family.

Prithvi is a final year B. Sc student in one of the reputed colleges of Udaipur. His sister Vaidehi is in first year in the same college. Their family owns a large business house investing in a myriad of businesses.

Arjun, Samar, Mrigank and Aayush: Prithvi's friend and college mates.

Pandit Mukharjee: A renowned guitarist and the paternal grandfather of

Nandini Mukharjee: The only daughter of Late Mr. Dharmesh Mukharjee who was a scientist and Late Mrs Supriya Mukharjee who was a dancer and a poet. Nandini has inherited qualities from both her parents and also her mother's looks. (Played by Mugdha Chafekar)

Kunwar Aditya Singh: He is Prithvi's cousin. His grandfather had been the ruler of the State of Mewar. (Played by Vikrant Massey)

Raajmata: The widowed grand mother of Aditya, an old woman known for her firm decisions and loving heart.

Rani Maa: Aditya's mother, she is a charming lady, very affectionate and mild mannered but slightly forgetful. She follows the instructions of her mother in law to the T and has a slightly forgetful nature which leads to hilarious situations...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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INDEX:

Prologue: Page 1
Part - 1: Page 1
Part - 2: Page 4
Part - 3: Page 6
Part - 4: Page 9
Part - 5: Page 11
Part - 6: Page 14
Part - 7: Page 16
Edited by guglu088 - 15 years ago
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PROLOGUE:

"Nahi... mat maaro unhe, chod do." The heart wrenching screams of the young girl rent the air. "Agar badla lena hi chahte ho toh humse lo, humne hi tumhara nuksaan kiya hai, unki koi galti nahi hai, chod do unhe, jaane do."

Nobody listened to her; instead one of the man standing guards over her flogged her once again. She clenched her teeth to stop herself from crying out in pain. She could feel the wetness of the blood as it coloured her back. The previous wounds were still raw and now there was one more.

"Nahi unhe kuch mat karo." She again pleaded with her predators but everybody turned a deaf ear towards her. "Ruk jao." She struggled hard to reach up to him but received a hard blow on her head which knocked her out.

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He felt the grip on his throat tightening with every passing second, he was becoming breathless. He needed help and that too very soon. He was not in a position to help himself. All of a sudden, the grip loosened and his face was splattered with blood. Then the terrified, badly bruised and the shaken girl was in his arms sobbing continuously as she murmured something against his chest. Then with a lightening movement she whirled him around and suddenly cried out in pain. As he watched she lay there in his arms taking long breaths and finally stopped breathing. He felt a sharp unbearable pain in his chest. The scream ended on his lips.
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Part - 1:

He woke up from his sleep sweating badly. "God! Not again." He murmured to himself. He rested his head on his palms and remained like that for a long time before reaching out to get a glass of water from the bedside table. He emptied the whole glass down his throat in one go, then again flung himself back on the pillows. But this time sleep eluded him. He kept staring at the ceiling for a long time. "Fir se wahi sapna, lagataar ek saal se har raat yahi ek sapna dekh raha hun mai, ye ho kya raha hai? Kuch samajh me nahi aa raha. Aur mai Maa aur Baba kko kuch bhi batakar unhe pareshan nahi karna chahta. Unhe kuch bataya toh ghar me bakiyon ko pata chal jayega aur agar aisa hua toh muft me sar par musibat tut padegi. Aakhir karun toh kya karun?" He kept on thinking and didn't realize when he dozed off to sleep.

"Get up, get up you lazy bug." She pulled and pushed him hard but he simply pulled the blanket over his head and again snuggled back to the pillow.

"Utho...... uthhhoooo............... na. It's already late. Kab tak sote rahoge?" she pulled the blanket and scrambled on to the bed next to him.

"Please Ved, bas paanch minute." He pleaded.

"Dekho mai jaanti hun kit um mujhe chidane ke liye bed me ho. Subah saat baj gaye hain aur tum jaage bhi nahi abhi tak? Ho hi nahi sakta." With a swift movement she pulled out the blanket and there he lay on the bed dressed in an off white kurta pajama. The moment he saw her disgruntled expression he burst out laughing.

"Bhaiya, you are too much. Jao mai nahi bolti aapse. Ab 5 minute me neeche aa jao. Dadu aapko bula rahe hain." And she left the room in a huff displeased at his tantrums which were meant only for her.

Once outside the room however, her face relaxed and a big grin appeared on her face. She knew that she was the only person who meant the whole world to him. She was well aware of the fact that her one action could bring a smile on his face, she could make or mar his day and she had no intention of doing any such thing which would spoil his day. And today was the New Year's day – how could she be angry with him? However, she decided to tease him a bit and therefore pasted the displeased expression on her face and went down the steps.

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Prithvi went down the steps where everybody was waiting for him. After the usual rounds of greetings suitable for a new year had been exchanged and the puja session was done, Prithvi turned his attention towards Ved who was standing in a corner with a sullen expression on her face. He smiled inwardly because he knew she was only pretending to be angry. Just then a touch on his shoulders made him turn and look at the smiling face of his grandfather. He was an old man with a shock of thick white hair and long moustaches. "Fir se jhagda?" he queried with a faint smile.

"Nahi dadaji. Wo sirf natak kar rahi hai." Prithvi returned with a smile.

"Acha, thik hai, jao jake manao use. Aur fir aaj sham ke karyakram ke liye taiyar rehna. Shehar ke bahut bade bade log aa rahe hain isme."

"Main nahi aaun to nahi chalega?" He asked sadly making a displeased face. He was sick of the parties, in fact hated them.

"Aur mai bhi na aaun toh?" quipped Vaidehi who had been listening intently to the conversation and now forgot her fake anger.

"Tu toh naraaz thi na?" Prithvi reminded her.

"Oh!!! Haan, par mai bhul gayi." She replied airily making her brother and grandfather go into peals of laughter. They continued laughing for some time before controlling themselves with a great effoert. Finally the old man managed to control himself and said, "Jo Prithvi karega, jahan wo jayega kya aap bhi wahi karengi, wahi jayengi?"

"Haan." Pat came the reply. "Warna bhaiya ko mai pareshan kaise karungi?"

"Tujhe aur koi kaam nahi hai mujhe pareshan karne ke alawa?" Prithvi asked in mock irritation to which she retorted in big, noisy NO making him cover his ears in an attempt to escape from the sound.

"Have some mercy on my ear drums Ved. Aise chillaegi toh mai behra ho jaunga."

"Oh, I have the greatest concern for your precious ear drums bhaiya. Warna aap behre ho gaye toh meri baat kaun sunega?"

"Point to be noted." He said dryly. "Tera chillana kaun sunega."

"Oofho bas kijiye aap dono aur meri baat suniye." Their grandfather cut their argument in between. "Aaj raat party to nahi hai par haan, humare bahut purane mitr Pandit Mukharjee apni poti ke saath aa rahe hain. Kuch din wo log yahin tehrenge. Aap dono ko unki jimmedari leni hogi, khaas kar ki Prithvi aapko."

"Aap pareshan mat hoiye dadaji. Mai aapko shikayat ka mauka nahi dunga."

"Mai bhi nahi." Vaidehi added in a somber tone making Prithvi to retort at her again.

"Tu apna khayal rakh le, fir dusron ka khayal rakhna." This earned him a glare from her.

"Toh thik hai, saara kaam tum akele karo." She turned to go.

"Arey ruk to, acha thik hai. Panditji ko mai sambhal lunga, unki poti ko tu dekh lena." And he turned to escape when his grandfather stopped him.

"Prithvi!!! Panditji ki jyada dekhbhaal ki jarurat nahi hai, wo humare hi saath rahenge. Jab humne aapko jimmedaari saunpi thi toh humara matlab unki poti se tha. Unki poti Nandini ki saari zimmedaari aapki hogi."

"Par dadaji..."

"Hum kuch nahi sunenge Prithvi." And he left the room leaving behind a very disgrumtled Prithvi and a visibly amused Vaidehi.

"Fas gaye na bhaiya. Ab dekhti hun kaise ladkiyon se bhagte ho."

"Teri toh........... zara teher tujhe abhi batata hun." He ran after her but she was already out of his reach.

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Ok friends, done with this update. I'll continue with it only if you want me to. Hope you like it.

Love
Guglu

Edited by guglu088 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Guglu!!!

A big Thanks to all those RT-MC fics!!! Batau kisliye??? bcoz u only said na you were tempted to write this fic because of that?
And thus , I'm sure, we got a brilliant writer and a wonderful fic to read !! bass...sirf TMS aur TDQ ko bhool mat jaana...waise main tumhe bhoolne nahi dungi !😉
Nice character sketch !
And Prologue was intriguing...but as you said, tum hamein thoda pareshaan karne waali ho, issliye I've decided to wait and watch ! 😆
Wonderful first Part !!! 👏 👏 👏
So it's Prithvi who gets all those nighmares!
Prithvi- Vaidehi scene was very nice and sweet ! I just loved it !!
By the way who is playing vaidehi???
So, friend of Prithvi's dadaji is coming along with his grand daughter Nandini...hmmmm...
Aur Prithvi ko Nandini ka khayal bhi rakhna hai!!!
I guess that's our heroine...
lets see....
Update soon !😊
Edited by Revolutionbreez - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wonderful start, Superb character sketches,prologue and part 1.

Character sketches are just too good.
prologue are just superb and very interesting.
suspense bahut aacha dia. good.
Part 1 are just brilliant. loved the convo between prithvi and Vaidehi
loved the convo between Vaidehi, prithvi and dada jee.
loved the bonding between prithvi and vaidehi.
wow nandini aarehi hain, great.
loved the full update.
continue soon dear.
thanks for the pm dear.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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⭐️hi debarati😛

a splendid update indeed😆

loved the brother and sister love between vadehi and rajat….it was adorable…the scenes between these guys were very sweet

well explained and well described 😳😳😳

waiting for the pandit jee's entry and the grand entry of nandini….its gona b sooo exciting….and even more exciting wen rajat has to look after nandini😉

overall…..debarati a wonderful, superb and a awesome update😆

please post the next part….jaldi karo⭐️⭐️⭐️

and last of all thanks for the pm too…..

Edited by letsrockshona - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its perfect..lovely FF dear.....keep it up....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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he guglu its soooooooooooooooooooo great i loved prithvi and vaidehi 😊 jaldi update karna plz its so exciting dear cannt wait to read more
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Posted: 15 years ago
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starting is gud
👏
characters seems to b interesting
pm plz me wid next update soon
@chutki
thnx for the pm

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