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Posted: 15 years ago

#481

not fair.....i want an update!

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jaldi karo...................

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Ally

@.PINK.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: Shafoo
tht was niceee

thankzz a lot na

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: aish_punk
hey lina..nice part..

MayUr leave for her house..n he tells her not to say thanks..she keeps talking..n they reach the place..when they reach..gunjan opens the door..nice..waitin to see her reaction..

n yeah do make it longer!

thnx 4 d pm

update soon

-aish

thankzz a lot na Aish!!
u soo sweet

ok will try to make it longer na 1
thankzz again🤗

-Lina-

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: bhavana92
gr8 update Linz! don't worry, short tha but sweet tha! MayUr r soooooooo cute!😳

aww Bhavi thankz alot na🤗

-Lina-

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#485

Originally posted by: mayurarti
Linu

I thought you forgot about this ff

ek tou itne din baad update kiya wo bhi itna short

I'm gonna kill you seriously...........

The update was really sweet but.....

shuru hote hi khatam....

next time I want a longer update samjhi..........

Luv
Nidzy~

awww soo sorry na Nidzyy n thankzz a lot na !!
🤗

ok will make it longer this time

-Lina-

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: fanofmjht
lovely part
so finally they are in goa
interesting
do cont soon

thankzz a lot na

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Komal

@KomalLuvsYa

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#487

Linu when r u updating?

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#488

Nice updates

U didnt pmed me abt updates frm part 4

I wanna kill u for that

Cuming to update its really nice liked it

Mayu is really helpful n he jus keeps on telling in evry update she is gorgeous😆😆

Nups really trust Mayu a lottttttttttttttt

Gun is really sweet n really thk Majan ki khoob pategi

Hop ND forgives Nups soon

Waise in index u didnt write pg no for the update 5 n 6 its 43 n 49😆😆

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Ally

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Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#489

Part 9

He is so happy to see her, then he realizes him,and how she had ran away with him, and had never called him, never asked how he was doing, nothing. He ignores them, and continues working on his laptop. Mayank looks at Nupur, who seems hopeless, and he looks back at her dad.

Mayank- *In a cheerful voice* Namaste uncle jee.

He says nothing.

Mayank- Uncle jee, mein...hum bohat sorry hai, humme asa nahi karna chahiye tha.

ND-- Really??

Mayank- Of corse.

He goes in front of him, on his knees.

Mayank- Incle jee, amere wajah se Nupur pe guzza nahi hoyi ye. Bhagna ka idea bilkul mera tha, aur Nupur toh wapis bhi aana chahati thi, par mujhe bohat ajeeb lagtha, aur guilty bhi feel hota, kyun ke meine appki beti ko bhaagaya tha.

He just looks in Mayank's eyes. Looking for the truth.

ND- Beta, tum jhoot bol na nahi aata. I am sure, running away was all her idea.

Mayank- Jee uncle jee jhoot bolna nahi aata issliye ek sach bolna chahata hoon, Nupur aap sab ko bohat miss kiya, aapko toh sabse zyada, woh soch ti thi ke, agar woh yahan aaye gi toh aap sab ko kaise face karre gi aur-

ND- Ussne asa nahi socha ke iss ghar mein ussko sab kitna miss karte hai?

Mayank looks at her, she was looking down.

Mayank- *Smiles* Aap toh jhante hai na ke Nupur kaisi hai, zyada bolti hai, aur kam soch ti hai.

ND- Kya yeh meri beti ki insult hai?

Mayank- Ummm...um.....

ND- You are offically in this family now.

He hugs Mayank, and Mayank smiles looking at Npur.

They break the hug.

Mayank- Nupur ki aur bhi bohat insults karrein ge baadmein, theeke na??

ND- Theeke, par usske saath reh reh ke tum toh bilkul usski tarah ban gaye ho.

Mayank- *Smiles* Abb uncle jii app meri insult kar rahe hai.

They start laughing.

Nupur- Hello??!! I am still here!

She goes and hugs her dad, and starts crying.

ND- Nupur?

Nupur- I am very sorry dad.

ND- Nahi beta mujhe tumhari pasand dekh na chahiye thi, issliye I am sorry.

He wipes her tears, and she higs him again.

Nupur- I love you dad, and missed you very much .

ND- Me too beta.

Mayank thinking- I should leave them alone, let them have a nice time together.

He smiles, and slowly walks out of the room.

Her dad breaks the hug.

ND- Abb jao beta, mein thori derr mein aata hoon, thora kam finish kar na hai.

Nupur- Ok dad, love you.

He smiles, and she rans out of the room. She sees Mayank and screams his name. He turns around.

She runs up to him and hugs him.

He doesn't know why, but he feels something different. They share a very cute hug, both of them smiling, sharing avery adorible moment. Mayank is about to wrap his arms around her waise, when he realizes he shouldn't.

Nupur- Mayank how did you do that?

Mayank- Kya?

Nupur- Wohi.

Mayank- Kya wohi?

Nupur- Arre tumne mere dad ko kaise pata ya?? Please mujhe bhi tpis do na. Pata hai dad se kabhi aise kissi ne baat nahi ki hai. We never knew that he is like that.

Mayank- Yeh issliye, sab ne unnka guzza dekha hai, pyar nahi.

Nupur- Wah kya dialouge hai, kissi movie ke hai??

They start laughing.

Nupur- Ok ok, aab tum mere room mein jaake aur fresh ho jao , mein niche jaati hoon.

Mayank- *Smiles* ok.

She starts leaving, and he calls after her.

Mayank- Nupur phele yeh toh batao tumhara room kahan hai...

She continues walking.

Nupur- Aage jaake right hall ke left mein ek aur hal hai, usska first room-

Mayank- Tumhara hai

Nupur- Nahi toh Gunjan ka hai, isske side wala mera hai.

Hey guys, long time havn't updated this FF, sorry for that na !!

just that before I was too lazy, and now Nupur is not in MJHT so I dunn feel like updating any FF

but today I just wanted to update it !!
n haan before I forget

Happy Fanna Aniversary🤗

do tell me wat u think of this part

I find it boring

do comment na !!!
if u want me to continue I will

-Lina-

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Varsha

@-krazyriya-

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#490

hey hi lina.....

its a long time since u updated..... but thank god finally u did that.....😆

Now....

wow... it was an awesome... superb... fantastic.... lovely update dear....👏

i loved it to the core....😳

aww...Mayank took all the blame on himself....😊..... but nupsi's dad was quite clever.... he caught him....😉

the way mayank talked to nupz dad.... uff... was mindblowing.... he was so sweet.....😳

he tackled everything very patiently n intelligently ..... loved him for that.....🤗

loved mayank n nupz dad convo.... it was very cute.....😳😳

loved their ''insult'' wale dialogues.... they were so funny... lol....🤣🤣

and nupur's dad saying....'' uss ke sath reh reh kar tum bhi bilkul uski tarah ban gaye ho''...... lovely....😆😆

but... Mayu... he's a rockstar.... he totally impressed Nupz dad ..... that too in their first meeting only....😉😉

omg... Nupur hugged Mayank.... n mayank felt something.... gr8 !! lovely scene dear.....😳

amazing update dear.... good going......👍🏼

now please update soon.... ok...😊😊

i can't wait to read next part......

and... ya... Happy Fanaa Anniversary to you too darling !! 👍🏼

thanx a lot for this lovely treat......😍

love u....🤗
varsha

Edited by -krazyriya- - 15 years ago

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