Love can never die(Mayur FF)-part 2- page 28 - Page 23

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Tapoorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr janiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

At first thank u so much for adding the part that i told u over the phn.

u know what- u wrote it beautifully.

i know u can do it.

i just loved it

Yaar what an update.

Awesome-blossom

Mind -blowing.

Fantastic

It was so touchy and sad one.

U wrote everything wonderfully.

I felt really bad for my mayur.

How could u do this.

Kyun in dono ko alag kar diya.

I know ur story line and that's why couldn't say anything.

I know we r going to c another mayur.

Picture abhi baki ghai meri dost- hai na????

My favorite part was-

N: Gunjaan tujhe yaad hai hamare morena me ekdin ek pagal ladki aayi thi? Wo pata nehi keya keya karrahi thi. Ek bar age jarahi thi or ek bar piche jarahi thi. Ek baar right to ek bar left. Ek bar khadi ho jati thi to baith jati thi. Ham sab kitne shocked hogaye the na ye soch kar ke wo aisa kiyu karrahi hai?

G: ha di kisi ko himmat nei huyi per tumne himmat karke uss ke pass jakar usse pucha ke aap aisa kiyu karrahi hai? to ussne jawab diya ke wo apne saye se picha chodana chati hai. kitni nadan thi na wo di? Koi apne saye se vala keise picha choda sakti hai?

Than she understood nupur what was trying to say. She stooped and looked at her disbelieve.

G: Di????????????????????

N: Mayank mera saya hai gunjaan. Main chahu bhi to usse kabhi durr nehi ja sakti.

My eyes became teary after reading it.

It proved how deeply they love each other.

Mayur r rock

I love my mayur.

Tapoor it was really awesome update.

Loved it to the core.

Now looking forward for next part.

Plz this time try to update soon.

Loveeeeeeeee youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

Muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Originally posted by: ..pebo..

hey tapu di!!!!

u updated after a long time

after one mont

i was dying to read this!!!1

behari nups

mujhe usskeliye bahut sd feel ho raha hai

i mean bechari

but she is controlling herself

i jusy love nupur in your story

and finally the babies were born

jr mayank
and jr nupurr

tapu di im literally cryin😭😭

life mein i have never cryid

but your update was soooooooooo touching!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

i love thw way u write

pls do update soon

not 2 months more
im yet cryin

i hope

sab happy wapas ho jaaye

updte soonn

pebbzzuu

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Tapoorrrrrrrrrrrrr...............I'm crying now...........😭

mujhe pata hai yehi concept hai par phir bhi .......

I coudnt control my tears reading this part

Nupur loved Mayank till her last breath

Mayank didnt get married bcoz he loved only & only Nupur

ab kaise milenge yeh Junior Nupur & Mayank

you have written it very very beautifully dear......

I could feel the pain they were going through.........

It is the Best of all your updates......loved it...........

Do continue soon

luv
Nidzy

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesoooooooooooome...
superb...
fantabulous...........
excellent...........
wonderful........
just too good.........
thanx for the pm........

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

i am so happy that you finally updated.....

the update was perfect.......

simply loved it......

you described nupur and mayank really well.......

nupur and gunjan convo was really touching......

waiting for jr mayank and jr nupur's love story......

plzzzzzz continue soon.....

luv

mahima

Originally posted by: samratrocks

hey tapoor

awesome update yarr

luved it to da core!

cont soon

thanks a ton for da pm

Originally posted by: Mari-ARtian

i m feeling sooooo sad 4 nupsi...😭

very well written dear....

update it s00000000000n......

Originally posted by: Tasnim2623

gr8 update

soo sad

i m seriously crying..

Originally posted by: bhavana92

that was sooooo touching tapu di!
it was emotional, but too good....
Nupur & Sanjana breathed their last....
but MayUr ki prem kahani abhi poori nahi hui hai...
i especially loved ur selection of song...truly apt one!
do continue soon di....