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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
thanku all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i really love ur comments..........well i hav a surprise.....i hav planned ithe part in my mind(lil bit)so i can give u a promo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sajan:
gunjan in a sari dancing on the road and sam also romancing wid her.....
gun: zoobi doobi zooobi dooobi pum para............
sam:bheegi bheegi sari mein yun dhumke lagati tu...jaise filmo hota hai horaha hai hubahu!!!!!!!!!!!
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mayur:
mayank house mayu mom and mayur on sofa
mm:nupur beta mainn tumse tumhari zindagi ka sabse zaruri sawal puchne jaa rahi hu!!!sach sach batao???
nupur:gi auntie......
so thatsb it.....guyz u could get the upd till tmrw...as i hav to go to a party....sryy....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
awesomest promo dear
plz update the part soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
hi.......... pls continue ...........its nice
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
i am waiting for it plz post fast
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
hey plz add me to ur PM list plz i like it when u cont plz PM me plz
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
Gr8 parts! Plz add me to ur pm list! Thx!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
ok guyzzzz.................sooooo srry 4 d late update............nd u will find many english words in this coz i havent learned hindi completely and i am practisin it by writing the ff in hindi..............but ive got a really gud part 4 waitin 4 u.....................plzzzzzzzzzzz comment and criticize..............this one would be lil short

part 3

samrat is all shocked wen he reached the terrace........on the way he was having weird thoughts,"wat if the scream was of gunjan??,wtf usse kuch hogaya????iz she okay???????god plzz help me"wen he reached he saw
a girl standing on the roof of d college and screaming...
girl:gaon walon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!aaj mein..............###### #######........sab keh samne ek confession karna chahti hu........main ek larke se boha pyaar karti hu.........lub u ##### !!!!!!!muah.!!!!
(during all this samrat was totally shocked to see that girl and especially sayin all this..............)
girl:lekin yeh!!!!!!!mera bf.....hamesha mujhse kehta rehta hai...............sab keh saamne apme aap ko control kiya karoo!!!!!hawww!!!!main usse iittnnnaaaaaaaaaaaaa nahi iiittnnnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa zada pyaar karti hu.........kaise control karu ??????
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GANG:

nupur:GUNJAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!TUU????????WAHAN????UPPAR????KAISE???KAB????KYU?????(all in 1 breath)
mayank:nupur relax!!!!!!!hum sab bhi gunjan ko dekh kar tensed hai.......................
benji:arey wah dude sam,teri tou lottery nikal aaye............
dia:gunjan????par woh wahan gayi kaise??sammy tou uske saath hi tha naa????n why the hell is she sayin all this???
uday:lagta hain woh sam se bohat hi naaraz hai...........lekin kyu yaar?????????????ohhh!!!!!!!!!!!kahin sam ne use icecream aur pizza khilane se mana tou nahi kar diyaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!meri poor friend!!!bechariii........
nup:oye hoye uday bhaiya aap bhi naaa!!!!!!!!!!!!woh aapke tarah har waqt eating ke bare mein nahi think kartiii............zarur usss samrat ke bacchhe ne kuch kiya hoga....my sis was never like this yaar...............(then mayu's phone rings and gunjan shouts frm the rooof)
gun:oye!!!!!!!tum.......(pointing towards mayank)tumhari itni himmat that u disturb meeee??????????u shall be cutt into piecies and thrown into a deep well..............u......u.....u...???????????????haan....u sadu kahin keee!!!!!!
mayank:srry to disturb u your highness...........(at which nups gasped coz 1st time mayank said srry to smone except her)
nupur:maan gaye gunjan .....ur totally my sis!!!!

gun:yaa i am diii(and givs her a air kiss)...........(den mayank recieves the call)

mayu:hello maa,ji ji im cumin,did u had ur medicines???????????????yaa yaa im cumin naa!!!!yaa nupur too.....yes maa!!!!ill drive safely and i knowm not to open the windows of the car on signals and maaa!!!!!!dont call me mayuuuu!!!!!(he said mayu a lil louder and the hole gang was like wat the hell yaar??????mayank ka nic name mayyuuu??????)oops.....ok maa main baad mein baat krta huu........luv u 2 maa........bye..ok..ok maa....ill cum soon,jus leavin...
gang all:mayuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!oohhhhhh!!!!!!!(teasingly)
mayank:woh guyzzzz.......errr...maa toh aise hi.........(nups cuts him off)
nup:woh kya hain naa........keh jab morena mein hamare jitentra chacha ka beta apne saale ki wife ke bhai ka naam leta tha naa!!!!!toh use mayur ki jagah mayu bulata thaa......toh jab maine mayank naam suna ko by god!!!!mujhe toh mayu ki yaad aagayi......so mayank mere liye............mayu ban gaya.........cute handsome and SADUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!exactly my mayu............toh jab maine mayank ki maa ke saamne use.............
mayank:ahem ahem......my mayu??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????(wid his wat r u sayin luks)
nups:aaaaaaaaaaa.............haan..kabhi baad mein bataungi APNEE MAYU ke bare mein..........ab chale???
mayu:after u mam.... and they leave .




AND SUDDENLY THE SCREEN TURNS ALLLLLLLLL BLACK AND IT APPEAREED.......................2 WEEKS LATER ............thats it guyzzzzzz.............i wanted to keep sum suspence...........

kya hua in 3 weeks mein?jaun hai nupur ka mayu?kya hua sajan ke saath?kahin kuch ulta to nahi ho gaya??kyu bulaya tha mayu ki mom ne mayur ko? to know wait till my next ud........
Edited by ishika_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
MMMM......
Fabolus yaar....
Please cont soon....
And thnnxxxx for PM... 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: SaJan_Sana4ever

MMMM......
Fabolus yaar....thanks jaani......
Please cont soon....sure
And thnnxxxx for PM...ur welcome!!!!!!!!!!

😛

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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
wowowow tht was sooooo amazingggggggggg

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