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Posted: 15 years ago
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guyzz imm soooo sorryyy 4 such such such a late update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i was reaaaalllyy bixxxy.......srryyy!!1ill definately cont soon......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
wow! just read the intro! plz update soon... its very interesting and im hooked on already!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
hey
i also just read ur first part
It was so hilarious! loved gunjan like that... haha the quiet one finally gets to speak out!!! plz continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ok so after all the bizzy time i got enough to post a part..........ill update 2 times a week......so herzz the continuation.......i hope u like it...(i dunno wat im gonna write though)plzzz feel free to comment and criticize.....nd guyzz plzz remember EACH AND EVERY DIALOUGE THAT GUNJAN SAID IS IN A REALLY TALLI TONE................

PART 2[B][/B]


(GUYZZ HERZZ a short review that gunjan is drunk and is speaking her heart out to all the gang...she mimics adhiraj standing on a chair)

SUDDENLY gunjan's twists and she is about to fall wen 2 strong arms hold her tight....trying to prevent her 4rm falling,lost in her deep.brown eyes............searching 4 his reflection.....searching for the warmth of love that HIS chashmish has 4 him.....

seeing the two luv birds deeply lost varaani(varun+suhaani)and mayur go away smiling.......
all together:(teasingly)bye samrat!bye gunjan!

but there was no response at all!!!!!sajan were deeply lost in each other...like DO DIL EK JAAN......every one left except uday....he was scatching his head like a flying monkey...and staring sajan like anything.

uday:dude.....sam!!!!!choro yaar!!!main apni bhabhz ke paas jata hun!!!wo mujhe garam garam pakore khilae gi!!!!in dono ko dekh kar main kya karun!!! 😲
then he went out to search 4 d gang......After 3 to 5 mins sajan came back to senses..........sam helps gun stand on her feet and starts luking down.......embarassed.......and gunjan stares at him.........confused😕😕😕

gun:are tum tou bilkul newly wed bride ki ki tarha sharma rahe ho!!!tum mr shergil ho mr sharma nahi jo itna sharma rahe hooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!sam is really surprised.he says teasingly putting his hand on her forehead:chashmish tu theek ho?kahin tumhe bukhar tou nahi ho gaya???

gun:(removing his hand 4rm d forehead and holding it tight)haa.....mujhe tumhare pyaar ka bukhaar charh gaya hai.....sam(coming close to her):chashmish!!!!tum par kisi ne jaadoo tou nahi kar diya???????gun(going mre closer)haan......tumhare pyaar ne!!!sam:kahin main sapna tou nahi dekh raha???gun:haan...ek khoobsurat sapna...jise pyaar kehte hain!!!!!!!!
sam:smilin like anythng:chashmish?????tum itni acchi kaise hoo????gun:now goes more closer to him...and now they are about an inch away...........gun:main itni achii....................................................................................................................................lifts her hand and turns sam's face towards the right an goes near his cheek......"sirf aur sirf...................................................................................................................................................................................now she is tooooo near to him and says"di ki wajah se hun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!usne mujhe bachpaan se itne acchi tarah rakha ke main iab tak itni acchi hu..........kabhi bhi beemar nahi hui"(she took it medically..sam was saying it nature wise)sheshouts out loud in his ear and it nearly tore in pieces!!!!!!!!while he was bringi ng his ear back in senses(lolzzzzzzzzzz.bakwaas dialouge)he heard a little sound .and thought it must be bendia(remember they were running around the college)...after some time he looked up to find noo chashmish!!!!he thought tat she was playing pranks...and started searching behind the pilaars and classrooms.....but noo chasmish,now he was damn worried!!!suddenly he heard a shout 4rm the terrace....................and ran towards there
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gang....
all her carrying smiles on there faces as they saw bendia ......benji was on his knees presenting roses to dia ...saying srry..and dia was scolding him like anything........
varun:sach suhaani!!tumhara bhai aur uska dost....dono hi itne bare flirts hain!!!!!tumhara bhai tou jab dekho romance shuru kar deta hain!!!!dil paikhu!!!!
suhaani:vroom!!!!!tumse tou accha hii hain naa........ek thandi green tea ke saath akele main prpose tou nahi kiya na!pure college ke saamne apne pyyaa r ka izhaar kiya!!!!!!jus den uday came running!!
uday:not fair!!!tum lig mujhe andar akela chod kar aaa gaye......and woh sam...i called him several times but not a single time he responded!!!!!all together:UDAY!!tune unhe disturb kyu kiya???
uday:(confused)maine kya kiya???woh dono tou ek dooosre ko sirf ghoor hi rahe the...
nupzz:oye hoye !!!!1tum bhi naa!!!!!!!!!!!tum ne ddlj nahi dekhi???
varaani and mayu smile at nuppz thinking:nupur aur uske most famous dialouge..............
mayu:nupzz tumhe maa ne ghaar bulaaya hain!!yaad hain naa........chale???
jus den they heard a shout 4rm terrace all turn and see at the terrace and see........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
ok ill tell u in the next update!!!plzzz tell me should cont....
kaun hain terrace par?gunjan kaha hain?nupur ko mayu mom kyu bulaya hain ghar?akhir dia kab tak naaraz rahe gi?kahin gubjan ko kuch ho toh nahi gaya???to get the answers........wait till the next ud.....
love'
ishika.................
Edited by lovable00sneha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
srry guyzz i didnt knew this much was posted i wrote a full flesh part of about two posts!!!!!i dont know how this happend???then i again wrote all the part then again while the process of posting was on...my internet got disconnected!!!!then all the work was deleted..........then i wrote again 4 the t3rd time and was about to save it in my lappy 1rst 4 precations,....wen my part was deleted by my horrible sis...sneha!!!!!n now im fed up yaar!!i wrote the whole part 3 times!!!!!!!!!!!!!so plzz wait till thursday???so i can post bothj the parts together and i promise they would be wprth reading!!!wid some cute sajan romance and a song sequence!!!!plzz co orperate!!thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
awesome one dear and we will wait for ur more updatesssssssssssssss till thrusday but plz continue soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
Fantastic Update!!!
HAHAHA Gunjan is funny when she is Drunk!!! =P
pllzz continue soon!!!!
=D =D =D =D =D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
awesomeeeeee ud...
luved it to d core...
pllzzzzz do cont soon..
n thnxx for d pm..

love
jyotika
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
That was ssooo short 😔 Not fair...
Am sorry for your problem.... dint knew it...
Anyway...Your 2 updates were...


I too will reply about your update after you put up your part3..
This is a punishment from me to you😛
Edited by shruthinair - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
awesome..
luved it..!!
thanx for d pm

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