thanks a ton guys for the comments made me want to write mor so for you guys i wrote a longer part than the previous one and that too with mayur scenes so thanks again.
thanks for the support and praying for my dad. he is now home and doing better he his back to yelling and telling me to do this and that 😆 but anyways i really appreciate it and i want to say thanks from the bottom of my heart it meant a lot to me to know that i have friends by my side i really appreciate.
Nupur walked into the room,"ahem ahem". Mayank released Ridhi and got up, "Oh Nupur, ahem, are the discharge papers ready". "Yeah, so we can go now". R – "Um Mayank will you please step outside for a second" getting up from the bed slowly. M – "sure, let's Nupur" he walked up to Nupur took her hand and started to walk out of the room. R – "Nupur you stay, I need you to help me" Mayank let go of her hand and walked outside.R – "Can you please help me dress, the doctor said I am still weak" she took out her clothes and held them out for Nupur. N – "Yeah sure"
M – "yeh lardkiya kaha hai" he paced in front of the room and heard the door open he turned around to find Nupur and Ridhi walked out. M – "Finally you guys are done, ok let's go". Mayank walked out of the hospital to the car. Nupur and Ridhi trailed behind him slowly.When they got to the car Mayank opened the backseat door for Ridhi. Nupur took Ridhi to the backseat and waited for her to sit down, but she didn't sit. R – "Nupur aren't you going to sit down" she pointed to the seat. Nupur was shocked, she looked at Mayank and he looked at her than at Ridhi. They saw Ridhi walk to the passenger seat open the door and sit down. Mayank looked back at Nupur, she didn't bother to meet his eyes she sat down quietly and closed the door. R – "Come on Mayank, bato". Mayank sat down in the car. He adjusted his rearview mirror and saw Nupur. He kept it there and drove off.Yeh dooriyanYeh dooriyanYeh dooriyanMayank stopped at the traffic light he looked up at his mirror and saw Nupur. She rolled down the window and looked outside as the wind blow her hair a tear fell down and Mayank saw it fall straight down. Nupur turned and met his gaze.In raahon ki dooriyanNigahon ki dooriyanHum raahon ki dooriyanFanah ho sabhi dooriyanKyun koi paas haiDoor hai kyun koiJaane na koi yahan pe[\I]
[I]Aa raha paas ya door mein ja rahaJanu na mein hoon kahan peYeh dooriyanIn raahon ki dooriyanNigahon ki dooriyanHum raahon ki dooriyanFanah ho sabhi dooriyanMayank and Nupur kept staring at each other. R – "Mayank, pay attention the road, the light is green. M – "Oh sorry" he looked away from Nupur and started to drive again, but Nupur didn't look away she kept staring at the mirror hoping he would look back, but he didn't. She closed her eyes to take all that was happening.Yeh dooriyanYeh dooriyanMayank occasionally looked at the mirror only to find Nupur sleeping, till finally she looked at him. She gave him a slight smile and he returned it back. He turned to his left to see Ridhi sleeping and looked at the road then Nupur. He mouthed "I Love You", but Nupur stared motionless. He looked at the road again and then looked back at the mirror and she had looked away.Kabhi hua yeh bhiKhali raahon pe bhiTu jo mera saathKabhi tujhe milke lautaMera dil yeh khali khali haathYeh bhi hua kabhiJaise hua aabhiTujhko sabhi mein paa liyaM – "I Love You" he looked at her and smiled she smiled back, N – "I Love You too" she looped her hand with his. M – "Oh really, you love me?" he stopped the car on the side of the road. N – "Yes, I do, koi schak". M – "No, but prove that you do" he leaned closer, she could feel him breathing on her lips as he came closer to her. N – "Please Mayank, let's go" he didn't listen to her one bit he leaned closer to capture her lips, but before he could she had honked the car. M – "Ahhh Nupur what did you do that for" he pressed his hand against his ear to stop the ringing. Nupur sat there and laughed, he looked up at her laughing and gave her frown. He took off his seatbelt and gave her a wicked smile. N – "No Mayank, please, no don't do th…." before she could complete her sentence Mayank's lips were already pressed against hers. She responded back quickly hoping for more, but he pulled away and started the car again. She sat there with her lips still puckered and then opened her eyes to find him laughing. N – "Mayankkk" she hit him on the arm. M – "Oh you want more I can stop the car". N – "No I'm fine let's go". She opened her eyes and looked out onto the open road.Tera mujhe kar jaati hai dooriyanSatati hain dooriyanTarsati hain dooriyanFanah ho sabhi dooriyanKaha bhi na meneNahi jeena meneTu jo na milaTujhe bhule se bhi naBola na mene chahun faslaBas fasla raheinBan ke kasak jo kahenHo aur chahat yeh aur jawanTeri meri mit jaani hai dooriyanBegani hai dooriyanThey reached the house. Mayank stepped out of the car and walked over to the other side of the car. He opened the door for Nupur and gazed at her. She looked up at him and stepped out of the car. They kept looking at each other as she slowly walked behind the door. He closed it not noticing his finger was right there. M – "Ouchhh" Nupur quickly took his finger and put in her mouth. She looked up at him and they kept staring at each other. She released his finger, "are you ok". M – "yeah I'm fine" he looked away and went over to the passenger door and opened it. M – "Ridhi wake up were home" he tapped her on the shoulders. R – "Mmm, carry me" she raised her hands up. He looked at Nupur, she looked away and just walked off. He watched as she walked off, he looked back at Ridhi, he lifted her, closed the door and walked to the house.Hat jani hai dooriyanFanah ho sabhi dooriyanKyun koi paas haiDoor hai Kyun koiJaane Na koi yahan peAa Raha paas ya door mein ja rahaJanu na mein hoon kahan peYeh dooriyanIn raahon ki dooriyanNigahon ki dooriyanHum rahon ki dooriyanFanah ho sabhi dooriyan He walked into the house carrying Ridhi he saw Nupur walking up the stairs. He laid her on the couch and ran up to the stairs to find Nupur packing her bags. M – "What are you doing, where are you going?" he walked up to her and turned her 'round to face him. N – "I am taking my stuff to the guest bedroom, from now on Ridhi will sleep here to she is better" she loosened his grip on her shoulder and continued packing. M – "But why, you're my wife not her". N – "I know, but this is until she gets better, you promised me". M – "I know, but I don't want to do this if it means hurting you, you are my life". N – "Please Mayank this only for a little while" she zipped her bag and walked down the stairs. Mayank went after her, but stopped when he saw that Ridhi was awake. Nupur walked into the guest bedroom, took a last look at Mayank and closed the door. R – "Mayank what's wrong" she stood up looking at him. M – "Nothing, Doctor said you need to sleep" he walked down the stairs to help her walk up. Mayank took her to his and Nupur's room. Mayank helped Ridhi to sleep, turned off the lights and went downstairs. N – "Uh why did I put this so up high" she took hold of the chair and reached for the jar of sugar. N – "Little bit higher Nupur you can do it" she went on her tip-toes and took a hold of the jar as she was coming back down she lost balance – "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" she came falling down and closed her eyes waiting for the impact. She felt strong hands catch her, she slowly opened her eyes and found Mayank staring at her. He walked over to the counter and placed her on the top. N – "Um thanks" she looked at him and then placed the jar on the counter. Mayank just kept on staring at her. N – "Do you want chai" he broke out of trance – "um yeah sure". He moved away so she can make the chai as she made it he kept staring at her. She could feel his glare on her, but ignored it.As the chai finished she poured in the cups and gave the cup to Mayank and kept on for herself. She walked out of the kitchen without saying a word. Mayank set his cup down and ran out of the kitchen he grabbed her hand and turned her around. M – "Why are ignoring me, why are you pretending as if we are not married, why are you doing this to me". She moved her head avoiding his gaze – "Please Mayank leave me alone". He turned her face towards himself – "No Nupur you need to tell me what's wrong, you told me to do all this and now you are ignoring me" he shook Nupur forcefully, but yet he didn't get a reply. M – "What the heck Nupur, tell why are you behaving like this" as he screamed tears started to stream down Nupur's face. Mayank didn't care he just wanted to know why she was behaving like that. Mayank kept repeating his question over and over, but Nupur wouldn't give him a reply, but finally she broke down crying. N – "Stop…it…Mayank" she pushed him away forcefully. N – "I …am…acting…like this…be…because…I…sa…saw…you" slowly she wiped her tears away and gather strength to tell him. M – "Saw me doing what Nupur" he looked at her confused, trying to figure out what she was trying to get at. N – "I saw you…hug…her" as he heard that he remembered his scene with Ridhi at the hospital. M – "Only that, I was just pretending Nupur, so she would believe, please don't be mad". He looked her hoping for a slight hit on his chest and then a hug, but that didn't come at all. N – "Oh so you were just pretending, and when you said "I Love You" she gave him a stern look. M – "Nupur I love you, not her" he took her hand in his. N – "No, you used to love her" she took her hand out of his. M – "But I love you now and no one else". N – "That's is exactly why you said I love you to her right" turning around. M – "Yes… I mean no, Nupur why are you making that a big deal, you are the one who told me to do this and you are getting angry at me" walking in front of her to face her. N – "No I didn't, I told you to act like her husband for a while, did I tell you to hug her, say I love you, no you did that all on your own" she walked away angrily to her room and shut the door straight on his face as he came following her.M – "Mayank, you have done it, time to make it up to her, and show that you only love her, and no one else" He smiled at the door and walked away.
cant wait to read all the comments so tell me whose side are you on mayank's or nupur's wud love to read ur thoughts and i expect long comments no short ones ok becuz i wrote this just for you guys and PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE silent readers post comments you dont know how good it feels to read everyones comments else u urself are a writer. So guys i know my writing its sucky compare to others so im ready those criticisim (sry if i spelled it wrong not in the mood to spell right) anways anything is welcomed and ill update soon thanks 
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