Mayur FF ~ Zindagi Baar Sirf Tumara Saath ~ - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear nice update but what is this , is nupur mad
pleade don't do this, let mayank nupur together

i hate this nidhi............

please don't let mayank go to ridhi.........
n i loved that when mayank said i hate you to ridhi..........mayank is only and only for nupur...........thats it.......

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Posted: 15 years ago
when r u updating next???????
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Posted: 15 years ago
even i wanna knw, wen r u updating?
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Posted: 15 years ago
When are you updating Chandni???
I'm waiting eagerly for ur update
plzzzz cont soon

Luv
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey its just awesome plz add me in your pm or buddy list plz reply
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey whr r u?????Plz update soon..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Chandni,
whats up yaar.
u stooped at crucial point.
we r eagerly waiting 4 ur update.
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon.


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Posted: 15 years ago
loved da concept read all da parts so plzz pm me wen u update
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow.. Chandni.. this is the first time I am reading your FF... and I liked them.. Plz. add me also to your PM list.. wuld love reading your FF...
Nice update dear!!!!👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago




Thank you guys for waiting for me to update. I was going through some family troubles, actually my dad was in the hospital so i didnt get the time to do anything. So please forgive me for the delay. I read all the comments and i really appreciated it a lot reading the comments made me want to write more. I will be writing less than what i use too because now i have to take of my dad so wont get the time to make it long. I will try to give you long updates once in while. So for right thank for everything and please enjoy Part 6

Part 6


"Nupur, tum kya kahrahi ho" he said turning away from her. Nupur stood up and walked in front of him. "Mayank jao mein kahrahi hoon who Ridhi ki sahat kehliye hai" Mayank turned away from Nupur in an angry way. "Nupur mein ase nahi kar saktha tum jaanthi ho kay woh meri atith hai" Nupur again walked in front of him. Mayank was about to turn around again, but stopped when Nupur grabbed his hand. "Nupur please mera haath choro". "Mayank, meri baath toh suno" she said as she cupped his face in her hands "Ek baar toh suno". She gave Mayank the puppy face and he knew he couldn't resist that. "Teek hai bolo".


Nupur ' "look, if you act like her husband, then she can recover faster right?" Mayank-"Hmm" he said nodding his head. Nupur- "Ok so the faster she recovers the quicker she can leave right?" Mayank-"Hmm" nodding his again. "Toh teek meri liya please karo". Mayank ' "Lekhne..". Nupur ' "Lekhne vekhne kuch nahi, agar tum mujhse pyar karthi ho, toh please mera liye karo, aur kuch dino ki baat hai". Mayank ' "Nupur, bhagwan se zyaada pyar kartha hoon mein tumse, aur tumare liye toh mein apni jaan deh saktha" He kissed he forehead and smiled. Nupur gave him frown ' "jhooti". Mayank ' "Nupur sach mein, main apni jaan deh saktha". Nupur ' "Mayank per se jhoot". Nupur ' "Kaise jhoot?" . Nupur- " tumara jaan toh mera pas hai" she gave him a cute smile. Mayank chuckled a little ' "Oye hoyee" he looked at her smiling and smiled too.



2 Weeks Later

"Yes Nupur don't worry" she heard as she tried to open her eyes. "Nupur look she is opening her eyes" as she slowly opened her eyes she saw the one face she has been looking for. The first thing that came out of her mouth, "Mayank". M ' "Doctor" he said and the doctor came running in. He checked her breathing and her pulse. D ' "Everything is fine she may be discharged, please come with me and fill some papers out. Mayank got up to leave, but stopped him. N ' "Mayank you stay, you promised me, I will go fill out the discharged papers ok" Mayank looked at her and smiled. He kissed her forehead and she left. As she left Mayank sat back down. R ' "Mayank, who kaun tha" Mayank started to sweat thinking that she had seen him kissing Nupur. M ' "Um, Ridhi, um who mera dost tha" he said quickly and turned to look at the door hoping that she would fall for it. R ' "Oh ok, tu jaanthi ho meine ek bura sapna dekha tune kaha kay tum mujhse pyar nahi karthi" she sled up in her bed and took mayank's hand in hers. Mayank felt uncomfortable. He tried to slip his hand out, but she had a tight grip.

R ' "Tum jaanthi hoon kay mein bohat khush hoon, kay tum meri pathi ho" she said looking into his eyes, she noticed that Mayank was trying to avoid eye contact. R ' "Mayank what's wrong" she said. M ' "Nothing don't worry just rest" he looked away and was about to get up when Ridhi stopped him. R ' "Mayank do you hate me". Mayank couldn't believe what he was hearing he wanted to say yes but couldn't when he said it before she ended up here. He turned around and looked at her. He remembered what Nupur said. He sat down again and kissed her hand. M ' "Ridhi I do not hate you, I love you" he couldn't believe he said this, but he knew that he used to love her, that she was his first love how can he forget that. He has dedicated his life to Nupur forever, but she wasn't his first love. Mayank decided to act as if what he meant was true he gave her a hug. Ridhi embraced him back.



Through tha window Nupur saw everything. As a tear ran down her cheek, she prayed that nothing will come between her and Mayank not even his first love. As she looked at Mayank hugging Ridhi she turned around as tears just fell. She quickly wiped her tears and turned back towards the window. "Meine Mayank ko kaha yeh sab karne kehliye, then why am I crying." She waited till she calmed down and went inside the room.



thanks for reading. and once again sry for the delay. hoped u enjoyed and dont kill me for the ridhi and mayu scene im sry its the only way i can keep the story going.


Hey guys i wanted to let you know if any of you guys are KaJen fans aka Armaan and Ridhima on my Youtube account i upload their scenes please rate and comment them here is the link http://www.youtube.com/user/ILuvPremeer?feature=mhw4
Edited by pink95 - 15 years ago

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