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Posted: 15 years ago
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5 hours later – 2:30 PM

Mayank was sitting at the side of her bed holding her hand.

"Doctor kya hua ise, will she be alright" he said as he got up seeing Dr. Ridhima walking into the room.

"Mr. Sharma we can't say as of right now, we are going to have to do some test" she said checking Nupur's pulse. "Please step outside for a moment as the nurse performs the tests". Mayank stepped outside into the hallway. As he walked everyone was glaring him with the word traitor across their forehead. But there was one face that had nothing but rage and the word murder written, it was Samrat he had so much hatred in him. Samrat walked up to Mayank with rage and fury in his eyes. He lifted his hand up to punch Mayank, but was stopped by Gunjan as she grabbed his hand and pulled it down.

"Calm down Samrat, for Nupur me and the baby, please chalo mera saath" Gunjan said as started to take him outside for fresh air. "Ek Second Gunjan" he said as he stopped and turned around. Pointing to Mayank as a warning, "Agar Nupur ko kuch hua toh mein tumhe zinda nahi chorugi, yeh mera vaada hai tumse" he said and turned back around and walked outside with Gunjan.

After this threat Mayank became sad he turned and saw Ridhi at the mandir praying he started to walk towards her. "Mr. Sharma you may go in now" the nurse said walking out of the room. Mayank stopped in his tracks he looked Ridhi and then at Nupur's room. A tear rolled down his cheek, he turned and walked into Nupur's room.

"Nupur please wake up, please" he said as he held her hand in his. He laid his head down on her lap and slowly, slowly fell asleep.

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"Mmmaayannnkk" Nupur managed to say trying to open her eyes. Mayank immediately woke up at the sound of her voice. He broke out in a big smile, he got up and leaned over her head and kissed her forehead.

"Nupur tum teek ho" he said seating back down on the chair.

"Mayank mein kaha hoon" she said trying to sit up.

"Nupur lay down you haven't fully recovered" he said as he laid her back down "Tum hospital mein ho".

"Kya hua mujko, mein hospital mein kyun hoon" she said as held on to his hand. He covered her hand with his.

"Nupur tum baihosh hogaya" he said as he turned around and a tear fell. He wiped it away quickly, before Nupur could see.

"Mayank kya hua tum itni sad kyun ho" she said turning him around towards her. Before Mayank could answer, "Mayank jaanthi ho ka jab mein sao raha tha, tab mein ek bura sapna dekha" she said looking into his eyes. "You know Ridhi right, the one I saved I have a nightmare that she was your Ridhi" hearing that Mayank turned away because he knew it wasn't a nightmare, but reality, "aur yeh toh buri baat nahi hai, mein bhi dekha kay tune use I Love You kaha, pagal hoon mein ase sochna kaliye" she said and started to laugh. Mayank couldn't control his tears anymore he stormed out of the room right when the Dr. Ridhima walked in. She was confused at the way he just walked out. She looked over at Nupur thinking she would know, but she herself was confused.

"Use kya hua" she said walking in and taking a seat on the chair.

"I don't know" Nupur was still staring at the door.

"Mrs. Sharma, I have some good news to tell you first of all you are recovering very fast which is a good sign and" she stopped as soon as she heard a knock on the door. Nupur thought it was Mayank, but it was Samrat.

"Bhaiya undar aao na" Nupur said smiling to see her brother. Samrat walked in and Dr. Ridhima got up to walk out.

"Sirf ten minutes" Ridhima said walking out and Samrat took a seat.

"Kaise ho Nupur" he said patting her hair down.

"Teek hoon bhaiya aur tum aur Gunjan" She said taking his hand her hand. She noticed that Samrat wasn't himself he seemed upset and out of place.

"Hum teek hai ab tum aram kar main bahar hoon" he said getting up and walking outside. By her voice he knew that she didn't remember anything that happened last night. Samrat came outside just as Ridhima was about to go in. She walked inside.

"So the second part of the news" she said smiling.

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"Hai Bhagwan mein kya karo kisko chunuo, please meri madath karo" Mayank said sitting down on the ground in front of the mandir. "Please bhagwan meri madath karo, koi toh sign dai do" he said as he started to cry. He wiped his tears as he felt a hand on his shoulder. He got up and turned around. "Maa" he quickly hugged her and started to cry, it was just uncontrollable. She patted his head to calm him down.

"Mayu yeh tune kya kiya, Nupur ko dokha dhi, aur use patha bhi nahi hai" she said as she broke apart from and was kind of angry and at the same time sad.

"Mein kisko chuno maa please mujhe bathao" Mayank said as he fell to the ground and hug Shilpa's legs. She bent down and patted his head.

"Beta jo tumara dil kehata hai woh karo" as soon as she said that she got up and left.

"Thank you maa tum hamesh mujhe sahi rasta dika tha hai" he said looking at her walk towards the door. "Lekhne mujhe Nupur ko sach bathana hoga" he said as he got up and started walking towards Nupur's room.

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"So Nupur are you ready for the second news" Dr. Ridhima said as she broke out in a huge smile.

"Ha doctor, I am ready" Nupur said scooting up in the bed trying to sit up straight.

"Toh Mrs. Sharma, may I be the first to congratulate you, tu Maa bane waali ho" Dr. Ridhima said as Mayank walked into the room. Before Nupur could say anything Mayank spoke.

"Kya mein Baap bane waali hoon" he said as he broke out in a smile. He walked towards Nupur and sat down on the stool next to her.

"Nupur did did you hear what she said" he said as he turned his head towards Nupur and saw her smiling and slowly she lowered her eyes. "Nupur me… mein baap bane waali hoon au….aur tum maa" he laid his hands on hers and kissed her hand. "Hu…hum ma baap bane waali hai, can you believe it". Mayank was so happy he could have shouted to the world.

Nupur was happy to the excitement on his face. "Mayank?"

"Ha Nupur" he said looking into her eyes as his eyes started to water up from excitement and happiness.

"Kya tum khush ho?" she asked looking at him and trying to find the answer in his eyes. Mayank stood up and leaned in and kissed her forehead as she closed her eyes.

"Bohat khush, thank you" he said sitting back down. "Tune mujhe dundiya ki sab se badi khushi di, thank you so much" he said as he kissed her hand. All of sudden Mayank became very sad he started to think wither he should tell her or not.

"Mayank kya hua" she noticed the change in him.

"Kuch nahi, ill go tell everyone" He said as he got up. I can't tell her she is so happy right now I will tell her later he said to himself as he opened the door.

"Mayank ek minute" Nupur said trying to get out of the bed and walk over to Mayank. He ran to the bed.

"Nupur don't get up you still need to rest" he said helping her get back into the bed.

"Mayank let's not tell anyone yet when the time comes we will tell them ok"

"Lekhne kyun Nupur"

"Just promise me you won't tell anyone" she said putting her hand out.

"Teek hai, whenever you are ready" he said grabbing her hand.

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Nupur was discharged from the hospital three hours later, by then everyone had left it was only Mayank who was still there.

"Please sign here and here and here" the nurse said pointing to lines on the discharge papers. As Mayank was signing the papers he noticed someone standing outside in the rain. He finished signing the papers and took an umbrella and went outside.

"Excuse me why don't you come inside it is raining you will get sick" he said putting the umbrella over the person. All of sudden he felt someone hug him. He pulled back immediately to find Ridhi hugging him. "Tum kya kar rahi ho" he said surprised to still see her here.

"Mayank mein tumara intazaar kar raha tha" She said walking up to him as he kept backing up.

"Ridhi wahi ruk jao" he said putting his hand up to stop her. Ridhi stopped in her track and back out a little.

"Kyun Mayank mein tumara pathni hoon" Ridhi said a little shocked at his behavior towards her.[/COLOR

"Nahi tum mera pathni nahi ho, Nupur meri pathni hai" Mayank said with rage.

"KYAAAAAA, tune shaadi kiya hai per se" Ridhi said as she started to cry.

"Meine per se shaadi ki nahi, yeh mera pehle shaadi hai. Mein tumse shaadi karna waala tha lehne tumara accident hua, tab Nupur mera saath tha aur humne shaadi ki" He said walking out into the open rain.

"Tum kaise shaadi kar satha hai, jab humne already shaadi ki" she said as she walked up to him. It started to rain harder and harder.

"Meine tum shaadi nahi ki hai, karna waala tha kiya nahi" he said turning around facing her.

"Humne shaadi kiya, yaad nahi hai, toh mein tumhe yaad dilatha hoon" Ridhi said as she pulled out pictures from her purse. "Yeh dekho" she said putting them in his hand.

"Yaad nahi arre raha hai" she said turning around. " 10 years ago when we confessed our love to each other, you decided to tell your mom, but when you told her that we loved each other she didn't agree to it because she had already set your wedding with someone else". After hearing that, everything starter coming back to Mayank as he looked through the pictures. "Everyday you tried to convince your mom, but she never listened to you, and then one day you took me to the mandir and we got married" she took the photos from his hand and skimmed through the photos and stopped at one. "Yeh lo" she said handing it back to him. As he took hold of the photo, he looked at and stood back as the photos dropped on the ground. On the ground were photos of the wedding day. Photos of their saat pheres. Everything was there, but Ridhi wasn't done with her story. "One day your mom finally agreed for our wedding, we never told anyone that we had already gotten married. The day we were supposed to get married, I met with an accident, nut you never bothered to come find me" she said as she walked away.

"I thought you were dead, on the news it said that no one survived that accident." He said as he walked up to her.

"But I was alive, when I woke up I was in the hospital, I had forgotten everything, but I had a photo of you. I went everywhere to look for you until I met Nupur, because of her I am now with you I can live my whole entire life with my love, my husband, my Mayank. I Love You" she said as she laid a hand on his chest and looked into his eyes.

He looked at her and laid his hand on her hand and took it off. "But I don't love you, I did, but now I love Nupur."

"No Mayank you love me and only me, you said it yourself" she said as she looked at him with tears in her eyes.

"No I do not love you" he said turning around, looking away from her.

"Mayank, I can't live without you, pleaseeee" she said as she fell to the ground crying.

[COLOR=magent]"Fine then go die, I don't care I only love Nupur, whatever I said yesterday I didn't mean it, Nupur needs me more than anything." He said and he walked off towards the hospital when he stopped immediately. There standing at the doorway he saw Nupur, who was crying. Ridhi got up and saw Nupur there too.


"Nupur please tell him how much I was looking for him, tell him Nupur, tell him" Ridhi said walking upto her. Nupur didn't move, she didn't do anything she just stood there. "Nupur I told you I would bring photos of me and my husband here ill show you" she said and walked towards the area where she was standing and bent down and picked up the photos. She walked towards Nupur and showed her the photos. "Yeh dekho" she said and she showed her all the pictures. Nupur looked down and looked at them her eyes in stopped at one photo and broke down crying. It was a picture of Mayank putting sindoor in Ridhi's mang. Nupur could not believe her eyes what Ridhi had said was true. She broke down crying so hard as she hit the ground crying. Mayank bent down and tried to calm her down. He tried to bring into a hug.

"Don't touch me" she said as she put her hand into front of his face to stop him.

"Nupur please meri baath suno" he said still trying to give her a hug.

"DON'T TOUCH ME, I SAID" she said as she got up and started to back away from Mayank.

"Please Nupur listen to me" he said as he walked up to her and she just kept backing up.

"I don't want to talk to you, if you want to talk to someone go talk to Ridhi" Nupur said still backing up till she hit the wall of the hospital. Nupur to walk away but Mayank trapped her between he wall and him. Mean while Ridhi just stood there and watched she started to cry, she couldn't see her husband with another women.

"But I want to talk to you and only you" He said as he moved closer to her. She could feel his breath on her lips. She tried to control herself as much as possible, Mayank noticed that she was becoming weak. "Nupur I love you and only you, I know I use to love Ridhi, but not anymore, you are my life, without you I will die" he said as he slipped his hands around her waist. She started to become weak. As he moved closer and closer too her "I love you" he said as moved closer to her.

"I hate you, you lied to me" she said as she pushed him away. Ridhi couldn't see this she walked upto Nupur.

"How dare you touch my husband" she said walking upto her.

"I did not touch him, he touched me and he is not your husband anymore. Woh meri pathi hai" she said walking upto her. Ridhi and Nupur were fighting, Mayank walked up to them. Ridhi couldn't stand what she was hearing from Nupur she rose her hand and was about to strike Nupur when Mayank caught her hand and stopped her. Mayank looked at Ridhi with rage. Quick as a flash he had slapped Ridhi across the face. She felt her cheek that was in pain and looked at Mayank.

"How dare you" she said as she looked into his eyes with rage.

"NO HOW DARE YOU, YOU RAISED YOUR HAND ON MY WIFE, MY WIFE NUPUR, TUMARI HIMATA KAISE HUA ASI KARNA KALIYA" he said as he pulled Nupur towards him. "DON'T YOU DARE TRY TO TOUCH HER AGAIN, DON'T YOU DARE TRY TO HURT HER, DON'T YOU DARE LOOK AT HER" he said with rage. Hearing this Ridhi felt something being teared out from her heart. "I HATE YOU, DO YOU HEAR ME HATE YOU" Ridhi couldn't bare it anymore her head started to pound.

"Please stop, please" she started to cry while holding her head the pounding got worse.

"NO I JUST HATE YOU, I USED TO LOVE YOU, NOT ANYMORE NOW I ONLY LOVE NUPUR AND ONLY NUPUR, JUST GOT TO HELL" Mayank had crossed the limit. Ridhi couldn't handle it and fainted.

"Mayank STOP" Nupur said yelling at him as she ran to Ridhi. "Mayank yeh tune kya kiya, pick her up and take her inside hurry" Nupur said running inside to call the doctor. Mayank just stood there. What did I do he kept thinking to himself. "Mayank bring in hurry" he heard Nupur yelled he lifted Ridhi up and took into the hospital. "Doctor please kuch karo" Nupur said walking alongside the doctor as Mayank brought her in. He laid Ridhi on the bed and walked outside with Nupur as the doctor did his work.

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"Mayank yeh tune kya kardia" Nupur said walking upto and placing her hand on his cheeks.


"Nupur mein jaan buch kar nai kiya, sirf use batana chatethi mein tumse pyaar karta hoon, aur sirf tumse" he placed his hands on top of hers. "Nupur please mujhe maaf kardo, mein tumse nohat pyaar karta hoon, please maaf kardo".

"Mayank jo tune kiya who sahi nai tha" she said slipping her hand away from his and walking towards Ridhi's window. "Aur jo tune Ridhi ki saat kiya who bhi teek nahi thi". Before she could complete what she was going to say, the doctor came out.

"Mr. and Mrs. Sharma the patient is very critical, it seems as she has been hurt very badly, not physically, but emotionally" after hearing what the doctor said Nupur and Mayank knew why. Ridhi was in this state because of Mayank. "Please be careful, more stress can cause her to go into a mental stage which may cause her to lose her life" the doctor said that and left. Mayank and Nupur shocked at what the doctor said she sat down and buried her head in her arms. She felt a hand rubbing her back she got up and looked at him.

"Mayank, she will be alright, right" she said grabbing his hands in hope.

"Don't worry Nupur sab teek hoga" he said wrapping his hands around her hands. "lekhne please jo meine kiya woh galat tha lekhne mujhe maaf kardo please"

"Ha maaf kardo ga, lehne ek sharat par" Nupur said looking into his eyes knowing that he wouldn't say no.

"Mein kuch bhi karna kehliya teyar hon" he said looking at her.

"Pehle mujhe promise karo ki jao mein kahu ga tum wohi karunga" she said removing her hand from his and putting it out for him to take.

"Mein promise karthi hoon, kay jo tum kahu gi wohi mein karunga" Mayank said taking her hand and he planted a kiss on her hand. "I promise".

"Please tum Ridhi kay saath rai, iski pathi banker" Nupur said looking at him. Mayank removed his hand from hers and got up. He looked at Nupur with rage, he could not believe what she had just asked him to do.


Thank you guys for reading and waiting patiently for this update it ook me awhile cause i was sick im recovering, but i couldnt have kept you guys waiting. thank for the previous comments it meant a lot/ some of you mein hate me right now or some may not but it will get better dont worry. thanks for reading and stay tuned for the next part

love chandni 😳 😳
Edited by pink95 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
wow i am the first one to comment
like a brother what sam did is right ..........
and nups she is going to be preegi'
and i think mayu will choosr ridz but after hearing this news he chosse nups .......
is ridzi isa telling truth i can't believe
and then nups know everything
why nups say this to maynk for helping ridzi
awesome work
i am curious to know what will happen next
Edited by adi_gupta - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
hey too gud yr
oh nupur is so generous and kind heated
update sooon dear
thnx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
Nice update Pink...............
let MN be together
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95
outstanding update yaar
sam was an amazing bro
but ye keya
nups ne aisi shart kiyu di
no cant see my mayur apart
pls update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96
awesome part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

out standing update!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sam is the best bro!!!!!!!!!!!!!

happy that mayu is with his nups

update soon

love pebo

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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
awesome part.....

i knew that something like this is coming.....

like nupur being pregnant and she asking him to act as her husband until she gets well.....

but loved the way u portrayed.....

i really pity ridhi......

i mean it wasn't her fault......

neither was of nupur.....

how come mayank does not remember his marriage with ridhi?

and i loved when mayank chose her rather than that sick ridhi!

get well soon...

awesome update!

do continue soon............
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
hey chandani...!!
grt part yaar....!!
sam...possesive...ahaaan...!!
n nups so gud n sweet...!!
luvin her charac...!!
hope u get well soon...!!
do cont soon....!!

wid loads of luv
radhika
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
superb upddate..
so many things happen in ths part....
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey Chandni!!!!
luvvvvly upd8!!!
omg...now wot'll happn?????
plsss do cont asap...
thanx 4 d pm... :)

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