Saarrathi Fan Fic by pakhi joshi - Page 9

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Posted: 19 years ago
#81
hi pakhi ,
I am new here .I just luv ur story its brilliant
keep up the gud work and cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#82
thanks for liking my ff rydhima,marrium,and mona.and thanks a bunch for all my dear friends.

recap: arjun and bhoomi celebrate their honeymoon in newzealand.now they returned to home.

when they returned manasvi calls all the family members.

m: baisa, maaji jaladi aao dheko arjun bhoomi aa gaye.

all the family members gathered into hall.
khushi run towards arjun and say"arjun uncle mere liye kya laaye"

a: aapke liye bhaut saare toys aur choclate laaye hain beta aur sirf aapke liye hi nahin balki sabke liye kuch na kuch gift laaye hain.

baisa: wah arjun! wahaan bhi tum logon ne hamein yaad rakha.

a: yaad unehein karte hain jinhein kabhi bhoolate hain , aap sab log to hamesha hamaare dil ke kareeb rahte ho.

then arjun put out all the gifts from suitcase, and give one by one to every family member.

baisa: bahut achhe gifts hain beta.

a: iska saara credit bhanwari ko jaata hai baisa, kyonki saare gifts usi ne liye hain.

b: achha, are wah bhoomi tumhaari choice to bahut achhi hai, par wo last wala gift kiska hai arjun.

arjun remain quite.suddenly suraj comes.

bhoomi: wo gift suraj ji ke liye hai baisa.(to arjun)gift de do na.

a; tum layee ho,to tum hi de do.

bhoomi gets closer to arjun and speak slowly : arjun mere liye plz.

arjun look at her eyes and then he give the gift to suraj.
everyone becomes happy specially shaku and bhoomi.

a: ab main aap logon ko ek goodnews dena chahata hoon.

manasvi and baisa becomes very happy and said: jaldi bato na.

a: roy indus. ka naam to suna hoga aapne,bhanvri wahaan par MD aur designer dono ki post sabhalegi.

every one becomes surprised and very happy.
then arjn tells everythinf about mrs. roy.

manasvi: ye to badi khushi ki baat hai, hamne to socha tha koi aur hi good news hai.

a: aur kaun si good news bhabhi? 😕

m: nahin kuch nahin.(smiles and looks at bhoomi) 😉
bhoomi blushes. 😳

baisa: ab jao beta tum dono rest kar lo thak gaye hoge.

bhoomi: bhabhi aap hamaare saath chalye na , aapko kuch dikhana hai.

then bhoomi, manasvi and arjun go to their room.

bhomi saw the honeymoon photographs to manasvi.

manasvi surrises;
m: are bhoomi! yakeen nahin hota kii ye tum ho.jeans , jackets , gauns.par kuch bhi kaho tum lag bari pyaari rahi ho.

b: thankyou bhabhi, wo to ye sab arjun ne karne ke liye kaha tha isilye--------

m: (smiles)achha to aur kya-kya karne ko kaha tha aapke arjun ji ne.

b:(blushes) bhabhi. 😳

then bhoomi saw the trophy to manasvi ;

b: ye dekhiye bhabhi, ye hamein best valentien couple ka award mila tha.

m: wow bhoomi,to arjun ne tumhe dance bhi sikha diya. dekha arjun itni pyaari wife mili hai tumhein ,tab tum best couple ka award jeet sake ho.

a: bilkul bhabhi, meri bhanwari to hai hi sabse pyaari.

then both of them share their memorable moments wid manasvi.

precap: shefali talk herself in her father's home, lk comes.

friends i write this part after a long time if u don't like it plz forgive me.




Edited by pakhi joshi - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#83
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welcome back di
that was wonderful and what cute sence
arjun is too slow 😆
plz write soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#84
That's really very nice.I can forgive you in one condition that the next part should be much longer than this one and something(of that kind 😳 )must happen between A-B.
Edited by diya7000 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#85
loving it, specially the way bhumi's success and all....pls continue... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#86
thanks to all of u my dear friends.

shefali at her father's home and talking to herself.

s: meri kya galti thi arjun! maine to tumse sachha pyar kiya tha.

lk: saccha pyaar?? ise tum sachha prem kahati ho shefali, agar tum sachmuch arjn se sacch prem karti to us par khud se bhi jyaada vishvaas karti, jo tumne nahin kiya , ab bhugato iski saja.

s: ye tumne theek nahin kiya arjn us naukrani ke liye mujhe chod diya.

lk: prem mein sirf bhavnayein dhekhi jaati hain shefali.rani ya naukrani ka auhada nahin , aur ye kyon bhoolati ho ki bhoomi ne apna sab kuch arjn ke liye balidaan kar diya tha, khud ko mitaane ka naam hi prem hai shefali, jo tum kabhi nahin kar sakti.

in night at heritage house

bhoomi take a shower and when she enters in room , she see dat arjun sits on bed and read a magzine.

b(sits besides him and said): soye nahin abhi tak ?

a(put his hand around her and said): tumhaara wait kar raha tha.

b: achha! pahle to nahin karate the mera wait?

a: pahle ki baat aur thi bhanvari.

b:(in funny way) lekin tumhaara sofa tumhaara wait kar raha hai. aaj tum sofe par nahin sooge kya?

a: wo meri galti thi jo main sofe par sota tha, par ab wo galti nahin dohraana chata hoon,and he switched off the lights.

in the morning bhoomi wake -up and find arjun's hand around her, she gentely removes his hand and go for take the shower.
then she sits beside arjun and move her fingers in arjun's hairs.and said: utho na arjun.

a: open his eyes slowely and said: itni jaldi kyon uth gayi tum bhanvari.

b: tum bhi na arjun, sab kuch bhool jaate ho,aaj se mujhe mrs. roy ki compani join karni thi na.

arjun then gets up and say : oh bhanwari ,main sachmuch bhool gaya tha, tum tyaar ho jaao , main abhi fresh ho kar aata hoon.

then bhoomi gets ready and go infront of lk's idol.

b: bhagwaan aaj main ek nayi shuruaat karne jaa rahi hoon, aap aaj tak her kadam per mere saath rahe ho ,is baar bhi sab sambhaal lena.

lk: "vijayi bhav"(get the victory) jaao bhoomi , tumhein tumhaare her kaam mein safalta mile, yahi mera ashirwaad hai tumhaare liye.

arjun comes " chalo bhanvari"

then bhoomi and arjun do the breakfast and bhoomi take the blessings of all the family members.

kushal to maansen: jija ye bhoomika to kafi badal gayi hai.

maansen: fikra mat karo kushaal, ye business- visiness bhoomika ke bas ki baat nahin hai. do din ka shauk hai ,fir apne aap utar jaayega.

k: (laugh) theek kaha rahe ho jija.

bhoomika go to the mrs. roy's company wid arjun.

mrs. roy: are bhoomika , tum aa gayi , aao tumhein sab se mila doon.

then she introduce her to whole staff.and then show the cabin of her.

mrs. roy: bhoomika, ye tumhaara cabin hai, aur ye hamaare naye project kii file. foreign clients hain, tumhein to pata hai ki foreign mein indian designs kii kitani maang hai, ab ye project tumhaare hawaale hai.

b: mem, lekin itna bada project main akele nahin sambhaal paungi,.

mrs. roy: akeli kahaan ho tum ,itna bada staff hai, aur haan tumhaari ek PA bhi hai , use maine personally sab samjha diya hai,uska naam naina hai, tum usse koi bhi madad le sakti ho.
then she leaves.

b: arjun main ye sab kar paaongi?

a: kyo nahin kar paaogi, mujhe meri bhanwari par poora vishwaas hai.ab mein chaloon.

b: lekin arjun main yahaan akeli-------?

a: akeli kahaan ho tum, main, mera pyaar, mera vishvaas hamesha tumhaare saath hain.then he give kiss on her forhead and leaves.


precap: arjun's car slightly strikes wid someone's car, he shout.

friends tell me i am going in right direction or not.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#87
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di that was super
i hope nothing happens to arjun 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Very good Pakhi.You don't have to ask us that whether you are going in the right direction or not.you are doing a great job.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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aww pooh u too gud re me lub ju re 🤗 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks to all of u for ur wonderful response. 😛😊

arjun dropped bhoomi to her office and go for his office , in the way he see a car which is coming towards him in very fast speed, he wanna try to save himself but his car is slightly strikes to dat car. the headlight of his car crushed.(sorry neshu , i don't wanna met arjun wid an accident,so i write in precap the word "slightly".main apne arjun ka accident kaise karwa sakti hoon😳)

he stopped his car and come outside, another car is also stop.arjun stand infront of that car's door and shout ,

a: jab gaadi chalaani nahin aati to , chaalete kyon ho???? 😡

then someone down the mirror of car , arjun surprised to see that person, this is evil shefali.

a: tummmmmmmmmmmm.tumhaari niyat aur dimaag to pahle se hi kharaab the , ab driving bhi bhool gayi kya??????? 😡

then shefali comes out.

s: o arjun, tum. darasal main tumhaare hi baare mein soch rahi thi.

a: sharm nahin aati shefali tumein ,aisi baatein karte hue.maine tumehein uss ghar se nikaal diya, fir bhi tum---------- 😡

s(hold his hand): arjun main sab kuch bhoolne ko tyaar hoon, bas ek baar mere pyaar ko apna lo.

a: apni hadon mein raho shefali, kahin aisa na ho kii mera haath uth jaaye.(push her back) aur behatar yahi hoga kii tum fir se kabhi mere saamne naa aao., then he go from there. 😡😡

s(to herself): ye meri aakhiri koshih thi arjun tumhein paane ki, ab tak tumne mera pyaar dekha hai, ab tum meri nafrat dekhoge, dekhna kis tarah barbaad karti hoon tumhein aur uss bhoomika ko.

lk: lo! shefaliji to fir se barbaadi ki baatein karne lagi.lagta hai ek mahabhaarat ka aagaaz ho chuka hai shefali kii or se, doosara abhi baaki hai maansen aur yuvraaj kii taraf se,aur iska anzaam---------(laugh) wo to samay hi batayega.

arjun go to his office but he is so tensed, so he early returened to the home and send to driver to pick up the bhoomi.

in evening bhoomi waiting for arjun ,but she see the driver and surprised.

b: tum ??????? arjun nahin aaya kya? 😕

driver: nahin mem, arjun saahab to nahin aaye.

b: sab theek to hai na.

d: pata nahin mem.

b: achha jaldi ghar chalo.

she reach at the home.

manasvi: are bhoomi aa gayi tum, kaisa raha pehla din office main.

b: theek tha bhabhi, arjun kahaan hai.

m: pata nahin , shaayad apne room mein ho.

she run towards her room but don't find him there.

precap: bhoomi looking for arjun, suraj comes.


Edited by pakhi joshi - 19 years ago

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