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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#71

ok ok no criticising........

i loved it.......

i am head over heals over it......

awesome.......

both love one another.......

why don't you continue this one shot.......

it is exciting........

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#72

And i love the way nupur is! coz that makes her more lovable. She has many more reasons to be happy....atleast she has friends with whom she can open to! so it hurts her frds when she cries....cause one never knows how much her frds love her.....its upto her if she wants to live this way mourning or live happily....

And I sincerely wish her to be very happy.....why can't she admit that she did text him? Why? Why shilpa's name came? Mayank isn't a fool to understand that! I really hated when Shilpa said that....i know that she might be joking....but this was not at all a way to say things. She knew that it could have hurt Nupur! She knew that!

I agree with Nupur....sometimes some short words mean a lot....he didn't clarified...but I guess he understood....the point is Nupur should understand too....i could feel what Nupur was feeling.....so I can't blame her for running away like this. But one thing is sure, running away from problems or love doesn't solve anything. I know its hard, but she should talk to Mayank. Infact, yes I can say that its impossible for her, but that makes life challenge.

I can proudly say that yes Mayank was stupid, idiot and a jerk to loose the only person who loved him like anything. He was jerk to loose his true love. He was fool to think that after what he did, Nupur could face him and still accept him with his apologies. He is fool to think that Nupur is not hurt and would forgive him for her love.

In love, there is no doubt but he doubted her and that too for someone else! He trusted someone else more than his love. He should have had known Nupur if he ever loved her.

I know that he was very happy after reading the first message but he took time to reply to it. And as a result, he read that one.

Zoah, jaan I am sorry but I can't comment on this one. After reading so much, I think that I must go and wash my face before anyone knows that I was crying. I hate myself for being so extra sensitive! But I really do dislike Mayank. He should have had never done that with Nupur. Never! She didn't deserve this! And you r right, "I just want her to be happy, wherever she be, whoever she be with, she deserves nothing but happiness." I too want that only.......

And ya, I agree that I don't either want you to continue this, cause I know that what would it make u. I don't know how you wrote this one! I simple don't. and please don't expect me to say that I loved this oneshot, cause I sincerely feel that oneday it would have its happy ending. And don't say that "in your dreams" cause maybe not this one, but yes, in Nupur's life, she would have a happy ending. I could really feel the emotions.

You know what? This is the best piece of your work! The best piece you could write. I love you a lot for writing it and posting it here. I love you loads jaan. And sweetheart, I needlessly say that whatever be the case, I don't want Nupur to change ever...not for him....not for anyone. Cause she is the best like she is.

Wow! I wrote one and a half wordpage on this! But I think I can write many and many pages on it cause you know that I can feel it. It surely was a wrong text. But the feelings were true and pure. I love you zoah...love you more than what you think.....and I would be always there by your side.

love,
Mahak

Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#73

Amazing Zoah :)

It felt so Real :D
it really brought out their feelings to the fore
amazing I tell u , just amazing!!

Needless to say I want a continuation to this OS :)
(and a happy ending 😆 )

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399703

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Posted: 15 years ago

#74

Thank you Mahima and Divya!

Your comments mean a lot

I am sorry but I can't continue this one.

I don' think this OS will have perfect and happy ending.

Some times it's better to let the one you love go, at least they will be happy.

I am sorry but I won't continue :(

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SunshineGirl6

@SunshineGirl6

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#75

😲😲😲😲😲😲....................Oh ma God..........wat was that????was that my charcter sketch.............Zoah each nd every line of this os represented me..........nd trust me its nt exaggeration...........seriously each nd every word was ME!!!!!😲.....................nd y did u end it there yaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrr.........plzzzzzz continue this on.................................plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz..........

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Posted: 15 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

ok ok no criticising........

i loved it.......

i am head over heals over it......

awesome.......

both love one another.......

why don't you continue this one shot.......

it is exciting........

Thank a ton Mahima!

Sorry I can't continue this one!

They weren't meant to be together!

x x

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Posted: 15 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: myownarea
Amazing Zoah :)

It felt so Real :D
it really brought out their feelings to the fore
amazing I tell u , just amazing!!

Needless to say I want a continuation to this OS :)
(and a happy ending 😆 )

Thanks a lot Divya

glad you liked it!

hmm Sorry, I can't continue this one :(

x x

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399703

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Posted: 15 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25
nice
thanxx 4 d pm

Thank you Tehzeeb!

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399703

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Posted: 15 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Sunshine Girl
😲😲😲😲😲😲....................Oh ma God..........wat was that????was that my charcter sketch.............Zoah each nd every line of this os represented me..........nd trust me its nt exaggeration...........seriously each nd every word was ME!!!!!😲.....................nd y did u end it there yaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrr.........plzzzzzz continue this on.................................plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz..........

Oh my... really?

It represents me too, to some extent 😳

glad you could relate to it

Thank you for commenting!

Sorry, can't continue this one!

x x