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Hey hun

Okay to everyone who thinks I have copied this off from the internet or wherever.

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Originally posted by: NidheyaCole

Okay to everyone who thinks I have copied this off from the internet or wherever.

I read this offline message YEARS ago. I wrote the OS one year ago. I do not copy things from here and there. I don't even remember how that offline ended, ALRIGHT????

I didn't even write word to word like you all are accusing me of. There was a huge time gap between the time I read and wrote alright????

I have enough brains of my own to write my own stories. There are "supposedly" movies writen based on this concept, you can check the earlier thread in which I had posted this.

Nidheya

Well

Kanya is a sweet, cute girl. She lives in Mumbai. She loves her family and everybody loves her. She has had two boyfriends in past. Her first boyfriend, Ranbir Nanda was suffering from Lukemia (Blood Cancer) and had died three years ago. Ranbir and Kanya had fallen for each other at first sight and they made the cutest couple. They loved each other so much and everybody knew that they were inseparable. They used to say that nothing including death could separate them. Then one day Ranbir fell ill but Kanya was with him every minute. Even when he passed away, her lips were on his. This was the relationship of Kanya and Ranbir.

A year passed away slowly and Kanya met Ayaan. Ayaan fell for Kanya at first sight it self which was not hard coz she was gorgeous. She dated him reluctantly and now things had come to the stage of their marriage. Kanya still loved Ranbir more than anybody but she knew that he wanted her to move in with her life. This was her wedding day.

Kanya was wearing her shaadi ka jhoda and was sitting quietly in her room. She was weeping silently. Ayaan comes up.

Ayaan- Why are you crying my baby?

Kanya- Kuch nahin.

Ayaan- Kanya humare shaadi hone waala hain. You have to be truthful to me.

Kanya- Tum naraz nahin hone naa?

Ayaan- Nahin toh. Batawo sweetheart.

Kanya- Mujhe Ranbir ki yaad aa rahi thi. Main use bahut miss kar rahi hoon. I still love him a lot Ayaan.

Ayaan- Oh.

Kanya- Mujhe gussa ho raha hain apne aap par ki main tumse shaadi karne waali hoon.

Ayaan- Kyun? Main itna bura hoon kya?

Kanya- Nahin. Lekin main tumhe khush nahin rakh pawoongi. Meri dil abhi bhi Ranbir ke saath hain.

Ayaan- Kanya.........

Kanya- But tum mujhe chahte ho kya?

Ayaan- Sabse zyaada!

Kanya- Mein koshih karoongi ki main tumhe khush rakh paawoon.

Ayaan- Kanya....

Kanya- Bas tum mujhe waqt do.

Ayaan- Zindagi de doonga....waqt kya hain?

Kanya- Thank you.

Ayaan- I love you.

Kanya- Thanx!

Ayaan- Tum bhi bolo naaa. I love you!

Kanya- Okay.............."I Love You.............Ranbir"

Ayaan- Main chalu?

Kanya- Okay. I am sorry.

Ayaan- Its okay.

Ayaan leaves the room. (mind- Poor Kanya. I hope at least in her next life she is re-united with Ranbir. Her eyes are filled with so much of pain and sadness)

Kanya still continues weeping.

AN HOUR LATER

Trrrrrrrrrrrringggggg!!

Kanya suddenly opens eyes and realises that she had fallen asleep. She quickly attends to her phone.

Kanya- Hello?

Pammi- Beta idhar aawo.

Kanya- Kahaan?

Pammi- Beta teri shaadi hain. Hum sab mantap main hain.

Kanya- Sorrrrry. Aayi. Bye!

Kanya switches off her phone and runs down. She is searching for the car keys when she sees a man with long hair facing the window.

Kanya- Hello?? Kaun ho? Andar kaise aaya?

The man turns around and it is.......................Ranbir.

Kanya- Ranbir????? Ranbir tum zinda ho?

He walks towards her....

Ranbir- Nahin.

Kanya- Phir tum yahaan?

Ranbir- Main bhoot hoon. Yaa aatma.

Kanya- I love you. Waapas aawo.

Ranbir- Nahin Kanya aisa toh nahin ho sakta. Lekin main tumse baath karne ke liye aaya hoon.

Kanya- Ranbirrrr please waapas aawo naaaaaa. She starts crying.

Ranbir- Kanya please woh sab nahin ho sakta. Lekin agar tum mujhse sacha pyaar karte ho toh tum mere baath maanoge.

Kanya- Batawo.

Ranbir- Aaj tum shaadi karne waale ho. Ayaan tumse bahut pyaar karta hain. Tumhe usse shaadi karna hi hain. Mujhe bhool jaawo. Main tumhara past hoon. Woh tumhara present hain. Move on. Usse apna pyaar maano.

Kanya- Lekin hum?

Ranbir- Jab tum bhi is duniya chodke aawoge hum phir se ek ho jaayenge. Humara shaadi dhoom-dhaam se celebrate kiya jaayega. Sab Bhagwaan log aayenge.

Kanya (smiles through her tears)- Haan. sahi kahaan.

Ranbir- Ab mujhe jaana hain. Bhagwaaan ne mujhe bas 5 minat diya tha tumse baath karne ke liye.

Kanya- Math jaawo.

Ranbir- Jaana hi padega.

Kanya- Phir tum kab aawoge?

Ranbir- Never.

Kanya- ranbir......

But he was gone but before that Kanya felt her lips being kissed, just the way Ranbir kissed her. She smiles and hurries to the mantap.

While driving the car, her mind is focused on Ranbir and Ranbir's convesation alone. She doesnt see the lorry driver honkin away like crazy. Suddenly

BOOOMMMMMMMM!

Her car was run over by the lorry. Kanya was killed in fraction of a second.

Half an hour later her family gathers there and they are all mourning. Ayaan looks up at the sky.

Ayaan- Ranbir toh tune mujhse Kanya ko cheen hi liya aakhir! Aap sab log rona band keejiye. Kanya ab khush hain. Woh apne Ranbir ke paas hain.

Everyone looks at him like he was mad.

While at heaven. Kanya is welcomed with garlands and everything. She sees Ranbir smiling at her.

Kanya- Ranbir!!!!!!!

She falls into his hands.

Ranbir- Kanya tume doc ke paas leke jaawoongi.

Kanya- Kyun?

Ranbir- Buddhu! Accident huwa hain?

Kanya- Main kahaan ho? Aur tum phir se?

Ranbir- Tum mar gaye ho.....

He is silent for a while.

Kanya- WOW!!

Ranbir- Wow? Kya reaction hain!!

Kanya- Nahin. Im with you. What more could I ask for?

Ranbir- When I died I was so upset.

Kanya- Badmash!

She hugs him again and they kiss. Bhagwan taps her shoulder.

Bhagwan- Beti tum dono ki shaadi ki tayyari teen saalon se ho rahi hain/

Kanya- Sachmuch?

Bhagwan- Haan beti. Ab jaldi jaake moon dholo. Phir yahaan aawo. Sab tumhari intazaar kar rahe hain.

Kanya- Aayi.

She runs upto a fountain and washes her face with the crystal clear water. She runs back and all the GODS and GODDESES welcome her warmly. The decoration is so beautiful. Kanya's and Ranbir's favorite flowers are everywhere. Slowly and steadily Kanya and Ranbir hold hands and complete the cermony.

At night all the Gods and Goddesses go to sleep. Kanya and Ranbir are in their room. They slowly and passionately kiss and start the suhag raat. AND ANOTHER COUPLE WAS RE-UNITED.

The End

This OS was written ENTIRELY by me and if you have read it somewhere else, well that is not my fault. This is purely a form of my own brilliant imagination!

Please leave your feedback please!!

Love,

Nidheya

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hey nidhz..nice OS..

Thanks for the detailed analysis Aisho

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Well

I am sorry, if you feel offended, but I have read this somewhere so I said it!

I did not mean to abuse you or your work.

You are really good writer, and I really mean it!

I am sorry once again!

x x