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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
loved it yaar......

awesome.......

mind blowing.......

do write of mayur more............

and thanks for the pm........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
awesome os
loved it
x x
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
You knw it was Awesum
jus loved it
It was jus fab fab fab
Loved it
Dodo was sweet
Sis convo was also Cute
And the way they remembered their memories was also Awesum
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
Hi,
it was awesome , awesome and just awesome.👏
👏I loved it from the core of my heart.
it was really very very nice.
mayur r rock.
thanx a lot 4 such a nice ff.
plz plz do write more on mayur.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
hey dear it was lovely..........
so nice part......
loved it
do write more os.........😊
n thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36

OMG Nidhz! Sorry was a little caught up with a few celebrations! I love Both the One-shots dear! The Mayur forever one indeed a little filmy! This One was Great..I loved the Kiss 😳 and the scene with sleepy DODO 😆

Great Job!

Love,

Lipsa

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Posted: 15 years ago
#37

This is a story of Kanya and Ranbir as usual but in a different concept. Kanya fell in love with Ranbir when she first saw him. He was super arrogant and stuff but yet she couldnt help falling for him. They hung out together basically coz Ranbir was dating Tanya, Kanya's best friend. Kanya came to know Ranbir better and better and she fell more into love with him. She wanted him to be happy so never let him know about her feelings, but wach time she saw him she fell more into love with him. Then came a disaster. Ranbir was dating Tanya and they were drunk. They had an accident. Tanya died on the spot. Ranbir survived but he had lost his eye sight. 1 year has passes by like this yet he had not regained his eyesight. Kanya loved him and was by his side always. Now Ranbir was listening to music and talking to her.

Ranbir- Kanya?

Kanya- Yes.....

Ranbir- Can I ask you a personal question?

Kanya- Of course Ranbir. Tum mujhe kitne saalon se jaante ho!

Ranbir- Are you sure?

Kanya- Yes.

Ranbir- Have you ever fallen in love?

Kanya- Kya?

Ranbir- have you ever fallen in love?

Kanya- Yes.

Ranbir- Kaun hain woh?

Kanya- Sorry.

Ranbir- Huh?

Kanya- I am sorry but nahin bata sakti main.

Ranbir- Lekin bhala kyun?

Kanya- Ranbir can we please switch the topics?

Ranbir- Kanya? Are you crying?

Kanya- Nahin toh. I just dont want to talk about love.

Ranbir- I am so sorry.

Kanya- Kyun?

Ranbir- Maine tujhe rulaya.

Kanya- Awwwww c'mon Ranbir! Maine tumhe kitne baar rulaya hain???

Ranbir- Kabhi nahin. You always made me feel special even though I am blind. You were there through thick and thin.

Kanya smiled.

Kanya- Ranbir!!! Tum mere dost ho! What are friends for?

Ranbir- Yes!

Kanya- Phir?

Ranbir- Phir kya?

Kanya- Kuch nahin!

Ranbir- You know Kanya sometimes I feel........I mean I always feel that you are so lucky.

Kanya- Kyun?

Ranbir- Tumhare paas aankhen hain. Tum dekh sakte ho.

Kanya- Ranbir......

Ranbir- Yes, I wish I could see the world. The world has become such a selfish and cruel place. No one wants to help me. No one.

Kanya- Ranbir aisa math kaho!!!!!!!!

Ranbir- Aisa hi hain naa?

Kanya- Nahin.....no....

Ranbir- Kanya I would give up anything to see again. I wish God would do something that I will be able to see magically maybe just for two minutes.

Kanya- Just imagine if you are able to see again for 5 mins what is the 1st thing you would want to see?

Ranbir- You.

Kanya- Kyun?

Ranbir- You are my best friend thats why.

Kanya- Thanks. (thinking- Ranbir you are my light. If I were blind I would still be able to see everything, through your eyes.....I hope you feel the same about me)

Ranbir- Kya soch rahe ho?

Kanya- Kuch nahin. Can I leave?

Ranbir- Okay. Bore ho gaye ho kya?

Kanya- Nahin. See you.

Ranbir- Bye.

Kanya goes from there and goes straight to Ranbir's doc.

Kanya- Yes doc, I am sure. I want to give up my eyes for Ranbir.

Doc- Are you sure Mam? You wont be able to.....

Kanya- Sir I want to. He is my life. I have loved him more than anybody else. This is the least I can do for him.

Doc- Okay. We will do the surgery on saturday.

Kanya- Please doc dont let him know.

Doc- Okay.

On sunday after the surgery, Ranbir has called for Kanya. He is shocked to see her without eyes.

Ranbir- KYYAAAA????

Kanya- Kya?

Ranbir- Where are your eyes?

Kanya- I had an accident too last month.

Ranbir- Oh man.....you are ugly. Go from here!

Kanya- Kyaaaa?

Ranbir- Yes just go!

Kanya goes from there sadly.

TWO WEEKS LATER

Kanya commits suicde on account of Ranbirs reaction. Ranbirs talking to doc.

Ran- Doc can I meet my donor?

Doc- She's dead.

Ran- Kya?

Doc- Yes, your friend Kanya.

Ran- Kanya? Kanya?

Doc- Yes. She commited suicde after your reaction about her eyes. She gave up her eyesight for you too see.

Rani- OH MAN! IM GOING!

Ranbir goes and sees her grave. Tears flow out of his eyes and he is devastated. He knows he has lost his true love forever. He knows that he can never meet someone like her again.


The End

Okay guys this is something I wrote AGES ago!! It was written when KIT had just gotten over! *Some* of you must have already read it then, but hope all you freshers like it too!

RanKan and MayUr are my TOP jodi's of forever, the only jodi's that have touched my heart!

By the way this story is inspired by an offline message I got on Yahoo messenger!!!!!!

Next will be a RK or SG one, I'm freshly writing an SG one, but have already gotten the RK one written down!

COMMENT COMMENT AND COMMENT!!

Love always,
Nidheya

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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
hey this was nice.......

but this is not original........

it is already on net..........

and not from now.........

i have read it when i was 10 yrs old..........

so u cant say that u wrote it.........

sorry frd.......i never wanted to say this......but seriously.......this is not urs.....so we cant say that the work is ours.....if it is not written by us......think abt the person who wrote this......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

hey this was nice.......

but this is not original........

it is already on net..........

and not from now.........

i have read it when i was 10 yrs old..........

so u cant say that u wrote it.........

sorry frd.......i never wanted to say this......but seriously.......this is not urs.....so we cant say that the work is ours.....if it is not written by us......think abt the person who wrote this......

Didn't you see what I have posted after the story??? That it is inspired from an offline message that I had received.
I wrote the entire story, just using that inspiration Mahak.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: NidheyaCole



Didn't you see what I have posted after the story??? That it is inspired from an offlinemessage that I had received.

I wrote the entire story, just using that inspiration Mahak.



ohk........but u said u r using the inspiration......ut the story is exactly like that......i mean u only changed the name..........

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