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Posted: 15 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

OMG...

okay so I started reading it and I was smiling because I always wanted to do something with RM and YN... so it was cute with how you had the Naina-Muskaan bonding...but the ending just killed it. WTF! I freaked out! ROFL! Thanks a lot Sumi. I'm scarred for life! ROFLMAO!!!!

lol I am so happy that I got to scar my komzie for life....aww you welcome!!!!! lol you write one on RM and YN...I'll be the first one to comment...I don't promise :P

Originally posted by: 26javey26

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Sumi this was just amazing
loved it a lot
Muskaan and Naina are so sweet

my fav line
"I mean...he left me...but not for a girl...he left me because he fell in love with Siddhant!" Naina exclaimed loudly leaving Muskaan with her mouth hanging open 🤣


you have to write another RD one shot

One RD shot coming up...lol i'll write one for you Javz for sure!!! lol and I am glad you liked it and had a good laugh!! thank you lol!

Originally posted by: *payal_15*

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Kitna emotional melodrama tha, and this was the reason? only you could think of this!
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Bechari Naina, look nits, sab ke dimaag me bhusa bhar diya tumne! Poor naina and tamzie! [koi JP aur Jiggy ko phone karo, so they can take theyre dulhanias away.]

lol thought you were reading a sad one-shot...well think again my superman lol....Nitz was the one who started all this SidRaaj stuff...lol i am just carrying it over just like how I carreid the name superman over :P
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
Anything for you :

GREAT FF !!
loved how you included everyone !
and loved how you showed Yuvi's love for Naina :))
...leaving me addicted to your ff !

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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
Left Alone :

Great part! very cute scenes between Naina & Muskaan , so sweet :)
and omg ! loved your ending !
one of your beessst cliffhangers !
cant wait for more

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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
Smile :

I Love your ff !!
you can imagine every description clearly !
its realy amazing :)
Love how everyone is pitching in && commenting about Yuvi or shall i say 'Yamesh' 😃
GREAT end segment ! loved it all :)
very enticing

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Posted: 15 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: princessuma

Okay...so here is another one for YuNa...um... it didn't turn out the way I wanted it to...so bear with me :P

Anything For You

"These are my friends and the ones who I spent two years of my internship life with...Armaan, Rahul, Muskaan, Riddhima and well you know my fiance, Anjail as well as your senior doctor, Nikita. And guys, these are the new interns of Sanjeevani...Siddhant, Tamana, JP, Jiggy who is really not an intern but a very dear part of the group, Naina and Yuvraaj." Everybody said hi as they were introduced by a very beaming Atul.
"So Siddhant, you and Tamana are dating?" Armaan smiled at the two interns who were standing very close to each other.
"Huh, huh...Tamana...Tamana is papa dude...I mean Omar bhai's daughter!" Sid and Tamana looked every where except at each other in embarassment.
"Dating? What does that mean Dr. Armaan?" Omar bhai looked at all of them with a confused expression.
"Uh....oh....what I meant was....that they are good friends", Armaan managed to say while Riddhima gave him an angry look
To avoid any further embarassment, everybody instead started to talk about the upcoming wedding, Atul and Anjail's wedding. While everybody were happily discussing the wedding, a pair of eyes were staring very intently at its object of affection. For the past few days, Yuvi's eyes were fixated at Naina, wherever she went so did he. Things were not the same anymore between them, instead they were the opposite. Yuvi had now adopted the habit of following Naina around as part of her...as her shadow.
Later in the Day
He had her against the wall again, with her arms securely locked as he tried to get past her defensive shield. She was struggling against him but like the past few months, she wasn't saying anything.
"Dammit Naina! Say something, why are you not talking to me? I hurted you I know, so why don't you yell at me for it? I was wrong about Dr. Shashank and it was wrong to use you for revenge, so yell at me for that. Hit me for all I care! Please, do or say something! Your silence and indifference is killing me. Please!" Yuvi's eyes teared up but Naina did not budge.
He let go of her and punched the glass window next to them in frustration. But this time, Naina didn't come running to his aid, she stood there in silence as a walking dead. She continued to stand at the same spot as Yuvi struggled to provide himself first aid and as a tear rolled down his cheek. After few minutes of watching his struggle, she moved....without saying a word, she helped Yuvi bandage his hand....and then she left.
Next Day
"Yuvi, what happened to your hand?" Tamana questioned with a worried look, though Yuvi did not answer.
"C'mon angry young man! What's wrong? Seems like you're extra upset today!" Sid commented looking amused but worried
When Yuvi did not respond again, Sid got up to examine Yuvi's hand but before he got there...Jiggy came running into the room.
"Guys, you won't believe it! Naina...naina", Yuvi's eyes shot up at the mention of her name. "She has agreed to come to the wedding as my date!" Jiggy fixed his glasses with a broad smile which soon vanished when he noticed Yuvi's angry stare.
"Um...Yuvi....you and Naina have broken up! So...so I can go out with her...right guys?" Jiggy looked at his friends for approval who looked as scared as him.
"Broke up? Dr. Yuvraaj, when were you and Naina dating?" a recently walked in Dr. Shashank questioned in all seriousness
Before anyone could answer, Naina came into the room, looking as gloomy as she had been looking for the last couple of months.
"You're coming to the wedding with Jiggy?" Yuvi looked at Naina in anger
He knew the answer....silence, but he still asked hoping she would answr...and she did.
"Yes! Why do you care about what I do?" Naina looked at Yuvi expressionless
Instead of answering Yuvi pressed hard on the water glass he was holding in his injured hand. When it broke, a few shrieks and his name was heard but Naina didn't say anything. He continued to press on the broken glass until she finally gave in....
"What are you doing, Yuvi? What are you trying to prove by doing this? Stop it!" Naina snatched the pieces of glass from him thus injuring her own hand.
"Why did you hurt yourself for me Naina? Why? What do you want from me? Naina...naina...I apologized didn't I? Why can't you forget it?" Yuvi's voice softened as he grabbed hold of Naina's waist and brought her closer to him
"No Yuvi, the correct question is what do you want from me? I am tired of covering up for your mistakes Yuvi! Why can't you leave me alone?" Naina's voice sounded angry but tired
"Covering up for my mistake? Is that what is bothering you, Naina? Fine then let me make this easier for you!" turns to Dr. Shashank. "Dr. Shashank, I was the one who entered your cabin without your permission....every time. It wasn't Naina!" Dr. Shashank looked at him in shock, while Naina tried to silence him. "I was the one who sabatoged your mask during that big surgery, Naina accidently took the mask...that's why she fainted...." Yuvi continued to tell Dr. Shashank of all the time Naina covered his mistakes, while Naina continued to get him to shut up.
"Sir, you can do whatever you want with me...but Naina....I love you! And I am willing to do anything and everything for you! You just need to ask! If I can go to any extent for my revenge, you cannot even begin to imagine...what I can do for you Naina", Yuvi kissed Naina's forehead before leaving the room, leaving a very shocked Naina behind.

hye sumaiya..
its different story.... ya very different ending too..hmm..but loved to see yuvi feeling for naina..and how he confessed to shashank for naina..he do love her..!!
good wishes..
sri:-)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: princessuma

Hey people...lol a new one-shot dedicated to Sneha!!! but sorry babes it didn't turn out the way you wanted it...hope you forgive me!! but i'll try a better one again!! looking forward to reading your's though!!1

Smile

"You haven't lost your smile at all, it's right under your nose. You just forgot it was there."
Ever sicne she had come back home, he noticed that she seem really lost and upset. Whenever he tried to talk to her, she would make an excuse and avoid the topic. He was even more surprised that when his friend offered a proposal for his son, Naina accepted it immediately. Unlike the other times, she didn't make any excuse or try to drive the groom away.
He noticed Naina getting more quieter as the marriage preparations started. When he asked her to invite her collegues from Sanjeevani to the wedding, she made an excuse.
"If she isn't calling them, than why don't you? You know Dr. Shashank, call him! And ask him to bring along all of Naina's friends, she will feel very happy," Mrs Mehta handed her husband the phone.
Everyone came besides him, she told herself that it was for the better, but her eyes still searched for him. She was soon distracted from her thoughts when she was called down to meet her in-laws.
He saw her coming down the stairs looking like an angel descending from the sky. She was the beautiful woman on Earth, and beyond....pity he couldn't reach out and hug her. She approaced him with a smile very unlike of her's, which made his heart twist in an unbelievable way. Well, he had come back to get her Naina smile back and he would do that no matter what.
She had never seen a guy as hideous as the one sitting before her, it seem as if had taken extra effort to look that way. On top of it all, his eyes or rather what looked like his eyes, were shaped exactly like....like Yuvi's. She shuddered at the thought, as much as she loved Yuvi, she did not want to be reminded of him....or his betrayal. After she was displayed like a china doll in front of in-laws, she was taken back to her room.
"Did she recognize him?" JP looked at Mr. Mehta with a questioning look
"No....no! She is my daughter! If I couldn't catch her lies, how can she catch mine?" Mr. Mehta patted JP on the back with a smile.
"Well....she is gone now, can I please get out of this freaking sari. I am starting to doubt my gender now", Mac tried to take the sari off in front of everyone but was jumped on by the others.
"Guys, chill! It's just a matter of few days...I'll make Naina forgive me soon," Yuvi took the fake mustache off
"Well, punjabi idiot....I know my daughter, she will forgive you in no time....though she might get angry at you again for lying", Yuvi hit his forehead in frustration and fear
Next Morning
"Aeh Naina, I was wondering....why don't you spend some time with Vamesh. He is such a nice boy", Mr. Mehta exclaimed with exageration while the others tried to surpress their giggles.
"Yeah Naina, uncle dude is right! That Yu....Yamesh seems really nice!" Sid tried really hard to sound genuine especially since Naina was making weird faces.
"Yea, yea flowerji! He is nice....very nice! Right Jiggy?" JP poked Jiggy in the ribs to get his attention
The rest of the gang, including Dr. Shashank started to praise the groom to no end until....
"STOP!!" Naina jumped out of her chair and glared at everyone on the table. "What's with you all? Fine he is a nice boy, I agree! You don't all have to spell it out for me", Naina sat down but couldn't help wondering what was with her friends and family these days.
"Aye, punjabi dikra! I just called to tell you Naina has agreed to go out with you. Make sure you don't mess up this time. Over and out, your guju sasur", Mr. Mehta held the phone as a walkie talkie while talking and failed to heart that the person on the other side was Mac and not Yuvi.
After getting off the phone, Mac burst into an uncontrollable laughter....
"Have you lost it or something? Why are you laughing as a lunatic? And who was on the phone? Wait...why did you pick my phone up?" Yuvi looked at Mac as if he had just grown two heads
"Yu...Yuh...Yuvi....man...your...your sausur...", Mac failed to complete his sentence, which frustrated Yuvi to no end
"My sasur...you mean Naina's dad was on the phone. Why didn't you call me? And what did he say", Yuvi jumped on a laughing Mac to stop him from laughing.
"Yuvi...Yuvi...I swear...if I was a lady and 40 years older...I would have seriously eloped with this man! But....but that would have made me your saas...imgaine that Yuvi", Mac started to laugh even more at the thought of being Yuvi's saas.
"Well...you did become my mother yesterday! Enjoy being Naina's saas, why don't you?" Yuvi got off Mac and smirked at him
Mac stopped laughing immediately and gave Yuvi a dirty look before telling him what Mr. Mehta said...though, since Mr. Mehta forgot to tell the time and day for the date...Yuvi had to call him back..
"Hello, who is it?", Mr. Mehta yelled into the phone
"Um...sir...it's Yuvi! You didn't tell the time and the date actually....when is she meeting me", Yuvi rubbed his ear
"Why didn't you ask me before when I called you? Don't you know how dangerous it is to talk right now? Stupid Punjabi dikra! I am sure you will mess up again!", Mr. Mehta yelled...though he shushed as soon as he saw his wife glaring at him
"Sir...time?", Yuvi tried to sound as polite as possible...even if he was feeling a bit frustrated
"Oh...time...well...oh ya...at 6 meet her in the Lalawanti part...I hope you know where it is and if you don't...make sure you know", Mr. Mehta cut the call, leaving Yuvi seething in anger
"Yuvi...control dude!" Mac put his hand on Yuvi's shoulder
"Sorry, I'm fine! I just can't believe this!" Yuvi smiled broadly. "I hated these kind of people...who told me what to do and what not to do! Sir is exactly like that and I do get frustrated with him...but than I don't mind it that much...or at least I calm down more quickly. Love is such a beautiful feeling", Yuvi starts to day-dream about Naina with a goofy smile on his face...leaving Mac to stare at his almost unrecognizable friend.
At 6 in the park
Yuvi waited for Naina in his Yamesh get-up for at least an hour before she showed up...looking as mesmerizing as ever. She noticed him checking her out carefully...for some reason she got the same goosebumps as when Yuvi used to check her out. She mentally kicked herself for thinking about him again and instead plastered a fake smile on her face as she approached Yamesh.
"Hi, how are you?", Naina tried to sound as if she was really glad to see him but failed miserably
Yuvi answered really casually as if he was really Yamesh and not fooling Naina into believing that he was. They both walked up to the nearest bench and Naina sat as far apart from him as possible. They talked about random things...and Yuvi made up Yamesh's life as they went along...
"Um...Nainaji...don't mind me asking but have you ever had a boyfriend...or I mean someone that you liked or loved?" Yuvi asked the question as it was the most casual thing to ask
Naina grew quieter and didn't respond to the question immediately...
"No! There was never a guy in my life", Naina lied through her teeth
"Why do you lie when you can't", Yuvi shut his eyes in frustration as he realized what he just said
Naina looked at him in surprise...she really felt as if Yuvi was right there with her...commenting on her lying ability as he always did. Her eyes started to tear up, she immediately got up and sad a quick bye before leaving the place as fast as her feet could take her.
"I knew you would mess it up, stupid Punjabi dikra!" Yuvi looked at his side as Mr. Mehta came out of his hiding
"I am sorry...I just wanted to know if she remembers me", Mr. Mehta noticed unshed tears in Yuvi's eyes
"She is very stubborn...but...but she remembers you!", Mr. Mehta patted Yuvi's back
"But she doesn't want to talk to me....or have anything to do with me", Yuvi looked down at his hands to avoid meeting the eyes of the older gentleman
"Of course she doesn't want anything to do with you! What you did to her is unforgettable but...it is not unforgivable! You had your reasons...and if I, your friends...and Dr. Shashank can understand them...than so will she", Mr. Mehta took his hand off Yuvi's shoulder and looked at the kids playing in front of them
Yuvi looked up to watch the same kids play...they sat there silently for half an hour before they got up to leave
"Yuvi...you've broken my daughter's trust once...please don't do it again! You're a nice boy...at least I am sure you are...please it's a father's plead", Mr. Mehta folded his hands in front of Yuvi...who immediately broke it apart
"Sir...please...don't! I like you better when you yell at me and call me stupid! Don't worry this time I'll make sure that the smile stays on her face...the Naina smile", Yuvi tried to smile with the same unshed tears in his eyes.
As they both left together...a figure emerged from behind the tree with floating tears
At Home
"Papa, how could YOU break my trust like that?" Naina yelled as soon as she got home and confronted her father.
"Naina...what are you talking about?" Mr. Mehta got up from his chair
"What am I talking about? You...you...actually all of you broke my trust! There is no Yamesh right? That's Yuvi isn't he?" Naina wiped the dried tears from her cheeks
"Naina...I...we...", Mr. Mehta tried to explain but failed to come with an explanation
"Forget it, Papa! It doesn't matter anymore! I am so used to betrayals that one more will not hurt me anymore", Naina started to walk up to her room when she heard the door open
"He didn't break your trust! It was all my idea...I am the one who has betrayed you again!" Yuvi looked at others as they shook their head to stop him
"You're right Yuvi...it is all your fault! Ever since you've come into my life...all I've been suffering from is betrayal...before you made me lose trust in love and now in my family and friends", Naina's words were filled with venom which Yuvi could taste in his mouth surprisingly
"I agree it is my fault...but everybody get's one chance...am I not allowed to have one chance either? I told you Naina that I can't even stop myself from betraying even if I want to...I really wanted to Naina. You don't know how much I hurt myself physically and emotionally for all I did to you", Yuvi's voice sounded more weak than Naina had ever heard
"How do you expect me to trust you again, Yuvi? How?" Naina turned back to face Yuvi with a tear in her eyes
"Don't trust me! At least not right away...but give me a chance to prove myself...just once chance and I promise this is the last chance", Yuvi looked straight into Naina's eyes...hoping she could see honesty in his eyes.
"I want to Yuvi...but...", Naina couldn't decide if she should listen to her heart or her brain
"Naina...I heard in a movie that when there is a battle between heart and brain...the heart always win...please listen to your heart", Naina looked at Yuvi in surprised. "Well..I've been watching way too many movies these days...how else do you think I got the idea to dress Mac like a girl? And convince Sid that though I sabatoged his plan to get his love with lying...he should support me with this lie" Yuvi tried to lighten up the atmosphere
Instead of answering, Naina looked around the room and saw everyone beaming at both of them...as well as finally noticing Mac...who was standing there beside her mom dressed as a woman. She looked back at Yuvi and finally gave him a Naina smile...she may not trust him but she was definately willing to give him a chance...especially after he went through all this effort for her.

hey sumaiya.⭐️
nice OS again..mac dressed as women?hehe 😆and yuvi with fake moustache?hehe!!!😆
poor yuvi has done so much for "smile" of naina..😃
mr.mehta calling him -punjabi dingra!!hehe!!! 😆so atlast he got the nainas smile back.😊.
good one sumaiya..
loved it..especially yuvi trying so hard to get back nainas smile and all friends n nainas dad n shashank helping them too..😊
good wishes..
sri:-)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@rosh....OMG you finally commented...thank you *hug* and I am glad you liked it....lol hopefully you like the next one I am going to post right now
@sri...thanks for commenting!! *hug* and I am so glad you liked the weird endings lol...thanks once again!!!
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OMG lol the latest oneshot I think got the most comment...lol thank you all for liking and appreciating the bomb I threw in the last line :P....lol this is what I think about when I am suppose to be working :P...kk time for another one...don't worry both the ff will be updated lol soon

p.s. lol btw this is for Ash...since she suggested it to me....*hug* and I hope you like it (lol tell me if you don't)

Something New...Something Old

4th Month

"Bhabhi, I think you should rest now!" Roshini tried to get her sister-in-law to sit down
"Rosh....but I want to dance! I feel like dancing!" Naina whined and refused to budge
"Bhabhi, seriously! If bhaiyya catches you dancing in this condition....we both will be served for dinner tonight!" Rosh tried to reason with her adamant bhabi
"Not both of us...but the three of us!" Naina rubbed her tummy with a silly smile...still dancing though
"Yes bhabhi, all three of us will be dead! Now can you please sit down", Roshini rolled her eyes and tried to drag Naina to the nearest sofa
"Okay...okay I will sit down", Naina finally stopped dancing and sat down

6th Month

"Hey...I'm home!" Yuvi called out and headed to the living room to look for his wife

"Yuvi!!! You're home!" Naina nearly jumped on Yuvi and hugged him really tightly, while Yuvi just laughed

"Yes, I'm home! When I left in the morning...my wife was semi-normal...has she completely switched into a child now?" Yuvi joked as he hugged her back

"Ha ha ha, very funny! Um...I just missed you!!" Naina got out of his arm and gave him a kiss on the cheek

"Well...I missed you too! Especially since the hospital seems really quiet and in-control ever since you have taken the maternity leave", Yuvi held Naina from her waist gently and brought her closer so he could nibble on her neck.

"Yu...Yuvi....get off of me! You...you just missed me because the hospital is quieter ever since I left?" Naina got teary-eyed

"Na...Naina...I was just joking baby! Do you really think that I don't miss you when I'm at Sanjeevani! I have a lot of memories attached to you at that place! C'mon don't cry", Yuvi kissed her softly under both her eyes

"You've changed so much Yuvi! There was a time when my pain didn't matter to you...my tears would just make you back off but you never consoled me." Naina gave a teary smile to Yuvi

"That's what you think! Your tears....your pain has always mattered to me...I just had a stronger urge to override that emotion. And you know what I am glad I've changed...I'm glad you broke through my shield! You saved me Naina and I will never be thankful enough for that", Naina silenced Yuvi by putting her finger on Yuvi's lips

"Haven't you heard...no thank you or sorry in love?", Naina smile cutely

"Isn't it no thank you or sorry in friendship?" Yuvi raised his eyebrow

"Ooooh....looks like someone is turning all filmy!" Naina started to laugh and was joined by Yuvi

7 months

"YUVI!!!!!!" Yuvi came running out of the washroom in nothing but shorts when he heard his wife scream his name
"Naina...Naina...what's wrong?" Yuvi frantically approached Naina who was sitting on the bed against the head board
"Oh....nothing! I just can't get the remote for the tv to work....fix it!" Naina gave a cute frown to her husband who seem to have lost his sanity.
8th month
"Naina...there is no burger joint open at 4 in the morning. I'll make it for you at home", Yuvi chased after his speed walking wife.
"But...Yuvi! I want it right now and I don't want one made at home!" Naina halted and turned to look at her husband with child-like anger
"Naina, it's 4 am...what do you want me to do?" his mother had warned him that preganancy was hard but he never imagined it would be this hard
"Let's find a joint...and wake the owner up!" Naina turned back and started walking
"And what if he doesn't wake up?" Yuvi reasoned with her
"Well...then you'll break into the shop just like you did when I wanted the dress. Oh yeah and make the burger for me too!" Naina started to walk faster
"But...I'll still be the one making it....NAINA!" Yuvi ran after his adamant wife
9th month
"Yuvi...you jerk!! How could you do this to me...do you really hate me so much", Naina grabbed a frantic looking Yuvi's collars
"Dr. Naina....calm down! You need to focus your energy on pushing....not abusing Dr. Yuvraaj", Muskaan tried to calm down a very angry Naina
"Dr. Muskaan...you don't know these men! Especially Yuvi!!" Naina pulled Yuvi hard by the collars....making him trumble forward
"Na....Naina! Breathe! Please! Baby Naina...remember?" Yuvi pointed at her tummy to distract her
"Baby....!" Naina let go of Yuvi's collars and started to smile for the first time since the last two hours.
"Dr. Naina....I want you to push as hard as you can! You can grab onto Dr. Yuvraaj's hand...but please concentrate on pushing", Muskaan was starting to get really frustrated with her patient.
The labour continued for another two hours...but this time Naina was a bit calmer though she was still abusing Yuvi. She continuously digged her nails into his arm...which left him yellling in pain after ever few minutes. If Muskaan hadn't seen this before...she wouldn't have guessed who was giving birth...both of them were screaming in pain.
After two hours
A cry is heard...and Muskaan displays a tiny red baby to Yuvi and Naina
"Congratulations Doctors!! You have a girl!!" Muskaan gave a smile to the proud parents before handing the baby to the nurse so she can clean her up.
"Hey...you okay?" Yuvi asked a crying Naina as he held onto her by the shoulders
"I love you, Yuvi!" Naina put her head on his shoulder
"Really? It didn't seem like it few minutes ago!" Yuvi tried to lighten the mood
"Don't you know Yuvi...I can hurt you...just like you can hurt me...but at the end of the day we both love each other a lot, right?" Naina looked up to meet the smiling face of her husband who nodded in agreement
A month later
"Yuvi...it's your turn now!" Naina poked Yuvi in the rib to wake him up
"Huh...huh...ooo...Soni....crying...ouch!" Yuvi hit the bed table as he got up to attend to his crying baby
He walked up to the cot and was just about to pick Soni up when he noticed that she stopped crying. She was looking at him now with an amused expression...with one of her eyebrow raised.
"Um...Naina...can a baby raise her eyebrow when she a month old", Yuvi looked horrified at his baby as he yelled out to his sleeping wife.
Edited by princessuma - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey!!
it was awesome. OMG!! I cant stop lauhing!! really sweet os.loved it.
thanx for the pm.
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aww..
it was such a sweet os..
very cute one sumi!

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