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Posted: 15 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: *payal_15*

Heck ya its pissing me off, and i thought you were team naina! what is this?😡

Lana ki me band baja doongi!😆

lol I am in Team Naina....lol but still the siggy is awesome :P
and leave my bff alone...superman :P
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: princessuma

lol I am in Team Naina....lol but still the siggy is awesome :P
and leave my bff alone...superman :P

Superman kisiko nahi chodti😆
Uski toh kher nahi..tu dekh the next time i see her, im gonna kill her.
Team naina ke saath aisi bewafai? me tujhe apni position se impeach karwa doongi!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
hey s🤣u 🤣m🤣a🤣i🤣y🤣a🤣..
wud 😆u😆 allow 😆me😆 to 😆breathe..😆
na leave it..
gosh such a great OS dear..😃
loved it..YuNa at their best again..wow!!naina and pregnant...😉
yuvi seems to be too much fast in his actions😉
"Not both of us...but the three of us!"
"Ooooh....looks like someone is turning all filmy!"
"Oh....nothing! I just can't get the remote for the tv to work....fix it!"
"Well...then you'll break into the shop just like you did when I wanted the dress. Oh yeah and make the burger for me too!"
"But...I'll still be the one making it....NAINA!"
"Yuvi...you jerk!! How could you do this to me...do you really hate me so much",
"Really? It didn't seem like it few minutes ago!" Yuvi tried to lighten the mood
"Don't you know Yuvi...I can hurt you...just like you can hurt me...but at the end of the day we both love each other a lot, right?"
"Um...Naina...can a baby raise her eyebrow when she a month old",
the wackiest lines i have ever heard 🤣
gosh u r too much Cra.. 🤣🤣🤣..hmm..
u r wackhy!!!🤣🤣🤣
good one and thanks for PM..
good wishes..
sri:-)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: princessuma

OMG lol the latest oneshot I think got the most comment...lol thank you all for liking and appreciating the bomb I threw in the last line :P....lol this is what I think about when I am suppose to be working :P...kk time for another one...don't worry both the ff will be updated lol soon

p.s. lol btw this is for Ash...since she suggested it to me....*hug* and I hope you like it (lol tell me if you don't)

Something New...Something Old

4th Month

"Bhabhi, I think you should rest now!" Roshini tried to get her sister-in-law to sit down
"Rosh....but I want to dance! I feel like dancing!" Naina whined and refused to budge
"Bhabhi, seriously! If bhaiyya catches you dancing in this condition....we both will be served for dinner tonight!" Rosh tried to reason with her adamant bhabi
"Not both of us...but the three of us!" Naina rubbed her tummy with a silly smile...still dancing though
"Yes bhabhi, all three of us will be dead! Now can you please sit down", Roshini rolled her eyes and tried to drag Naina to the nearest sofa
"Okay...okay I will sit down", Naina finally stopped dancing and sat down
what did she do to make him not only love her but marry her as well??😳 lol we need this for our script 😆

6th Month

"Hey...I'm home!" Yuvi called out and headed to the living room to look for his wife

"Yuvi!!! You're home!" Naina nearly jumped on Yuvi and hugged him really tightly, while Yuvi just laughed

"Yes, I'm home! When I left in the morning...my wife was semi-normal...has she completely switched into a child now?" Yuvi joked as he hugged her back

"Ha ha ha, very funny! Um...I just missed you!!" Naina got out of his arm and gave him a kiss on the cheek

"Well...I missed you too! Especially since the hospital seems really quiet and in-control ever since you have taken the maternity leave", Yuvi held Naina from her waist gently and brought her closer so he could nibble on her neck.

"Yu...Yuvi....get off of me! You...you just missed me because the hospital is quieter ever since I left?" Naina got teary-eyed

"Na...Naina...I was just joking baby! Do you really think that I don't miss you when I'm at Sanjeevani! I have a lot of memories attached to you at that place! C'mon don't cry", Yuvi kissed her softly under both her eyes

"You've changed so much Yuvi! There was a time when my pain didn't matter to you...my tears would just make you back off but you never consoled me." Naina gave a teary smile to Yuvi

"That's what you think! Your tears....your pain has always mattered to me...I just had a stronger urge to override that emotion. And you know what I am glad I've changed...I'm glad you broke through my shield! You saved me Naina and I will never be thankful enough for that", Naina silenced Yuvi by putting her finger on Yuvi's lips

"Haven't you heard...no thank you or sorry in love?", Naina smile cutely

"Isn't it no thank you or sorry in friendship?" Yuvi raised his eyebrow

"Ooooh....looks like someone is turning all filmy!" Naina started to laugh and was joined by Yuvi

aww mood swings lol and i guess he has lost his ability of AYM due to his wife's mood swing lmao
7 months
"YUVI!!!!!!" Yuvi came running out of the washroom in nothing but shorts when he heard his wife scream his name
"Naina...Naina...what's wrong?" Yuvi frantically approached Naina who was sitting on the bed against the head board
"Oh....nothing! I just can't get the remote for the tv to work....fix it!" Naina gave a cute frown to her husband who seem to have lost his sanity.
🤣🤣 left me speechless. we are definitely incorporating this in our scrip *makes note *
8th month
"Naina...there is no burger joint open at 4 in the morning. I'll make it for you at home", Yuvi chased after his speed walking wife.
"But...Yuvi! I want it right now and I don't want one made at home!" Naina halted and turned to look at her husband with child-like anger
"Naina, it's 4 am...what do you want me to do?" his mother had warned him that preganancy was hard but he never imagined it would be this hard
"Let's find a joint...and wake the owner up!" Naina turned back and started walking
"And what if he doesn't wake up?" Yuvi reasoned with her
"Well...then you'll break into the shop just like you did when I wanted the dress. Oh yeah and make the burger for me too!" Naina started to walk faster
"But...I'll still be the one making it....NAINA!" Yuvi ran after his adamant wife
hehe he can never beat our princess, lets add this to over scrip as well
9th month
"Yuvi...you jerk!! How could you do this to me...do you really hate me so much", Naina grabbed a frantic looking Yuvi's collars
"Dr. Naina....calm down! You need to focus your energy on pushing....not abusing Dr. Yuvraaj", Muskaan tried to calm down a very angry Naina
"Dr. Muskaan...you don't know these men! Especially Yuvi!!" Naina pulled Yuvi hard by the collars....making him trumble forward
"Na....Naina! Breathe! Please! Baby Naina...remember?" Yuvi pointed at her tummy to distract her
"Baby....!" Naina let go of Yuvi's collars and started to smile for the first time since the last two hours.
"Dr. Naina....I want you to push as hard as you can! You can grab onto Dr. Yuvraaj's hand...but please concentrate on pushing", Muskaan was starting to get really frustrated with her patient.
The labour continued for another two hours...but this time Naina was a bit calmer though she was still abusing Yuvi. She continuously digged her nails into his arm...which left him yellling in pain after ever few minutes. If Muskaan hadn't seen this before...she wouldn't have guessed who was giving birth...both of them were screaming in pain.
😆 its painback time yuvi...you hurt her emotionally and she will hurt you physically lmao. ok we are also adding this in our scrip 😳
After two hours
A cry is heard...and Muskaan displays a tiny red baby to Yuvi and Naina
"Congratulations Doctors!! You have a girl!!" Muskaan gave a smile to the proud parents before handing the baby to the nurse so she can clean her up.
"Hey...you okay?" Yuvi asked a crying Naina as he held onto her by the shoulders
"I love you, Yuvi!" Naina put her head on his shoulder
"Really? It didn't seem like it few minutes ago!" Yuvi tried to lighten the mood
"Don't you know Yuvi...I can hurt you...just like you can hurt me...but at the end of the day we both love each other a lot, right?" Naina looked up to meet the smiling face of her husband who nodded in agreement
A month later
"Yuvi...it's your turn now!" Naina poked Yuvi in the rib to wake him up
"Huh...huh...ooo...Soni....crying...ouch!" Yuvi hit the bed table as he got up to attend to his crying baby
He walked up to the cot and was just about to pick Soni up when he noticed that she stopped crying. She was looking at him now with an amused expression...with one of her eyebrow raised.
"Um...Naina...can a baby raise her eyebrow when she a month old", Yuvi looked horrified at his baby as he yelled out to his sleeping wife.
🤣 hehe she got yuvi's qualities...i dont know if i should be happy or upset! man only one month old and already scaring yuvi - oh wait maybe she got that from naina, you know in oder to change him and all. yep we are addin this as well although i dont know how we can make baby raise one eyebrow but i am sure with both of us working together we can figure it out 😛

sumaiya mere jaan how do you come up with all these brilliant ideas one after another? i loved this and i am saving it. hey maybe we can send all of your one shot collections to the writers...maybe then they will realize how to make yuvi normal lol. i have to go for my exam in an hour and here i am reading this hehe
i just hope i dont write this on my final. i think this is my favorite one shot ever! first yuvi messes with her and now she and baby does, poor guy, he has no clue what he has gotten himself into. i guess he should be thankful that naina decided to give birth to only one baby and twins or worst 😛
thanks for the pm and are you ready for tomorrow? lol
Edited by ilive2laugh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
Suma 🤗

You wrote a shot for me. Thanks honey. Thanks a ton. It was wonderful. I totally loved it. You captured each and every emotion of a pregnant woman beautifully. I remember waking up my husband at midnight in houston and asking him to take me out for an ice-cream. 😆 And my baby Yuvi is all besotted with Naina and is at her every beck and call. Cho chweet. And our princess is not letting one opportunity go to make him attend to her needs. 😆 And loved the last line. Jaisa baap, waisi beti!! 🤣

BTW, The earlier one was fab. I was wondering oh, this is gonna be a cry-fest with Naina and Muski. But Yuvi and Sid? That was the punchline of the shot. Awesome dear.

Thanks a ton again for the shot. Love you. And keep writing.

Love,
Ash
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
"That's what you think! Your tears....your pain has always mattered to me...I just had a stronger urge to override that emotion. And you know what I am glad I've changed...I'm glad you broke through my shield! You saved me Naina and I will never be thankful enough for that", Naina silenced Yuvi by putting her finger on Yuvi's lips.

👏👏👏......I love this one! And these are my favourite lines. It only makes me love Yuvi all the more. Well-written. Emotions in cute mode.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
ooow! sumi thins was fantatic dude!

lolz naina abusing YV in tht condition too!

thts quite natural!

n baby can raise one eye brow!

lolz sumi ur a master
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
@payal...superman ki bacchi...meri lana ko chor...don't you dare hurt her lol and I am not giving up my position at any cost...you're just a mere director...I am the CEO :P
@sri....lol I hope you're calm now :P....lol thanks for liking it!! and good you didn't say i am crazy...cus I am not...lol and I am not whacky either...I am just special :P
@sneha...lol we are so incorporating all this in our script...and sending this to the CVs won't help...we have to take action...lol btw I know you're writing an exam right now (9:14am)...good luck with it!!!
@ash *hug*...aww I am so glad you liked it...I was really hoping you would! lol and your poor hubby...gosh I hope I torture my future hubby as much too :P..and thanks so much!!!
@nitz...lol you do realize that this one wasn't for you...the one before was...lol I hope you get around to reading that one as well...and thank you
@anwaya...aww thank you!!!! lol I really wanna see Naina abusing Yuvi as she did when she was drunk...lol
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
That was so AWESOME and so adorably cute !!

The raising eyebrow part was HILARIOUS !

Keep Writing !

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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
anything for u

aww another awesum piece of work by u wow ss im addicted to ur writing now lolz great work
jst loved yuvi followin naina and all and finally tellin shanky about his doing and the kiss on he forehead shooo adorable awesum work ss keep it up

*claps and hugs*

luv u
nadz

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