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yes I agree with you Sabz. It sounded like a rushed storyline 😔. I love this ff and would never mind having more parts of it, atleast not at the cost of those sweet moments we get to read. This part sounded like a summary of 10 years.
And I think it was mixture of past and present. Not sure if you are planning to have an intersection point of both the versions and reveal the twist in the story.
Kanu
when you write a book a writer can never change the pace of the story because when u are writring no one are there to tell you plz make the pace of the story fast or slow. i wish beegi write the story in a way she wanted to write. slow pace. because making this story rush it will ruin it.
thank god some one agree with me ..." i will never mind having more parts of it,atlest not at the cost of those sweet moments." you are so right . same here. i really want to read there high school moments ... university moments . what happend after prom etc. after that i would like to read there present. i think angad and kripa past is more interesting.
Bigg Boss 19
Ganesh Kartikeya
