It Had To Be You (part 11) AK ff pg 121 4/26/10 - Page 91

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Posted: 15 years ago
Awww di.......wat a great part...👏

finally kripa's falling for Angad.....loved it....😳

so Kripa went to BU for Angad...but wonder that wats happened in all this time...😕

seems like a Mishty's nice girl.....hope she's help Angad n Kripa together...😳

n just hate Kripa's dad....he's sooo mean...😡

plz di continue soon....cant wait for next part...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks...

@Sahr....u will have to wait and see why AK separated

@angullgrl...yeah i ha dto change pace on public demand

@aati....yeah the story will now move in two opposite directions with angad's and kripa's narration

@mittal...sorry about the delay. Let's see what happened when they were in college together

@teri susan....lot's of questions but answers will be revealed gradually. No Ekta style twists though lolz

@anshu.....good guesses but u will have to wait and see how things unravel
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks...

@Kanu.,...i think i forgot to send PMs to everyone this time :(

@Rachu....yeah even i liked the angad's narration as it was something new for me but this way, the story will move faster...in both directions now :)

@sanyoprithviraj....no,don't worry, aisa kuch bhi nahin hoga :)

@Monu...yeah, Mishti is a good gal this time

@Johanangad...u will have to wait for answers :)

@love_kyph....kuch tho dhamak hua hoga college mein :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi!! Sorry for the late comments..just finished my finals.
Loved the last two parts!!! they were great as usual. will post the detailed comments later.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey that was a lovely story.
i love all the way from infants to adults
add me in new readers 😉

wud really love to read more of it

plz add me to pm list if any
still i'll keep it as bookmark to avoid any part missings:)

continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice update di,

My mind was working way overtime .
I wonder why Kripa didnt want to talk about him when she went to boston for Angad.

May be , there too he didnt stop his flirty ways or atleast not let her know what he feels for her.

Suspense building up just like steam in pressure cooker :D


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sabzz

i didnt liked this part that much . when ever i used to read the parts of this fan-fic they were so amazing but this one was not that good compared to other parts of this ff . first because i love angad pov it was the BEST thing in this f-f . i love they way you written this fan-fic before. and when you revealed the Present in this fan-fic i didnt like it. i think you should have first shown the past i want to read about there high school and university days revealing the present a little bit its not now fun to read . as first you should tell us all about the past then present . this part was kind of depressing . like now we already know that something bad happenend in a-k life so why read the happy past because ak are going to be sperated and then after sepration they are going to be together. no suspence if left plus i missed angad pov alot . it was so good . this story was diffrent because of the angad pov which you used to write in a way that no one could write. such a good writing style it had. i hope the next part is good plus i felt this part was short compared to other but maybe because u showed a present a little . i mean didnt showed anything after prom etc . i hope the nxt part contains more of the past then the future. i would love to know what presently is happening in ak life but after reading the past.
beegi sorry if you feel bad about what i said about this part . its just my opinion but i am just telling what i felt while reading this part. just a comment sorry if i hurted your feelings.😳😛



yes I agree with you Sabz. It sounded like a rushed storyline 😔. I love this ff and would never mind having more parts of it, atleast not at the cost of those sweet moments we get to read. This part sounded like a summary of 10 years.

And I think it was mixture of past and present. Not sure if you are planning to have an intersection point of both the versions and reveal the twist in the story.

Kanu
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks...

@Deepa...yeah changed the narration because of public demand. All questions will be answered as story unravels...thanks :)

@Vallanki...he he, u know surya well...bahut ffs likhi hai na. Yeah the only way to expedite the speed was a leap...u know how much i love leaps lolz. But now this track will move in two directions....and meet at the confession?? :)

@sheldev...sorry didn't send a PM to anyone...my bad :(

@Karipa...will continue soon for sure :)

@simply.me...yeah college days will have more AK scenes :)

@angad_kripafan...well, don't say her life is ruined. Sometimes, u get the best after going through some hardships. U know Bill gates is a college drop out too :)

@Ak-karansha....true love?I didn't understand :( Sorry, i didn't send PMs to anyone this time...got too busy with other stuff :( so don't feel bad..it'smy fault

@angadluvkripa...yeah the story will move from past to present and from present to past..:)

@megha....thanks dear

@sabzzz....sorry sabzz I know i can't please everyone but due to public demand, i had to expedite the pace of the story this way...i know how u feel but i will make sure i intermix both narrations to give u an idea of all the major events in AK's lives

@namelesssr....it's good to have readers like u who accept whatever i present to them lolz

@annu....yeah the 10 year leap...probably more than any other ff of mine (maybe TA had 14 i think lolz) Yeah the story will now move in two directions. Mishti is def an integral part of this story.,...no originally i had planned it another way but this should work too :)

@sumi...aww...ur too sweet but i think i am far from that destination but maybe one day i will write a book for sure as i enjoy writing :) Thanks again.

@shweta....thanks dear. How are u? yeah, surya is a typical controlling dad a lot of desi kids have :( Mishti is nice for a change here :)

@dpkvasudeva....welcome aboard and i think i remember u from ur comment on DYM?? thanks again

@kanu...i will reveal more details as story continues. I know not everyone like the leap but this was the only way to hasten the pace :) Some people did not like the slow pace of the story, that's why i had to do this but don't worry, i will make sure u get angad's narration like before
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Posted: 15 years ago
as long as angad's narration is there . im happy :D
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Kanuk

as long as angad's narration is there . im happy :D



yes,kanu....that is the USP of this story, i won't take that away😃

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