Life in a movie(#2)-mayur - New thread link : pg 1 - Page 4

Originally posted by: bharathi aram

am reading tis fic fr te frst time!!mujhe kuch bhi samaj mein nahi aa rahi hai~~

samrat is dia's father???nupur is dia's mother??gunjan is mayank's fiance???nupur is mayank's wife?????

ok am gng bonkers!!! cross connection n proper connection kaise ek saath ho sakti hai?

i can understand . its a very interesting ff . read it from the starting , youwill understand dear . waise dia is not mjht wali dia , she is a very small girl who is nupurs daughter . mayank and nupur got married five years ago but they separated . and now they are working for a movie together . gunjan is mayank fiance now , but mayank still loves nupur .nupur ki lipistic mein zeher tha aur isiliye vo ab hospital mein hain , mayank abhi uske saath hain as acting ke samay vo saath the . dia come running there and call nupur mummy , mayank was shocked and samrat told that dia is his and nupurs daughter . waise i think he lied to him in order not reavile the reality . read the ff dear , i promise , you will enjoy 😊mahak really writes well😊

Originally posted by: annie07

aww, that was very sweet Mahak...........loved it<br>

Originally posted by: Senny

wowwwwwwww this is so uniquely written and is so colourful and alluring,

great work, keep it up!

thanks for liking it dear......

Originally posted by: bharathi aram

am reading tis fic fr te frst time!!mujhe kuch bhi samaj mein nahi aa rahi hai~~ <br><br>samrat is dia's father???nupur is dia's mother??gunjan is mayank's fiance???nupur is mayank's wife?????<br><br>ok am gng bonkers!!! cross connection n proper connection kaise ek saath ho sakti hai?<br>

oh!

so r reading it for first time!!!!!

no wonder u couldnt understand a thing..........

well frd this is my second thread to this..........

uska first thread bhi hai........

Originally posted by: Karan.P.Rocks

OMG! OMG! OMG! ☺️

Mahak...What an interesting part!

Woww...U made my day so spcl=) 🤗

U really rock , No mistakes...Just too excellent!

The romantic scenes was less again...But the way u MIX the hugs...the closeness it was outstanding part.!.!.! 😳

I hope see this Mayur hug in real! How u describe it, It was so good!

You're an amazing writer Mahak!

This part was the BEST...I understand that they must know each other so well...Ur idea is tooo great!

Waiting for next update *Must be ROMANTIC* 😆

You rock! 👏

Can't wait for ur next update=)

Aisho .

thanks 😳 😳 😳

did i????? 🤗

thanks 😳

i know the romantic part was less............

it was because i wanted to give some time to their relationship.........

then full on romance!!!!!!

i too wanna see it in real......

thanks 😳

thanks again..........

itna to main romantic part likhte waqt bhi blush nahi kar rahi thi jitna abhi...... 😳

thank u sooooooooooooo much for the sweet reply..........

Originally posted by: sana866

lovelyyyyyyyyyyyy update dear

FANTASTIC

Originally posted by: Piyar

<font color="#ff0099">it was soooooo sweet mahak loved it</font><br>

Originally posted by: fanofmjht

very nice update

cant wait for next

and thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

<FONT color=#ff00ff size=3 face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Mahak.. Onlysentence for this update :- It touched my heart and bought tears in my eyes, beautifully expressed... aur kya boloon??????🤗

yeh bhi kam hai tumhare liye....</FONT>

thanks 😳

i am more than happy that my update could touch hearts.........

🤗

thanks di......

Originally posted by: mayurarti

WoWMahak

U hav ur own writing style

which i love d most

the way u described d scene was awsome

mind blowing update dear

plz do continue soon

luv

Nidzy

i know........

is it good or bad???????? 😕

oh thanks 😳

i am glad that u loved the update!!!!!!!