Life in a movie(#2)-mayur - New thread link : pg 1 - Page 3

such an awesome part! well done on the second thread... please do continue!=)

hey u r a wonderful ff writer mahak ,,, wow i loved this ff .. but i hacve the same complaint too ,,, thr romantic scenes were too less yaar

awwww mahak awesome update loved it......it was great....now plzzzz continue soon

Awesome part mahak

gr888 prt

hi mahak
]i will not say this is not romantic actually
it is sweet and romantic
i love the way she said sunyeji and the way they show
i love it mahak

you write very very good
dil se
muje ye padker kuch yaad aa gaya wahi write ker rahi hoon
" kuch baatein dil se samjatein hein
kuch baatein aankhein kahtein hein
kuch baatien tum kahtein ho
kuch baatien hum yo samjayein hein
lakin jab bhi hum milte hein kyo
lab kuch kahten nahi bus aankhein bola kartin hein
bus aankhien bola karti hein...........
saanso ke aahat hoti hein
jab tu chupke sa aata hein
aata kuch or nazar na jab samne tu aa jata hein...
mere dil per tera pehra hein...........
mere dil per tera pehra hein...........
kya tujko batoo mein mera pyar kitna gehara hein...............

this is the most lovly poem one written frm my diary
and im second time writing it on net
this is for you
batana kassie lagi........
luv you
aditi

gr8888 job dear . keep it up.

congo on new thread mahak dear 😊lovely update . so cute . nupur calling her suniye was hilarious and telling him ma ne kaha hain😆mayank answers ma ne ye nahi kaha ki pati ki baat sunni chahiye😆it was magnificient,mindblowing.😳 .really , i loved this update dear . you really did a great job . 😉it was awesome , mindblowing , januable , i really dont have words dear .i am speechles dear .keep updating please . you know how eagerly i wait for your updates . love you 😊