Life in a movie(#2)-mayur - New thread link : pg 1 - Page 5

Originally posted by: myownarea

It was beautifully written, their feelings were covered in shyness and that was really nice to read!!
good work Mahak!! 😃

thanks 😳

i wanted to show them shy for tis new phase in their life..........

Originally posted by: rose.mn

hey mahak nice part dear
nupur's suniye actually cracked me up yaar
bt mahak i have one complain

u always post a short part
plz dear update a long one
n plz reveal the suspence now........
i cant wait now..........plz yaar
do somthing

arry i forgot.......i m editing my reply 4 this😳
congrats mahak on ur 2nd thread dear😊
may u got many many more😉

god!!!!!!

i too spontaneously made it up!!!!!!!!

sorry.........

next time i will update a big part..........

ok???????

hey if i reveal the suspense now then what abt my ff??????

but i will reveal soon after many romantic updates..........

thanks for the compliments 😳 😳

Originally posted by: mayur_fan

mahak!!!!

u FINALLY upd8ed....

was waiting for ur upd8......

awesome dear......

cant wait to read more....

thnxxxx 4 the pm....

loads of love,

jigi.

oh sorry for making u wait.........

thanks 😳

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

hey great part as usual i loved it thanks for pm<br>

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

such an awesome part! well done on the second thread... please do continue!=)

yes i will continue it soon..........

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

<font color="#0000cc">awesome part!!<br>nupur's suniye took me by surprise n apparently so was mayank, lol<br>anyways continue soon<br></font>

i too found it humorous later.........

yes i will continue soon..........

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hey mahak,<br>at first i want to congratulate u for new thread.<br>This new thread proved that u r an fabulous writer.<br>

Now come to ur update- it was really nice and an awesome one.<br>just loved it<br>loved our innocent and understandable mayur a lot.<br>

u have done a great job dear.<br>keep it up.<br>thanx 4 ur pm<br>

thanks for the compliments.......

thanks 😳

but this does not prove that i am a good writer.........

but it proves that my frds love me a lot.......

thanks for liking the update...........

yup........

i love to make mayur innocent.........

untouched by people's corruption..........

thanks 😳 😳 😳

Originally posted by: dolly18

hey u r a wonderful ff writer mahak ,,, wow i loved this ff .. but i hacve the same complaint too ,,, thr romantic scenes were too less yaar

thanks 😳 😳 😳

ohk..........

now i will include romance as well...........

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank

very nice update....loved it...

Originally posted by: nikki028

mahi......congo on ur 2nd thread dear.......n update ws really awesome n superb n vry sweet....😳😳😳...plz continue soooooooooon<br>

thanks 😳 😳 😳