Life in a movie(#2)-mayur - New thread link : pg 1 - Page 19

ayiyyo I read your Pm & found it depressing ..it's sooo bad for this to be happening especially to a writer of ur callibre

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

WARNING: THIS REPLY WILL BE LONG

Mahi it was toooooo romantic

In this reply, I will say my favorite line in each part (it will be italized)

So let's start this long reply

The morning after the wedding-

Too good

Loved how Mayank wouldn't wake up

With Mayank putting his arms around Nupur

my heart melted

beautifully written

and described

and how Nupur shuddered

just shows how shy she is

favorite line: no one could disturb this peaceful love bird couple

that line was the best

In the evening-

as it first started out saying how Mayank shuts the door,

I knew it was going to be romantic

loving the romantic Mayank

afterall, they are married

just an fyi, my heart melts like wax

so when Mayank held Nupur by her waist

my heart was melting

then it was so sweet

how Nupur told her that she wouldn't eat without him

that was chooo cute

favorite line- pehle tum meri kuch nahi thi par ab tum meri ho'.tum meri sab kuch ho

My second favorite line was: jab tak aap nahi khaate main kaise kha sakti hoon?

About the first line

that was too sweet

I fell in love when reading that line

Second line-

Like I said earlier,

that was too cute!

In the morning-

Nupur wearing a pink saree

I knew Mayank would instantly fall in love, again

Of course, the dori part was sweet

but Mayank starting to kiss Nupur

*faints*

this part was so well described

I can imagine it in my head

the passionate kiss

was the best described

you showed both of their feelings really well

I loved how Nupur stopped it

and tried to run away when he asked

if she liked it or not

really good

Favorite Line: Mayank- I didn't got my answer..
Nupur releasing his hand and rushing out of the door ' yes

Very well written

Wow, I just realized that this reply took me 10 minutes

but it was worth it

cause your fan-fiction is so good!

I like writing long replies on everyone's

but I have never written a comment this long

so you are very lucky!

and since you said write a huge comment,

that's what I did

even though I most of the time do that

but this is so long,

my fingers are feeling a little tired

but your fan-fiction is too amazing

so I kind of have to write long reviews

now since I've told you litterally everything,

that popped up in my head when reading this

you probably figured out

how much I love your fan-fiction

Continue soon!

EDIT

I just realizedthat thisis too short

well at least for me

lemme tell you what's in my mind

as in what I thought of the part overall

whenIread this part

I was hoping for some romance

and you did that perfectly

with each scene,

I knew that this couldn't get any better

The best thing you did:

The dialouges

I cannot tell you enough how much they were good

What Mayank and Nupur said

was so neatly well written

moreover, I just loved how decribed the whole scenes

the imagination in my head was endless

I can think of the scene in my head,

that's how well you wrote it

you wrote down the words exactly the way it should've been

I would write more but I still haven't gone through half of my pms

because I spend a lot of time on this

now I have counted

this comment took me exactly 18 minutes to type up

so you should be happy

for such long replies

afterall,

you do deserve it

Continue soon....

well i love ur warnings.......

yes it was!!!!!!

oh how sweet of u to highlight ur favourite lines............

yes mayank didnt wake up.........

thanks 😳

thanks for liking that line..........

yes yaar..........

now mayank is allowed to be romantic.........

he is married............

thanks for liking this yaar...........

yes i chose pink colour.........

coz its my favourite colour..........

thanks 😳 😳 ]

yes i am sooooooo lucky to have a frd like u..........

and also to receive such a wonderful comment..........

thanks for loving the dialouges.............

thanks 😳 😳 😳

i am so happy that u could imagine everything............

thanks 😳

yes i am really very happy....................

that u wrote this much for me.........

i am tooo gratified..........

thanks..............

🤗

Originally posted by: -Destiny-

ayiyyo I read your Pm & found it depressing ..it's sooo bad for this to be happening especially to a writer of ur callibre<br><br><br>Anyways cool yaar it's gona be helpful for new readers<br>

yes it was quiet depressing........

thanks 😳

i hope some new readers can get attracted to it atleast now............

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank

very nice update....

loved it...

thanks 😳

Originally posted by: nikki028

awesomeeeeeeeeeeee............romantic update.........lovdddd d passionate romantic mayu to d core...thnxx a zillion ton for finally fulfillin our wishes.....🤗

thanks 😳

dekh aaj maine teri khawaish poori kar hi di.............

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

gr888888888888888888 prt

update next prt sooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

thanxxx 4 d pm

thanks 😳 😳

i will try to continue soon.............

Originally posted by: aashizin

wow dear i just love it 😊

thanks 😳 😳 😳

Originally posted by: preethis

wonderful update dear.... but instead of blue you could have used someother colour... but it was an awesome update..

thanks 😳 😳 😳

ohk......

next time i will not use that colour........

thank u...... 😳

Originally posted by: dakshaalg

It was very cute, romantic and verrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy swwweeeeeeeeeeeeeettttttttt.

Really........itna accha likha hai........main bhi shy feel kar rahi thi isse padhte samay.........

I would say just lovely ❤️

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thanks.........

main bhi shy thi ise likhte samay...........

thanks 😳

u have formed a heart for me made up of hearts.........

how sweet of u to do so........

love u.......

🤗

Originally posted by: surbhi123

dear , nice part , mayur itne close 😳oh
my god , shocked at the update .awesome work . dear do cointinue
soon and ya you really right this time a big part , thanks a tone for
that . 😃will be eagerly waiting foir next update 😛😛😛<br>

thanks 😳

oh surbhi thank u so much..........

tu jaanti hai ki main kitna darr rahi thi ise update karne se pehle????????

i thought that everyone will say that i am so bad to write so.........

but i got compliments.........

even from u.........

thank u so much..........

ur comment is really very valuable for me.......... 🤗