Life in a movie(#2)-mayur - New thread link : pg 1 - Page 18

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

<FONT color=#ff00ff size=3 face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">meri jaan... "kyunki abhi woh most to baaki hai...........".. matlab kya hai? kitne baar hosh udayegi mera? mein already trance mein hoon.... pata nahin kab bahar nikloongi...</FONT>

matlab yeh di ki abhi to kuch 😳 baaki hai.......

abhi se aapka hosh udd gaya?????

vaise dont worry.........

abhi to suspense aur romance dono hi baaki hai......

aur pain bhi............

Originally posted by: aashizin

wow nice dear

thanks!

Originally posted by: Karan.P.Rocks

OMG! Mahak, You burn me toototally!! ☺️

I just love this part!!

Loved how Mayank was Romantic!!

How mayank be CRAZZY over Nupuz!!!

She wears pink saree!!

Loved how they kiss softlely!!

By holding each other!! FEEL THE LOVE!!

Nupur can't stop her self! OMG!!

I was diening!! *FAINT*

Really ur editing not GOES waisted!!

You're really too great this time!!

I can't wait for the next update!!

I'm sure you'll FIRE it=)

-Aisho

thanks 😳

i know ab kabhi to mayank romantic hoga hi na!!!!!!

yes pink is my favourite colour.........

thank u soooooooo much for ur valuable comments.......

for sure the update next to next or even next will burn u up........... 😉

Originally posted by: Senny

hey mahak,

i commented earlier but i guess it didn't get posted. Your update was sooooooo damn romantic, i am still blushing and blushing soooooo hard man.

It was wonderful, i simply lovee the way you write and present your work.

Excellent, keep it up!

thanks 😳

i too blushed while writing this part........

thanks u so much......

i will try to keep up at ur expectations...........

hey i must a really long n nice part its good to have u back i hope that u will not face such type of situation further waiting for ur pm

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

<font color="#0000cc">i knw i knw im late, so i guess ur allowed to throw chappals n belans at me lol<br>coming to the updt it was great as always<br>very sweet n cute n romantic<br>loved it completely<br>btw </font><font color="#0000cc">ye present wali nupur ko hosh kab aayega?? <br>its sad cuz mayank is there crying n remembering this stuff<br></font><font color="#0000cc">anyways waiting to read ahead! <br>continue soon<br><br><br></font>

no its ok......

i also become late sometimes.........

thanks 😳

present waali nupur ko hosh mein laane ka matlab hai to see mayur in pain........

isiliye main abhi un dono ko pain nahi de rahi hoon........

baad mein de doongi...........

i know when i write abt mayank in present........

i myself start crying...........

thanks 😳

i will continue soon........

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

such a romantic part! very well written! please do continue soon!

thanks 😳

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

hey i must a really long n nice part its good to have u back i hope that u will not face such type of situation further waiting for ur pm<br>

yes i wont ever delete my updates just because some jerk was copying it.........

let that person copy..........

i dont care........

on tuesday........

u will get a bumper update.............

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Sorry for commenting late dear

OMG Mahak wat a romantic update

the whole time i was blushing like anything

i had goosebumps reading it

hats off to u

u r an amazing wriiter

and the kissssssssss

Awwwww it was so passionate

i loved the update

and it was longer too

do continue with such cute moments

luv u

Nidzy

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its ok........

i can understand.......

thanks 😳 😳 😳

pata hai i too had goosebumps while writing it.........

and i too had blushed writing it..........

but thank god sabko pasand aaya........

thanks 😳

the kiss was meant to be passionate.........

after all its their first official kiss!!!!!

i wrote longer coz u all wanted that.......

thanks 😳 😳 😳

Originally posted by: rose.mn

hey mahak awesum update dear
i loved it.........
it was a long part............n i m sooo happy that u posted a long one........thank u sooo much
u have written it very well........
u know wat i feel very strange when nupur says mayank dekhiye with due respect
its not complain........i m just telling u wat i feel...........aadat nahi hai na nupur k muh se aisa sun'ne ki...........bt still i loved it
do cont sooooooooooooooooon...................itne lambe soon ka matlab hai k buhat jaldi update karo ok😆
love u

thanks 😳

yes i wrote a long part for u all...........

i know its strange.........

dont worry i will try to forget that........

woh when i write i keep myself at the place of the character.........

so i thought that after marriage i will call my husband "suniye" 😳 😳 😳

thanks........

i will update it on tuesday..........