Life in a movie(#2)-mayur - New thread link : pg 1 - Page 102

Originally posted by: Sunshine Girl

Lovely part mahak i love u 4 dis!!!!!Muahhhzzzz<br>

Thanks a lot for taking ur time out and commenting........

it really feels great..........

i am happy that u found my work sensible enough to comment.........

thanks a lot for loving it.....

i will continue soon............

thanks a ton.......

if it hadn't been the readers like u......

then i wouldn't have had even continued.........

thanks for showering ur love for me...............

Originally posted by: Senny

Hey Mahak,

Oh gosh you are sixteen, i guess you have told us that before, well i am blushing really hard and i am sure you must be hehe,amazinggly well written.

I hope you are not making it too sad.

Continue soon.

Thanks a lot for taking ur time out and commenting........

it really feels great..........

i am happy that u found my work sensible enough to comment.........

thanks a lot for loving it.....

i will continue soon............

thanks a ton.......

if it hadn't been the readers like u......

then i wouldn't have had even continued.........

thanks for showering ur love for me...............

thanks a lot.....

yup i am 16.........

yup i do am blushing.........

well i guess i am not gonna make some parts too sad..........

becoz i will give u time before that.................

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

Mahi
oh mahi
brilliant part
loved it lots
I understand your situation
in writing this
but I understand
so totally with you
about the feeling shy part
and blushing
so it's alright
I loved the part
and sorry
I'm on my iPod touch
because my mom gets mad when i use the comp
that too in the morning
and I'm always on the comp
like all day
so yeah
I can't tell you every little detail I liked
but you know how much I love your ff
anyways continue soon

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it really feels great..........

i am happy that u found my work sensible enough to comment.........

thanks a lot for loving it.....

i will continue soon............

thanks a ton.......

if it hadn't been the readers like u......

then i wouldn't have had even continued.........

thanks for showering ur love for me...............

thanks.........

i am shy........

thanks for loving my ff..................

Originally posted by: mayurarti

<br>That's the way Mahi ve<br><br>I'm happy you kept the whole part a complete romantic one<br><br>gr8 update Mahi............<br><br>it was so passionate , romantic , hawtt , sweet & lovely at the same time<br><br>loved it to the core dear<br><br>I'm still blushing red 😳<br><br>the way you descirbed everything was just superb<br><br>the dance the kisses their feelings 😳<br>😳<br>I had gossebumps reading it😳<br><br>good job dear <br><br>keep it up<br><br>Sorry for the late comment dear I was not at home<br><br>do continue soon<br><br>luv<br>Nidzy😳<br>

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i will continue soon............

thanks a ton.......

if it hadn't been the readers like u......

then i wouldn't have had even continued.........

thanks for showering ur love for me...............

yup that's the way............

Mahi way..............

thanks a lot nidzy.............

how sweet!

i too blushed...........

thanks.......

i too had goosebumps...........

thanks a lot........

i will ty to keep upto ur expectations............

Originally posted by: Karan.P.Rocks

Momo...

Sorrrry TOO late?

This update takes tooo MUCH time? 🤪

What was this? ☺️

I'm totally goinnnnn RED ?

Itwasssss totallly 10 on 10 romanticccc :D

How could u write it ?

OMG! Me tooooo BLUSH after reading it=)

I was imagine Mayur scene in real *FAINT*

Ok coming to breath again 😆

It was totalllly unforgetablee upd BY you Momo!!

You ediited the partttt totallly difff :D

Your styleeee again was rocking=)

The rain part wassss magical,

Nupurrr was totallly cuteeeee!!

Mayu to hot to handle=)

OMG! I feelll the romance!!

The kisssss ??? Can't....?

Overalll it wasthe BEST update!! 🤗

Keep rocks merrri jaan?!

I can't comment more UFFFF!!!????

Love you,

Aisho.

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i will continue soon............

thanks a ton.......

if it hadn't been the readers like u......

then i wouldn't have had even continued.........

thanks for showering ur love for me...............

kkoi baat nahi.........

i was waiting to read ur comments.........

yup it takes!

i am red!

i too dont know how i did wrote it!

i had to........

while i wasnt able to.........

oh that's so sweet of u to give me 10 on 10........

i have imagined them in real too.......

thanks a lot........

first time i wrote something romantic........

thanks for loving my style........

mayur r hot!

oh!

thanks a ton!

thanks...........

i am glad that u think that this is the best part by me!

thanks............

i will keep u rocking...................

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

heyyy mahak
well m blushing hard after reading this
but really nice update
plzzzzzzz continue soon
n thanx for the pm

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thanks a ton.......

if it hadn't been the readers like u......

then i wouldn't have had even continued.........

thanks for showering ur love for me...............

i too was blushing..........

thanks...................

Originally posted by: ghtk1

xtremely subtle yet romantic hun...i m overwhelmed by reading it.plzz continue soon and clear the suspense.

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thanks a ton.......

if it hadn't been the readers like u......

then i wouldn't have had even continued.........

thanks for showering ur love for me...............

thanks......

i tried to make it romantic maintaining my limits..........

i will soon clear it out..............

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

nice update~~ keep writing!

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if it hadn't been the readers like u......

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Originally posted by: maria_awan

really nice dear

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i am happy that u found my work sensible enough to comment.........

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i will continue soon............

thanks a ton.......

if it hadn't been the readers like u......

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Originally posted by: Aranya

Sorry for teh later reply....but this part was cool...totlaly great!!!!

thanks for the PM

Continue sooonnnnnnn

Love

Aranya

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thanks a ton.......

if it hadn't been the readers like u......

then i wouldn't have had even continued.........

thanks for showering ur love for me...............