Jaazib.....SujalnKashish.....Last Part..06/17 - Page 15

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Posted: 15 years ago

Awesome part!!

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awesome job! thanks for pm! hope they fall in love soon!
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well work summi n kashish.........................itni s misunderstanding shaadi ki baat tk poch gai..............................i m really looking forward fo dinner date.........................plz con't soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Kashish,Summi bohot hi accha part hai.Kashish sujal se pyar hi nahi karti aur uski mom kya kya soch rahi hai dono ke relationship ko lekar😆 mera matlab hai nandini ke us line kahan tak hai?...kahin tum dono ne..ko lekar aur nandini ne kashish se yeh kyun kaha ke tumne pehle bhi humse yeh baat chupayi hai to main kaise yakeen karun to kya kashish ko sujal se pehle kisi se pyar hua tha😕.Kashish jab aapna samaan pack kar rahi thi to us saree ko dekh kar kashish ko kuch ehsaas to hua aur neend bhi nahi aayi chalo acchi shuruwaat hai pyar ke ehsaas ki.Sujal ne sam ko bohot acche se daata aurphir sam ne sujal ko jo kashish ke ghar jaake maafi maangne waala idea diya usse to sujal aur phas gaya😆 aur kashish ki tasveer magazine mein dekh kar sujal ko bhi kuch ehsaas hua aur jab woh aankhein band karta hai to bhi usse kashish hi dikhayi deti hai chalo ab to sujal ko bhi dheere dheere pyar ka ehsaas hone laga hai.Sujal sam ke saath kashish ke ghar jaate hai waha kashish ke family ke saath sujal ka convo accha laga bechara sujal maafi mangne gaya tha aur waha ulta hi hogaya its so sweet of sujal ke woh kashish ki mom ka dil dukhana nahi chahta tha aur usne kashish ka khayal rakhne ka vaada kardiya ek aur problem😆.Sam ne neha ko call karke ye kaha ke sujal usse maafi mangna chahta hai issiliye dinner par invite kiya magar neha ko to har baar jaldi hi hoti hai usne theek se bina sune hi kashish ko kehdiya ke sujal ne usse date par invite kiya hai.Jab neha kashish ke room mein jaldi se aake kehti hai ke sam ka phone aaya tha to kashish jo kaha ab kya kiya Sujal ne...kahi meri shaadi to tai nahi kar di usne apne saath yeh accha kaha😆 lagta hai kashish ke dil ki baat zubaan par aagayi😆.Ab kashish sujal se milne jaayegi date par milne jaayegi yah samaj kar ke usse sujal ne date par invite kiya hai magar sujal to sirf usse maafi mangna chahta hai.Ab date hai to kashish special tarah se tayaar hokar jaayegi aur sujal confused hojayega ke usse dekhkar aur jab sujal usse white lillies dega to shayad kashish confused hojayegi ke sujal ne date par invite karke usse white flowers kyun deraha hai lagta hai aage aur bhi confusion hai😆 magar aise acche confusion hoto phir kya baat hai😳.Plz continue soon.Thanks for PM.Bye and luv you both.
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Posted: 15 years ago
this story is developing in a really interesting way
😉 😛 😉 👏 😉 😛 😉 👏 😉 😛 😉!!!!!!!!!!....all start's wt a misunderstanding from their assistent's who couldn't ask them b4.....the chp 3&4 were hilarious i could imagine sujal and kashish cofused, shocked & surprised faces 😛!!!!!..........n now kashish family want thier relation to grow more (marriege) n these two don't want to hurt their feeling, so they are trying avoid the topic lolzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!......u wht neha told kashish that sujal wanted to go on a date wt her......when he cleary said he want to clear everything @ the dinner!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..............neha & sam are a big part on this story my guess!!!.........let's see what's gonna happen @ the dinner.............

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Part-5

8 pm....

Kashish arrives at the resturant wearing a stylish green dress.......a host comes and takes her name then takes Kashish to a private dining room....the room itself was modern looking with a table and 2 chairs in the center......she thanks the host and sits down on one of the chairs waiting for Sujal to come......10 minutes later Sujal comes and sees Kashish waiting for him.....Sujal is dressed in a designer black suit...he walks upto kashish and sits down opposite her....

Sujal: sorry i'm late..

Kashish: I'm not surprised at all....

Sujal looks at her...

Sujal: woh...i got stuck in the traffic...koshish karunga ke dubara aisa na ho

Kashish: dubara kabhi milne ki naubat hi nahi aayegi...

Sujal: shayad aa hi jaye...hum aaj se pehle 3 baar mil chuke hain...jin me se do mulaqatein planned nahin thi...we can't predict what will happen tomorrow

Kashish: I can....Would you like to explain what the hell is going on.....subaah se mom ..dad...chachu...chachi...sabhi phone pe phone kiye ja rahe hai....tumhari tarife karne se thakte nahi.....yeh sab ho kya raha hai....

Sujal: look...i'm really sorry...this is all a big misunderstanding...Sam ko lagga ke hum dono ke beech me kuch chal raha hai...aur usne mere doston ke saamne kehdiya...but I swear i had nothing to do with telling your parents...muje nahin pata ke unhe kaise khabar huyi is baat ki...and i'm really sorry for all that happened..

Kashish: tumhare idiot sam ne yeh baat meri personal assistant Neha ko batayi....aur usne meri puri family ko.....do you know....tumhare liye muje meri mom ke samne kitni sharmindgi uthani padi..

Sujal: par Sam ne to kaha ke is baat ka yakeen Neha ne usse dilaya

Kashish holds her head in frustration as she doesnt want to loose her temper..

Sujal: look, please stay calm..kya tum apni family ko sach nahin bata sakti? they are understanding

Kashish: nahi bata sakti....main kuch nahi kar sakti....they really like you..

Sujal: main aaj subah unse milne gaya tha..they are very nice people...main unhe na nahin kar paaya...especially your mom...she cares a lot about you

Kashish: haa tabse to muje aisa lag raha hai ki woh meri nahi tumhari mom hai...waise tumhe kaha kya mom se....I want to hear it in your words, so can you please tell me.....

Sujal: woh, she asked me for a promise...tumhara humesha khayal rakhne ke liye...I couldn't refuse her, I am sorry..

Kashish: kyaaa.....ple dont tell me ...ki tumne haa kaha.....

Sujal: i'm really sorry...main unhe na nahin kar paaya..jis tarah se unhone mujse yeh kaha...i just couldn't

Kashish: kya tumne yeh vaada dil se kiya tha....because you know....agar dil se na kiya ho to tum yeh vaada tod sakte ho..

Sujal: jaanta hoon ke main yeh vaada tod sakta...par main tumhari mom ka dil nahin tod sakta

Kashish: to tum kya chahte ho...

Sujal: I think we should this a go, cause you never know it could work..i think hume aur milna chahiye

Kashish: you mean to say a second date!!!....

Sujal: maybe more than that...definately we should meet again..hume ek doosre ko jaan ne ki koshish karni chahiye

Kashish: tumhe lagta hai ki yeh kaam karega...

Sujal: jab tak hum koshish nahin karte..tab tak hum kaise jaan paayenge is baat ko

Kashish: woh bhi hai....but...this sounds so strange...kya main kuch puch sakti hoon..

Sujal: haa..pucho..

Kashish: tumhari koi girlfriend hai....I mean you travel alot....so foreign me koi..

Sujal looks at her surprised...

Sujal: agar koi hoti to main aaj yahan nahin aata...dhoka dena meri fitrat me nahin hai

Kashish: I am sorry .....agar tumhe bura laga to..

Sujal: you don't need to apologise…muje burra nahin lagga…I can understand tumne yeh sawaal kyun poocha…

Kashish: Thanks muje samajne ke liye...I am once again sorry...mere aur meri family ki waje se tumhe yeh sab karna pad raha hai..

Sujal: galti na tumhari thi na meri thi…galti to humari taqdeer kit hi jiski wajah se aaj hum yahan tak pohanche hain..lekin is galti ko sudharne ke liye hume ek doosre ko ek mauka to dena chahiye….

Kashish: hmmm....waise ek baat kahoon...

Sujal: kaho…

Kashish: i think we can make this relation work...

Sujal: I think so too…and I promise to try and give this relationship as much as I can…main poore dil aur imaandaari se is rishte ke liye ek baar koshish karna chahta hoon

Kashish: hmmm...tum jante ho....yeh hamari pehli date hai aur isi me hum ek dusre ko tum kehke bulane lage....isnt it strange...

Sujal smiles at her..

Sujal: Maybe its because we feel comfortable talking to each other…aur ab hum relationship shuru karne ki soch rahe hain to hume formalities ko nikalna chahiye…

Kashish: i agree....so what now...

Sujal: shall we order dinner?

Kashish: sure...

Sujal: what would you like to have…tumhe khaane me kya pasand hai?

Kashish: anything with red wine please..

Sujal looks at her for a moment…

Sujal: sure…I'll just order it…

Sujal calls for the waiter to take their order and makes sure to order red wine…the waiter leaves after writing the order leaving Sujal and Kashish to stare at each other in silence…

Kashish: I need to say something...

Sujal: ermm..yeah go ahead

Kashish: tumhe mere profession se koi aitraaz to nahi....

Sujal: no not at all..infact I believe every individual should work...yeh to achi baat hai ki tum khud apne bal pe apni ek pehchaan banayi..yeh kaam karna itna asaan nahin hai…aur phir mera maan na hai ke aise rishte me ek ladke aur ladki ko ek jaisa hi treat karna chahiye…we should not sacrifice our careers because of a relationship…

Kashish: i am glad ki main tumhare jaise insaan ke saath date kar rahi hoon......my mom would be so proud...

Sujal smiles at her…

Sujal: I think she already is…not because of me but of what you achieved…woh tumpe bohat bharosa karti hain aur who jaanthi hai ke tum yeh bharosa kabhi nahin todogi…

Kashish: isi liye to unhone muje Mumbai akele bhej diya ...aur Rewa ko Pune...

Sujal: your very lucky to have such understanding parents…main kaafi hairaan tha yeh jaan kar ke unhe humari relationship se koi problem nahin hai….

Kashish: my parents are very straight forward....humne wahi kiya hai jo hum apni marzi se karna chahte hai....but my mom is still traditional..

Sujal: yeah…I figured that out…par who tumpe bharosa karti hain…aur yeh bohat badi baat hai….

Kashish: hmm...woh to hai..

A waiter comes with their food and places the dishes and the wine bottle in the center of the table then leaves from there.......Sujal looks at Kashish once they are alone again...

Sujal: you go first…

Kashish: as you say...

Kashish first serves him then serves her plate..He is little surprised to see her serve him first but a small smile appears on his face…

Sujal: thanks…

He picks up the bottle of wine and opens it…then fills her glass then his....

Kashish: Thanks...

Sujal: your welcome…

Sujal lifts his spoon and waits for Kashish to lift hers before he starts eating…both eat their food whilst looking at each other occasionally and smiling… after 15 mins they finish their dinner.....

Kashish: i think we should leave now..

Sujal: yeah sure…

Sujal calls the waiter for the bill…the waiter clears their table and goes to get the bill for them…Sujal takes his wallet out and places money inside the small bill pouch…he calls the waiter and gives him money for the bill an additional tip for the service…they both stand up then leave the restaurant together

Kashish: bye ..Su..Sujal..

Sujal: hmm..kaho?

Kashish: hmm...kya kahoon....i just said bye..

Sujal: oh…yeah…bye…ermm..thank you for coming today

Kashish: Its ok....Thanks to you for such a nice dinner...

Sujal: I am glad you enjoyed it…take care…bye…hope to see you again soon

Kashish: same here...bye...

Sujal: bye…

Sujal smiles at her and opens the door of her car for her as she sits inside looking at him…he closes the door of her car and waves…Kashish starts her engine giving him smile.....he moves back and watches her disapper in traffic..Sujal then walks to his car he unlocks it and sits inside…driving off towards his house…

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Two weeks later......

Sujal and Kashish haven't been in touch with each other within this time because they are occupied in their work....One morning…Kashish was working in her office on some designs…when the phone rang…Kashish looks at the phone then walks to the desk and answers the phone…

Kashish: hello..

Sujal: hello…Kashish…main Sujal bol raha hoon

Kashish: Sujal..tum..

Sujal: haan main…kaisi ho tum?

Kashish: I am fine...tum kaise ho...

Sujal: I'm fine too…woh actually…I needed a favor from you

Kashish: favor?...kaho...

Sujal: I have to attend a couples party tonight…sab log yahin jaante hain ke hum dono ek couple hain…to kya tum mere saath chalogi?

Kashish: tonight....thik hai...I will come....kitne baje..

Sujal: will you be ready for 8pm..ya thoda aur waqt chahiye?

Kashish: how about 8:30?...I will be home after 6;30..

Sujal: yeah that will be fine…aur ek baat…it's a beach party and the dress code is red and white…I hope tumhe koi problem nahin hogi

Kashish: Sujal...I am fashion designer...kuch to hoga mere pass...

Sujal: oh yeah..i was just making sure…sorry…so 8.30 is fine with me…I'll pick you up….oh…who tumhara address kya hai…I don't know where you live..

Kashish: do you have a piece of paper to write?...

Sujal: yeah I do have it…you go ahead…

Kashish: Kashish Sinha.....716 Sky tower....Juhu (w)...

Sujal who is writing the address looks suprised at hearing it.....

Sujal: ohh…how strange…we only live two traffic lights away aur hume pata hi nahin tha…

Kashish: kya ....tum wahi rehte ho....per kaha...

Sujal: I live in SG mansion.....on Royal Road...

Kashish: ohh..Royal Road…haan main kaafi baar wahan se guzri hoon…it's a lovely area

Sujal: oh ya...it is....I just love it....privacy ke liye...

Kashish: haan…wahan pe bohat kam log rehte hain..i noticed that...

Sujal: rehte hai...but I dont know anyone..

Kashish: it seems like you're a private person…tabhi to hume itna bhi nahin pata tha ke humare ghar ek doosre se zyada durr nahin hai…

Sujal: haa...aur jayadatar main Business trip pe hi hota hoon...

Kashish: hmmm…I know…tum bohat hi busy insaan ho

Sujal: haa...main do hafto se Sweden me tha.....achcha ab main rakhta hoon...sham ko milte hai...

Kashish: ok…bye…and have a nice day

Sujal: bye...

Kashish cuts the call and places the receiver down…she just thinks about their conversation for a moment and then gets up…getting back to work…

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7.15 pm......

Kashish gets back from the workshop…she takes her towel and rushes straight to the washroom to take quick shower…15 minutes later she comes out wrapped in a towel and another towel wrapped around her head and goes straight to her closet…Trying to figure out what to wear....her frustration increases when she cant find anything suitable to wear....so she rushes to her bad and takes out her mobiles and calls Neha.....…

Neha: hello..ma'am…aap

Kashish: Hi Neha....now ple help me...i need your help..

Neha: kya hua ma'am…everything ok?

Kashish: nothing is ok...muje aaj raat Sujal ke saath bahar jana hoga...beach party pe...

Neha: oh wow…that sounds great…par isme pareshani waali baat kya hai…don't you want to go?

Kashish: I have to go...but I dont know what to wear....

Neha is surprised to hear this especially from Kashish...…

Neha: ma'am…aap pareshaan kyun horahi hain…kuch bhi pehen lijiye…you look good in everything…

Kashish: need something red and white...

Neha: ma'am I'm sure you have something in red and white…aap ne apna wardrobe check kiya?

Kashish: I did but I dont like anything..

Neha: hmmm…mam…jab ek designer apne kapdo ke leke itna pareshaan ho…to iska matlab ek hi hota hai…that she is in love…aap ek kaam kijiye…take something from your collections…wahin se kuch pehen lijiye

Kashish: neha aisa kuch nahi....I dont love Sujal....its forced relation....main bas uski personality ko messed up nahi karna chahti...

Neha: mam…if its forced then why don't you get out of it…kisne roka hai aapko…aap abhi chahe to yeh relationship khatam kar ke apne parents ko bata sakti hain it didn't work…

Kashish: Neha...main aisa nahi kar sakti...he is very gentle..

Neha: so you do care for him?

Kashish: yes i do care...

Neha: that means you do feel for him…hum jisse pyar karte hain…ussi ki parwah bhi karte hain

Kashish; Neha yeh hamari second date hai only...

Neha: yeah…maybe its too early to realize…par muje poora yakeen hai…ek din aisa bhi aayega when both of you will be madly in love with each other…I can see it happening…

Kashish thinks for a moment and sits down on bed..while taking out the towel from the head....

Kashish: I am also looking forward for that too.....you know Neha.....jab main apni life ke bare me sochti hoon ki kiske saath bitaungi to....I think Sujal is prefect for me...use mere kaam se meri family se koi problem nahi...he is very open minded....

Neha: you are very lucky…bohat kam log aise hote hain jinhe apne partners ke kaam karne pe koi problem nahin hoti…aur Sujal sir ko tho dekh ke hi lagta hai ke he is very understanins…aur aap dono saath mein bhi itne ache lagte hain…your like the perfect pair

Kashish: Thanks Neha....now please tell me what to wear ..

Neha: ma'am just go through your collection…I am sure aapko kuch miljayega….

Kashish: Ok Neha....bye...I am getting late....talk to you later..

Neha: bye ma'am…have fun

Kashish cuts the call and throws her mobile on the bed whilst getting up to find something to wear... Kashish gets her clothes from her collection and goes to the washroom to change...

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8.30pm....

Sujal reaches Kashish's house right on time…he looks at his watch and smiles thinking that he finally reached here on time…he sitting in his car outside her house and hits the car horn..Kashish who is straightening her hair takes a final look in the mirror then picks up her bag and rushes out….Sujal sees her coming so he gets out of the car…he gets a plesant surprise to see her wearing a white skirt and a red tank top......he looks at her from top to bottom as his eyes look her over

Sujal: erm…hi

Kashish: hi..Sujal..

Sujal: Again you look very different today…aaj mein aik aur personality dekh raha hoon tumhari..

Kashish: abhi bahot sari baki hai...meri to bahot hai...lekin tumhari sirf dusri dekh rahi hoon....you look good in casual ..

Sujal looks down at himself then back at her with a smile…he was wearing a white shirt with dark blue jeans....

Sujal: thanks..but you also look beautiful today

Kashish decides to pull his leg...

Kashish: sirf aaj hi lagti hoon.....sab to muje herroz kehte hai..

Sujal: aur kaun kehta hai tumse?

Kashish: sabhi..raste se gujarti hoon to sabhi kehte hai....party me....

Sujal looks at her…

Sujal: log pata nahin kya kya sochte rehte hain…khoobsoorat ladki dekhi nahin ke peeche hi pad jaate hain…just be careful

Kashish tries to hide her smile...

Kashish: thodi problem hoti hai but I am fine..

Sujal: aage se koi bhi problem ho to muje call kardena…I will sort out everything for you

Kashish: really?......do hafte baad phone kiya hai tumne.....tumhe to yeh bhi pata nahi tha ki main hoon kaha...

Sujal looks down…

Sujal: ermm…shall we leave?...its getting late

Kashish: sure...lets go..

Kashish walks to the passesnger side whilst Sujal follows her…he opens the door for her and she sits inside…then he closes the door and comes to his side driving off from her house...….5 minutes later Sujal is driving quite fast…since the road was empty he was increasing his speed........Kashish looks at him for a moment as she is beginning to get a scared as she is not used to all this….she closes her eyes tightly and grabs hold of the car handle tightly….Sujal looked towards her and notices her eyes are closed tightly…

Sujal: are you okay Kashish?

Kashish just opens her eyes...

Kashish: hmm...I am fine..

Sujal: are you sure? You seem disturbed

Kashish: nn..no..I m ok..

Sujal: ok…just relax….

Kashish: I am trying Sujal...

Sujal looks at her but realizes that she isnt relaxed at all…quite the opposite she seems to be panicking more…he gently reduces the speed of the car driving slower....

Kashish: thanks Sujal..

Sujal: your welcome…are you okay now?

Kashish: little bit...

Sujal: i'm really sorry...muje itna thaiz nahin chalana chahiye tha..its just i'm used to driving fast

Kashish: I can understand...lekin muje aadat nahi......so ple...jab main saath hoon to itni fast mat chalana...

Sujal: i will be careful next time...sorry

Kashish: Its ok Sujal...

Sujal smiles at her...then continues to drive...making sure he is driving slow...

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30 minutes later...

Sujal and Kashish finally reach the private beach where the party is held......Sujal parks the car...they both get out of the car......loud music can be heard from where they were......they both apporach the venue which is beautifully lit and decorated in Red and white...they look around the place when they notice the presence of the media.....

Kashish: Oh God...Sujal...tumne muje bataya nahi ki yaha Media bhi hai.....meri dress to dekho....its not appropriate at all....

Sujal: muje khud is baat ka pata nahin tha..and don't worry...there's nothing wrong with your dress

Kashish: are you sure?....

Sujal: yes you look perfect...

Kashish: ab kya hoga..

Sujal: pata nahin...but we have to behave as a proper couple...we can't let them suspect anything

Kashish: matlab...tum kehna kya chahte ho...hum saath to hai...

Sujal: i know...par hume aise behave karna hoga....jaise ke hum..i mean to show we are in love

Kashish: ok....fine...act with me...

Kashish looks at him with a smile than holds his hand in hers and puts it on her waist....

Kashish: now do we look like a perfect couple?..

Sujal looks at her for a moment then down to where his hand was on her waist....he smiles and tightens his hold on her...

Sujal: yes we do

Kashish: shall we go..

Sujal: sure...lets go...

They walk inside the venue and all eyes drifts to them as they can't help admire how perfect the pair looked...Sujal pulls her closer as the media approaches them and takes snaps... Kashish smiles when she sees Reva and Vivan across the floor.....Kashish looks at Sujal...who looks down at her ...

Sujal: whats up?

Kashish: Reva and Vivan...they are here....Reva mom ko sab bata degi aaj jo bhi hoga...

Sujal looks in the the direction where Kashish is looking then back at her…he bends down close to her ear and whispers..

Sujal: don't worry…kuch nahin hoga….kissi ko kuch pata nahin chalega…

Kashish feels his warm breath on her ear...

Kashish: will you stay with me?....party khatam hone tak...please..

Sujal: I will be with you through the end…so don't worry and just relax....

Kashish: ok....jaisa tum kaho...

They see Reva and Vivan walking towards them..Sujal looks at them and acts surprised….

Sujal: hey Vivan…how are you?

Vivan: I am fine buddy....Kya ho raha hai......

Sujal: nothing much…bas aaj ki party me invited tha to maine socha ke main aur Kashish dono milke party me aate hain…this place is so beautiful and perfect for couples…don't you think sweetheart…

Sujal smiles at Kashish.......Kashish who is surprised by his words she feels his hand on her waist tighten...

Kashish: of course....its lovely....How was your honeymoon Reva?...

Reva: we had a great time thanks...aur maine bohat saari shopping bhi ki…

Sujal and Vivan nod their heads as girls start their gossiping.....Kashish moves Sujal's hand and goes closer to Reva to talk while Sujal and Vivan talk about business...

Kashish: woh to tum hamesha se hi karti ho.....how is it going with you and Vivan?...

Reva: its going great…I am really enjoying married life…and how about you and Sujal…everything going well?

Kashish: everything is perfect...

Reva: really…are you sure?...muje to aisa nahin lagta.

Kashish: kya...per kyun...

Reva: muje to aisa lag raha hai jaise everything is a lot more than perfect…you both look so much in love…really I am so happy for you

Kashish was realieved now...

Kashish: oh ya...we are...

Reva: tum khush to ho na Kashish?

Kashish: I am lucky Reva....Sujal is so nice...woh mera bahot khayal rakhta hai..

Reva: yeah…I can see that…I'm very happy for you both….

They both continued to talk to each other whilst Vivan and Sujal were talking to their friend who had hosted the pary….when the DJ announced for all the couples to join them on the stage for a dance…Vivan excused himself and walked from there towards Reva…he placed his hand out for her and she held his hand with a smile and both walked towards the dance floor….when Sujal looked at Kashish and walked upto her…he held his hand out for her whilst looking at her…Kashish just looks at him and placed her hand on his while looking deep into his eyes..He just looks back into her eyes whilst tightening his hold on her hand and then leads her to the dance floor…as they reached the dance floor…he let go of her hand and placed his arm around her waist as he pulled her closer to himself…he held her other hand in his whilst looking back into her eyes as they both started to dance to the slow music being played in the background...she rested her head on his chest while closing her eyes smelling her favorite perfume......

Kashish: Sujal...agar tum isi tarah Sexy Armani lagte rahe to muje jyada waqt nahi lagega tumhari wife banne me....i just love this sexy smell..

Sujal smiles at her..

Sujal: I can't help it…its my favourite perfume

Kashish looks up...

Kashish: did I say it out loud?...

Sujal: loud enough for me to hear

Kashish: I am sorry...

Sujal: don't be...you didn't say anything wrong...

He lets go of her hand and wraps both hands around her waist as he pulls her close.......

Kashish: maine kuch jyada hi bold diya na..I am really sorry...I shouldnt say this..

Sujal: hey...tum pareshan kyun horahi ho...tumne kuch galat nahin kaha...i told you before...don't worry about it...infact i took your comment as a compliment

Kashish: sach me...

Sujal: I'm serious…ab tum meri perfume ki tareef kar rahi thi to muje khushi hi hogi na

Kashish: Thanks Sujal..

Sujal: do you know something…tum thanks bohat kehti ho…you don't need to be so formal with me

Kashish: i cant help Sujal..

Sujal: woh to muje nazar aaraha hai

Kashish: Sujal...

Sujal: hmm..kaho

Kashish: can you free me?....I am not feeling comfortable...please..

Sujal looks down at her then moves his arms back letting her go..

Sujal: I'm sorry…I didn't know

Kashish: Its ok....i wish ki yeh party jaldi khatam ho jaye..

Sujal: tum chaho to hum yahan se jaa sakte hain…I don't want you to feel uncomfortable here…maybe I shouldn't have bothered you to come here today

Kashish: no no..no....ple dont say that...agar hum yaha se chale gaye to Reva kya sochegi.....

Sujal: hmm…yeah your right….we can leave the dance floor though if you are not comfortable here

Kashish: hmm...ple....tum yahi ruko....I need something to drink...

Sujal: tum rukko main leke aata hoon...what would you like to have?

Kashish: wait....saath chalte hai....warna Reva ko shak hoga..

Sujal: oh yeah..lets go...

Sujal and Kashish walks of from the dance floor...passing other couples who are still dancing...Sujal grips her hand so he doesn't loose her in the crowd..Kashish looks down at their hands and holds it tight....After they pass the crowd Sujal lets go of her hand because he doesnt want her to feel uncomfortable...they walk to the bar together...

Sujal: Kashish...what would you like to have?

Kashish: if you dont mind can i have Red wine please..

Sujal: no...i don't mind...

Sujal turns towards the waiter and orders two glasses of red wine...the waiter fills two glasses up and places them on the counter...Sujal takes them and looks at her...he passed her a glass...

Sujal: thats yours..

Kashish: Thanks....

Sujal: your welcome...

Kashish and Sujal are having their drinks while watching Reva and Vivan dancing with other couples...

Sujal: Kashish...

Kashish: hmm...

Sujal: I want to apologise for making you uncomfortable...trust me maine jo kiya woh sirf isliye kiya taki Reva aur Vivan ko shaq na ho..

Kashish puts her hand on his shoulder...

Kashish: Its ok..main samaj sakti hoon...aur maine wahi kaha jo muje laga..

Sujal looks down at her hand on his shoulder...then back at her...

Sujal: thanks for being so open with me...aur aage jaa ke kabhi bhi meri waje se tum uncomfortable mehsoos karo to muje bata dena...i will try and keep a distance...

Kashish: I will...trust me...

Sujal: i do trust you...

They are looking at each other when the music stops..They come back to reality as they hear the couples leaving the dance floor and walk towards the bar for a drink... Vivan and Reva come there walking together whilst holding on to each other...

Reva: Kashish...tum dono itni jaldi kyun wahan se chale gaye...

Sujal: aisa kuch nahin hai...woh i don't feel comfortable in crowds so i asked Kashish if we could leave...Kashish to dance karna chahti thi par meri waje se woh pehle aagayi...

Kashish: you know me and my red wine.....control nahi kar payi....

Reva: ah...how did i forget that...no problem...as long as your both having fun...

Vivan: by the way...you both look perfect whilst dancing together...you make a great pair...

Sujal: yeah we do make a perfect pair...all thanks to you guys for bringing us together

Reva: now lets wait for to see who they annouce as couple of night..

Kashish: i wonder who they will select tonight...

The host of the party walks into the centre holding a mike and everyones attention goes to him...

Host: hello everyone...Do i Have to say anything....hum sab to jante hi hai ki ..who is the hottest couple tonight?.....aur kaun ho sakta hai....ple put your hands togather for Mr.Sujal Garewal and his girlfriend Miss. Kashish Sinha..

The whole place is filled with loud cheers and people hooting...every person present gets excited...Sujal and Kashish just look at each other in suprise as they freeze...Vivan and Reva take the wine glasses from there hands and tells them to walk to the center..Sujal puts his hand around her shoulder as they both walk into the crowd...As they pass people, who turn around to look at them with a smile and continue to clap...At the center the host congratulates them both for being the hottest couple of the night...whilst the media go crazy taking pictures of the duo knowing it will make a great story to print....

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1am..........

The party is coming to an end...most of the couples had already left and only 3 couples remained...it is getting very cold outside so the host went inside with his wife...Vivan and Rewa also as Vivan had an early morning meeting....now only Sujal and Kashish are present on the beach...Sujal looks at Kashish...

Sujal: Kashish...you'r not tired are you?

Kashish: me..not at all...kyun kya hua....

Sujal: would you like to join me for a little walk on the beach...only if its ok with you

Kashish: sure.....lets go..

Sujal smiles at her then they start walking silently along the beach whilst Kashish rubs her hands along her arms to save herself from the cold...as the cold breeze touches her making her hair fly beautifully..Sujal looks at her and she looks back at him and smiles...then she looks back down again...

Sujal: Kashish...

Kashish: hmmm...bolo Sujal..

Sujal: main kuch soch raha tha....i think...we should meet more often...so we can get to know each other better

Kashish: I agree.....hume ek dusre ko samajne ki koshish karni chahiye...

Sujal: main apni taraf se poori koshish karunga...office se waqt nikalne ki koshish karunga...but its going to be difficult...as i'm mostly on business tours

Kashish: I can understand Sujal....but what about jab tum yaha Mumbai me hote ho....cant you call me...

Sujal: yeah...i can call you...i promise i'll keep in touch through the phone atleast

Kashish: atleast muje aisa lagega ki I have someone..

Sujal looks at her for a moment...

Sujal: you have me now...

Kashish: Sujal...can I say something...

Sujal: hmm..kaho

Kashish: Sujal...I am so scared....pata nahi but the way our relation is going..

Sujal: main kuch samja nahin...kya tumhe humare relationship se koi problem hai?...hai to tum jab chahe khud ko is rishte se azaad karsakti ho...i would never want to force you into having a relationship with me..

Kashish; Sujal tum samaj nahi rahe..

Sujal: Kashish...please be open with me..tumhe kis baat ka darr hai...muje batao...

Kashish: I am trusting you so much,,,,

Sujal looks at her...

Sujal: agar tumhe is baat ka darr hai ke main kabhi tumhara bharosa thodunga...to is darr ko apne mann se nikaal do...kyunki main tumhare vishwaas ko kabhi nahin thodunga...i'm not that type of a guy..

Kashish: Sujal..maine aisa to nahi kaha....I am saying what if our relation wont work..

Sujal: humne faisla kiya tha ke hum apne rishte ko ek mauka denge...so until we don't try we won't know...yeh sab mat socho...leave everything on time...and i think...it will work..

Kashish: if it doesnt....kya tum muje bhul paoge..

Sujal: nahin...tumhe to main kabhi bhi bhool nahin paunga...if it doesn't work...we can always be friends

Kashish: Sujal...I dont want to be your friend,,,,,kyunki....

Sujal: kyunki kya?

Kashish: you are more than a friend to me..

Sujal just looks at her a little surprised...

Sujal: you mean to say you...like me..

Kashish: hmm.....Sujal...tum woh pehle insaan ho jisne muje jana hai,,,,others just loved my beauty,,

Sujal: Kashish...if i'm honest with you...i really like you too...your a very nice person and i admire you for who you are...not just beacause of your beauty...par isse pehle ke hum apne rishte ko aage bharaen...i want to know you better...main tumhe badle me woh pyar dena chahunga jo shayad main khud tumse expect karunga...a marriage is a bonding of two people...not just one...jab tak hum dono ek doosre ko achi tarah se samajte nahin...hum yeh kaise tai kar paayenge ke hume zindagi saath bitani hai ke nahin....I think we should give some time to our relationship before commiting to each other...I would love to spend the rest of my life with you...but only when I can love you whole heartedly in return..

Kashish: will you try for me Sujal please?.....main tumhe khona nahi chahti,,,

Sujal looks at her then gently takes her hand in both of his hands...

Sujal: i will try...for us...and trust me...i will try and make this relationship work...

Kashish: Thank you Sujal

Sujal: your welcome Kashish...muje bas thoda sa waqt chahiye...taki main tumhe aur ache se jaan sakun aur tum muje...i promise main zyada waqt nahin lunga...

Kashish: tumhe jitna chahe utna tum le sakte ho.....just remember one thing Sujal...mere life me tumhare alawa aur koi nahi aayega.....

Sujal: Kashish tum aisa nahin karsakti khud ke saath...agar tumhari kismat me mujse bhi zyada acha ladka hua to tumhe usse apnana hoga...

Kashish: i wont...nahi kar paungi....

Sujal: par kyun Kashish?maybe you deserve someone better..

Kashish: no one is like you ...

Sujal just looks down...

Sujal: tum bhi to dusron se bohat alag ho Kashish...

Kashish: to kya tum meri jagah kisi ko donge...agar woh mujse bhi jyada achchi ho..

Sujal: agar woh tumse achi huyi to?...shayad hi koi ladki tumse zyada achi hosakti hai...

Kashish: agar huyi to...

Her words starts to weaken...

Sujal: to bhi main tumhari jagah usse nahin de paunga...maine khud ko tumse jo baand diya hai...

Kashish smiles at him..

Kashish: really?....aur woh kaise..

Sujal looks at her and gently encloses his fingers with hers as he lifts their hands up...

Sujal: aise...

Kashish: achcha..

Sujal: hmm...kyun tumhe kya lagga?

Kashish: nothing....

Sujal smiles at her...

Sujal: hmm...ok...

They continue to walk whilst talking to each other...getting to know more about each other...when Sujal looked at his watch and realised it is 3am.....

Sujal: Kashish...your really lucky ke tum yahan Mumbai me akeli rehti ho...warna ab tak bahar rehna shayad tumhare liye mushkil hota...but i don't want to keep you out till late...to chalen?

Kashish: hmm..chalo..thank god...mom yaha nahi..

Sujal smiles thinking about her mom...

Sujal: tumhari mom bohat achi hain...she really cares for you..

Kashish: i know..lekin muje nahi tumhe dant padti...kisi ki beti ko 3 baje raat ko beach pe..'

Sujal: i'm really sorry..muje waqt ka ehsaas hi nahin hua..warna main itni dair nahin karta...ab chalte hain...warna aur dair hojayegi...

Kashish: hmm...chalo...

Sujal lets go of her hand as they start walking towards the car...Sujal look at Kashish who is slightly shivering...he opens the back door and gets his jacket from back seat and places it around her shoulders...Kashish holds it close to her body wrapping her hands tighter.....Sujal opens the door for her as she sits inside then he walks to the other side and sits inside..he turns on the heater and then drives off

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey Hun's

how many times can I repeat the same thing......A mind blowing part......luvvvvv'd it..........finally the start of a relationship......albit its different then the typical start.....usually the rumors follow after the start of relation lekin this time its before the relation....hehe.....and u know the saying jaha dua hota hai waha pe aag to hoti hai...hehe.....is baar its soo wrong.......well...atleast they did take the situation and deal with it....and of course Kashish's parents wouldnt like it if their daughter stopped dating an eligable bachelor like sujal....hehe.......sujal is a typical modern guy...a fast driver.....scary as hell....hehe......but atleast he listened to kashish and went slow....the party was a gr8 idea.....wow...both them closer...hehe.......neha was right when a designer doesnt know wht to wear its means something is seriously wrong and of course indications of luvvv.......hehe......and of course the last scene....atleast they admit to themself and to each other tht they have attraction and feeling for each other...hehe.....cant wait to read more........best wishes...
luv ya.....
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Edited by kyunki_iloveu - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely part !!
It was soo cute !
Cant wait for them to fall in love!!
Continue soon !
Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wowwwwwwww!!! First of all MERRY CHRISTMAS!!! And guys.....its the best Christmas Gift....blv me!!!

Sujal Kashish n date/......twice in one UD.....best treat hai ye!!! And u c.....mujhe to abhise ye best part lag raha hai....jabki its the 5th part nly.....iska matlab age ke parts bhi kitne achhe honge na....I knw they will be....coz u two r awesum!!!

I luved the way they talked on the date. Sujal talked abt giving their relation a chance.....how sensible!!! And Kashish too agreed...and Sujal says its all 'Kismat ki ghalti'......I hope kismat aisi sunahri ghaltiya hamesha karti rahe....hehe.

And then SK on beach party.....media aur Vivan-Rewa ki wajah se they were acting like a couple....and even that was sweet. And I guess they hav many things common in them.....and I like this idea of being common....

And of course their convo after the party was sooooooooooo amazing!!! U described the sweet silent love perfectly....widd complete strangers....I guess....this is how it shud be going ahead.....u guys were just perfect!!!

I loved this part soooo much. Thank u Summi n Kashish. Pls continue soon.

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