Jaazib.....SujalnKashish.....Last Part..06/17

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Jaazib

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Intro

Late night.....1am....

The bright light from the moon lights up the dark night along with a spectacular beach view.....under the night skies we see dark clear and calm water with the moon reflected on it....the sand of the beach looked equally gorgerous........we see a car drive in and stop at the entrance of the beach......moments later a man looking dashing in a tuxedo gets out of the car and walks over to the passenger side to open the door......and place his hand out for its occupant...and we finally see a stylish woman wearing a red and white cocktail dress sitting inside......from the looks of how their dressed we know that they have just come from a party.........

man: Would you like to spend sometime at this beach?...

The woman smiles at him and places her hand into his awaiting hand and encloses her fingers with his....

Woman: Nothing would please me more?r...

He looks at their joined hands then back at her and smiles......

Man: to chale...warna tum to yahi pe raat bita dogi apni baatoin se....

Woman: ofcourse...maine kab manna kiya hai...chalo...

She gets out of the car while placing her clutch on the seat and closing the door.....the man starts to head towards the beach but stops when he hears his companion scream his name...........

woman: Sgggg....

He turns back towards her...

Sujal: hmmm..kya hua...chila kyun rahi ho Kash?

Kashish is holding a car handle with one hand while trying to open the strap of the sandle with her free hand.....she looks at him while bending down trying to free her sandles.....

Kashish: hun....i need to take my sandles off....inhe pehen ke main kaise beach pe chal sakti hoon...

Sujal smiles at her and walks to her...

Sujal: here hun...let me help u..

He moves closer to her and bends down gently opening the straps of her sandals

Kashish: Thanks ....pata nahi tumhare bina what would I do....

Sujal: mere binna?..that would never happen...i am always with you..

He opens the straps and gently removes her sandals for her..he opens the back door of the car and places her sandals inside the car ...he looks at her while taking of his coat also placing it in the back seat of the car then closing the door and locking the car........

Kashish: you know what SG......tum perfect husband material ho....you really are the best....

Sujal: and you are the most romantic wife a man can have...

Kashish: hun ..romantic to main hoon kya tumhe koi aitraaz hai is baat pe....

to prove her point she moves forward and steps onto his toes while encircling her hands around his neck to balance herself.......He smiles at her while wrapping his arms around her waist to support her........

Sujal: hey..muje kyun aitraaz hoga...bas hairaani hai ke hamari shaadi ke 5 saal baad bhi tum utni hi romantic ho...i'm a lucky guy for sure

Kashish: agar maine romance karna chod diya to...won't you feel as if something is wrong with me..

Sujal: definetly...kyunki tum to hamesha se hi romantic ho..mujse bhi zyada...but you make up for me........

Kashish: Hun....tumhara beach pe jane ka mann hai ki yahi se wapas ghar....

Sujal: abhi to hum yahan pe aaye hain aur abhi hi chale jaayen...not so soon...

Kashish: so whats the plan...

Sujal: aaj ka plan yeh hai...ke tum...humari kahani ek baar phir se dohraogi

Kashish moves back from him removing her hands from around his neck and stepping off from his toes...

Kashish: pehle lets take a walk..

Sujal: sure..lets go...

He takes her hand in his as they start to walk on the sandy beach..Both of them enjoying the cool water breeze as they walk near the edge of the sea on the wet sand...Kashish stops and stands there looking towards the sea....Sujal comes from behind and holds her while placing his hands on hers and bending down to kiss her shoulder..

Sujal: so...am I going to hear our story hun?

Kashish: hun...tum jante ho hamari puri story to phir kyun tum phirse.....

Sujal: kyunki humari kahani bohat hi interstring hai...aur main woh kahani phir se sunna chahta hoon...please Kash...mere liye suna do na

He encloses his arms around her waist holding her against himself as he gently kisses her ear..

Kashish: SG ...tum jante ho....tum jab bhi muje Please kehte ho to ...I got scared....pata nahi tumhare Please ke bad kya honewala hai...

Sujal: muje sirf humari kahani sunni hai...nothing else..i promise

Kashish: bahot lambi hai.....5 saal tak ki kahani hai...

Sujal: hmmm..jaanta hoon...par bohat waqt hai humare paas...the whole night infact....

Kashish: can we sit....I know tumhe beach pe bethna pasand nahi....but I am tired from the party.....ple..I know tumhe pasand nahi....but it wont spoil your clothes.....

Sujal: Its Ok Kash.....no problem

Sujal moves back.....pulling his shirt out and opening the buttons of his sleeves then rolling it up...he sits down on the sand while opening the top button of his collar...he places his hand out for her to sit down...She places her hand in his looking deeply in his eyes..He smiles as he pulls her towards him..so that she ends up in his lap..she smiles whilst wrapping her arms around his neck...and putting her head on his chest with her eyes still looking into his.....in her eyes he can see her love for him......some strands of hair fall on her face..he moves his hand up towards her face as he slowly moves her hair back with his fingers still not breaking eye contact...he bends forward kissing her forehead...

Kashish: hun....wont you give me my good luck kiss?...

He smiles at her whilst slowly caressing her cheeks...

Sujal: of course i will...

He bends forward capturing her lips in his and kissing her passionately...Kashish holds his shirt collar pulling him towards her...He moves closer to her deepening the kiss as his hands slowly caress her legs which are resting in his lap...She moves her hand and places them on his which are moving up....she moves back while wiping her lipstick from his lips while catching her breathe....He smiles at her whilst catching his breath...

Sujal: i just love the flavour of your lipstick..

He winks at her

Kashish: I know.....aaj se 5 saal 3 mahine pehle bhi tumne yahi kaha tha....you always love that....

Sujal: thats what i love about you the most...you remember every small detail...tabhi to main chahta tha ke tum humari is kahani ko phirse dohrao..ab muje sunao to sahi...

Kashish: ok hun...hold on...sunati hoon...

He holds on to her around the waist..

Sujal: i am holding on hun...ab sunao

Kashish smiles at him while she starts to tell him their story...

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Intro...pg-1
Part-1...pg-6
Part-2...pg-9
Part-3-..pg16
Part-4...pg-18
Part-5...pg-20
Part-5...pg-20
Part-6...pg-24
Part-7...pg-26
Part-8...pg-30
Part-9...pg-37
Part-10..pg-39
Part-11..pg-42
Part-12..pg-44
Part-13..pg-46
Part-14..pg-50
Part-15..pg-53
Part-16..pg-56
Part-17..pg-59
Part-18..pg-61
Part-19..pg-66
Part-20..pg-69
Part-21..pg-72
Part-22..pg-75
Part-23..pg-78
Part-24..pg-80
Part-25..pg-83
Part-26..pg-87
Part-27..pg-90
Part-28..pg-93
Part-29..pg-96
Part-30..pg-100
Part-31..pg-103
Part-32..pg-105
Part-33..pg-109
Part-34..pg-113
Part-35..pg-117
Part-36..pg-119
Part-37..pg-122
Part-38..pg-124
Part-39..pg-127
Part-40..pg-131
Last Part..pg-133
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ahha am the first to comment...........................hello dears am very happy u both started a new sk ff..................congrats and very good luck.......................

first i wanna know whats the meaning of Jaazib???????????????????????

very nice lovely start....................sujal and kashish are married that too for 5yrs and their romance and love is still intact.................sujal is very caring and romantic but kashish is more romantic than him in this intro...........so sujal uses the word please many times...........wanna know for what all he has used the word please.........i loved the way though sujal doesnt like to sit on the sand but for kashish he sat and took her on his lap..........i liked the description very much............twas very cute and lovely...................so this time we will come to know about their story through kashish repeating their love story to sujal....................different way to start.......................in this kashish will be kash and sujal sg..........hmmmmmmmmmm..................cant wait to know how its gonna begin....................cont soon dears.......love u both.........................

i neednt say but still include me too in the pm list.....................
Edited by spvd - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey hun's

CONGRATS!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏
A start of a new journey...not only for Sujal and Kashish but for us readers as well as the both of u........lagta hai ke is baar ke kahani will be rocking as well as romantic....😳😳....isliye abhi se blush kardeti hoon....😳...waise bhi agar intro aisa hai to pata nahi aage aur kya hoga....😉😉.........pata nahi aur kya kahu main.........afterall tum dono ke ff hai to of course ff tho different hogi.........first it was the traditional love story with saajhi......thn the atypical story with aashna......thn the friendship love of aarzi.....aaab JAAZIB.....kya title hai....absolutely rocking...........haar baar ke tara different story....different SK...and different shocks...😆😆😆...........
😳.......bahot is rocking start hai....aur romantic bhi...cant believe it they are already married........so end pata hai....lekin from start to finish kya hota hai woh dekhne ke liye waiting soo eagerly.............
thnks nahi kahungi warna dono muje marogi......isliye sirf best wishes aur good luck keh rahi hoon.........
Congrats once again......all the best.........though u guys dont need it.......because we all know tht u guys will rock it..........⭐️⭐️⭐️
luvvvv ya 😊
Mira (naam likne ke zaroorat he kya?😆😆)..............
Edited by kyunki_iloveu - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Congrats you guys for starting another amazing SK ff
This is like your 3rd or 4th one together
i hope you write many more in the future
anyways this ff is very lovely
im sooo happy that they are married in here
i would love to listen to their love story
hope it wont be too sad
and sujal is soooo caring of kashish
but one question wat does JAAZIB mean???
anyways cont very very soon
dying to read the first part
Add me to the PM list plzzz
~ Roshni ~
Edited by lilindiangurl13 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Congrats on your new FF!!!
Sonds awesome!!
Please continue soon..
and Do PM me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow.....gr8 to hav another Sujal-Kashish ff from u guys. Jaazib....is an interesting name....and this story will be in flashbak.....gr8!!! At least we knw the present....hehe. I'm really eager to knw their luv story.....pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amzinn con'tt soonn!!!😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow yeh intro hi itna romantic hai.. So they are already married 5 years back interesting.. SK on beach amazing mujhe ek gaana gaane ka mann kar raha hai iss situation par "Shinning in the sand and sun like a pearl upon the ocean come & feel me.. Shinning in the sand & sun like a pearl upon the ocean come & heal me.."

Cont soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Congrats you guys for starting another amazing FF mai hamesha se hi aap ke FF ki ardent reader rahi hun and It is really Overwhelming to be a part of every FF of urs
Congracts once agai and do keep PM me whenever u update

Lekha
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wow
it look really good
so it is going to be in flash back mood
contd soon
waiting to see how u start it

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