FF:Chance pe Dance last part..(part 22) (pg.36)END - Page 9

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Posted: 15 years ago
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wowowow i really love your part 8 and 9 plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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shafoo-thanks and i will continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey really nice part.....hey tht akash is dead or alive??????????........continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
heyy arushi
really nice part
so adhiraj is not dead its sm1 else
plzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lucario -thanks and yes aakash is alive he is admitted to hospital...and yes i will contiue soon.
sajanroxx20-thanks and yes i will continue soon.
seema.mittal2-thanks and yes adhiraj is alive and let me tell u that it is just the beginning of muders and i will definetly continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#006633" size="2">part 10


after 2-3 months

it was 9:00 o' clock in the morning


dia-'yeh4th murder hai.aakhir yeh sab kaun kar raha hai?'

benji-'kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha!'


nupur-'mam....sir yeh dekhiyen mujhe kya mila?'

gunjan-'yeh toh ek note hai....isme khoon seh likha hua hai'


dia-'show me....isme likha hai ki -'ab tak yaha par tike ho.bhag jao yaha seh chale jao varna kahi yeh khoon jaanleva na ban jay.aajraat 8:30 baje maut nishchit hai-khooni'

benji-'lagta hai ab koi safe nahi hai'


samrat-'sir hum yaha seh kahi nahi jayenge'

mayank-'aaj toh humara dance performance hai.voh bhi 7:00 baje seh shuru hai'


dia-'i think hume aaj ka show cancel kar dena chahiye'

benji-'nahi....hum asa nahi kar sakte aaj bade bade celebrities aur jane mane log yaha aayenge.voh khooni kisi koh nahi maar payega.tight securitieska bandobazhai.aaj tum cheo ko hi apna performance dena padega kyoki tum log hi sabse best dancers ho'


gunjan-'yes sir hum apni taraf seh pure koshish karenge'

suhaani-'aap humpe bharosa rakhe...hum in dhamkiyon vale notes seh nahi darenge aur pichle sare khoon ko dekher bhi peche nahi hatenge'


samrat-'sir hume kuch nahi hoga'

mayank-'adhiraj kaha hai?'


dia-'haan jab bhi koi khoon hota hai adhiraj kyo gayab rehta hai?'

adhiraj-'mam main toh yehi peh tha bas pani peeneh gaya tha'


nupur-'arae adhiraj tumhe itna paseena kyo aa raha hai?'

adhiraj-'mujhe...nahi toh voh...main naha raha tha phir pani pekar yaha aya'


suhaanito herself-'kuch toh gadbad hai'

nupur to herself-'yaha toh puri daal hi kaali hai'


benji-'okey guys all the best for your performance i hope aaj shaam ko tum sab apna best performance doge'

6 of them said together 'yes sir'


they all went to their rooms.


gunjan was praying to God for their performance and was litteraly scared from the murderer

nupur and suhaani were thinking very deeply and were moving here and there and they both banged their heads



nupur-'sorry'

suhaani-'me too'


gunjan-'yeh tum dono kya kar rahe ho?'

nupur-'gunjan,tujhe is adhraj mein kuch gadbad nahi lagta?'

gunjan-'gadbad! kyo nupur kya hua?'


suhaani-'mujhe bhi is adhiraj par doubt hota hai ki jab bhi koi khoon hota voh vaha peh thodi der mein pohuchta hai aur ek solid bahana tayar rakhta hai'

nupur-'sahi kaha suhaani...tumne dekha voh kis tarah sweat kar raha tha'


suhaani-'haan maine dekha....kuch toh gadbad hai'


on the other side samrat was thinking something and mayank was checking for the costumes and said to samrat-'yeh costume sahi hai'


samrat-'nahi mujhe kuch thik nahi laga'

mayank-'kyo isme kya problem hai?'

samrat-'problem hai'

mayank-'its perfect'

samrat looks at mayank and said-'perfect!tum kis bare mein baat kar rahe ho bhai'

mayank-'costumes...kyo tum kis bare mein baat kar rahe ho'

samrat-main....voh adhi...kuch nahi...haan yeh costume sahi hai'


mayank-'hmm....aaj pata nahi par ek dar sa lag raha hai....asa lag raha hai ki koi choot jayega!'

samrat-'asa kyo soch rahe ho bhai sab theek hoga us murderer ka toh main khud murder kar doonga'

mayank-'tu bhi na'

they both started laughing


it was 6:30 in the evening and all the 6 of them were nicely dressed and nervous.

dia-'all the best guys... i hope u get successful'


<font color="#000000">to be continued....................................................................</font>

<font color="#000000">i hope u all like.comments/critisize r required.i shall be waiting for it.😊</font>



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Edited by SaJan_RaDevBest - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
gr88888 update... luved it..
plzzz do continue soon...

love
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
Really cool update......wanna know about murderer......it is becoming more and more interesting as it progress.....continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sajanroxx20 -thanks and yes i will continue soon........😊
lucario -thank a lot and just wait and watch because more twists r coming...........😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyyy arushi
nice part
i just wish nothings gonna happen to five of them
plzzzz continue soon

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