FF:Chance pe Dance last part..(part 22) (pg.36)END - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
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seema.mittal2 -many many thanks for liking my part....i will post the next part soon.
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part 8
meanwhile in the break gunjan was seraching for suhaani and nupur and found suhaani sitting in a bench.
gunjan-'di! tum yaha bathi ho aur maine tumhe kaha kaha nahi dhunna!'
suhaani was not answering anything as she was lost in her thoughts.
gunjan-'kya hua di tum itni upset kyo lag rahi ho?sab theek toh hai'
suhaani-'haan..sab thik hai gunjan.kuch nahi hua..sab'and then she starts crying
gunjan-'diiii! tum roh kyo rahi ho batao mujhe kya hua?'
suhaani with a sobbing voice-'gu...gunjan mera joh partner hai na adhiraj vo bilkul co-operating nahi hai.dance meri zindagi hai aur dekho mujhe ek asa partner mila jo co-operate hi nahi karna janta.uski vajah seh mere steps sahi seh nahi ho pa rahe hai aur ab toh partners change bhi nahi ho sakte hai.tu hi bata main kya karo?'
gunjan to herself-'main toh di seh apni problem share karne aayi thi aur yaha toh di ki bhi problem mujhse badi hai! bechari di main apni problem batakar usae aur tense nahi karooni'and then she says to suhaani-'di tum chinta mat karo main adhiraj seh baat karoongi voh vaisa ladka nahi hai voh jaldi co-operate karna seek jayega'
suhaani-'tu sach mein usse baat karegi'
gunjan-'haan trust me'
suhaani-'arae yaad aya tu mujhe seh yaha kuch kehne aayi thi bol kya hua?'
gunjan-'voh....kuch nahi di main toh asae hi dhoond rahi thi aapko'
one hour has passed and all of them again came back to their places and stand in their position.
after one hour the practice was held quite nice and gunjan was not complaining anything to samrat nor suhaani was getting irritated as she knew that gunjan will talk to adhiraj soon and on the other side nupur and mayank were also practising well and both were happy.
guys-'okey guys and gals aaj kain liye practice kafi hai isliye boys aur girls apni respective rooms mein chale jaye'
it strucked 9:30 pm and gunjan went to adhiraj's room.the room was shared by adhiraj and 2 other boys too but at that time nobody was there in the room.gunjan knocked the door but no sound came from the other side of the room.the door was not locked so gunjan opened the door and nupur was also accompanied by her as gunjan has told everything to nupur also.
gunjan-'yaha toh bohut andhera hai nupur'
nupur-'sahi kaha yaha peh light ka switch kaha hai?'
gunjan-'pata nahi mujhe toh kuch nahi dikh raha hai'and suddenly gunjan found a candle and matchstick in the table as she was touching everything over there.
nupur-'kya hua?kuch mila?'
gunjan-'haan shayad ek candle aur matchstick ka box'
nupur-'toh candle ko jala na'
gunjan-'haan' and then she lit the candle and both were horrified by seeing a dead body lying on the floor with lots of blood .
nupur-'gu...gunjan....mujhe bohut dar lag raha hai'
gunjan-'mujhe bhi and they both screamed together and samrat heard the voice of them as his and mayank's room was just behind that room.
samrat-'bhai mujhe shayad gunjan aur nupur ki chillane ki aawaz aayi'
mayank-'yeh kaise ho sakta hai yaha peh toh sare boys ka room hai girls ka toh bilkul opposide side mein hai'
samrat-'nahi mujhe bagal wale kamra seh un dono ki awaz aayi main jaa raha hoon tum bhi chalo'
mayank-'acha thike chalo'
they both went there and found gunjan and nupur shivering with their eyes closed and holding a candle in their hand.so samrat switches on the light.
samrat-'kya hua tum dono thik toh ho'
mayank-'yaha kya kar rahe ho?'
nupur-'ma...mayank voh dekho laash...laash!'
gunjan-'samrat...laash dekho'
to be continued..................................................................
i hope u all liked it.let me tell u that from here the mystery begins😈.comments/critisize r required.i shall be waiting for it.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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gr888 update.. plzzz do continue soon..!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey what is this......dance hi dance me yeh lash ka Kya chakkar hai...confused.....what a twist......Pls continue soon.....and whr is adhiraj?..... is he really came for learning dance or something else?...add me into ur buddy list whenever u become active member......tc
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sajanroxx20 -thanks a lot and i will post the next part very soon.
lucario-if u r not liking this twist then u can tell me i will stop the twist.
sana866-thanks for the lovely compliments.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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no no continue wit this twist..........i was confuzed tht it came accidently.........i didnt thought about it.so was shocked...........continue with it..........wanna read further with this twist..... i think this twist will bring all couples close to each other i think.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hmmmmm......mystery i love mysteries and with my fav couples it becomes more intresting plzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lucario -alright i can understand as i myself was little confused whether to post it or not but if the readers r liking it i have no further problem posting more.

seema.mittal2-thanks for liking the starting of mystery.
Edited by SaJan_RaDevBest - 15 years ago
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t-mayur-sajan-j -thanks and yes i will definetly continue soon.....😊
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part 9

samrat-'arae yeh toh ek laash hai....bhai dekho yeh toh ek laash hai...bhai!bhai!' samrat found mayank fainted on the floor gunjan-'arae ab isko kya hua?'
nupur-'mayank! mayank! tumeh kya hua? samrat mayank ko kya hua'
samrat-main bhul gaya tha ki bhai ko blood seh phobia hai.'
gunjan-'chalo sukr hai thik hai'
nupur-'voh toh thik rehna hi tha' and suddenly they realised about the laash and three of them screamed together-'laaaaash!!!!!!!'
samrat-'gunjan chalo hum dia mam aur benji sir ko bula laate hai nupur tum mayank ka kyaal rakho'
nupur-'haan thike' they both hurriedly went from there and found dia and benji in the corridor
gunjan-'mam...mam laash laash'
dia-'laash?' samrat-'yes mam adhiraj keh room mein laash' dia looked at benji and said-'wat?jaldi chalo!'
they all went to adhiraj's room and then after sometime everyone gathered over there.mayank was fine.
dia-'yeh sab kaisa hua?'
benji-'yeh toh aakash ki laash hai! iska toh khoon hua hai jaldi ambulance bulao yeh ladka toh adhiraj aur mohit keh saath room share kar raha tha.'
samrat called the ambulance and aakash was taken to the hospital.his dance partner riya accompanied him to the hospital.
dia-i hope voh thik ho jaye vaise yeh adhiraj aur mohit kaha hai?'
adhiraj-'mam hum yaha hai' dia-'tum dono ko kuch pata hai?' adhiraj-'nahi mam actually main aur mohit toh dance room mein gaye the kyoki mera wallet vaha reh gaya tha....hume toh in sabke bare mein kuch nahi pata'
dia-'okey!aap sab apne kamre mein jaye...aur satark rahe.shayad yeh better hoga ki aap apne dance partners keh saath rahe'
they all went from there meanwhile samrat asks gunjan-'tum dono adhiraj ,aakash aur mohit keh kamre mein kya karne gaye the'
gunjan-'voh hum adhiraj seh baat karne gaye the ki voh di keh sath dance mein co-operate kyo nahi kar raha hai'
samrat-'acha'
mayank-'par ek baat samajh mein nahi aayi ki dance acadamy ki pehle din hi itna bada hadsa aur voh bhi khoon'
nupur-'sahi kaha tumne mujhe toh bohut dar lag raha hai main toh yaha seh wapis jana chahti hoon'
mayank-'nahi nupur hum sab yaha apna career banane aaye hai hum darkar nahi bhaag sakte'
samrat-'sahi kaha bhai hum darkar phiche nahi hatenge'
they all went to their rooms.
to be continued....................................................................
i hope u all liked it.comments/critisize r required.i shall be waiting for it.😊

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