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Ultrachic

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Posted: 15 years ago

#91

seema.mittal2-thanks a lot and u will soon come to know....i will post the next part soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#92

hey very nice part loved it
n i loved the mytery a lot
pls continue soon will be waiting for ur next part.

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Posted: 15 years ago

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part 11

the show begins.many celebrities have come to see the dance show.

adhiraj and suhaani were the first one to perfom.they performed in the song 'love mera hit hit' from the movie billo.they have done a very nice job.

samrat and gunjan were the second one to perform.they performed in the song 'main tera dhadkan teri'from the movie ajab prem ki gazab kahani.they also danced very gracefully.

mayank and nupur were the last one to perform.they perfomed in the song 'prem ki naiya hai raam ke bharose' from the movie ajab prem ki gazab kahani.they also perfomed very beautifully.

diya-'wow!that was superb.tum logo neh bohut acha perform kiya.i proud of u all.'

they all thanked together to diya.

suddenly suhaani gets a call.she attains that call but it was a blank call.she gets a little disturbed.gunjan saw that so she asks her-'kya hua di?tum pareshan lag rahi ho! sab thik toh hai na?'

suhaani-'haan....haan sab thik hai. mujhe pani pena hai. mai abhi peekar aati hoon'

gunjan-'thike di....jaldi ana'

it was 8:00 pm when suhaani went from there and on the way her hankerchief falls. she bents to pick that up and founds a note lying over there.she opens the note.it states that-' second floor ke corridor mein aake milo'

suhaani gets a little nervous but she went to the second floor.

meanwhile the celebrities were meeting with samrat,gunjan,nupur,mayank and adhiraj.

then nupur asks to gunjan-'arae gunjan kitna time ho gaya hai aur suhaani ab tak wapis nahi aayi voh yeh sab miss kar rahi hai!'

gunjan-'tum sahi keh rahi ho....mujhe ek baar dekhna chahiya'

samrat-'main bhi chalta hoon'

nupur-'haan gunjan tu samrat keh saath ja vaise bhi diya mam ne kahi bhi akele jane ke liye mana kiya hai'

gunjan looks at nupur and nods her head and on the other side samrat was thinking to himself-'chalo! ise bahane gunjan ki dil baat jaan loonga'

gunjan and samrat starts walking and on the way samrat asks to gunjan-'tumhe kis tarah keh ladke pasand hai?'

gunjan-'yeh kaisa sawal hai?'

samrat-'batao na!'

gunjan-'well.... jo decent ho,logo ki bhawnai samjhe,sachha ho aur jo bohut dil ka saaf ho'

samrat to himself-'in sab mein se toh mere pass ek bhi quality nahi hai....ab kya karo?'

gunjan-'kuch kaha?'

samrat-'kuch nahi!'

and suddenly they find suhaani's body lying on the floor

gunjan-'diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!'

all heard gunjan's voice and everyone come over there.suhaani was taken to hospital and gunjan was continuosly crying.nupur and samrat were supporting her while mayank was supporting nupur and on the other way adhiraj was shocked.

soon suhaani was in the I.C.U.and everyone were praying for her.

gunjan was sobbing badly and saying-'meri di...meri di koh kuch nahi hoga hena!'

samrat was holding her shoulders by his hands and was saying-'kuch nahi hoga tumahri di ko voh bilkul thik ho jayegi'

nupur was also crying and was saying to gunjan-'haan gunjan....su...suhaani bilkul thik hai use kuch nahi hoga'

mayank was holding nupur's hand and was saying her not to cry.

after sometime docter came from the I.C.U. and everyone starts asking to him for suhaani's health-'relax! ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai.she is out of danger.

gunjan hurriedly asks to doctor-'kya main usse mil sakti hoon'

doctor-'jee haan aap usse mil sakti hai magar jadader keh liye nahi'

gunjan-ji doctor'and she went inside along with nupur.

doctor asks to mayank and samrat to fill some forms and asks adhiraj to buy some medicines.

meanwhile dia was talking to benji for the increase of murders and whether they should inform to police or not.

suhaani tells to nupur and gunjan-'police ko....iska pata nahi chalna chahiye nahi toh voh sabko mar dalega yeh dekho is note mein likha hai....yeh mujhe corridor mein mila aur jaise hi isko maine padkar apne hath mein liye kisine kere piche seh chako bhukod diya'

nupur-'thike suhaani mein yeh abhi diya mam aur benji sir ko dikhakar aati hoon'

suhaani nodes her head.

to be continued....................................................................

i hope u all liked it.comments/critisize r required.i shall be waiting for it.😊

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jyotika

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Posted: 15 years ago

#94

grrr88888 update.. luved it..
keep it up..

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Avinash

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Posted: 15 years ago

#95

hey really nice part...........mystery is becoming more interesting....waiting for next one...continue soon

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t-mayur-sajan-j

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

g8 update
keep updating
loved the way mayu supports nupur
cont soon

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#97

wow wow tht was awesome part

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Ultrachic

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Posted: 15 years ago

#98

thanks a lot guys......i will post the next part soon and merry christmas to all of u🥳

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Ultrachic

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Posted: 15 years ago

#99

part 12

nupur went to dia and benji and showed them the note.

dia-'kya?voh sabko mar dalega?'

benji-'lagta toh yahi hai.....i think hume uski baat maan leni chahiye police ko iske baare mein koi khabar nahi milni chahiye'

nupur-'sir...main doctor seh pooch keh aati hoon ki voh suhaani ko discharge kab karenge?'

nupur went to the doctor and found gunjan also standing there.

gunjan-'nupur maine doctor seh pooch liya hai voh suhaani koh doh din baad discharge karenge' nupur-'yeh toh achi baat hai'

just then samrat and mayank also came there

gunjan-'main aaj raat keh liye yehi ruk jaati hoon'

samrat-'main bhi tumahre saat ruk jaata ho'

gunjan-'nahi main manage kar loongi samrat tum pareshan mat ho thike!'

samrat-'mujhe koi problem nahi hai rukne mein'

nupur -'haan gunjan... samrat rukh jaye toh hi better hoga kyoki tum toh jaanti he ho har roz ki ghatnao keh baare mein'

just then dia and benji came and dia said-'yes gunjan....samrat aaj raat tumahre saat hospital mein rukh jaye yehi thik hoga'

gunjan-'yes mam'

after sometime all went from there and only samrat and gunjan left.it becomes dark at night and suhaani was sleeping.gunjan was sitting on the bench and samrat was sitting besides her.

samrat-'raat keh gyarah baj rahe hai aur tumne kuch nahi khaya.yeh lo khana kha lo'

gunjan-'nahi samrat mujhe bhook nahi hai tum kha lo'

samrat-'nahi jab tak tum nahi khaogi main bhi nahi khaonga isliye ab khao'

he feeds gunjan on his mouth and gunjan starts smiling and said-'samrat...main bachi nahi ho main kha loongi tum bhi khao chalo!'

and they both started eating and after sometime gunjan rests her head at samrat's shoulders and was slept as she was not aware because she was very tired.samrat starts smiling and removes her lock of hair from her face and pins behind her ears and he also went off to sleep.

in the morning gunjan was giving breakfast to suhaani and samrat was still remembering about the previous night.

in the dance acadamy nupur was making a lot of mistakes in dance as she was only thinking about suhaani and gunjan.mayank asks him-'kya hua nupur?aaj tum dance mein itni mistakes kyo kar rahi ho?gunjan aur suhaani ki yaad aa rahi hai?'

nupur-'haan'

dia saw that so she tells nupur-'nupur...tum break mein jakar unse mil sakti ho thike.'

nupur-'thankyou mam'

in the break nupur was going to the hospital just then mayank came and asks-'main bhi chalo.mujhe samrat ki chinta ho rahi hai'

nupur smiles and said-'thike mayank tum bhi chalo'

when they were going from the passage nupur's cell phone rangs.it was gunjan

mayank-'main auto pakadta hoon tab tak tum apna call receive karo'

nupur-'thike mayank'

nupur starts talking to gunjan and found adhiraj talking to somebody on the phone

nupur-'main tujhe baad mein phone karti hoon gunjan bye'

then she went nearer to adhiraj's room and heard-'sab plan ke mutabik chal raha hai!jaldi yeh sab yaha seh darkar bhag jayenge! mujhe best dancer banne seh koi nahi rok sakta....thike main abhi vaha pohuchta hoon'

adhiraj went outside.

nupur to herself-'yeh adhiraj kaha jaa raha hai aur iska plan kya hai mujhe pata lagana hoga'

nupur comes out of the acadamy and found adhiraj sitting inside a taxi

just then mayank comes and asks to nupur-'chalo nupur! mujhe auto mil gaya'

nupur-'nahi tum jao mujhe kuch kaam hai main vaha thodi der mein pohuchti hoon'

mayank-'haan lekin nupur suno toh....'but nupur was gone

nupur was in a taxi and was following adhiraj but just then a car came in between her and adhiaj's taxi and he changes the road and nupur was unsuccessful in following him and she says-'oh no!yeh adhiraj kaha chala gaya? ab kya karo?chalo driver... city hospital chalo'

nupur went to city hospital and found mayank,samrat and gunjan talking to doctor just then mayank saw him and he comes to her and asks-'arae nupur....kaha chali gayi thi?'

nupur-'voh mujhe kuch kaam tha! kya hua?....doctor kya keh rahe ha?'

mayank-'chalo!'

doctor-'suhaani is a brave girl.usne apne aap ko bohut better bana liya hai.maine kisi patient ko itna bahadur kabhi nahi dekha.but the credit also goes to her sister gunjan and his friend samrat.gunjan neh suhaani ka bohut ache seh kyaal rakha aur samrat ne bhi uski madat ki. they both r so caring.aap suhaani ko aaj hi apne saat le jaa sakte hai'

nupur-'thankyou very much doctor'

doctor smiles and went from there

gunjan to herself-'samrat itna bura ladka bhi nahi hai.in fact voh toh bohut caring hai.maine use galat samjha tha'

to be continued................................................................

i know that this part was quite long but i hope u have enjoyed it.comments/critisize r required.i shall be waiting for it.😊