FF:Chance pe Dance last part..(part 22) (pg.36)END - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
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part 7 dia-'okey so lets start the first step....apne partner ka haath pakdiye'
all the partners hold their hands where as gunjan was not holding the hand of samrat
samrat-'mera hath pakdo gunjan'
gunjan-'nahi'
samrat-'kyo?agar tum mera hath nahi pakdogi toh hum dance kaise karenge?'
gunjan-'mujhe nahi pata!main nahi pakdoogi!
on the other side nupur hurriedly holds the hand of mayank
mayank-'aram seh nupur...main bhaag nahi jaonga'
nupur felt a little shy and leaves his hand
mayank-'ab hath kyo choda?pakdo na'
nupur with a little shyness-'haan....'
on the other side adhiraj was thinking something so suhaani interrupted him by saying-'kya hua?kaha kho gaye?mera hath pakdo'
adhiraj-'hath pakdoo kyo?'
suhaani-arae suna nahi the first step is to hold each other hand'
adhiraj-'oh sorry'and saying this he holds her hand
where on the other side gunjan is still not holding samrat's hand and dia saw that so she said-'hey guys any problem?'
samrat-'no mam! there is no problem'
dia-'okey!'
gunjan-'tumne asa kyo kaha ki koi problem nahi hai...mujhe problem hai tumse isliye main tumahra hath nahi pakdoongi samjhe'
samrat-'acha thik hai ek dushman ke hasiyath seh na sahi par ek dost ki hasiyath seh toh pakad sakti ho'
gunjan looks at him thoughtfully and then holds his hand
dia-'ab sare boys girls ko apni taraf pull kare aur unki aakhon mein dekhe ise dance mein facial expression kehte hai'
samrat pushes gunjan towards himself and they were standing too close to each other.gunjan was not able to look at his eyes but samrat was constantly looking at her eyes and thinking to himself-'kya maine kabhi gunjan ki aakhen notice ki!voh kitni beautiful hai'
on the other side mayank pulls nupur towards himself and both were looking deep into each other's eyes as mayank was not looking at that sense but nupur thought that mayank also started liking her so she was smiling slightly
on the other side adhiraj pulls suhaani towards himself but was not looking at her eyes and thinking something else and suhaani was getting irritated as he is not paying attention in the dance.
dia-'okey guys now its a brake for one hour but after that there will be again practice'
everyone goes from there but only samrat was standing there and was remembering about gunjan when he was looking at her but she was not looking at him and says to himself-'mujhe gunjan bohut ache lagne lagi hai ab use ek minute bhi bina dekhe nahi raha jaa raha'
to be continued.....................................................................
i hope u all liked it.comments/critize r requird.i shall be waiting for it.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
gr8888 update.. luved d sajan bit...
keep it up... n continue soon..
will be waiting 4 ur next update..

love
jyotika
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks a lot sana866 and sajanroxx20 for your gr8 compliments.iwill post the next part very soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow add me to your PM list
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome updats both parts r very good.....continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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g8 update
cont soon
will be eagerlly waitting for ur update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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disco_diva -sorry but i can't add as i am not an active member so that is why could not able to send pm to anyone.😭
lucario -thanks for your lovely compliments.
t-mayur-sajan-j -thanks for the nice compliments and i will post the next part very soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome update
will b waiting for ur next update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks a lot ekts i will post the next part very soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyyy
Really nice update
Plzzzz continue soon

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