Mirage: (AR)-*NOTE PAGE 26* - Page 15

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nice part!!!

hi Kiran,

This is a very different FF. Armaan with another girl! 😲 You sure are brave enough to do that and face the retorts from the phan girls 😆. Poor Riddhima is left alone. Abhi-Nikki is like an ideal couple for the others to ponder upon. That was evident in the fourth chapter. I like the constant suspense you maintain throughout the story, which keeps me hooked onto it till the end. I love the friendship between Abhi and Armaan..can feel the warmth in their relationship.

Anu

hey kiran..!!! hi :)

so finally got to read a new fic from u...
but yar i really feel smthn missing, dat charm..its not der..dunno why..:(
althou not a bad one, but it dint mak me feel d way i felt wen i read d first parts of dmg n gbh..

fingers crossed for damini...lol..dunno wats gonna happen wid her, actually to hell wid her, wanna c AR..!! wondering how u gonna make dem 2gthr..!
n so many new characters yar! why dint u pick d old n known ones??
loved nikki n abhi, cud imagine nikki in her so-kinda-bublee character..lol..n also abhi rolling his eyes on her stupid gestures..lol..

d very 1st scene of story, ridz in garden..loved it a lottttttttttttt.......very wel potraited...:)
n also ammy in his entry, white cotton shirt n denim..'haaiiiii', his usual killing look..cnt resist loving him...lol..;)
n zaara is also nice, lively gal..:)

plz mak it early to give us an update...n wid more AR scenes..:)

bye..hv a nice tym :)

n yea, prasanthi, tnx a loads once again for d link..:)

kiran...wen u gonna update next?? plz do inform..

OMGG i looooove this update!! i love your writing style..im sorry i cnt comment in detail now bt im glad you finally updated.

tnx for the pm

awwwwwwwwww ...i loved it that was superb .......