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Crazyy_Fan

@Crazyy_Fan

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#151

Heyy!! U have had me me hooked onto your ff like anything. The concept is inriguing. I m loving ur ff. Waiting eagerly for the story to unfold. Do pm me wen u update. tc bye.

Luv_Sakshi

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Hannah

@nondescript

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#152

Heylooooooooo I am here... like after 5 years LOL. BUT I AM HERE!!!! Sorry for the delay, I had an eye surgery blah blah yadda yadda wasn't allowed on the LT but I am here now. Kay so let me re-read now........

..... so I just re-read needed to refresh my memory about the part, time to give my 2 cents.

Okay so as I once said before, your style of writing is lovely! The characters are beginning to shape up even further.

AR- I love the understanding between the two... It's tres beautiful...

Ar-Damini- I love how he can get her to do what he wants... she seems like a spoilt brat.... It'll be interesting to read more about their relationship, and the circumstances which led to them getting married, they clearly do not love one another and even if they do I assume it's unilateral or a mere understanding.

Riddhima shone for me in this part, I loved her characterization and the way you have executed her character. I want to know more about her past!!!! so jaldi update!

So yee I await when you next update.... when you update that is!!!

Hannah.

P.S Are you an Arsenal fan? Oh footie!!

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Alka

@baby bubbles

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#153

kirannnn...........wen u gonna update???????
waiting eagerly.......

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#154

Yeah yeah I am here atlast!!!

Lovely part Doc. But, I am still not comfortable with Damini around. I know that this line (in particular) is a repeat. But...Anyway, as I had read it after so very long, the zing of reading and commenting is lacking for now. I am sure to come back to form soon.

Thanks again for writing it again for my day. Eagerly waiting for the next part to be up soon.

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Alka

@baby bubbles

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#155

no update??? :(

wen u gonna update kiran..............plz plz plz make it soon...

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Alka

@baby bubbles

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#156

guys, i think kiran apne ff ka existence bhi bhul gayi hai..update toh dur, no reply also..😭

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Anjali

@anjali_armaan

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#157

Aww..i sure she is really busy with something.

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Alka

@baby bubbles

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: anjali_armaan
Aww..i sure she is really busy with something.

probably..bt dont v deserve even a notice regarding her absence since so long..!

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Pebblez

@Pebblez

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: baby bubbles

probably..bt dont v deserve even a notice regarding her absence since so long..!

Oooopps! Seems like im in for a great bout of anger *ducks* and should be so, I am seriously sorry for the (was it a month long?) hiatus i went on..terrible, i know..but that's what happens when your computer decides to crash on you for th NTH time, its getting on my nerves now! I know, I know..bad excuse but valid hai..sorry for the looong wait, will reply to your comments now and will update soon too :)

Thanks, and sorry again!

Cheers! :)

Kiran

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Sheena

@AbhiNikiLuver

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#160

Uhhhh......really? No ways. I refuse to believe that you, nj, or aria would update as soon as 2 months after the last! unbelievable! so how bout you show us a miracle kiran? can we see one?

~Sheena :P