LOVE UNCONFESSED(MAYUR FF) part 19 pg 141 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyyy
Really nice promo
Plzzz update fast
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 2

Hey guys in this part I'm gonna introduce Samrat nd Gunjan

Gunjan- Diya & Udays neighbour studious and funloving has a house she stays alone her parents stay abroad.Samrat is her paying guest for extra pocket money

Samrat- Cool handsome,big flirt,BB champ,staying as paying guest in Gunjan s house .

He loves to flirt and irritate Gunjan

Both hav a soft corner for each other

Gunjan , Samrat , Diya , Uday , are very good friends.

Kapoors House

D- (on phone) Hi gunjan

G - Hi Diya kaise yaad kiya

D- Aaj meri cousin aayi hai Delhi se hum log bahar ghoomne jaare tum aur Samrat bhi hame join karo mazaa aayega

G- Ok mai aur Samrat aa jaayenge

Meanwhile Nupur unpacks her suitcase sets all her clothes , takes a quick shower and she wears a light pink chudidar suit , hair tied in a pony with little makeup looking very beautiful

She comes down to the hall were all r waiting for her

N- Hey guys yeh kaun hai?? she asks looking at Samrat and Gunjan

D- yeh hai Gunjan aur yeh samrat uska paying guest

N- Hi Gunjan shaking hands

G- Hi Nupur nice to meet u

S- Hey beautiful

G- (to herself feeling jealous) flirt karne ka ek mauka nai chodega

Samrat puts forward his hand

Nupur joning her hands

N- NAMASTE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uday laughing

S to U - tu has kyu raha hai re bohot sanskaari aur sundar ladki hai

S to N - Namaste Nupur Ji aap se milkar bohot khushi hui

N - mujhe bhi BOHOT KHUSHI HUI BHAIYAA............

S - BHAIYA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yeh sunne se pehle mai mar kyu nai gayaa aaj tak kisi ladki ne mujhe bhaiya nai kaha

N - (smiling) tou mai bulaungi jiss tarha Uday B mere Bhai usi tarah aaj se aap mere bhai

Samrat was very happy to hear wat Nupz said he didnt hav any family

S - theek hai waise bhi meri koi behen nai hai (making a sad face)

N - Nai hai nahi nai thi magar aaj se MAI HOO NA

S - Are wah SRK ki fan ho??

N - haan mere sapno ka rajkumar na bilkul DDLJ ke RAJ ki tarha hoga

S - tum to badi filmy ho ab to hamari khoob jamegi

Saying this they both give a Hi- 5

G - (with a relieved expression) agar aap bhai behen ka discussion khatam hua tou hum chalein

S - Kyu nai chasmish tum jaha le chalogi mai tumhare peeche peeche chaloonga (giving a flirty smile)

G - (irritated) Whatever

G to D - hum kaha jaa rahe hai

D - Sunrise cafe .chalein ??????????

Everyone - haan chalo

Nupur & Diya go on Diya's scooty

Samrat - (on his bike) Chalein chashmish

G - nai mai Uday B ki bike pe aa rahi hu

S - par roz college to tum mere saat hi chalti ho na

G - haan par aaj mera mood nai hai chalein Uday Bhaiya

U - haan gunjan chalo na

Samrat gives Uday a dark look

U - (scared) nai nai Gunjan tum mere saath nai aa sakti

G - (confused) Kyu Uday b aap to akele hai naa

U - nai mai akela nai hu mere saath mere snacks chips aur wafers bhi hai wo kya hai na gunjan agar mujhe raaste mein bhook lag gayi to mujhe yeh saari cheezein khani padegi aur tum late ho jaaogi

iss liye tum Sammy ke saath aao Bye

G - yeh Uday bhaiya bhi na pata nai kya bakwaas karte rehte hai

She goes back to Samrat who was looking in the opposite direction to tease her

G - Chalein Samrat

S - lekin abhi abhi to aapka mood nai tha mere saath chalne ka

G - (angrily) Theek hai mai akeli chale jaaaungi

She was about to leave Samrat holds her hand and stops her

S- acha baba sorry(making a puppy face) mai tou mazaak kar raha tha

G- ok ab chalo(nd she sits on the bike)

IN THE CAFE

Everyone is sitting they have given the order nd were just chit chatting

Food arrives they all have it Nupur tells the about Delhi Diya & Samrat tell her about the fun they have in EXCEL college As usual Uady is busy munching either pizza or burger

N- Uday bhaiya aapke burger ko pair nai hai ki wo bhaaag jayega thoda aaram se khaiye

U- Aaram se khaya tou mujhe cheese sandwitch, pizza,donut,cake yeh saari cheese khane mai late hojaayegi aur waise bhi tum mere khane ko kyu nazar laga rahi ho

Agar tumhara khana ho gaya hai tout um jaao na apne buks lene

N-Aare mai tou bhool hi gayi Dia yaha koi buk store hai kya? Mujhe kuch buks lena hai

D- Ha Nupur yaha se seedha jaake left turn ho wohi lane mai hai . tum ruko hum bhi chalet hai

N- Nai nai tum log N-joy karo mmai abhi aati hu

Saying this she leaves

IN THE BOOK STORE

Nupur searching for the buk

N- (she takes a paper from her bag nd reads) Management Studies by B.C.Agarwal haye ye bhi koi naam hai

Naam tou aisa hona chahiye MOHABBATIEN by Yash Chopra ya phir KAL HHO NA HO by Karan Johar ab kaha dhundu isse (still searching) ha mil gayi

Suddenly she comes across a book

"Autobiography of KING KHAN"

N-By god maine tou abhi abhi SRK ko yaad kar rahi thi aur dekho uski buk mere samne aa gayi . yeh tou mai zaarur padungi mujhe apna RAJ KUMAR jo dhundna hai

She takes the buk &turns suddenly she bumps into someone a strong nd muscular person .All the books in their hands fall on th e floor

N- ouch!!!!!!!!!!!! Aankhen hai ya button dekh kar nai chal sakte

M-(angrily)Tum dekh kar nai chal sakti

N-Mai tou seedhe hi chalri thi

M-Tum ladkiya kabhi apni galti nai maanti

N- Galti tumhari thi

M-tumhari thi

N- Nai tumhari

M-tumhari

All the people in the store watching them, both of them observes this nd stop shouting

N-Dekha tumhari waje se mere buks gir gayi

M-Books tou Meri bhi giri lagta hai mera din hi kharab hai

Both bend down to pick their books suddenly their forehead clash

M&N ' OOUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Looking angrily at each other pick up the books (without seeing which books they have taken)& walk in opposite directions

AT MAYANK'S HOUSE

MM- Mayu raat bohut hogayi hai tu sou jaa

M- Ha maa abhi jo buks laya hu wo refer tou karlu phir sou jaunga

Saying this he removes takes the books

M-Aare yeh kya "Autobiography Of King Khan" zaroor us pagal ladki ki hogi

MM comes from behind

MM-LADKI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Acha bachu jaane se pehle tou ladkiyo ke bare mai bohut ache vichar suna rahe thai aura b yeh kis ladki ki baat ho rahi hai

M- Maa aap jaisa souch rahi hou waisa kuch nai hai abhi bi mere ladkiyo ke bare mai wohi vichar hai Wo actually book store mein ek pagal ladki mujhse takra gati thi aur mere books gir gaye thai Galti uski thi aur wo mujh par hi barasne lagi

MM- Acha us ladki ki yeh majal jo Mayank Sharma par barse .Waise Mayu ladki dekhne mai kaisi thi(teasing him)

M- Aap bhi na maa ,

MM-Batana Mayu

M-Mijhe nai pata mai ne theek se nai dekha

MM- Koi baat nai agli baar jab milega jab dekh lena

M-Agli Baar????????????/ I hope mai ussse phir Kabhi na melu

Saying this he throws the book on the table

IN NUPURS HOUSE

N-(to herself)By god kitna ajeeb ladka tha sorry bolne bajaye miujse Nupur Bhushan Se ladne laga SADU kahin ka Khair chodo 'Ab tou mai pair pasaar kar baithungi aur apne SRK ki kahani padungi

Saying this she removes the books from her bag

N- Haye BUSINESS ECONOMICS!!!!!!!!!! yeh kis bala ka naam hai ye book tou maine nai li thi

She remembers the incident at the book store the dash with the Guy ,and the fall of books

N-yeh zaroor uss SADE ladke ki hogi jo mujse takraya tha

Iska matlab mere SRK ki book uske paas hai ab kaha dhundu uuse

(Angrily) Sara maza kirkira kar diya mera mood kharab kar diya KHADUS kahi ka

Yelling at him she goes to sleep

THAT'S IT GUYZ MY HANDS ARE PAINING NOW I HOPE THIS PART WAS LONGER SORRY FOR THE MISTAKES

PLZ COMMENT

LUV

NIDZY

Edited by mayurarti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
hey this is nice.......
har baar mayur ki mulakat ladai se hi kyun hoti hai?????
well i loved it......
i guess i am the first one to comment.......
do continue soon.........
it was very nice..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
Heyyy nidzy
That was an amazing part and long one too
Loved nupur and samrat scene
Plzz continue soon
N thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

hey this is nice.......
har baar mayur ki mulakat ladai se hi kyun hoti hai?????
well i loved it......
i guess i am the first one to comment.......
do continue soon.........
it was very nice..........

thankx for loving it dear
ab hamare MAYUR ki baat hi kuch aisi hai
pehle takrar phir pyaar😳 😳 😳
luv
Nidzy
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

Heyyy nidzy
That was an amazing part and long one too
Loved nupur and samrat scene
Plzz continue soon
N thanx for the pm

Hi dear
thanks for d comment
i'll try to update soonn
luv
Nidzy
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
very sweet update dear
loved mayu mom teasing mayu
thx for thepm
love lucy
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Posted: 15 years ago
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😊

Edited by rkmnkp - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
i really liked the sanu interaction...mayur part was fab as usual....nice update dear.....
Edited by achoose - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey awesume update dear n a long one too
loved mayur first encounter
n nupur n sammy part was also nice
do update soon

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