LOVE UNCONFESSED(MAYUR FF) part 19 pg 141

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Nikki

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

hey I'm Nikki, I like your story so far

it's interesting

grammar... it's okay, there were some mistakes but not too many

add me to your pm list

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pari sharma

@kiarathediva

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

awesome lovely,,,,, thanx for the pm,,

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

hey Nidzy,
loved ur 1st part.
its really interesting.
So mayank has a past that's why he hate girls.
eagerly waiting to know about it.
liked uday-dia-nupur cute scene.
great job.
But it was too short.
try to make a longer one next time.
keep it up.
thanx 4 ur PM
F@ri@------------------------------------

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Aisha

@theaisha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Great job!

loved alot !

Keep goin ,

Aisho .

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Heyyyy
That was a really nice part
Wow wat trio nupur uday nd diya are
Nd mayank has a part
Looks very very intresting
Plzzzzz continue soon
N thanx for the pm

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

awesome part!
loved it!
especially nupur and dodo.........
so mayank has a past that he hates girls......
any hints???
well i was lovely!
but it was too terribly short......
do continue soon.........