Attracted to You !?!? RM & AR *Part 13, Page 38* - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
Hi,
Congrats for the start of your ff....
Nice intro...Plzzz add me to your pm list....
And continue soon....

Love,
Sameera😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
shilpuuu!!!!! Congoo to ur FF! wowwww awesome startt do continue soon :)
thankss for the pmm and ofcourse u have to add me to ur pm listt ;)
take care!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@Shrinz: Aww thanks!! Haha surely, but I don't know how much of my info will tally with real world, would love ur friends input! 😳

@RM: whatever as if i listen to u 😆

@Sneha: Thank You soo much! Will post asap!! and yes will add you to pm list! 😳

@Sab: Ofourse u will be on pm list. i would prolly bug u with pm's even if u didnt ask 😆. And ya.. Muskaan is not in NY.. yet atleast 😉. Thank you for commenting!

@Imane: Thank You soo much! I'm glad you love his personality! Hope I can do justice to it! 😳 Yup that is what I have in mind for Muskaan! Ya, wanted to have a brother relation! Thanks for commenting! Will continue asap!

@Sameera: Thanks Sameera! Will continue asap!! and will surely add u to pm list! 😳

@Nami: Thanks Nami!! will add you for sure! And thanks for commenting! 😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

PART 1


New York, USA 7:15 am

BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP..

A hand slips out from under the covers to hit turn off the nagging morning alarm.. as the covers are thrown off.. we see a male of age 22, well muscled body sleeping on his stomach.. soon enough the man starts moving, he flexes his muscles..

TING TONG

Hearing the doorbell.. Rahul gets out of bed lazily, stretching out his body some more, throwing on a night robe, he goes to open the door.

Rubbing his eye to get rid of the sleepiness he looks through the peephole, once he opens the door..

"Good Morning sir. A delivery for you" says the mailman pleasantly.

"Oh, ya thanks. Where do I sign?" asks Rahul accepting his package.

Signing the paper the mailman holds out Rahul glances at the message.. noticing some really scribbly writing..

"Thank You" Rahul says casually and closes the door behind the mailman. He flips through all his letters, a couple of bills, a letter from his brother, and lastly this package.

Chucking the package aside Rahul opens the letter from his brother; lo and behold it is wedding invitation.

Chuckling to himself lightly, Rahul walks into his room to grab his cell off his bed and begins dialing, all the while grinning at the wedding card.

"Hey Bro" he hears a familiar voice on the other end of the line.

"Hey Dude, what's this???" he says, looking at the card in his hand.

"What's what Rahul.. does it kill you to be a little clear?" asks the deep male voice.

"You are tying the knot huh?" Rahul asks chuckling

"Ya, I am what's so funny ?" Armaan asks slighty annoyed by his brother, that he actually called him this in the night to make fun of him.

"Phaas Gaya" Rahul says not able to control his laughter.

"Abe chup, I like her a lot, and her parents like me too, and mummy papa toh wo behad pasand hai" Armaan says trying not to show his irritation.. "And.. don't tell me, you still don't believe in marriage and love do you?" he adds knowingly

"Psssh.. love.. no way, why would I do that to myself?" replies Rahul as if stating the obvious

"Ya ya.. taunt me all you want.. I will have my share the day you fall in love" Armaan replies back slightly irked.

"So you are coming right?" asks Armaan

"Me?? To India?? No ways.. spare me.. " Rahul states matter-of-factly.

"You kidding me right.. you gotta come!.. warna" Armaan says trying to think of something he could say to make Rahul change his mind..

"Ya ya.. whatever.. will see.. listen.. I gotta head to work now.. will call ya later!" Rahul adds quickly checking out the time on the huge grandfather clock sitting in the middle of his living room.

Before Armaan could reply, the line was cut.

"Ab toh ek hi raasta hai, isse India khich lane ka.. papaji" Armaan smirks to himself.

*** Later in the night ***

Armaan rings up Ridhimma.

"Hey how are you honey?" Armaan asks smiling to himself.

"Hi Armaan, subah se phone nahi kiya? Kisiko bhool gaye?" asks Ridhimma teasingly.

"Nahi, honey mai toh har waqt tumhare baare mai hi toh sochta hoon, humari shaadi kareeb aa rahi hai" Armaan says with excitement in his voice.

"Haan" Ridhimma says slightly blushing.

"Oyye Hoyye, ab inta mat sharma"

"Armaan!! Tum yaha ho kya?" asks Ridhima looking around franctically.

"Honey, we have been together for sooo long, tumhe nahi lagta, ke I would atleast know that much?"

"Oh by the way, I talked to Rahul today, usne aane se saaf inkaar kardiya"

"Kya?? Rahul nahi aayega?"

"Nahi don't worry, aayega zaroor and I know just the way"

"Okay hun, I wanna talk more, but mama bula rahi hai"

"Aww ok bye hun, sweet dreams!"

"Ofcourse, only about you"

"Love you!"

"Love you too!"

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OK here is the first part, yes I know it is short, and first few parts will be a little short, so bear with me 😳

Please comment/criticize!

~Shilpa 😃
Edited by ibdt2004 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25

wow, im lucky i was looking through my posts and i saw u updated!! 😆😃

loved the 1st part!!
and the way you opened it, with Rahul waking up and him shirtless and all 😳
the brotherly talk btw rahul and armaan was funny and sweet! i love their relationship here!!
and AR areadorable!!
& cant wait till the next part! wanna c how they convince Rahul to go!!
lots of love,
Sab
Edited by Sab93 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@Sab: aww thanks!! Am glad that you liked the opening!! Ofcourse shirtless!! 😉 Haha yes! I wanted to make Rahul and Armaan have a very close brother relationship! Glad you liked AR too!! Will update next part asap!! 😳 Thanks for commenting!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
Shilpz di loved the first part, thoda short tha, but I totally oved it.
both bro convo was very good, they surly share a brotherly bond
it was funny how rahul calledammy at night jst to tease him abt getting married😆😆
waiting to see rahul in India, also waiting fo muski's entry,
gud convo between AR was so sweet loved his " Oyye Hoyye"
Cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
Shilpu dear..i love u.......so much...
Thanks for startinga wonderfull ff...its awesum....
D most happening part is RAhul is an Architect.....ok i am partial..coz i am a would-be-Architect....
bt seriously loved the intreo..all chraracters & I am dsure u will rock this ff....
& ofcourse RAhul shirtless entry was 😳
Edited by Love_RM_MAYUR - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
Cutie cue part shilpuuuu...
hehe rahul's description was hottsome in the start lol...hmm well the concept is somewhat different with both not believing in true love ( i got it right na?)
hmm loved this part
update soon...n ya add me to ur list !
vaishuu


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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
very nice start!!! do pm me!!
Love
Ashna😳

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