Attracted to You !?!? RM & AR *Part 13, Page 38* - Page 23

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Posted: 15 years ago
Shilpaaaa diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
where is the update??????!!!!!!!
I am waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Guys *hides* I know you must be wondering where I was till now, to tell you the truth I was writing, but I didn't like the part, and I still don't like it. But I have had so many requests to update, that I will just post it.

Part 11

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After having lunch, Rahul and Muskaan get back to work.

As Muskaan works on decorating the inside of the house, Rahul helps his mom with the garden.

"Uffo, main scissors ghar ke andar bhool gayi, Rahul tum andar se scissors lao ge" Rahul's mom says continuing with her work.

As Rahul enters the house, he sees Muskaan standing on a ladder trying to put up the decorations, while the wind blowing in kept on blowing her hair over her face.

Rahul smiled at himself watching Muskaan struggle with her hair and the decorations.

She had he dupatta tied around her waist.

As Rahul continues staring at her, Armaan enters the house, looking at Rahul he smiles evilly.

"Ab aayega mazza" Armaan thinks looking from Rahul to Muskaan.

"Rahul who scissors kaha hai?" Rahul's mom asks coming after her son, wondering where he went.

"Uhhh Ma" Rahul says snapping out of it.

Before Rahul could answer Armaan comes up to his mom "Ma, Rahul kahin aur busy tha" he says grinning at Rahul.

Shooting Armaan a glare "Aisa kuch nahi hai Ma, main bas scissors dhoondh raha tha" Rahul tries covering himself, as Muskaan walks towards them.

"Acha, uss kone mai scissors dhoondh raha tha?" Armaan says pointing where Muskaan was standing earlier. Armaan was completely enjoying himself.

"Armaan tum kya keh rahe ho?" Rahul's mom asked, completely confused at what her sons were saying.

"Maa! Keh raha hoon na, kuch nahi hai" Rahul says stepping on Armaan's foot.

Rahul's mom speaks up before both her sons confuse her anymore "Bas bas, mujhe nahi jaan na, samjhlo ke meri galati thi ke maine poocha. Muskaan tumhara yahan kaam khatam hogaya toh meri madat karogi bahar, waise bhi iss Rahul se kuch nahi hota" his mom says giving Rahul a look.

Rahul looks at Muskaan as she follows his mom outside.

"Toh kya chal raha tha" Armaan asks putting his arm on Rahul's shoulder grinning at him.

"Kaha na kuch nahi" Rahul says pushing Armaan's hand off his shoulder.

"Hi Muskaaaaaaan" Armaan says looking behind Rahul.

Rahul immediately turns upon hearing her name, only to find that no Muskaan was there and Armaan was just pranking him.

Rahul glares at Armaan and walks off, but Armaan was in no mood to let him off the hook so easily.

"So pyaar karta hai toh batadena" Armaan asks Rahul.

"Haan.." Rahul realizes what he was saying "Uhh.. pyar.. I don't do that love stuff ok".

"Haan haan, toh uss kone main wo cow webs interesting thi kya tumhare liye?" pointing at the corner Muskaan was standing in decorating till now.

"Pata nahi, she has a cute smile, aur uski curly curly se baal aise bounce hote hai, toh mann karta hai dekhta hi reh jau.. but uh.. I don't think it's love probably just an attraction" Rahul says catching himself from saying too much.

"Trust me bro, this is love. You will realize soon" Armaan says patting Rahul's back, with that he goes off singing "Hogaya hai tujhko toh pyaar mere bhai, lakh karle tu inkaar mere bhai".

Rahul goes into his room thinking to himself "Pyar?"

As he reaches his room, Rahul looks out the window and finds Muskaan there, watering the plants. She is having a conversation with his mom, making his mom laugh, and bursting into here infectious laugh herself.

Rahul was amazed by how close she became with his family in just a matter of two days.

Smiling to himself Rahul keeps looking at Muskaan lovingly.

"Agar wo mere nazron se kuch mehsoos karti hai toh shayad yeh pyar hoga" Rahul decides.

Muskaan who was talking with Rahul's mom felt an urge that someone was looking at her, but no matter how much she looked around she could not find anyone, finally looking up at Rahul's bedroom, she sees him, smiling at her.

She doesn't know why, but him looking at her, made her have a warm and fuzzy feeling inside, unknowingly she smiled back at him.

Rahul was beside himself with happiness, he smiles at Muskaan.

***

"Hi jaan" Armaan says into the phone, with a smile on his face.

"Hi Armaan, tum bohut khush lag rahe ho" Ridhimma asks smiling.

"Haan, tumse jo baat kar raha hoon"

"Armaaaan tum na"

"Oyye Hoyye, itna blush mat kar, ke meri saansein ruk jaaye" Armaan says teasing Ridhimma.

"Armaan, tumhe pata hai na, mujhe aise baatein bilkul pasand nahi" Ridhimma says, not liking it when Armaan talks about his breath stopping, it worries her.

"Sorry jaan, phir nahi hoga"

'Hmm"

"Waise, Rahul sach mai Muskaan se pyaar karta hai" Armaan says going back to the reason why he rang up Ridhimma in the first place.

"Mujhe pata hai, isiliye toh keh rahi thi, tumhe uss budhu ko samjhaya kya, ke yahi pyaar hai?"

"Koshish kar raha hoon, kehta hai ke pyaar nahi, par jab bhi Muskaan se judi hui koi baat ho, toh bohut interest leta hai topic mai" Armaan says laughing.

"Acha, toh baat bohut aage tak pohuch gayi huh" Ridhimma says smirking to herself. "Wait let me call him now and knock some sense into my devar" Ridhimma adds on.

"Call kyu, yahan aajao na" Armaan says flirtatiously.

"Armaan, tumhare iraade toh kuch theek nahi lag rahe hai"

"Kisne kaha ke mere iraade sahi hai jaana"

"Armaan tum bhi na, ok mai aa rahi hoon" with that Ridhimma cuts the phone.

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So there it was, please leave your comments!
Thank you 😳


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Posted: 15 years ago

MD!!!!!!!!

it was an awesome update!!
lol rahul is so funny😆
armaan should teach him what does love mean😆
i hope muskaan knoes what's love😉
AR part was also cute..
lol armaan told riddhima to come over..
im sure armaan called her just for him not to talk with rahul😆
rahul is just an excuse😉
well update soon!!😳
Edited by x!reema!x - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Shikpz di aapko yeh part acha nahi laga tho kya hua

ur readers luv it😃 I really liked the part
Ammy teasing rahul and hayye rahul tho muski main khogaya hai😳
But poor him he still doesnt knw if its love or not
but usse samjhane ke liye ammy aur ridz haina😉
Awwwww so cuteee how he said he likes her smile, bouncy curls...
he was still staring muski frm his rooom
bachu tujhe tho pyaar hogaya hai, bas u r not agreeing it
ofcourse this jst cant be attraction😆
muski smiles and rahul is sooo happy
Totally luved the part!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏
I also luved the AR convo...so cuteeeeeeee
heheh ridz better cum fast to knock some sense in her devar😆😆😆
snr hitler ji i dont want the next part this late
luv
pari
Edited by pari_smile - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey shilpa di..nice part..
Rahul is just staring at Muskaan..not able to stop..but he gets caught by Armaan..who does'nt stop teasing him..n tries to explain that he's in love...but he does'nt beleive it..
he again stares at her from the window..n she smiles back at him..he gets really happy!..lol..
Armaan calls Ridz n tells her about RM..she wants him to realize that its love..n Armaan calls her over n she agrees..sweet..
thnx 4 d PM
update soon
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great part!!
Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyy dear
just caught up with ur ff
loved it
amazing parts
cont soon
n plzz add me to ur pm list
thx
luv
DHRUVIKA
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Posted: 15 years ago
hye shilpa..
atlast the birthday girl got the time to update the fic..😆
and its really good~~~
rahul was watching muskaan while she was working..hehe!!
and armaan caught him...and teased him too..bechara...
hmm.. time to realise he is in love..rahul maan le bhai😆...!!
so rids is coming now..wow!!!lets see whats AR upto make RM meet!!!

thnks for PM dear...enjoy!!
keep smiling :)
good wishes
sri:-)
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Posted: 15 years ago
thank you so much for updating Shilps!!

aww, it was such a great part!!


I absolutely lovee how Rahul is falling in love with Muskaan and it was really sweet how Armaan was convincing him that it was love! And the part when Muskaan was helping his mom in the kitchen and he stared and smiled at her, and she smiled back! aww, that was my fav part from this update!! And AR's phone convo was nicee, haha armaan went come over, AR make such a sweet bhabhi and bhai to Rahul in this story. just loved the entire part!!


thanks for updating again! and update soon pleasee!!


lots of love,
Sabz
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awww, finally shilpu! finally!! lolz!!

awesome job.."cow webs??" hehe! really funny! rahul is a dumbo...nolde na pyar hai! lolz! :D

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