Desert Love(Mayur,AR,Sajan)-update part 4 page 30

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nupurvj23

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: fariaa70

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: cutegurl224

oh my god , its too tough to write in hindi.
And now i feel i cant write it properly. my confidence level going downward😭😭😭
But i'll try and try.....................
u know na practice makes a man perfect.
And hunn u r so cute.
and hate u?- no way i luv u

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thenarcissist

@thenarcissist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#73

hi fariaa
thanks for the pm.
it was a great update.
waiting for the three brothers to reunite.
the ar scenes were very sweet.
your hindi has improved greatly.
good job!
CONTINUE SOON!

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Avinash

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Posted: 15 years ago

#74

Nice part........u r improving with your hindi.....you will be fine after writing more parts....continue soon.

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saloni

@angelina_2005

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Posted: 15 years ago

#75

hey nice part................do update it soon :)

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zoya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#76

hey faria awesome update....loved the part...plzzzz continue soon

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maria

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Posted: 15 years ago

#77

hi fariia i raed thsi part its great i didnt saw any mistakes but yeh mayank aur samrat bhi na kitna parishan kartay hain armaan ko bechara 😆😆😆waiting 4 next part😊

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Sana Quraishi

@Soulmate_Sana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#78

wow fariaaa,

nice update

loved it

AWESOME yaar

plz continue soon

and thanx for the pm yaar

thank u so much

love

sana.....

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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

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Posted: 15 years ago

#79

hey awesome part....u do care a lot of improvisation for ur upds right...

there u stand with a complete and beautiful success....u have done a good job....as i love this ff....waiting for a long part...

dont take longer time yaar...i really do enjoy reading urs....awesome continue...luv jeni

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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

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Posted: 15 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: fariaa70

mayur part wow am just waiting for it...ok i will be waiting for the mayur trear...u deserve ur appreciation buddy...there is nothing say thanks...great am waiting for mayur sequences